"The stench hit her first—sewer gas and something sharper, green and pine, like crushed sage."
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"Camden above hummed with life; below, the air hung thick, as if the tube itself were holding its breath."
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"Quinn adjusted the worn leather of her watch—6:17, early for a crime scene, early for her."
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"A faint glow seeped through a torn curtain of plastic tarp at the far end—enough to show a shadow hunched over something."
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"Round glasses slid down her nose, and she was tugging at her left ear—nervous habit."
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"The air hit her in the face—sage, yes, but sweeter, cloying, like burnt honey."
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"They share a life force—if the familiar dies, the host withers."
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"Marcus bought a Coptic text from me last month—said it had ‘warding formulas.’ He didn’t pay, but he *said* he’d show me a sigil, something that worked."
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"This compass—look at the face."
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"Quinn leaned forward, squinting at the symbols. Eva was right—some looked like broken chains, others like eyes with no pupils. Sharp, precise. Not the messy, overlapping doodles the graffiti artist had done on the wall."
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"She glanced at the wall behind Marcus. There was a crack in the concrete, dark, like a mouth. Beyond it, she couldn’t see—no glow, no shadow. Just black."
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"She’s a herbalist, sells poisons and remedies—old ones, the kind the market deals in."
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"He was in the Veil Market—he knew the rules."
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"Told me he’d do anything—sell his soul, his firstborn, whatever—to get the cure."
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"Quinn looked at the body again. The silver veins were spreading, inching up his neck, like mold. The black blood had dripped onto the concrete, forming a pattern—three circles, overlapping, like a target."
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"She knelt, brought her face closer. The man’s eyes weren’t just open—they were *focused*. On something behind her."
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"The needle—look.”"
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"Quinn’s hand went to her holster, but there was no gun here—not in the Veil Market. Just a baton, a handcuff key, and the notepad."
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"And the Shade sigils—they’re to keep the rift closed."
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"The evidence didn’t add up. A locked platform, a dead man with a spirit bond, a compass pointing to a rift. But Eva was right—someone in the market would have killed Marcus for breaking a deal. But not the way he’d been killed. Not with a spirit loose, not with a rift opening."
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"Quinn’s watch beeped. 6:42. She needed to get out, to run a ballistics report on the shard of something sharp found near the body—bone, maybe, from the token. But first, she needed to know."
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"The compass is old—centuries, maybe."
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"She turned toward the manhole, her boots clanging. Behind her, Eva’s satchel strap snapped tight—no doubt the book on warding formulas falling out, but Quinn didn’t look back."
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"Camden above hummed with life; below, the air hung thick, as if the tube itself were holding its breath."
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"In his hand: a brass compass. The case was covered in verdigris, etched with symbols that looked like they’d been carved with a knife, deeper than usual. The ne…"
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"Quinn didn’t answer. She stared at the black blood, now drying, flaking. At the bone token, still clamped in Marcus’s hand. At the crack, which was now just a c…"
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"She turned toward the manhole, her boots clanging. Behind her, Eva’s satchel strap snapped tight—no doubt the book on warding formulas falling out, but Quinn di…"