Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8XPMJED9MPHVFFD8WGM1Q

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Duration:
33.0s
Cost:
$0.002137
Provider:
xAI

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory wrenched the door open mid-yank on the final deadbolt. Lucien loomed in the narrow hallway, platinum hair slicked back under the dim stairwell bulb. His charcoal suit hugged his frame like a shadow, ivory cane hooked over one arm. Heterochromatic eyes locked on hers, amber sparking against the black void of the other. She gripped the edge, knuckles whitening. Ptolemy slunk between her ankles, hackles rising with a hiss. "You've got nerve," she said. "Always." He didn't smile. The cane tapped once against the threshold. "May I?" Ptolemy bolted inside. Rory stepped aside, reluctant muscles yielding space. Lucien glided past, cologne trailing, faint notes of sandalwood and brimstone. She slammed the door, twisted the deadbolts with sharp clicks. Three locks. Habit from Eva's warnings. The flat swallowed him whole. Books teetered on every surface, scrolls unrolled across the kitchen table like battle maps. Ptolemy leaped onto a stack, tail lashing. Lucien paused, surveyed the chaos with a raised brow. Dust motes danced in the light from a single lamp, illuminating yellowed pages and scribbled notes pinned to the walls. Eva's territory. Rory crashed here after the Evan mess, Eva's spare key her lifeline. Lucien knew that. Of course he did. Information broker. Fixer. Half-demon whisperer of London's underbelly. He turned, cane planted. "Charming as ever. Ptolemy's grown claws." "Like his owner." She crossed arms, leaned against the door. Bright blue eyes met his mismatched stare. Her black hair fell forward, brushing the crescent scar on her wrist. "Eva's out. Research run to the British Library. What do you want, Luc?" His gaze flicked to the scar, lingered. A memory flashed, unbidden: his fingers tracing it last winter, sheets tangled in his Mayfair flat. Skin fever-hot. His mouth on her pulse. Whispers in French she half-understood. Then silence. Ghosted. No calls. No traces. Just her, piecing together rumours of deals in the shadows. "Information," he said. Voice smooth, Marseille accent curling the edges. "And perhaps a drink." "No." One gloved hand removed, flexed fingers. "Rory." "Don't." Heat climbed her neck. She pushed off the door, stalked to the cluttered kitchenette. Teapot steamed forgotten on the stove. Ptolemy watched from his perch, green eyes slit. "You vanish for months. Leave me chasing breadcrumbs on deliveries. Golden Empress shifts don't pay for your games. Spit it out." Lucien eased onto the sagging sofa, cane across his knees. The blade inside hummed, she swore, faint vibration through the floorboards. "Evan." Her hand froze on a mug. Porcelain chipped at the rim. "Ex is ex. Fled Cardiff for a reason." "He's not." Lucien peeled off the other glove, deliberate. Long fingers drummed the cane. "Word from Avaros contacts. Your Evan discovered... interests. Post-you. Cult fringes. Artefacts that bite back." She slammed the mug down. Tea sloshed, staining a scroll. "Bullshit. He punched walls, not demons." Amber eye narrowed. "Walls bleed too, eventually." He rose, fluid, crossed to her. Towered at five-eleven to her five-six. Heat radiated. "He knows you're here. Brick Lane whispers. Delivery girl above Silas'. Easy mark." Rory's pulse kicked. She shoved his chest, suit wool soft under palms. He didn't budge. Solid. Demon blood. "You think I can't handle a tosser with a grudge?" His hand caught her wrist. Thumb brushed the scar, feather-light. Electricity jolted. Memories surged: his breath hot on her neck, teeth grazing collarbone. Hurt twisted in her gut, sharp as the blade he carried. "You handled him once. Bruises faded." Voice dropped, velvet over gravel. "Mine don't." She wrenched free, stepped back. Bumped the table. Scrolls cascaded, thudding soft. Ptolemy yowled, fled to the bedroom. "Yours? We shagged. Once. You bolted before dawn. Left cash on the nightstand like a prossie." Lips quirked, not quite smile. Black eye gleamed obsidian. "Protection. My world chews pretties like you." "Pretties." She snorted, snatched the teapot. Poured scalding water, steam curling. Mug filled, bitter leaves unfurling. "Cool-headed delivery drone. Pre-Law dropout. Save the knight bollocks." He circled the table, predator grace. Stopped inches away. Sandalwood invaded her space. "Eva rang me. Yesterday. Said shadows lingered outside the curry house." "Liar." But doubt crept. Last night, footsteps echoed too long on Brick Lane. Ptolemy paced the windowsill till dawn. "Truth." Gloved hand no more, bare fingers lifted her chin. Forced eye contact. Amber burned, black pulled. "Evan's marked you. Artefact from the docks. Cursed. Calls his kind." Her breath hitched. Skin tingled where he touched. Old pull, magnetic. Hurt simmered beneath, molten. "Why care? Silas' flat's my fort. Bar noise drowns ghosts." "Silas sells info too. Loose lips." Lucien released her, stepped to the window. Parted heavy curtains. Brick Lane buzzed below: late-night kebab seekers, laughter sharp. "You're safer here. Three deadbolts. Eva's wards." "Wards?" She followed, peered over his shoulder. Streetlamp flickered. A silhouette paused across the road, vanished into fog. His head tilted, breath ghosting her ear. "Books aren't her only vice." Tension coiled low in her belly. Proximity ignited sparks. She should shove him away. Demand he leave. Instead, fingers grazed his sleeve. Wool fine, warmed by skin beneath. "You left," she murmured. Voice cracked. "Night after. I waited. Phone silent. Deliveries to your haunts. Bouncer laughed." Lucien turned, trapped her against the sill. Hands braced either side. Cane leaned forgotten. "Avaros pulled. Father's summons. Half-blood debts." Thumb traced her jaw. "Thought you'd bolt back to Cardiff. Safe Brendan, teacher Jen." "Don't." She gripped his lapels, twisted silk lining. "Know my parents' names. Stalked me then too?" "Watched." Honesty raw. "Wanted you safe. Then." "Now?" Challenge hung. Bodies aligned, heat building. Her heart thundered. Scar itched under sleeve. His mouth hovered, lips brushing hers. "Complicated." She surged up, claimed the kiss. Fierce. Punishing. Teeth clashed, tongues battled. Hands fisted his hair, platinum strands defiant. He groaned, low demon rumble. Pinned her harder, hips grinding. Friction sparked, denim against wool. Pulled back, gasping. Blue eyes blazed into his. "Bastard." "Oui." He nipped her lower lip, blood copper tang. "Yours." Laughter bubbled, edged hysteria. Ptolemy scratched at the bedroom door. Flat felt smaller, air thick. Scrolls crunched underfoot as he lifted her onto the sill. Legs wrapped his waist. Suit jacket shed, buttons strained on shirt. Fingers delved her shirt, cool on fevered skin. Scar mapped under his palm. "Missed this." "Liar." She arched, nails raking his back. "Prove." Challenge accepted. Mouth descended neck, sucking marks. Her world narrowed: his scent, stubble rasp, cane clattering to floor. Ivory handle gleamed amid chaos. Reality intruded. Phone buzzed on table. Eva's ringtone, insistent. Ignore. His hand slid lower, unzipped jeans. Buzz persisted. Ptolemy yowled louder. Lucien stilled, head lifting. Black eye swirled, amber iced. "Answer." She slid down, legs shaky. Snatched phone. Eva's voice exploded. "Rory! Shadows outside. Real ones. Get out—" Glass shattered behind. Bedroom window. Black shape lunged through, claws extended. Lucien whirled, cane snatched mid-air. Blade snicked free. Ptolemy screeched. Evan's grin split the intruder's face, eyes glowing unnatural red.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.358
leniency0.717
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1163
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1163
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"porcelain"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"predator"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"magnetic"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"traced"
count1
14
word"silk"
count1
15
word"aligned"
count1
16
word"thundered"
count1
17
word"delved"
count1
18
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"flicked"
2"tracing"
3"pulse"
4"silence"
5"porcelain"
6"velvet"
7"predator"
8"footsteps"
9"echoed"
10"magnetic"
11"flickered"
12"tension"
13"traced"
14"silk"
15"aligned"
16"thundered"
17"delved"
18"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences162
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences162
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences195
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1151
ratio0
matches(empty)
89.29% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"The blade inside hummed, she swore, faint vibration through the floorboards."
93.18% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount880
uniqueNames25
maxNameDensity1.14
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva5
Evan2
London1
Bright1
Mayfair1
French1
Voice3
Marseille1
Long1
Towered1
Poured1
Last1
Brick2
Lane2
Forced1
Parted1
Streetlamp1
Honesty1
Challenge2
Bodies1
Laughter1
Rory4
Lucien10
Ptolemy9
Black3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Evan"
2"Voice"
3"Poured"
4"Forced"
5"Streetlamp"
6"Challenge"
7"Bodies"
8"Laughter"
9"Rory"
10"Lucien"
11"Ptolemy"
12"Black"
places
0"London"
1"French"
2"Marseille"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
globalScore0.932
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1151
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences195
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean20.55
std13.09
cv0.637
sampleLengths
010
144
216
35
413
537
655
729
810
942
1052
1114
121
137
1450
1522
1619
1729
1816
1934
2028
2134
2213
2334
2416
2525
2624
2719
2828
2925
3032
3118
3212
3328
3418
3534
3616
377
3814
397
4034
419
4210
4336
4415
458
4623
479
487
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences162
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs216
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences195
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount889
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"no more, bare fingers"
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.01799775028121485
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0022497187851518562
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences195
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences195
mean5.9
std3.8
cv0.643
sampleLengths
010
115
215
314
46
510
65
74
87
92
103
117
1211
1310
142
154
165
1714
187
199
2020
212
2212
233
244
252
261
275
284
296
3010
317
3212
3313
347
3516
362
375
385
392
401
412
422
4310
443
457
464
471
486
491
99.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.6256410256410256
totalSentences195
uniqueOpeners122
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences133
matches
0"Of course he did."
1"Bright blue eyes met his"
2"Just her, piecing together rumours"
3"Instead, fingers grazed his sleeve."
ratio0.03
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences133
matches
0"His charcoal suit hugged his"
1"She gripped the edge, knuckles"
2"He didn't smile"
3"She slammed the door, twisted"
4"He turned, cane planted."
5"She crossed arms, leaned against"
6"Her black hair fell forward,"
7"His gaze flicked to the"
8"His mouth on her pulse."
9"She pushed off the door,"
10"Her hand froze on a"
11"She slammed the mug down."
12"He rose, fluid, crossed to"
13"She shoved his chest, suit"
14"He didn't budge."
15"His hand caught her wrist."
16"She wrenched free, stepped back."
17"She snorted, snatched the teapot"
18"He circled the table, predator"
19"Her breath hitched."
ratio0.248
69.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences133
matches
0"Rory wrenched the door open"
1"Lucien loomed in the narrow"
2"His charcoal suit hugged his"
3"She gripped the edge, knuckles"
4"Ptolemy slunk between her ankles,"
5"He didn't smile"
6"The cane tapped once against"
7"Ptolemy bolted inside."
8"Rory stepped aside, reluctant muscles"
9"Lucien glided past, cologne trailing,"
10"She slammed the door, twisted"
11"Habit from Eva's warnings."
12"The flat swallowed him whole."
13"Books teetered on every surface,"
14"Ptolemy leaped onto a stack,"
15"Lucien paused, surveyed the chaos"
16"Dust motes danced in the"
17"Rory crashed here after the"
18"Lucien knew that."
19"He turned, cane planted."
ratio0.782
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
98.68% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Lucien peeled off, deliberate"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.057
leniency0.113
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.038
91.9226%