Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8Y0468CDZC1940GQWVFRM

Run Details

Duration:
24.4s
Cost:
$0.001176
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped through the manhole, her boots clanging on the rusted metal. The stench hit her first—sewer gas and something sharper, green and pine, like crushed sage. Above, the streetlights blurred into halos through the grate. She climbed the ladder, fingers curling around the rungs like they owed her money. Camden above hummed with life; below, the air hung thick, as if the tube itself were holding its breath. The Veil Market wasn’t supposed to be here. She’d seen the reports: a body found in an abandoned Northern Line platform, 12 miles from any known entrance. The call had come at 3 a.m., desk sergeant’s voice tight, *“Detective, it’s… not right. The girl on the line said it’s the Veil. But they don’t *find* things there. Not unless they’re… leaving.”* Quinn adjusted the worn leather of her watch—6:17, early for a crime scene, early for her. 18 years on the force, and she still got up at dawn, still sharpened her own coffee for the drive. No time for luck. The platform loomed ahead, graffiti tagged over decades of ads. “*NO SOLICITORS*” scrawled in neon, now faded to a sickly green. A faint glow seeped through a torn curtain of plastic tarp at the far end—enough to show a shadow hunched over something. She drew her notepad, flipping to a blank page, and moved closer. “Quinn.” She stopped. The voice was too bright, too young, to be her usual crew. She turned. Eva Kowalski stood by the ticket barrier, her curly red hair escaping the clip at the nape, a streak plastered to her freckled forehead. Round glasses slid down her nose, and she was tugging at her left ear—nervous habit. Her satchel was open, books spilling onto the concrete: *Ars Goetia for Beginners*, *The Archaeology of Occult Burials*, a tattered thing with a watermark from Oxford. “Jesus, Evie,” Quinn said, keeping her voice low. “You’re supposed to be in the archives, not sneaking into death traps.” Eva pushed her glasses up, the snort of a laugh too loud. “Lila’s dead, Harlow. In a *supernatural* black market. The woman who called the cops found the body *with a bone token*. She thought it was a prank, but Lila recognized it—said Marcus was the one selling to her.” She nodded at the tarp. “I had to see. We were… not friends, but… he owed me a favor.” Quinn bit back a sigh. Eva and her “occult researcher” nonsense. 26, master’s from Oxford, works at the British Museum’s restricted archives. She’d tried to drag Quinn to a wicca circle once, said it was “team-building.” Quinn had told her to stick to mummies and move on. But Marcus was a name the I.T. team had run down. A “freelance curator” with ties to the Veil Market. Not the kind of guy who ended up in a Tube station unless… She stepped past Eva, ducked under the tarp. The air hit her in the face—sage, yes, but sweeter, cloying, like burnt honey. The body lay on its side, pressed against a wall. She knelt, not touching, and saw why the caller had panicked. Marcus was a big man, 6’2”, but his skin was as pale as parchment, veins running silver under it like rivers of mercury. His eyes were open—wide, unblinking, as if he’d been staring at a ghost. His throat was a ragged tear, but the blood wasn’t red. It was black, congealed in clots, like oil. In his hand: a brass compass. The case was covered in verdigris, etched with symbols that looked like they’d been carved with a knife, deeper than usual. The needle was bent, pointing *away* from the tarp, toward the wall. “Quinn?” She looked up. Eva was in the doorway, her satchel closed now, fingers still hovering near her ear. “What is it?” “The body,” Eva said. “The silver veins. It’s a spirit bond. Marcus was… partnered with something. A familiar, maybe. Or a daemon. They share a life force—if the familiar dies, the host withers. Which is probably why his throat’s torn out. The familiar got free, then came back for revenge.” Quinn scoffed. “You been reading *Grimm* again?” Eva squared her shoulders. “I been reading *medieval grimoires*. Marcus bought a Coptic text from me last month—said it had ‘warding formulas.’ He didn’t pay, but he *said* he’d show me a sigil, something that worked. This compass—look at the face. Those aren’t protective sigils. They’re *binding*. Shade runes. Crafted by a Shade, the ones who live between worlds. You think a criminal would carry a *craftsman’s* compass? Or someone who’s… *negotiating* with them?” Quinn leaned forward, squinting at the symbols. Eva was right—some looked like broken chains, others like eyes with no pupils. Sharp, precise. Not the messy, overlapping doodles the graffiti artist had done on the wall. She glanced at the wall behind Marcus. There was a crack in the concrete, dark, like a mouth. Beyond it, she couldn’t see—no glow, no shadow. Just black. “Bone token,” she said, flipping to her notepad. “Entry requirement. Marcus had one.” She nodded at the man’s vest, peeking out from the tattered coat. A white bone, carved into a wolf’s head, glinted at his throat. “How does that work? You give it up, get in. But he’s been dead hours. The med tech said rigor’s set in.” Eva crossed her arms, her satchel strap digging into her shoulder. “Rigor takes 2 hours to set, 12 to peak. He’s been dead less than 6. Maybe the token’s not just an entry pass. Maybe it’s a *marker*. Locks the door behind you. Traps you in.” She took a step closer, voice lower. “Marcus owed a debt. To someone in the market. Someone who didn’t want him to leave.” Quinn’s fingers brushed the broken compass. The needle spun, slow, as if it couldn’t decide which way to go. *Aurora*, she thought. Her little sister, 10 years younger, still into the “goth stuff” Eva loved. Had Aurora mentioned Marcus? Probably not. Aurora was good at not mentioning things that got her in trouble. “Who found him?” she said, changing the subject. “Lila. She’s a herbalist, sells poisons and remedies—old ones, the kind the market deals in. She came here today to meet him. Said he had a ‘sample’ of something ‘new.’ When he didn’t show, she called the cops.” Eva paused, chewing her lip. “Lila’s scared. She’s got a bone token, too. From Marcus. She thinks he’s dead because he broke a deal.” Quinn stood, her joints cracking. “Why would he break a deal? He was in the Veil Market—he knew the rules. No stealing, no backing out.” Eva sounded sad. “Marcus’s daughter. She’s sick. Cancer. Fast. He was desperate. Told me he’d do anything—sell his soul, his firstborn, whatever—to get the cure. I tried to warn him. The market doesn’t work with desperation. It *eats* it.” Quinn looked at the body again. The silver veins were spreading, inching up his neck, like mold. The black blood had dripped onto the concrete, forming a pattern—three circles, overlapping, like a target. She knelt, brought her face closer. The man’s eyes weren’t just open—they were *focused*. On something behind her. “Quinn.” She spun. Eva was staring at the crack in the wall, her hand over her mouth. “What?” Eva took a step back, her satchel heavy in her hands. “The compass. It’s working. The needle—look.” Quinn turned. The needle had stopped spinning. It pointed directly at the crack. And then, faintly, she heard it: a whisper, low and guttural, like wind through a keyhole. Marcus’s eyes flickered. Quinn’s hand went to her holster, but there was no gun here—not in the Veil Market. Just a baton, a handcuff key, and the notepad. Eva grabbed her arm. “It’s a rift. The compass points to rifts. That’s what the codex says. Your codex—*.”* She cut herself off, swallowing hard. “The market moves every full moon. Tomorrow’s the 15th. This platform… it won’t be here in 24 hours. Maybe the rift’s old. Maybe Marcus found it. And the Shade sigils—they’re to keep the rift closed. But he broke them. Let it out.” Quinn’s throat felt tight. The whisper grew louder, a wordless chant, and the silver veins on Marcus’s neck pulsed, matching the rhythm. She looked at the bone token. At the compass. At the crack in the wall. The evidence didn’t add up. A locked platform, a dead man with a spirit bond, a compass pointing to a rift. But Eva was right—someone in the market would have killed Marcus for breaking a deal. But not the way he’d been killed. Not with a spirit loose, not with a rift opening. Unless the killer wasn’t *in* the market. Unless the killer was the one who’d let the rift out. Quinn’s watch beeped. 6:42. She needed to get out, to run a ballistics report on the shard of something sharp found near the body—bone, maybe, from the token. But first, she needed to know. “Evie,” she said, keeping her voice steady. “The Shade sigils. Are they one-time use? Or… can they be broken?” Eva nodded, still staring at the crack. “If the casing’s damaged. The compass is old—centuries, maybe. The runes are carved deep, but if something hits it… hard. Like a bullet. Or a broken bone.” Quinn knelt, pushed the compass toward her. The needle jittered, then pointed at the crack again. Marcus’s eyes rolled back. The silver veins stopped spreading. The whisper died. Eva stepped closer, her nervous habit forgotten. “What’s happening?” Quinn didn’t answer. She stared at the black blood, now drying, flaking. At the bone token, still clamped in Marcus’s hand. At the crack, which was now just a crack, smooth and empty. She picked up the notepad, scribbled a note: *Check Lila’s token. Forged?* Then, *Markus’s daughter. Medical records. ASAP.* Eva leaned over her shoulder. “You think—” Quinn closed the notepad, snapped it shut. “The killer didn’t take the token. They didn’t need to. They wanted Marcus dead *and* the rift open. To let something in. To let something *out*.” Eva’s face paled. “Who would do that?” Quinn stood, adjusted her coat. The air had cooled, the sage scent fading. “Someone who’s tired of the rules. Someone who’s got a debt worse than Marcus’s.” She turned toward the manhole, her boots clanging. Behind her, Eva’s satchel strap snapped tight—no doubt the book on warding formulas falling out, but Quinn didn’t look back. The Veil Market would move soon. Tomorrow night, this platform would be gone, buried under soil and concrete, like it never existed. But the dead didn’t stay buried. Not in places like this. Quinn climbed the ladder, sunlight stinging her eyes. Above, Camden buzzed, oblivious. Some cases, you didn’t solve. You just kept the dead from walking. She pulled out her phone, dialed the desk sergeant. “Get me Lila. And the medical examiner. And find out where Marcus’s daughter lives. Now.” The line crackled. “Yes, Detective.” She hung up, adjusted her watch. 6:47. Time to go. Away from the Veil. Away from the dead. For now.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags33
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.611
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1873
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1873
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count3
3
word"whisper"
count3
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"etched"
2"familiar"
3"whisper"
4"flickered"
5"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences160
matches
0"was desperate"
80.36% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences160
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
2"think"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences168
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans23
markdownWords58
totalWords1847
ratio0.031
matches
0"“Detective, it’s… not right. The girl on the line said it’s the Veil. But they don’t *find"
1"NO SOLICITORS"
2"Ars Goetia for Beginners"
3"The Archaeology of Occult Burials"
4"supernatural"
5"with a bone token"
6"away"
7"Grimm"
8"medieval grimoires"
9"said"
10"binding"
11"craftsman’s"
12"negotiating"
13"marker"
14"Aurora"
15"eats"
16"focused"
17".”"
18"in"
19"Check Lila’s token. Forged?"
20"Markus’s daughter. Medical records. ASAP."
21"and"
22"out"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.28% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions95
wordCount1528
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity1.37
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn21
Veil6
Market5
Northern1
Line1
Kowalski1
Goetia1
Archaeology1
Occult1
Oxford2
Eva21
British1
Museum1
Marcus16
Tube1
Coptic1
Shade3
Aurora3
Are1
Lila1
Camden2
You3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Line"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
6"Museum"
7"Marcus"
8"Shade"
9"Aurora"
10"Are"
11"Lila"
12"Camden"
13"You"
places
0"Veil"
1"Oxford"
2"British"
3"Tube"
globalScore0.813
windowScore0.833
95.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like they’d been carved with a kni"
1"looked like broken chains, others like ey"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.541
wordCount1847
matches
0"not friends, but… he owed me a favor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean26.77
std20.87
cv0.78
sampleLengths
071
18
253
340
455
51
616
765
820
969
1047
1133
1243
1355
1439
151
1621
1750
187
1974
2035
2128
2259
2369
2453
258
2662
2725
2839
2933
3018
311
3216
331
3417
3513
3616
373
3825
3967
4022
4115
4253
437
4411
4534
4619
4734
4816
499
98.68% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences160
matches
0"was covered"
1"been carved"
2"been killed"
3"are carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs296
matches
0"were holding"
1"was tugging"
2"were spreading"
3"was staring"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount23
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences23
totalSentences168
ratio0.137
matches
0"The stench hit her first—sewer gas and something sharper, green and pine, like crushed sage."
1"Camden above hummed with life; below, the air hung thick, as if the tube itself were holding its breath."
2"Quinn adjusted the worn leather of her watch—6:17, early for a crime scene, early for her."
3"A faint glow seeped through a torn curtain of plastic tarp at the far end—enough to show a shadow hunched over something."
4"Round glasses slid down her nose, and she was tugging at her left ear—nervous habit."
5"The air hit her in the face—sage, yes, but sweeter, cloying, like burnt honey."
6"They share a life force—if the familiar dies, the host withers."
7"Marcus bought a Coptic text from me last month—said it had ‘warding formulas.’ He didn’t pay, but he *said* he’d show me a sigil, something that worked."
8"This compass—look at the face."
9"Quinn leaned forward, squinting at the symbols. Eva was right—some looked like broken chains, others like eyes with no pupils. Sharp, precise. Not the messy, overlapping doodles the graffiti artist had done on the wall."
10"She glanced at the wall behind Marcus. There was a crack in the concrete, dark, like a mouth. Beyond it, she couldn’t see—no glow, no shadow. Just black."
11"She’s a herbalist, sells poisons and remedies—old ones, the kind the market deals in."
12"He was in the Veil Market—he knew the rules."
13"Told me he’d do anything—sell his soul, his firstborn, whatever—to get the cure."
14"Quinn looked at the body again. The silver veins were spreading, inching up his neck, like mold. The black blood had dripped onto the concrete, forming a pattern—three circles, overlapping, like a target."
15"She knelt, brought her face closer. The man’s eyes weren’t just open—they were *focused*. On something behind her."
16"The needle—look.”"
17"Quinn’s hand went to her holster, but there was no gun here—not in the Veil Market. Just a baton, a handcuff key, and the notepad."
18"And the Shade sigils—they’re to keep the rift closed."
19"The evidence didn’t add up. A locked platform, a dead man with a spirit bond, a compass pointing to a rift. But Eva was right—someone in the market would have killed Marcus for breaking a deal. But not the way he’d been killed. Not with a spirit loose, not with a rift opening."
20"Quinn’s watch beeped. 6:42. She needed to get out, to run a ballistics report on the shard of something sharp found near the body—bone, maybe, from the token. But first, she needed to know."
21"The compass is old—centuries, maybe."
22"She turned toward the manhole, her boots clanging. Behind her, Eva’s satchel strap snapped tight—no doubt the book on warding formulas falling out, but Quinn didn’t look back."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1218
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.024630541871921183
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.006568144499178982
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences168
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences168
mean10.99
std10.22
cv0.93
sampleLengths
014
115
29
314
419
58
619
734
816
920
104
1110
1211
1322
1412
151
162
1712
182
1924
2015
2126
228
2312
2412
2543
2614
275
286
2911
3025
317
324
339
3413
358
3614
3710
3811
3955
4039
411
4221
437
444
452
463
473
483
4911
54.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3630952380952381
totalSentences168
uniqueOpeners61
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences140
matches
0"Maybe the token’s not just"
1"Maybe it’s a *marker*."
2"Maybe the rift’s old."
3"Maybe Marcus found it."
4"Away from the Veil."
5"Away from the dead."
ratio0.043
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences140
matches
0"She climbed the ladder, fingers"
1"She’d seen the reports: a"
2"She drew her notepad, flipping"
3"Her satchel was open, books"
4"She nodded at the tarp"
5"She’d tried to drag Quinn"
6"She stepped past Eva, ducked"
7"She knelt, not touching, and"
8"She looked up. Eva was"
9"It’s a spirit bond."
10"They share a life force—if"
11"You think a criminal would"
12"She glanced at the wall"
13"she said, flipping to her"
14"You give it up, get"
15"He’s been dead less than"
16"she said, changing the subject"
17"She’s a herbalist, sells poisons"
18"She came here today to"
19"She’s got a bone token,"
ratio0.257
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences140
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped through"
1"The stench hit her first—sewer"
2"She climbed the ladder, fingers"
3"Camden above hummed with life;"
4"The Veil Market wasn’t supposed"
5"She’d seen the reports: a"
6"The call had come at"
7"Quinn adjusted the worn leather"
8"The platform loomed ahead, graffiti"
9"A faint glow seeped through"
10"She drew her notepad, flipping"
11"The voice was too bright,"
12"Eva Kowalski stood by the"
13"Her satchel was open, books"
14"Quinn said, keeping her voice"
15"Eva pushed her glasses up,"
16"She nodded at the tarp"
17"Quinn bit back a sigh."
18"Eva and her nonsense."
19"She’d tried to drag Quinn"
ratio0.714
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences140
matches
0"To someone in the market."
1"To let something in."
2"To let something"
ratio0.021
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Camden above hummed with life; below, the air hung thick, as if the tube itself were holding its breath."
1"In his hand: a brass compass. The case was covered in verdigris, etched with symbols that looked like they’d been carved with a knife, deeper than usual. The ne…"
2"Quinn didn’t answer. She stared at the black blood, now drying, flaking. At the bone token, still clamped in Marcus’s hand. At the crack, which was now just a c…"
3"She turned toward the manhole, her boots clanging. Behind her, Eva’s satchel strap snapped tight—no doubt the book on warding formulas falling out, but Quinn di…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he had (have)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.13
leniency0.259
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.037
91.6321%