"The door creaked open on its overworked hinges, revealing a sliver of the chaotic Brick Lane night outside—curry scents wafting from the shop below, distant laughter from pub crawlers, the flicker of neon signs."
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"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers with that unnerving intensity, as if he'd been expecting her all along."
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"He didn't smile, but the corner of his mouth twitched, a ghost of amusement or regret—she couldn't tell which."
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"Just poof—gone like smoke.\" Hurt laced her words, old wounds reopening. She'd thought they had something real, back when he'd first pulled her into London's supernatural underbelly. Stolen kisses in alleyways, whispered secrets about his half-demon heritage, nights where his amber eye glowed softly in the dark as he traced the crescent scar on her left wrist. But then came the arguments—the lies he'd spun to protect her, the jobs that pulled him into danger, the way his demonic side made him pull away just when she needed him close. The final blow: Evan, her abusive ex, resurfacing with threats, and Lucien handling it his way, bloody and final, without telling her. She'd called him a monster. He'd agreed and left."
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"She scoffed, but curiosity gnawed at her. Cool-headed Rory, always thinking out of the box—that's what her friends called her. But with him, logic frayed. \"My help?"
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"Eva's notes—I know she's been researching it."
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"Her breath caught. There it was, the attraction that had always simmered between them, flaring back to life like a struck match. Hurt mingled with it, a tangle of emotions she'd buried under work and routine. Things left unsaid: how she'd loved the way he spoke French in quiet moments, translating poetry while his hand traced patterns on her skin; how his cane, with its hidden blade, had saved her life once; how his half-demon blood made him vulnerable in ways he'd never admit. But the pain—god, the pain of waking up alone, wondering if he'd chosen his underworld dealings over her."
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"He stepped inside, the door clicking shut behind him, sealing them in the cramped flat. Books towered on every surface—ancient tomes on demonology, scrolls yellowed with age, Eva's research notes scribbled in frantic handwriting. The air smelled of old paper and curry spices seeping up from below. Ptolemy wriggled free from her arms, darting to a perch on a stack of grimoires, watching Lucien with suspicion."
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"I promise.\" He turned to face her, closer now in the confined space, his height making the room feel smaller. \"The rift—it's pulling things through."
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"Her stomach dropped. Brendan Carter, the Irish barrister—always so proper, but there were stories, whispers from her childhood about cases that bent reality. \"How do you know that?\""
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"My father— the demon side—it's not just power."
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"All of you—the quick thinker, the fighter, the woman who sees through my bullshit.\""
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"The words hit like a punch, stealing her breath. Attraction surged, pulling her toward him, but hurt anchored her. \"Lucien...\" She placed her hand over his, feeling the steady beat of his pulse—human enough to remind her he wasn't all monster. \"You hurt me."
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"The kiss came naturally, inevitable, her lips meeting his in a rush of pent-up longing. It started soft, tentative, his mouth tasting of mint and secrets, but deepened as she responded, her fingers threading into his slicked-back hair, disrupting the perfect order. He pulled her closer, hands sliding to her waist, lifting her slightly onto her toes despite their close heights. The world narrowed to this—the press of his body, the way he murmured her name like a prayer, \"Rory,\" between kisses."
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"Hours passed in murmured conversations, his cane forgotten by the door, the three deadbolts securing them from the outside world. Outside, Brick Lane bustled on, oblivious, but inside Eva's flat, something mended. Hurt lingered, but so did hope—the kind that comes from things finally said, from two people forced together again, choosing to stay."
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"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers with that unnerving intensity, as if he'd been expecting her all along."
1
"Her breath caught. There it was, the attraction that had always simmered between them, flaring back to life like a struck match. Hurt mingled with it, a tangle …"
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"He stepped inside, the door clicking shut behind him, sealing them in the cramped flat. Books towered on every surface—ancient tomes on demonology, scrolls yell…"
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"They sank onto the sagging couch amidst the books, the weight of unsaid things finally spilling out. She told him about the lonely months, the deliveries that k…"
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"Hours passed in murmured conversations, his cane forgotten by the door, the three deadbolts securing them from the outside world. Outside, Brick Lane bustled on…"