| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.389 | | leniency | 0.778 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1216 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "deliberately" | | 2 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 30.10% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1216 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "standard" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "silk" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "flicked" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "resolved" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "racing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 12 | | markdownWords | 13 | | totalWords | 1202 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "other" | | 1 | "there" | | 2 | "DS Whitaker" | | 3 | "that" | | 4 | "thing" | | 5 | "placed" | | 6 | "message" | | 7 | "clicking" | | 8 | "click" | | 9 | "tear" | | 10 | "stood" | | 11 | "trap" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1030 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.65 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 17 | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Whitaker | 10 | | Veil | 1 | | Compass | 1 | | Movement | 1 | | Morris | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Whitaker" | | 3 | "Morris" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.675 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 5.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "spiral that seemed to shift when she looked at it too long" | | 1 | "quite there" | | 2 | "shadows that seemed to twist unnaturally" | | 3 | "quite fit" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1202 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 59 | | mean | 20.37 | | std | 18.98 | | cv | 0.932 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 86 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 35 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 52 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 40 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 92.62% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "been called" | | 1 | "was sprawled" | | 2 | "was made" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 45.86% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "was being" | | 1 | "was stepping" | | 2 | "was coming" | | 3 | "wasn’t looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 122 | | ratio | 0.09 | | matches | | 0 | "The stairwell reeked of damp concrete and something older—something metallic, like rusted blood." | | 1 | "He’d pressed a bone token into her palm—small, smooth, carved with a spiral that seemed to shift when she looked at it too long." | | 2 | "Lying a few feet away, half-hidden beneath a collapsed stack of crates, was a second figure—tall, gaunt, dressed in black." | | 3 | "She stood slowly, turning to face the figure leaning against the wall—a younger detective, his badge reading *DS Whitaker*." | | 4 | "The suit was expensive—bespoke, probably." | | 5 | "The first few were standard—wide shots of the platform, the body in the suit." | | 6 | "A sound cut through the air—a low, rhythmic *clicking*, like bones knocking together." | | 7 | "Her fingers closed around the Veil Compass—small, brass, its needle spinning wildly before settling with a sharp *click*." | | 8 | "And beyond it—" | | 9 | "And Quinn realized—" | | 10 | "The thing tilted its head, and for the first time, Quinn noticed the mark on its throat—a sigil, carved into the flesh, glowing faintly in the dark." |
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| 88.86% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1043 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.052732502396931925 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011505273250239693 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 122 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 122 | | mean | 9.85 | | std | 7.26 | | cv | 0.737 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 36 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 37.70% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.29508196721311475 | | totalSentences | 122 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the clean, precise cut" | | 1 | "Then, in the third photo," | | 2 | "Then she saw it." | | 3 | "Then it smiled." |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t even a standard" | | 1 | "She’d been called to an" | | 2 | "He’d pressed a bone token" | | 3 | "It was the *other* body." | | 4 | "She crouched, her gloved fingers" | | 5 | "She stood slowly, turning to" | | 6 | "He had a notepad in" | | 7 | "She moved closer to the" | | 8 | "She reached for them, then" | | 9 | "She stood abruptly." | | 10 | "He hesitated, then pulled a" | | 11 | "She was already moving, her" | | 12 | "She knelt beside the crates" | | 13 | "She pulled one free, holding" | | 14 | "She was already moving, her" | | 15 | "Her fingers closed around the" | | 16 | "She took a step forward," | | 17 | "It didn’t scream." | | 18 | "It didn’t even breathe." | | 19 | "It just *stood*, its hollow" |
| | ratio | 0.242 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The stairwell reeked of damp" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the" | | 2 | "The air grew thicker with" | | 3 | "This wasn’t a standard crime" | | 4 | "It wasn’t even a standard" | | 5 | "She’d been called to an" | | 6 | "He’d pressed a bone token" | | 7 | "The body was sprawled near" | | 8 | "It was the *other* body." | | 9 | "The skin was too pale," | | 10 | "She crouched, her gloved fingers" | | 11 | "The fabric was fine, almost" | | 12 | "a voice said from behind" | | 13 | "Quinn didn’t flinch." | | 14 | "She stood slowly, turning to" | | 15 | "He had a notepad in" | | 16 | "Whitaker continued, gesturing vaguely at" | | 17 | "Quinn’s gaze flicked back to" | | 18 | "Whitaker exhaled through his nose," | | 19 | "Quinn ignored the dismissal in" |
| | ratio | 0.716 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing in the flickering" | | 1 | "Because she knew, with a" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 65.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She was already moving, her boots crunching over broken glass and something wetter." | | 1 | "The light flickered, casting long shadows that seemed to twist unnaturally." | | 2 | "She was already moving, her hand slipping into her satchel." | | 3 | "Her fingers closed around the Veil Compass—small, brass, its needle spinning wildly before settling with a sharp *click*." | | 4 | "The thing that emerged from the rift was tall, its limbs too long, its skin stretched too tight over bones that didn’t quite fit." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn stood, her voice low" |
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| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Whitaker continued (continue)" | | 1 | "Whitaker muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.278 | | leniency | 0.556 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |