"Nyx, silhouetted against the rift, shifted, their form rippling like water—solid one moment, a wisp of shadow the next."
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"The Seer waits.* She’d laughed it off until last night, when the Veil had frayed—Eva, her only friend left in London, had staggered through a door not there, bleeding from a wound that wouldn’t heal, whispering, “Dymas. They’re taking… *it*.”"
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"“Winter solstice weakens the Veil. A rift opens. You must reach it before the tide turns.” She’d pressed a dagger into Aurora’s hand—the Fae-Forged Blade, its moon-silver edge glinting, cold even through Aurora’s glove."
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"Aurora heard a soft *whoosh*, like air escaping a balloon, and when she blinked, she was through too—suddenly in a meadow that shouldn’t exist."
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"The grass was not grass—fine, silvery threads that tickled her ankles, releasing a sweet, honeyed scent when she knelt."
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"Nyx, now solid, stood a few paces away, their violet eyes wide—unusual, she thought."
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"She’d forgotten—Shades thrived on the in-between."
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"For the first time in memory, she didn’t see the silver-haired seer; she saw the Half-Fae, the exile, the one who’d been caught giving mortals too much truth."
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"Her dress, a soft blue, rippled not with wind, but with magic, and when she took a step, there was no sound—no footprints, no indentation, just a faint shimmer where she’d stood."
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"They walked for hours—though Aurora wasn’t sure how many, not with the sky changing color every few minutes, from amber to indigo to that sickly green."
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"Nyx chattered, commenting on the architecture of the landscape—“That hill, it’s a dragon,” “These rocks, they’re whispering”—but Aurora barely heard them."
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"Each was carved with intricate patterns—snakes, flowers, a sun with a blade through it."
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"The gem glowed brighter, almost painfully, and she realized—*they’re alive*."
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"Not a pond, not a lake—*a well*."
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"The water was black, but not the empty black of night; it was rich, deep, swallowing the light of stars."
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"The edges rippled, as if something moved beneath, and when Aurora leaned closer, she saw faces—faint, shifting, *screaming*—before they dissolved."
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"Eva had been a cook at the Golden Empress—too good, too curious, she’d stumbled onto something."
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"The well’s edges were sharp now, cutting at the air, and the faces beneath the water were clearer—Eva, screaming, her mouth full of fruit, her skin bloated."
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"The sky outside the clearing—*the real sky*, she realized—was dark, the stars gone."
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"She saw Belphegor then—tall, with horns like broken glass, his skin as pale as death, his eyes pools of molten gold."
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"But when she closed her eyes, she saw it all—the well, the faces, the light."
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"The wind bit at Aurora’s cheeks as she paused, chest heaving, her breath misting in the winter solstice cold."
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"Isolde had been waiting for them in the back of the bar, a silver-haired wraith in a woolen cloak that seemed to absorb the light."
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"Wildflowers erupted in clumps: lilies the color of dawn, poppies that pulsed like veins, and strange, star-shaped blooms that shimmered, as if stitched from liq…"
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"The crime scene photos flashed in her mind: Eva, face down in a puddle of her own blood, the wound a ragged hole that shouldn’t heal, that *wasn’t* natural."
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"The Heartstone, pulsing now, its warmth spreading up her arm."
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"The flora shifted too: thickets of black thorns that glowed with bioluminescent sap, a river of liquid starlight that sang when they touched it, and a grove of …"
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"The edges rippled, as if something moved beneath, and when Aurora leaned closer, she saw faces—faint, shifting, *screaming*—before they dissolved."
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"The ruler of Gluttony, a demon with a taste for human pleasure, who fed on souls *and* memories."
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"They nodded, their shadow expanding, as if to shield her."
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"Aurora stepped forward, her boots crunching on the silver grass, the Heartstone glowing brighter with each step."
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"Aurora fell, the blade slipping from her hand, her vision blurring."