| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde finally said [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.517 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 82.59% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1149 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1149 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "remarkable" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "intensity" | | 4 | "glistening" | | 5 | "spectral" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "structure" | | 11 | "symphony" | | 12 | "mechanical" | | 13 | "rhythmic" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "oppressive" | | 16 | "tapestry" | | 17 | "desire" | | 18 | "solace" | | 19 | "flickered" | | 20 | "chilled" | | 21 | "chilling" | | 22 | "charged" | | 23 | "determined" | | 24 | "disrupt" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "wave of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" | | 1 | "A wave of nausea" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | matches | | |
| 98.90% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1157 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 950 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.05 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Belphegor" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 6 | | Isolde | 4 | | Dymas | 2 | | Rory | 10 | | Fae-Forged | 3 | | Blade | 3 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Hall | 4 | | Lyra | 1 | | Suddenly | 1 | | Prince | 3 | | Belphegor | 5 | | Gluttony | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Lyra" | | 5 | "Prince" | | 6 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.974 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 63.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like crushed berries and ozone" | | 1 | "pulse that seemed to vibrate within her very bones" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1157 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 42.85 | | std | 22.69 | | cv | 0.53 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 77 | | 2 | 85 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 79 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 72 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 86 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 53 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 68 |
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| 94.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "was paved" | | 1 | "were locked" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 146 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.125 | | matches | | 0 | "The entrance to Dymas had been less a doorway and more a tear in reality – a smear of bruised amber light clinging to the crumbling brick wall of a forgotten alleyway behind Silas’ bar." | | 1 | "The air thrummed with the low, constant murmur of hundreds, maybe thousands, of voices – a chorus of satisfied sighs, booming laughter, and the clatter of cutlery on platters piled high with delicacies." | | 2 | "Servers – spectral beings with frozen smiles – glided silently, replenishing plates with an unsettling efficiency." | | 3 | "The Heartstone Pendant in her pocket pulsed faintly, a subtle warmth against her skin – a warning." | | 4 | "As they approached the Hall, the sounds intensified – the revelry swelled into a discordant symphony." | | 5 | "Within the alcove, a single figure stood apart from the chaos – a young woman, no older than twenty, dressed in shimmering silks, meticulously arranging a platter of iridescent mushrooms." | | 6 | "From the center of the hall, a swirling vortex of shadows erupted, pulling everything towards it – food, guests, even the foundations of the building." | | 7 | "As they watched in horror, a towering, grotesque figure emerged from the vortex – Prince Belphegor himself, a bloated demon with eyes like burning coals." | | 8 | "As he spoke, Rory felt a sharp jolt in her pocket – the Heartstone Pendant pulsed violently, radiating an intense heat." | | 9 | "A vision slammed into her mind: a swirling vortex of shadows, a desperate plea for help, and a single, chilling image – a landscape of endless hunger, stretching into an infinite void." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 263 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 9 | | adverbRatio | 0.034220532319391636 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019011406844106463 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 14.46 | | std | 7.4 | | cv | 0.511 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 30 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 74.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4625 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 52.91% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the chanting intensified." |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn't speak, merely observed," | | 1 | "she stated, trying to keep" | | 2 | "They paused, a brief distortion" | | 3 | "They passed tables laden with" | | 4 | "She hated this." | | 5 | "She hated the way her" | | 6 | "she instructed, her eyes fixed" | | 7 | "She noticed a strange, rhythmic" | | 8 | "They ventured deeper into the" | | 9 | "She spotted a small alcove," | | 10 | "she said, her voice clear" | | 11 | "she gasped, clutching the pendant" | | 12 | "She raised the Fae-Forged Blade," |
| | ratio | 0.206 | |
| 63.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted like crushed" | | 1 | "Rory wrinkled her nose, pulling" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured, their voice a" | | 3 | "She didn't speak, merely observed," | | 4 | "The entrance to Dymas had" | | 5 | "The space opened into a" | | 6 | "Vines thick with plump, glistening" | | 7 | "Orchards overflowed with fruit she" | | 8 | "The air thrummed with the" | | 9 | "The sky above wasn’t sky" | | 10 | "Isolde finally said, her voice" | | 11 | "Rory took a hesitant step" | | 12 | "The cool touch of the" | | 13 | "she stated, trying to keep" | | 14 | "Nyx drifted forward, phasing partially" | | 15 | "They paused, a brief distortion" | | 16 | "The ground beneath their feet" | | 17 | "They passed tables laden with" | | 18 | "Servers – spectral beings with" | | 19 | "A group of towering, obese" |
| | ratio | 0.794 | |
| 79.37% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, that tear had solidified" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Hundreds of shadowy figures, gaunt and pale, moved with mechanical precision, carving portions of food and offering them to the monstrously obese guests who con…" | | 1 | "She noticed a strange, rhythmic chanting emanating from the center of the Hall, a low, droning pulse that seemed to vibrate within her very bones." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx murmured, their voice a low, shifting whisper" | | 1 | "Isolde finally said, her voice a riddle" | | 2 | "she stated, trying to keep her voice steady" | | 3 | "Nyx hissed, their voice barely audible above the din" | | 4 | "she said, her voice clear and melodic" | | 5 | "Rory observed, wary" | | 6 | "Belphegor bellowed, his voice a guttural roar" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 10 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she stated (state)" | | 2 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Nyx hissed (hiss)" | | 4 | "Rory observed (observe)" | | 5 | "she conceded (concede)" | | 6 | "Nyx shouted (shout)" | | 7 | "Belphegor bellowed (bellow)" | | 8 | "she gasped (gasp)" | | 9 | "he snarled (snarl)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.414 | | leniency | 0.828 | | rawRatio | 0.833 | | effectiveRatio | 0.69 | |