"The third deadbolt stuck, Rory’s thumbnail scraping the brass as she jiggled it loose—Eva’s obsession with security had turned every door opening into a minor battle."
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"His eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers, and for a second she forgot how to breathe."
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"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, came slinking from the bedroom, his tail puffed up like a feather duster, and hissed—loud, sharp, the kind of sound he only made when he smelled something supernatural."
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"He leaned his cane against the wall, his fingers brushing the ivory handle, and ran a hand through his hair—something he only did when he was flustered."
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"She’d suspected he had ties to something otherworldly—his ability to speak to ghosts outside Silas’ bar, the way he’d vanished in a cloud of smoke during that Camden run-in—but he’d never told her the full truth of his half-demon heritage."
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"The curry smell was fading, replaced by the scent of his cologne—sandalwood and cinnamon, the same one he’d worn the night they’d danced in Silas’ bar after closing, when he’d taught her a few phrases in French so she could order coffee without being recognized by Evan’s contacts."
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"She’d spent so many nights hating him, so many nights replaying the way he’d vanished without a word, that she’d forgotten how much she’d trusted him—how he’d been the first person since Eva to make her feel like she could breathe again."
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"She’d never told anyone how scared she was—how she still woke up in the middle of the night thinking Evan was at her door, how she’d dropped out of Pre-Law because she couldn’t stand the sound of her father’s voice telling her to be strong, how she’d fled to London because Eva was the only person who’d ever loved her unconditionally."
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"It was the same kiss she’d missed for six weeks—warm, gentle, the kind of kiss that made her forget about Evan, about demons, about the three deadbolts on the door."
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"For the first time in a long time, fortune felt like it might actually favor the bold—like she might finally be able to stop running, to stop looking over her shoulder, to start living again."
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"Her left wrist throbbed, the crescent scar there pulsing a faint reminder of the childhood bike crash that had taught her to distrust sudden noises, and she’d g…"
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"She should have relatched the three deadbolts and called Eva, who’d warned her months ago that getting tangled up with a supernatural fixer would only end in hu…"
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"Instead, she stepped back, her boot catching on a stack of books about demon summoning."
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"Her hands were shaking, and she folded them behind her back to hide it, the scar on her wrist peeking out from the cuff of her faded band T-shirt."
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"She’d never told anyone how scared she was—how she still woke up in the middle of the night thinking Evan was at her door, how she’d dropped out of Pre-Law beca…"
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"He wrapped his arms around her, his hands resting on her waist, and she tangled her fingers in his hair, pulling it loose from its slicked-back wave."