"Richmond Park's fog-shrouded oaks loomed behind them, but ahead, the air split open—a jagged tear in reality, the Veil frayed like rotten silk."
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"\"Feast or be the feast, wanderers of the breach.\" No footprints marred the dew-kissed grass where she trod; she glided, ethereal as mist."
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"Twenty-five years on Earth—Cardiff grit, London drudgery, deliveries for Yu-Fei's greasy takeout—hadn't prepared her for this."
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"The world inverted in a rush of vertigo—her stomach lurched, ears popped, and the Veil sealed behind them with a wet smack, like lips closing on a morsel."
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"No Richmond chill nipped her skin; warmth enveloped her, heavy and cloying, like stepping into a crowded kitchen."
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"Orchards stretched into hazy distance, trees groaning under fruits the size of her head—pears blushing crimson, apples veined with blue, peaches dripping nectar that sizzled faintly on the earth."
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"The ground quivered subtly beneath her, alive with hidden movement—worms?"
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"\"Dymas calls, where bellies bloat and boundaries blur. Prince Belphegor's table is set eternal.\" Her lavender eyes gleamed with knowing mischief, but she offered no more; the Fae compulsion twisted truths into knots."
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"A figure lumbered into view—a helbound soul, Aurora guessed, corpulent and grinning, skin stretched taut over endless meals."
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"The man yelped, pastry tumbling—but when Nyx reformed, holding a flaky turnover oozing custard, their whisper held hunger."
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"She batted it away; it splattered on the ground, and the soil drank it greedily, vines twitching toward the spot."
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"\"Heal your scars, fill your voids.\" Aurora's wrist burned; she yanked her sleeve down, quick-stepping past."
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"A grand archway loomed ahead, carved from petrified fruits—apples for columns, grapevines twining the lintel."
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"Demons in aprons darted about, horns glinting, while souls—contracted mortals, their eyes hollow with addiction—stirred cauldrons that bubbled with elixirs promising ecstasy."
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"One hurled a fireball pie; it exploded in savory shrapnel, eliciting moans of delight."
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"The air thrummed with music—harps strung with gut, flutes carved from bones—pulsing like a feast-goer's heartbeat."
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"\"Beauty bloats to beast when the sun forgets to set.\" She knelt by a wildflower bed—impossibly vibrant amid the gluttony—plucking a bloom that unfurled into a tiny fruit."
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"A shadow detached from the hall's edge—not Nyx's—slipping toward them with wet, sucking steps."
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"She drew the blade; it sang free, luminescent despite the amber light, edge keen as Fae spite."
19
"Isolde spun, hands weaving riddles into air—illusions?"
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"A distant horn blared—culinary games commencing."
21
"Wonder warred with dread; this realm seduced as surely as it devoured."
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"Each step deepened the immersion—vines brushing her legs with feather touches, air humming promises."
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"A cluster of grapes brushed her palm; she snatched her hand back, but not before juice stained her skin, warm and insistent."
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"One reached out, translucent hand grasping—Aurora jerked away, heart slamming."
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"Unease peaked as a tremor shook the ground—massive jaws grinding below?"
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"Aurora gripped the pendant; it warmed again, pointing onward."
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"Aurora's mind raced—out-of-the-box: the blade cut wards, perhaps portals too."
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"Wonder resurfaced amid peril—a tree bore lanterns of glowing jam, illuminating murals of gluttonous history etched in caramel."
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"Deeper still, the air thickened to soup, sounds muffling to heartbeats—hers, theirs, the realm's."
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"Faint whispers slithered from the rift, oily and inviting, carrying scents of roasted meats and spiced wines that clawed at her empty stomach."
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"Aurora stumbled forward, boots sinking into loamy soil that smelled of overripe fruit and baking bread."
2
"The sky arched above in a dome of warm amber, veined with lazy swirls of gold, as if the heavens simmered in honeyed light."
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"Orchards stretched into hazy distance, trees groaning under fruits the size of her head—pears blushing crimson, apples veined with blue, peaches dripping nectar…"
4
"They towered over Aurora at six-foot-two, but here their edges frayed, as if the ambient light diluted them."
5
"He wore a chef's whites stained with sauces of every hue, carrying a platter of glistening pastries that steamed with impossible heat."
6
"Demons in aprons darted about, horns glinting, while souls—contracted mortals, their eyes hollow with addiction—stirred cauldrons that bubbled with elixirs prom…"
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"It shrieked, bursting in a spray of juice and ichor that splashed Aurora's boots."
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"They moved, the realm unfolding in waves of sensory assault: birds with beaks of candy dropping sugared songs, flowers exhaling intoxicating pollen that blurred…"