Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8XKSFP2X8H4B6ZSYSRT1P

Run Details

Duration:
19.6s
Cost:
$0.000155
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain plastered Detective Quinn’s hair to her forehead, a cold, insistent weight. It tasted of soot and something vaguely metallic, a flavor she’d grown accustomed to these last few weeks. Her worn leather watch, a relic from her partner, Morris, ticked with a steady, unsettling rhythm against her wrist. Eight-ten. She needed to close this. Tomás Herrera. The name had been whispered in hushed tones at a few of the right, and decidedly unfriendly, contacts. A paramedic with a penchant for the esoteric, a man who tended to the strange and the broken outside the rigid structure of the NHS. And, according to a particularly agitated informant, a supplier to the clique. She’d tracked him to The Raven’s Nest, Silas’s bar in Soho. The green neon sign bled into the grey night, a sickly promise of warmth and anonymity. Inside, the air hung thick with the smell of stale ale, damp wool, and something else… something faintly herbal and unsettling. Herrera had been nursing a whiskey near the back, his dark curls plastered to his forehead, the Saint Christopher medallion glinting faintly under the flickering gaslight. He hadn’t looked up when she’d entered, hadn’t even registered her presence. Professional. Damnable professional. Now, he was gone. A trail of rain-slicked cobblestones led her east, away from the familiar bustle of Shaftesbury Avenue. She followed the subtle signs – a dropped handkerchief embroidered with a stylized raven, a faint scent of sandalwood and night-blooming jasmine, the nervous tread of someone accustomed to moving unseen. The trail led her down a narrow alley, choked with overflowing bins and the shadows of fire escapes, and then, abruptly, into a dark, yawning passage. The passage opened into a vast, echoing chamber—The Veil Market. It wasn’t a market in the conventional sense. There were no stalls, no hawkers, no brightly colored displays. Just a labyrinth of dimly lit tunnels and cavernous rooms beneath the abandoned Camden Tube station. The air here was colder, heavier, laced with a palpable tension that prickled at her skin. The scent of herbs and decay was stronger, mingled with the ozone tang of something unnatural. Figures moved in the gloom—shadowy shapes draped in velvet, faces obscured by hoods, the glint of unfamiliar metal on belts and wrists. A stall offered vials filled with shimmering liquids, another displayed intricately carved bone charms. A hooded man examined a cluster of pulsating fungi, his face impassive. This wasn't a place for the mundane. Herrera was here. She could feel it, a subtle shift in the air, a prickling at the back of her neck. She moved through the crowd, her military precision honed over eighteen years of police work. Each step was deliberate, each observation cataloged. Her hand instinctively rested on the butt of her service pistol, not out of aggression, but out of a cold, unwavering alertness. The rain continued to fall, drumming a relentless rhythm against the corrugated iron ceiling. A voice, low and hesitant, broke through the ambient murmur. "Detective Quinn. I’ve been expecting you.” She turned to find Herrera leaning against a damp wall, his arms crossed, a sardonic smile playing on his lips. The scar on his forearm was stark against the pale olive of his skin. He looked remarkably calm, considering the circumstances. “You’re a persistent one,” she said, her voice flat. “And a slippery one. I’ve pulled a few strings, talked to a few people. It seems you’ve been feeding information to the clique.” “Information is a valuable commodity in this city,” he replied, his brown eyes steady. “Especially to those who understand its true nature.” “The clique,” she repeated, the word tasting like ash in her mouth. “You know what they're capable of. You've been complicit.” He shrugged, a dismissive gesture. “I offer a service. I don’t judge who seeks it.” “Don’t insult my intelligence. They’re not just collectors of rare antiquities. They’re manipulating something… something dangerous. Something I’ve been trying to understand for three years.” The memory of Morris, lost to an inexplicable darkness, tightened in her chest. It wasn’t just a case; it was a personal obsession. “And you think I hold the key?” Herrera asked, tilting his head slightly. “I think you know more than you’re letting on. And I think you’re involved in something beyond simple medical consultation.” She took a step closer, her gaze unwavering. "Where is it? The shipment? The component they’re looking for?" He didn’t answer immediately. He simply regarded her with a disconcerting stillness. Then, he gestured with a subtle movement of his hand, directing her attention toward a shadowed alcove. “There’s a contact down there. A woman named Lyra. She deals in… specific artifacts. She might have what you’re looking for.” As she moved towards the alcove, a figure detached itself from the deeper shadows. A woman, tall and unnervingly pale, with eyes like chips of obsidian and a smile that didn’t quite reach them. She held a small, intricately carved box made of bone—exactly the kind of token required to enter the Veil Market. Suddenly, two figures emerged from the darkness behind Quinn. They weren't human. Their skin was the color of polished granite, their eyes burned with an unnerving violet light. They moved with a chilling, unnatural grace—predators. The clique. “Detective Quinn,” one of them said, its voice a low, resonant drone. “You shouldn’t be here. This is not your concern.” Quinn didn't hesitate. She drew her weapon, the click of the safety a sharp punctuation in the subterranean gloom. "Your concern is stopping me." Herrera, surprisingly, moved with a sudden urgency. He shoved her aside, a brief, almost desperate act of self-preservation. "Don't listen to them!" he shouted, pulling a small, tarnished silver locket from beneath his shirt. He flung it at the granite-skinned figures, and it shattered against one of their faces, releasing a cloud of shimmering, iridescent dust. The figures recoiled, momentarily disoriented. Quinn used the distraction to unleash a controlled burst of fire, hitting both of them. They didn’t fall, but the bullets seemed to pass through them, leaving only a faint ripple in the air. Their violet eyes narrowed in fury. “You interfere, you suffer,” the first figure growled, advancing on her. The rain outside intensified, drumming against the tunnel walls, a chaotic soundtrack to the escalating violence. Quinn knew, with a sickening certainty, that she'd stumbled into something far deeper, far more dangerous than she could have ever imagined. The Veil Market wasn't just a black market—it was a gateway. And she, along with Tomás Herrera, had just unwittingly opened the door. It was a mistake she would be paying for, in blood, or something far worse.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1118
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Lyra"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1118
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"structure"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"palpable"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"gloom"
count2
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"glint"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"cataloged"
count1
13
word"unwavering"
count2
14
word"stark"
count1
15
word"chilling"
count1
16
word"shattered"
count1
17
word"chaotic"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"structure"
2"warmth"
3"glinting"
4"familiar"
5"echoing"
6"palpable"
7"tension"
8"gloom"
9"velvet"
10"glint"
11"could feel"
12"cataloged"
13"unwavering"
14"stark"
15"chilling"
16"shattered"
17"chaotic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences77
matches
0"d in fury"
87.20% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1109
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount932
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Quinn5
Morris2
Herrera7
Raven1
Nest1
Silas1
Soho1
Saint1
Christopher1
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Veil3
Market3
Camden1
Tube1
Tomás2
persons
0"Detective"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Herrera"
4"Silas"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Tomás"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"Shaftesbury"
3"Avenue"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite reach them"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.902
wordCount1109
matches
0"not out of aggression, but out of a cold, unwavering alertness"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean42.65
std26.48
cv0.621
sampleLengths
0113
189
24
373
476
555
621
758
816
941
1032
1122
1221
1315
1448
1513
1638
1750
1854
1937
2021
2124
2256
2345
2411
2576
96.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"been whispered"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs140
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences86
ratio0.081
matches
0"She followed the subtle signs – a dropped handkerchief embroidered with a stylized raven, a faint scent of sandalwood and night-blooming jasmine, the nervous tread of someone accustomed to moving unseen."
1"The passage opened into a vast, echoing chamber—The Veil Market."
2"Figures moved in the gloom—shadowy shapes draped in velvet, faces obscured by hoods, the glint of unfamiliar metal on belts and wrists."
3"It wasn’t just a case; it was a personal obsession."
4"She held a small, intricately carved box made of bone—exactly the kind of token required to enter the Veil Market."
5"They moved with a chilling, unnatural grace—predators."
6"The Veil Market wasn't just a black market—it was a gateway."
89.41% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount941
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, tarnished silver locket"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03825717321997875
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.025504782146652496
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean12.9
std7.22
cv0.56
sampleLengths
013
118
219
31
45
52
618
725
812
911
1016
1116
125
1326
1412
151
162
174
1816
1931
2026
2110
228
2310
2416
2516
2616
2722
2814
2912
307
313
3218
3315
347
3522
3614
3710
386
3920
4014
417
429
4323
4414
458
4612
479
485
4910
60.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3953488372093023
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences72
matches
0"Just a labyrinth of dimly"
1"Then, he gestured with a"
2"Suddenly, two figures emerged from"
ratio0.042
47.78% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences72
matches
0"It tasted of soot and"
1"Her worn leather watch, a"
2"She needed to close this."
3"She’d tracked him to The"
4"He hadn’t looked up when"
5"She followed the subtle signs"
6"It wasn’t a market in"
7"She could feel it, a"
8"She moved through the crowd,"
9"Her hand instinctively rested on"
10"She turned to find Herrera"
11"He looked remarkably calm, considering"
12"she said, her voice flat"
13"he replied, his brown eyes"
14"she repeated, the word tasting"
15"He shrugged, a dismissive gesture."
16"It wasn’t just a case;"
17"She took a step closer,"
18"He didn’t answer immediately."
19"He simply regarded her with"
ratio0.431
29.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences72
matches
0"The rain plastered Detective Quinn’s"
1"It tasted of soot and"
2"Her worn leather watch, a"
3"She needed to close this."
4"The name had been whispered"
5"A paramedic with a penchant"
6"She’d tracked him to The"
7"The green neon sign bled"
8"something faintly herbal and unsettling."
9"Herrera had been nursing a"
10"He hadn’t looked up when"
11"A trail of rain-slicked cobblestones"
12"She followed the subtle signs"
13"The trail led her down"
14"The passage opened into a"
15"It wasn’t a market in"
16"The air here was colder,"
17"The scent of herbs and"
18"Figures moved in the gloom—shadowy"
19"A stall offered vials filled"
ratio0.861
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"And, according to a particularly"
1"Now, he was gone."
ratio0.028
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A paramedic with a penchant for the esoteric, a man who tended to the strange and the broken outside the rigid structure of the NHS."
1"He flung it at the granite-skinned figures, and it shattered against one of their faces, releasing a cloud of shimmering, iridescent dust."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said, her voice flat"
1"he replied, his brown eyes steady"
2"She took, her gaze unwavering"
3"them said, its voice a low, resonant drone"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"he shouted (shout)"
2"figure growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.333
79.7223%