Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8Y5XQDX2ZXRWQRSWYVACR

Run Details

Duration:
10.4s
Cost:
$0.000481
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked shut with a dull *thunk*, the sound swallowed by the thick carpet under Rory’s bare feet. She’d just stepped out of the shower, the steam still clinging to her skin like a second layer, her hair wrapped in a towel. The flat smelled of lavender and old paper—Eva’s signature scent, sharp with the faint metallic tang of Ptolemy’s favourite tuna treats left scattered on the kitchen counter. She was reaching for the robe when the knock came. Not the usual hesitant rap of a friend dropping by. This was three sharp raps, spaced like a code. Her pulse jumped. No one knew that knock but one person. Rory froze. The towel slipped lower, exposing the crescent scar on her wrist, pale against her skin. She didn’t move. Didn’t breathe. Another knock. Louder this time. *"Aurora. Open up."* The voice was smooth, accented, the kind of voice that could slip into a room and make every other sound fade. She knew it like she knew the weight of her own name. Ptolemy chose that moment to wind himself around her ankles, purring, his tail flicking against her shin. She crouched, scratching behind his ears. "Not helping," she muttered. The doorknob turned. Rory’s stomach dropped. The deadbolts. She’d locked them after the last time—after *him*. But the lock clicked anyway, the door swinging inward before she could stop it. Lucien Moreau stood there, filling the doorway like he owned it. His platinum hair was damp at the temples, his charcoal suit rumpled at the shoulders like he’d been running his hands through it. The cane leaned against the wall beside him, the ivory handle catching the dim light from the hallway. His amber eye locked onto hers. The black one stayed fixed on the towel clinging to her chest. "Took you long enough," he said. Rory’s fingers curled into the carpet. "You don’t knock." "I did." A smirk tugged at his mouth. "You just didn’t answer." She should’ve slammed the door. Should’ve called the police. Should’ve— "Let me in," he said, stepping over the threshold before she could protest. The door clicked shut behind him, the deadbolts engaging with a finality that made her skin prickle. Ptolemy hissed, arching his back. Lucien didn’t even glance at the cat. His gaze was still on her, dark and unreadable. Rory wrapped the towel tighter. "What do you want?" "Same thing I always want." His voice dropped, rough at the edges. "To see you." The words hung between them, heavy with everything unsaid. The way he’d left her that night in Marseille. The way she’d chased him down the docks, her fists bloody, her voice raw. The way he’d turned and looked at her like she was the only thing keeping him from drowning. She swallowed. "You’re in my flat." "And you’re in my way." He took another step forward, close enough that she could see the faint scar along his jawline, the one he’d gotten in a bar fight three years ago. The one she’d pressed her lips to once, before she’d realised what she was doing. Rory’s breath hitched. "Get out." Lucien didn’t move. Instead, he reached into his jacket and pulled out a small, leather-bound book. The cover was worn, the edges singed. He tossed it onto the coffee table. It landed with a soft *thud*. Rory didn’t touch it. "What is that?" "A ledger." His voice was quiet now, all trace of the smirk gone. "Names. Places. Things people don’t want found." She knew what that meant. Knew what he was. A fixer. A man who cleaned up messes for people who couldn’t afford to be seen. "And?" she prompted. "And I need your help." Rory let out a sharp laugh. "You need *my* help?" Lucien’s jaw tightened. "I need someone who knows this city better than I do. Someone who can move without being noticed." She crossed her arms, the towel slipping again. "I don’t work for you." "You never did." His gaze flicked to her wrist, to the scar. "But you used to." The words hit like a punch. She remembered the first time she’d met him—Eva dragging her into some back-alley bar in Soho, introducing her to a man with a smile like a blade and a reputation for trouble. She’d been twenty, stupid, desperate to prove she wasn’t just her father’s daughter, his disappointment in flesh and bone. And Lucien had looked at her like she was something worth stealing. Rory’s hands clenched. "I’m not that girl anymore." "No." His voice was low, almost a growl. "You’re not." She wanted to hate him. Wanted to turn away, to tell him to leave and never come back. But the ledger was still there, mocking her with its presence. Lucien exhaled, slow and controlled. "There’s a job. High-paying. Dangerous. And it’s the kind of thing you’d take if you weren’t so damn stubborn." Rory’s eyes narrowed. "You think you know me?" "I know you’d rather cut your own throat than ask for help." He stepped closer, close enough that she could smell the leather of his jacket, the faint scent of bergamot. "I know you’d rather burn the world down than let anyone see you bleed." She should’ve pushed him. Should’ve told him to get out, to never darken her door again. But the words stuck in her throat. Lucien’s hand hovered near her shoulder, not quite touching. "I need you, Aurora." The way he said her name—like it was a prayer. Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the couch, his tail lashing. Lucien didn’t flinch. Didn’t look away. Rory’s breath came faster. The towel was slipping. The ledger was still there. And Lucien was waiting. "Fine," she said. His eyebrows lifted. "Fine?" She crossed her arms, the towel finally securing itself. "I’ll look at the ledger. But that’s it." Lucien’s smirk returned, slow and dangerous. "That’s all I asked for." She knew better than to trust him. Knew better than to let him back into her life, into her flat, into her head. But the ledger was there. And Lucien was watching her like she was the only thing keeping him from falling apart. Rory reached for the book. Her fingers brushed the leather. The past was a knife at her throat. And Lucien was still standing there, waiting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.314
leniency0.629
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1062
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1062
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"weight"
2"stomach"
3"unreadable"
4"flicked"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences102
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords7
totalWords1056
ratio0.007
matches
0"thunk"
1"\"Aurora. Open up.\""
2"him"
3"thud"
4"my"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount883
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Eva2
Ptolemy4
Moreau1
Marseille1
Soho1
Lucien12
Should3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Moreau"
4"Lucien"
5"Should"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Soho"
globalScore0.82
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite touching"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.947
wordCount1056
matches
0"No one knew that knock but"
86.67% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences125
matches
0"knew that knock"
1"chose that moment"
2"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean17.9
std14.81
cv0.827
sampleLengths
071
110
230
322
48
533
627
73
827
952
1018
116
129
1312
1410
1530
1621
179
1815
1950
206
2148
225
2330
246
257
2620
2725
283
295
3010
3121
3213
3316
3457
3512
368
3710
3829
3924
408
4145
4223
4313
4410
4518
4613
474
483
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
6.20% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs172
matches
0"was reaching"
1"was doing"
2"was slipping"
3"was waiting"
4"was watching"
28.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences125
ratio0.04
matches
0"The flat smelled of lavender and old paper—Eva’s signature scent, sharp with the faint metallic tang of Ptolemy’s favourite tuna treats left scattered on the kitchen counter."
1"She’d locked them after the last time—after *him*."
2"Should’ve—"
3"She remembered the first time she’d met him—Eva dragging her into some back-alley bar in Soho, introducing her to a man with a smile like a blade and a reputation for trouble."
4"The way he said her name—like it was a prayer."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount888
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, leather-bound book."
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.024774774774774775
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0033783783783783786
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean8.45
std6.6
cv0.781
sampleLengths
020
124
227
310
410
59
63
78
82
915
103
112
122
133
143
1521
1612
1717
186
194
203
213
222
238
2414
2511
2623
2718
286
2912
306
316
323
338
344
355
364
371
3813
3917
405
417
429
435
444
4512
463
479
489
4914
42.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.28
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners35
36.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Instead, he reached into his"
ratio0.011
88.13% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences91
matches
0"She’d just stepped out of"
1"She was reaching for the"
2"Her pulse jumped."
3"She didn’t move."
4"She knew it like she"
5"She crouched, scratching behind his"
6"She’d locked them after the"
7"His platinum hair was damp"
8"His amber eye locked onto"
9"She should’ve slammed the door."
10"he said, stepping over the"
11"His gaze was still on"
12"His voice dropped, rough at"
13"He took another step forward,"
14"He tossed it onto the"
15"It landed with a soft"
16"His voice was quiet now,"
17"She knew what that meant."
18"She crossed her arms, the"
19"His gaze flicked to her"
ratio0.33
58.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences91
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked shut"
1"She’d just stepped out of"
2"The flat smelled of lavender"
3"She was reaching for the"
4"This was three sharp raps,"
5"Her pulse jumped."
6"The towel slipped lower, exposing"
7"She didn’t move."
8"The voice was smooth, accented,"
9"She knew it like she"
10"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
11"She crouched, scratching behind his"
12"The doorknob turned."
13"Rory’s stomach dropped."
14"She’d locked them after the"
15"Lucien Moreau stood there, filling"
16"His platinum hair was damp"
17"The cane leaned against the"
18"His amber eye locked onto"
19"The black one stayed fixed"
ratio0.802
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Ptolemy chose that moment to wind himself around her ankles, purring, his tail flicking against her shin."
1"The door clicked shut behind him, the deadbolts engaging with a finality that made her skin prickle."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.229
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.057
81.0089%