Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8XWGA5V2M8MHWD98CN5D8

Run Details

Duration:
2m 10s
Cost:
$0.011090
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck, Rory’s thumbnail scraping the brass as she jiggled it loose—Eva’s obsession with security had turned every door opening into a minor battle. The knock had come soft at first, easy to dismiss over the curry house’s fenugreek hum below, but it had persisted, sharp and insistent, until she’d peeled herself from the floor where she’d been sorting Eva’s scrolls on London’s 19th-century ghost circuits. Her left wrist throbbed, the crescent scar there pulsing a faint reminder of the childhood bike crash that had taught her to distrust sudden noises, and she’d grabbed a heavy leather-bound grimoire from the nearest stack before approaching the door. When she wrenched it open, the air outside smelled like rain and roasted lamb, and Lucien Moreau filled the threshold. She froze. His platinum blond hair was still slicked back into that precise wave he favored, like he’d just run a comb through it before climbing the three flights of creaky stairs. His charcoal suit was tailored so sharp it could have cut the curry fumes drifting up from below, and his ivory-handled cane tapped once against the worn doormat, the hidden blade inside a secret she’d only guessed at after she’d seen him snap it open to slice through a demon’s tentacle during a run-in in Camden. His eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers, and for a second she forgot how to breathe. “You,” she said, the grimoire slipping a little in her hand. “Rory,” he said, his voice low and smooth, the Marseille lilt she’d grown to love still clinging to the edges of his words. “I need to talk.” She should have slammed the door. She should have relatched the three deadbolts and called Eva, who’d warned her months ago that getting tangled up with a supernatural fixer would only end in hurt. But when he’d vanished without a word six weeks prior, leaving only a crumpled Golden Empress fortune cookie wrapper on her flat’s windowsill (the one above Silas’ bar), she’d spent nights replaying their last conversation—him promising to keep Evan, her abusive ex, from tracking her to London, her letting him touch the scar on her wrist, the way his amber eye had softened when he’d kissed her forehead. Instead, she stepped back, her boot catching on a stack of books about demon summoning. “Come in. But if you bolt again, I’ll use Eva’s grimoire to hex your cane into a rubber chicken.” He chuckled, a dry, quiet sound, and stepped inside. The flat was so cramped his shoulder brushed a shelf of scrolls, sending one tumbling to the floor. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, came slinking from the bedroom, his tail puffed up like a feather duster, and hissed—loud, sharp, the kind of sound he only made when he smelled something supernatural. He rubbed against Rory’s leg once before leaping onto a stack of history books, his eyes fixed on Lucien like he was ready to pounce. Rory set the grimoire on the kitchen counter, where a half-eaten plate of samosas from the curry house below sat next to her Golden Empress delivery bag. Her hands were shaking, and she folded them behind her back to hide it, the scar on her wrist peeking out from the cuff of her faded band T-shirt. She’d worn the shirt that day for delivery runs, its fabric thin from repeated washes, and she could still smell the soy sauce and garlic from the last order she’d dropped off in Hackney. “Six weeks,” she said, her voice harder than she’d intended. “You left me with a fortune cookie that said ‘Fortune favors the bold’ and a demon from Camden breathing down my neck. Evan’s been sending me text messages—anonymous, but I know it’s him. I’ve been checking the deadbolts twice a night. I’ve been carrying a meat cleaver from the Golden Empress in my delivery bag, just in case he shows up at Silas’ bar.” Lucien’s expression softened, the black eye narrowing a little like he was in pain. He leaned his cane against the wall, his fingers brushing the ivory handle, and ran a hand through his hair—something he only did when he was flustered. “I didn’t have a choice. My father’s realm—Avaros. A demon from there had tracked me to London. He was using Evan as a pawn, feeding him lies about where you were. If I’d stayed, he would have killed you. He would have taken you to Avaros to use as leverage against me, to force me to do his bidding in the supernatural underworld.” Rory stared at him. She’d suspected he had ties to something otherworldly—his ability to speak to ghosts outside Silas’ bar, the way he’d vanished in a cloud of smoke during that Camden run-in—but he’d never told her the full truth of his half-demon heritage. “Why didn’t you tell me? I’m not some helpless kid who needs to be protected. I dropped out of Pre-Law because I got tired of people making choices for me. I fled Cardiff because I refused to let Evan control my life. I could have helped.” “I know,” he said, stepping closer. The curry smell was fading, replaced by the scent of his cologne—sandalwood and cinnamon, the same one he’d worn the night they’d danced in Silas’ bar after closing, when he’d taught her a few phrases in French so she could order coffee without being recognized by Evan’s contacts. “But you were already carrying enough fear. You’d just started to settle into the delivery job, to stop looking over your shoulder every time a car honked. I didn’t want to add a demon from another realm to your list of worries. I didn’t want to see that bright blue fire in your eyes die out.” She glanced at the fortune cookie wrapper, which she’d tucked into Eva’s grimoire for safe keeping. It was crumpled at the edges, the ink smudged from the rain that had leaked through her window the night he’d left. “You left a Golden Empress wrapper. I deliver for them. I thought you were trying to send me a message that you’d been watching me, that you hadn’t forgotten.” “I was,” he said. “I was at the restaurant the night I left. I watched you deliver a order to a vampire’s lair in Hackney, your delivery bag slung over your shoulder, your left wrist scar visible when you handed over the fried rice. I wanted to talk to you, but the demon from Avaros was hiding in the alley, his eyes glowing red. I had to leave before he saw me, before he traced my scent back to you.” She felt a lump form in her throat. She’d spent so many nights hating him, so many nights replaying the way he’d vanished without a word, that she’d forgotten how much she’d trusted him—how he’d been the first person since Eva to make her feel like she could breathe again. She’d forgotten the way he’d held her when she’d had a nightmare about Evan, the way his amber eye had softened when he’d kissed the scar on her wrist, the way he’d laughed at her terrible jokes about demon summoning. Ptolemy hissed again, but this time it was softer, like he was starting to relax. He curled up on the stack of history books, his eyes closing for a second. Lucien stepped closer, so close she could feel his breath on her cheek. He reached out, his fingers brushing the scar on her left wrist, and she didn’t pull away. “I’m sorry,” he said, his voice barely a whisper. “I’m sorry I left. I’m sorry I didn’t tell you the truth. I was terrified of losing you. You’re the first person who’s ever seen me as Lucien, not the Frenchman, not the half-demon fixer, not the man who speaks four languages to barter with ghosts and vampires. You’re the first person who’s ever cared about me, not what I can do for them.” Rory’s eyes filled with tears. She’d never told anyone how scared she was—how she still woke up in the middle of the night thinking Evan was at her door, how she’d dropped out of Pre-Law because she couldn’t stand the sound of her father’s voice telling her to be strong, how she’d fled to London because Eva was the only person who’d ever loved her unconditionally. “I thought you didn’t care,” she said, her voice cracking. “I thought I was just another job to you, another favor to cash in later.” He shook his head, his thumb brushing the scar again. “You’re not a job. You’re the only thing that’s ever made this realm feel like home. I spent six weeks in Avaros, fighting that demon, and all I could think about was the way you laugh when you burn the fried rice at the Golden Empress, the way you read Eva’s scrolls until midnight, the way your bright blue eyes light up when you figure out a way to outsmart someone.” She leaned in, her lips brushing his. It was the same kiss she’d missed for six weeks—warm, gentle, the kind of kiss that made her forget about Evan, about demons, about the three deadbolts on the door. He wrapped his arms around her, his hands resting on her waist, and she tangled her fingers in his hair, pulling it loose from its slicked-back wave. When they pulled apart, he rested his forehead against hers, his breath coming in shallow gasps. “I need to tell you everything,” he said. “About Avaros. About my father. About the demon who’s still watching, who’s still looking for a way to get to you.” “I’m listening,” she said, her hand resting on his chest. She could feel his heart beating, fast and steady, and for the first time in months, she didn’t feel scared. “But first, you have to eat a samosa. They’re from the curry house below, and they’re the only thing that’s kept me sane since you left. Eva says they’re the spiciest in East London.” He laughed, the sound louder this time, and nodded. “Deal. But if they’re so spicy I can’t speak French for a week, I’m blaming you. And I’ll hex your delivery bag into a purse full of glitter.” Ptolemy jumped from the stack of books and rubbed against Lucien’s leg, his tail no longer puffed up. Rory smiled, looking at the mess of books and scrolls around them, the curry smell drifting up through the floorboards, the man she’d thought she’d lost standing in front of her. For the first time in a long time, fortune felt like it might actually favor the bold—like she might finally be able to stop running, to stop looking over her shoulder, to start living again.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:37:48.823Z" 2/20/2026, 7:37:48 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.522
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1816
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1816
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"reminder"
count1
2
word"lilt"
count1
3
word"pawn"
count1
4
word"otherworldly"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count2
7
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"reminder"
2"lilt"
3"pawn"
4"otherworldly"
5"traced"
6"could feel"
7"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences54
matches
0"felt a lump"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences54
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen76
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1794
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1089
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Eva7
London2
Lucien5
Moreau1
Camden1
Marseille1
Golden2
Empress2
Hackney1
Evan3
Pre-Law1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Evan"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
2"Marseille"
3"Hackney"
globalScore1
windowScore1
43.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like rain and roasted lamb, and Lu"
1"felt like it might actually favor the b"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1794
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
78.70% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean71.76
std30.53
cv0.425
sampleLengths
0108
120
2104
311
427
5102
634
784
890
974
10104
1190
12110
1367
1480
1590
1630
17103
1891
1981
2080
2129
2264
2337
2484
92.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences54
matches
0"was tailored"
1"was crumpled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs193
matches
0"were shaking"
1"was starting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences68
ratio0.147
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck, Rory’s thumbnail scraping the brass as she jiggled it loose—Eva’s obsession with security had turned every door opening into a minor battle."
1"His eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers, and for a second she forgot how to breathe."
2"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, came slinking from the bedroom, his tail puffed up like a feather duster, and hissed—loud, sharp, the kind of sound he only made when he smelled something supernatural."
3"He leaned his cane against the wall, his fingers brushing the ivory handle, and ran a hand through his hair—something he only did when he was flustered."
4"She’d suspected he had ties to something otherworldly—his ability to speak to ghosts outside Silas’ bar, the way he’d vanished in a cloud of smoke during that Camden run-in—but he’d never told her the full truth of his half-demon heritage."
5"The curry smell was fading, replaced by the scent of his cologne—sandalwood and cinnamon, the same one he’d worn the night they’d danced in Silas’ bar after closing, when he’d taught her a few phrases in French so she could order coffee without being recognized by Evan’s contacts."
6"She’d spent so many nights hating him, so many nights replaying the way he’d vanished without a word, that she’d forgotten how much she’d trusted him—how he’d been the first person since Eva to make her feel like she could breathe again."
7"She’d never told anyone how scared she was—how she still woke up in the middle of the night thinking Evan was at her door, how she’d dropped out of Pre-Law because she couldn’t stand the sound of her father’s voice telling her to be strong, how she’d fled to London because Eva was the only person who’d ever loved her unconditionally."
8"It was the same kiss she’d missed for six weeks—warm, gentle, the kind of kiss that made her forget about Evan, about demons, about the three deadbolts on the door."
9"For the first time in a long time, fortune felt like it might actually favor the bold—like she might finally be able to stop running, to stop looking over her shoulder, to start living again."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount845
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy leather-bound grimoire"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03076923076923077
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008284023668639054
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean26.38
std18.69
cv0.708
sampleLengths
026
142
240
320
42
530
656
716
811
923
104
116
1228
1368
1415
1519
169
1718
1832
1925
2027
2129
2234
2310
2464
2514
2627
2763
284
2940
3046
316
3248
3356
3416
3522
3629
374
3876
398
4042
4140
4215
4315
4413
4517
469
4764
485
4961
36.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.29411764705882354
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners20
65.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"Instead, she stepped back, her"
ratio0.02
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences51
matches
0"Her left wrist throbbed, the"
1"His platinum blond hair was"
2"His charcoal suit was tailored"
3"His eyes—one amber, one black—locked"
4"she said, the grimoire slipping"
5"he said, his voice low"
6"She should have slammed the"
7"She should have relatched the"
8"He chuckled, a dry, quiet"
9"He rubbed against Rory’s leg"
10"Her hands were shaking, and"
11"She’d worn the shirt that"
12"she said, her voice harder"
13"He leaned his cane against"
14"She’d suspected he had ties"
15"he said, stepping closer"
16"She glanced at the fortune"
17"It was crumpled at the"
18"She felt a lump form"
19"She’d spent so many nights"
ratio0.647
9.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences51
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck, Rory’s"
1"The knock had come soft"
2"Her left wrist throbbed, the"
3"His platinum blond hair was"
4"His charcoal suit was tailored"
5"His eyes—one amber, one black—locked"
6"she said, the grimoire slipping"
7"he said, his voice low"
8"She should have slammed the"
9"She should have relatched the"
10"He chuckled, a dry, quiet"
11"The flat was so cramped"
12"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, came"
13"He rubbed against Rory’s leg"
14"Rory set the grimoire on"
15"Her hands were shaking, and"
16"She’d worn the shirt that"
17"she said, her voice harder"
18"Lucien’s expression softened, the black"
19"He leaned his cane against"
ratio0.902
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Her left wrist throbbed, the crescent scar there pulsing a faint reminder of the childhood bike crash that had taught her to distrust sudden noises, and she’d g…"
1"She should have relatched the three deadbolts and called Eva, who’d warned her months ago that getting tangled up with a supernatural fixer would only end in hu…"
2"Instead, she stepped back, her boot catching on a stack of books about demon summoning."
3"Her hands were shaking, and she folded them behind her back to hide it, the scar on her wrist peeking out from the cuff of her faded band T-shirt."
4"She’d never told anyone how scared she was—how she still woke up in the middle of the night thinking Evan was at her door, how she’d dropped out of Pre-Law beca…"
5"He wrapped his arms around her, his hands resting on her waist, and she tangled her fingers in his hair, pulling it loose from its slicked-back wave."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she said, the grimoire slipping a little in her hand"
1"she said, her voice harder than she’d intended"
2"he said, his voice barely a whisper"
3"she said, her voice cracking"
4"she said, her hand resting on his chest"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.7252%