Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8Z0M93SK4RZYNNS57E91Q

Run Details

Duration:
40.5s
Cost:
$0.000253
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone pulsed against Aurora's skin, a frantic thrum against her ribs. It had been a steady warmth for miles, a reassuring beacon guiding them through Richmond Park, but now it vibrated with outright urgency. The air thickened, tasted like ozone and overripe fruit. The familiar scent of damp earth and pine needles faded, replaced by something sweeter, heavier – honey and decay. “Are you sure about this, Rory?” Eva asked, her voice a nervous tremor. She clutched the strap of her bag, her eyes darting around the grove. Aurora didn’t respond, too focused on the unsettling hum emanating from the pendant. Ahead, the ancient oak standing stones, normally weathered and moss-covered, seemed to shimmer, their edges blurring as if seen through heat haze. Beyond them, the world fractured. It wasn't a clean break, not a rip or tear. It was more like looking through water—an undulating distortion of the air, rippling with colours she couldn’t name. Through the distortion bloomed a landscape utterly alien to anything on Earth. Vivid amber light dripped from the sky, bathing everything in a perpetual sunset. Twisted, colossal vines, thick as ancient redwoods, spiralled up towards the unseen sky, their leaves a riot of jewel tones—scarlet, emerald, sapphire—all glowing with an inner luminescence. The ground beneath their feet wasn't dirt, but a soft, springy moss that felt almost…alive. The air itself vibrated with a low, resonant hum that seemed to settle deep in her bones. Nyx flowed forward, their shadow form rippling as they crossed the threshold. They solidified slightly as they entered, the vaguely humanoid silhouette sharpening into something more defined, but still composed of shifting, raven black shadows. “It breathes,” Nyx murmured, their voice a wind whispering through dry reeds. “This place… it *is* breath.” Eva gasped, stumbled back against Aurora. Silus hung back, his hand instinctively resting on the pommel of a hunting knife strapped to his thigh. “What *is* this place?” he muttered. Aurora pushed past Eva, ignoring the protest in her friend's voice. The Heartstone throbbed insistently. "Dymas," she breathed, recognizing the faint signature from the handful of texts she’d devoured on Hel. “Prince Belphegor’s domain. Gluttony.” The grove opened into a sprawling vista. Orchards stretched as far as the eye could see, laden with fruit that pulsed with an almost obscene ripeness. Vines heavier than any she’d ever witnessed dripped with clusters of grapes the size of her head. But it wasn’t just the sheer abundance that was unsettling. It was the *order*. The orchards were arranged in perfect geometric patterns, the vines meticulously trained, the trees pruned with an almost obsessive symmetry. This wasn’t wild growth; this was cultivated excess, engineered indulgence. A stream of liquid silver meandered through the orchards, its surface reflecting the amber sky. The scent of honey intensified, mixed now with a heady, almost cloying sweetness that made her stomach churn. Further on, a colossal structure rose from the landscape—a palace built of polished obsidian and shimmering gold, its towers piercing the strange amber sky. But it wasn’t the grandeur of the palace that made Aurora’s skin crawl. It was the flags that hung from its battlements—each one depicting a single, grotesquely oversized piece of fruit. “It’s bloody unsettling," Eva finally managed, her voice thin. “Understatement,” Silas retorted, scanning the orchards with visible unease. “I don’t like this. Not one bit.” They ventured deeper, the springy moss cushioning their steps. The air grew warmer, heavier with the scent of sweetness. They passed orchards where pears the size of pumpkins swelled on the branches, and vines laden with grapes that seemed to shimmer with an internal light. Periodically, they would encounter pathways lined with ornate tables laden with delicacies—mountains of glistening pastries, pyramids of candied fruits, rivers of flowing chocolate. All perfectly arranged, untouched. "Someone is expecting guests," Nyx observed, their form shifting slightly as they moved past a table piled high with multi-layered cakes that defied gravity. "And they have very…specific tastes." Aurora noticed something then, something that hadn't registered amidst the sensory overload. A stillness. Despite the vibrant colours, the intoxicating scents, the sheer abundance of food, there was no sound. No birdsong, no rustling leaves, no insects buzzing. Just the low, resonant hum of the land itself. Then she saw them. Hidden amongst the foliage, almost perfectly camouflaged against the vibrant backdrop, were figures. Tall, slender beings with skin the colour of polished bronze and eyes like molten gold. They stood motionless, observing them with an unsettling stillness. They weren’t hostile, exactly, but their vacant expressions and rigid posture inspired a profound unease. “We’re being watched,” Aurora said, the words barely a whisper. One of the figures slowly raised a hand, gesturing towards the palace. “An invitation, perhaps?” Nyx mused, their shadow form flickering slightly. “Or a gilded cage.” As they moved towards the glistening silver stream, a series of tinkling chimes echoed through the orchard. The sound wasn't produced by bells but a resonance in the fruit itself. “A welcome, it seems,” Silas said, more wary than gracious. The stream widened, flowing into a pool of liquid silver. Floating on the surface were hundreds of perfectly formed water lilies, each one blooming with an iridescent glow. And sitting in the centre of the pool, on a throne of woven vines, was a woman. She wasn't human. Her skin was a shade of polished jade, her hair a cascade of autumnal leaves. Her eyes were closed, and she seemed to be breathing in the intoxicating scents of the orchard. She radiated an aura of serene indifference, as if she were simply an integral part of the landscape. “Greetings, travellers,” her voice echoed across the pool, a melodious ripple of sound that seemed to bypass their ears and vibrate directly in their minds. “Welcome to Dymas. I am Lyra, the steward of Prince Belphegor's gardens. You have come at an opportune time. A feast is about to begin.” She opened her eyes, revealing irises the colour of jade. "But the feast is not always what it seems.” A brief shimmer crossed her features, her eyes flickered with a hint of something unreadable. “Tell me, what do you desire most?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.579
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
56.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1033
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count3
2
adverb"perfectly"
count3
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"slightly"
2"perfectly"
3"very"
4"slowly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Lyra"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1033
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"beacon"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count2
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"fractured"
count1
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"churn"
count1
10
word"structure"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"encounter"
count1
13
word"glistening"
count2
14
word"amidst"
count1
15
word"profound"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count2
18
word"resonance"
count1
19
word"flickered"
count1
20
word"unreadable"
count1
21
word"desire"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"beacon"
3"vibrated"
4"familiar"
5"fractured"
6"throbbed"
7"perfect"
8"stomach"
9"churn"
10"structure"
11"scanning"
12"encounter"
13"glistening"
14"amidst"
15"profound"
16"whisper"
17"echoed"
18"resonance"
19"flickered"
20"unreadable"
21"desire"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
42.25% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1027
ratio0.003
matches
0"is"
1"is"
2"order"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount928
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Aurora7
Richmond1
Park1
Earth1
Eva4
Hel1
Silas2
One1
Nyx4
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Eva"
3"Silas"
4"One"
5"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"tasted like ozone and overripe fruit"
1"hum that seemed to settle deep in her bones"
2"grapes that seemed to shimmer with an internal light"
3"sound that seemed to bypass their ears and vibrate directly in their minds"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1027
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean35.41
std23.82
cv0.673
sampleLengths
063
126
240
340
472
535
617
724
86
935
1087
1188
129
1316
1472
1529
1647
174
1852
1910
2012
2114
2230
2310
2445
2553
2650
2710
2831
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"were arranged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs153
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences78
ratio0.09
matches
0"The familiar scent of damp earth and pine needles faded, replaced by something sweeter, heavier – honey and decay."
1"It was more like looking through water—an undulating distortion of the air, rippling with colours she couldn’t name."
2"Twisted, colossal vines, thick as ancient redwoods, spiralled up towards the unseen sky, their leaves a riot of jewel tones—scarlet, emerald, sapphire—all glowing with an inner luminescence."
3"This wasn’t wild growth; this was cultivated excess, engineered indulgence."
4"Further on, a colossal structure rose from the landscape—a palace built of polished obsidian and shimmering gold, its towers piercing the strange amber sky."
5"It was the flags that hung from its battlements—each one depicting a single, grotesquely oversized piece of fruit."
6"Periodically, they would encounter pathways lined with ornate tables laden with delicacies—mountains of glistening pastries, pyramids of candied fruits, rivers of flowing chocolate."
93.54% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount934
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.046038543897216275
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.021413276231263382
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean13.17
std6.31
cv0.479
sampleLengths
012
123
29
319
413
513
613
722
85
910
1018
1112
1213
1327
1415
1517
1612
1723
1812
195
206
2118
226
2311
244
2516
264
277
2819
2917
3010
314
3220
3310
3415
3518
3624
3713
3818
399
409
417
429
4310
4426
4523
464
4724
485
4912
88.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5769230769230769
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences69
matches
0"Further on, a colossal structure"
1"Periodically, they would encounter pathways"
2"Just the low, resonant hum"
3"Then she saw them."
ratio0.058
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences69
matches
0"It had been a steady"
1"She clutched the strap of"
2"It wasn't a clean break,"
3"It was more like looking"
4"They solidified slightly as they"
5"she breathed, recognizing the faint"
6"It was the *order*."
7"It was the flags that"
8"They ventured deeper, the springy"
9"They passed orchards where pears"
10"They stood motionless, observing them"
11"They weren’t hostile, exactly, but"
12"She wasn't human."
13"Her skin was a shade"
14"Her eyes were closed, and"
15"She radiated an aura of"
16"her voice echoed across the"
17"She opened her eyes, revealing"
ratio0.261
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences69
matches
0"The Heartstone pulsed against Aurora's"
1"It had been a steady"
2"The air thickened, tasted like"
3"The familiar scent of damp"
4"Eva asked, her voice a"
5"She clutched the strap of"
6"Aurora didn’t respond, too focused"
7"It wasn't a clean break,"
8"It was more like looking"
9"The ground beneath their feet"
10"The air itself vibrated with"
11"Nyx flowed forward, their shadow"
12"They solidified slightly as they"
13"Nyx murmured, their voice a"
14"Eva gasped, stumbled back against"
15"Silus hung back, his hand"
16"Aurora pushed past Eva, ignoring"
17"The Heartstone throbbed insistently."
18"she breathed, recognizing the faint"
19"The grove opened into a"
ratio0.71
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Ahead, the ancient oak standing stones, normally weathered and moss-covered, seemed to shimmer, their edges blurring as if seen through heat haze."
1"But it wasn’t just the sheer abundance that was unsettling."
2"The scent of honey intensified, mixed now with a heady, almost cloying sweetness that made her stomach churn."
3"Further on, a colossal structure rose from the landscape—a palace built of polished obsidian and shimmering gold, its towers piercing the strange amber sky."
4"It was the flags that hung from its battlements—each one depicting a single, grotesquely oversized piece of fruit."
5"They passed orchards where pears the size of pumpkins swelled on the branches, and vines laden with grapes that seemed to shimmer with an internal light."
6"Aurora noticed something then, something that hadn't registered amidst the sensory overload."
7"She radiated an aura of serene indifference, as if she were simply an integral part of the landscape."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Eva asked, her voice a nervous tremor"
1"Nyx murmured, their voice a wind whispering through dry reeds"
2"Aurora said, the words barely a whisper"
3"Nyx mused, their shadow form flickering slightly"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"he muttered (mutter)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
3"Silas retorted (retort)"
4"Nyx observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.526
72.5521%