Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8ZKHQCHFNG9V1JFXZPKZJ

Run Details

Duration:
40.9s
Cost:
$0.001800
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora twisted the last deadbolt with a sharp clack. The door swung inward on protesting hinges, spilling the scent of cumin and sizzling onions from the curry house below into the flat's cluttered haze. She gripped the edge, bright blue eyes narrowing against the dim hallway light. Lucien Moreau filled the threshold. Platinum blond hair gleamed under the bare bulb, slicked back without a strand astray. His charcoal suit hugged his frame like shadow on water, the ivory-handled cane hooked over one arm. Heterochromatic eyes—one amber flame, one void-black—locked onto hers. No smile curved his lips. "Rory." His voice rolled low, French accent threading through her name like smoke. She crossed her arms, shoulder-length black hair falling forward to curtain one cheek. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light as her fingers dug into her biceps. "Lucien. Eva's not here." He didn't budge. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, slunk from behind a stack of leather-bound tomes on the side table, tail flicking. The cat paused, yellow eyes fixed on the intruder, then darted back into the shadows. "I know." Lucien leaned the cane against the doorframe. His gaze traced the scar, lingered. "You are." Her pulse kicked. Three years since Marseille—nights tangled in his sheets, his demon heat searing her skin, whispers of forever shattered by his sudden vanishing act. Lies about threats from Avaros, half-truths about his world swallowing him whole. She'd walked away, or tried to, back to London rain and delivery runs. Hurt festered, unspoken barbs ready to fly. "Get out." She stepped back, but the door stayed open. Books towered on every surface—shelves bowed under grimoires, scrolls cascaded across the kitchen counter, notes pinned to walls like frantic spiderwebs. No room to retreat. He entered anyway, cane clicking on scuffed floorboards. The door clicked shut behind him. Three deadbolts snicked home under his free hand—practiced, precise. Ptolemy hissed from atop a pile of research journals. "You let me in once before." Lucien straightened, amber eye glinting. The black one drank the light. Heat flushed her neck. "That was a mistake. Like showing up here uninvited." Ptolemy leaped to the arm of the sagging sofa, claws kneading faded velvet. Lucien spared the cat a glance, then faced her fully. Five-eleven to her five-six, he loomed without crowding. The suit's crisp lines accentuated shoulders honed by realms beyond human gyms. "Silas' bar too public. Eva's place—secure." He tapped the cane once. "We need to talk." She snatched a scroll from the counter, unrolling it with deliberate snaps. Ancient script blurred under her stare. "Talk? You mean vanish again? Leave notes about 'debts unpaid'?" His jaw tightened. He crossed to the window, parting heavy curtains. Brick Lane buzzed below—hawkers shouting, rickshaws honking. Gas lamps flickered on as dusk bled into night. "I protected you." The words hung heavy. Aurora slammed the scroll down. Ink vials rattled. "Protected? You fucked me over, Lucien. Promised intel on Evan—my ex, remember? The one who wouldn't let go. Then poof. Gone. Left me dodging shadows alone." Ptolemy jumped to the floor, weaving between Lucien's ankles. The cat purred, traitorous rumble echoing. Lucien crouched, scratched behind an ear. Ptolemy leaned in. Rising, he met her glare. "Evan wasn't human. Cult ties. Avaros blood called them to you through me." Her laugh bit sharp. "Convenient. Demon daddy's enemies become mine. You could've warned me." Amber eye softened a fraction. Black held steady. "Words fail against hellfire oaths." She paced the cramped space, boots thudding past stacks of Eva's occult notes—symbols of binding circles, demon hierarchies. The air thickened, curry spices mingling with his cologne: sandalwood and brimstone faint. "You speak four languages. Found plenty to say in bed." She halted inches from him, blue eyes blazing. Heat radiated from his skin, unnatural warmth chasing flat's chill. His cane clattered to the floor. One hand captured her wrist, thumb brushing the crescent scar. Electricity sparked, old fires igniting. "Rory." Breath ghosted her lips. "Laila, in shadows. You saw me—all of me." She yanked free, but her back hit the bookshelf. Volumes teetered. "Don't. That name's dead." He advanced, suit jacket brushing her arm. Ptolemy fled to the bedroom. "You whispered it last. Before I left." Memories crashed: his mouth on her throat, half-demon strength pinning her to Marseille stone. Pleasure edged with pain, his horns flickering in ecstasy—not fully manifest, but enough to terrify and thrill. She'd clawed his back, demanded more. Then dawn brought silence, his note on the pillow. "You left because you couldn't stay." Her voice cracked, fists balling his lapels. Silk crushed under knuckles. Lucien's hands framed her face, black eye swallowing her reflection, amber igniting sparks. "I stayed too long. Avaros pulled. Father's debts—real. But you..." She shoved him. He rocked back one step, cane forgotten. "But me what? Collateral damage?" "No." He seized her waist, lifted her onto the counter. Scrolls scattered. Her legs parted instinctively, jeans-clad thighs bracketing his hips. "You burned brighter than hellfire." Breath mingled. Her fingers threaded his platinum strands, tugging hard. Hurt twisted with want—three years of lonely nights, delivery routes blurring Evan’s threats into nightmares. Lucien’s intel had surfaced weeks later, anonymous drops at Golden Empress. Yu-Fei’s suspicious stares. "Why now?" She nipped his jaw, tasting salt and stubble. His groan vibrated through her. "Tracked you. Eva's notes—same symbols haunting me. Cult rising. Needs your mind." Romance curdled with necessity. She pushed his chest, but hands lingered. "Always business. Even when you fuck me." Fingers dug into her hips. "Not always." He claimed her mouth—fierce, no gentleness. Tongues clashed, old rhythms resurfacing. She bit his lip, copper tang blooming. He hissed, demon edge sharpening teeth. Ptolemy yowled from the hall, ignored. She broke free, gasping. Blue eyes searched his mismatched gaze. "Truth, Lucien. All of it." He traced her scar again, lips following. "Evan's cult summoned me once. Bound you as leverage. I broke it—paid in blood. Left to draw them off." Her heart stuttered. "You never said." "Couldn’t risk you hunting them." His free hand slid under her shirt, palm scorching ribs. Gooseflesh rose. "Idiot." She yanked his tie loose, knot unraveling like their past. "I think outside boxes. Pre-Law dropout, remember? Cardiff grit." Laughter rumbled from him, rare. "Brendan’s daughter. Sharp as your mother’s Welsh tongue." She froze. "How do you—" "Know your family?" He nipped her earlobe. "Information broker. Checked when obsession started." Obsession. Word hung, electric. Her nails raked his neck. "Mine or yours?" "Both." He hoisted her higher, counter digging into her ass. Suit pants strained against arousal. She rocked forward, friction sparking. Door buzzer shrieked—Eva's code, probably. Ignored. "Prove it." Aurora unbuttoned his shirt, exposing pale chest marked with faint infernal runes, glowing faint under her touch. Lucien's cane rolled underfoot as he kicked it aside. "Flat's warded. Eva out till dawn." His mouth descended collarbone-ward, teeth grazing. She arched, black hair spilling across notes of demon pacts. Hurt thawed in waves—his absence a shield, not abandonment. Attraction roared back, primal. "You smell like London rain and takeout." He inhaled at her neck, voice muffled. "Delivery girl charm." She freed his belt buckle, metal clinking. "Your suit's ruined." "Buy ten more." Fingers popped her jeans button. Heat pooled low. Ptolemy scratched at the bedroom door, insistent. She halted his hand. "Past isn't gone. Trust fractured." He stilled, forehead to hers. Amber eye pleaded; black vowed. "Repair it. Together." Words unsaid tumbled. "I hated you. Missed you more." "Same." His kiss softened, exploratory. Tongues danced slower, rediscovering. Jeans slid down her thighs. She kicked them free, boots thudding. His slacks followed, pooling at ankles. Bare skin met scorching flesh—half-demon pulse thrumming against her core. Counter dug sharp, but she pulled him closer. "No vanishing." "Never again." He thrust home, filling her in one claiming stroke. Gasps echoed off book-strewn walls. Rhythm built—hips snapping, scrolls fluttering to floor. Her blue eyes locked on his, mismatched stare anchoring. Scarred wrist encircled his neck, pulling deeper. Ptolemy battered the door harder. Sweat slicked skin. Runes flared brighter on his chest, illuminating cramped chaos. Pleasure coiled tight, past hurts fueling urgency. "Lucien." Her whisper broke on his name, walls of the flat trembling with their union. He drove harder, breath ragged. "Aurora. Mine." Tension peaked, bodies shuddering. Release crashed—hers first, clenching around him. He followed, growl demonic, spilling heat. They slumped, panting. His arms caged her, cane forgotten amid debris. Buzzer wailed again, persistent. She laughed, breathless. "Eva's timing." Lucien withdrew, smirking. Grabbed his slacks. "Wards hold." She slid down, legs shaky. Pulled jeans on, eyes gleaming. "Now talk symbols. Cult details." He nodded, retrieving cane. Leaned it nearby, buttoning shirt. Ptolemy slipped in, rubbing her calf. Door rattled—Eva's key in first deadbolt. "Together?" His hand squeezed hers. "Always was." She squeezed back, scar pulsing under his thumb.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:38:45.186Z" 2/20/2026, 7:38:45 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
1"She squeezed back [back]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.08
effectiveRatio0.067
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1502
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1502
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"traced"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"searing"
count1
3
word"shattered"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"loomed"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"chill"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"silk"
count1
14
word"vibrated"
count1
15
word"unraveling"
count1
16
word"electric"
count1
17
word"charm"
count1
18
word"fractured"
count1
19
word"echoed"
count1
20
word"whisper"
count1
21
word"tension"
count1
22
word"clenching"
count1
23
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"pulse"
2"searing"
3"shattered"
4"unspoken"
5"glinting"
6"velvet"
7"loomed"
8"flickered"
9"echoing"
10"warmth"
11"chill"
12"silence"
13"silk"
14"vibrated"
15"unraveling"
16"electric"
17"charm"
18"fractured"
19"echoed"
20"whisper"
21"tension"
22"clenching"
23"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences160
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences160
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences195
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1467
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1160
uniqueNames25
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
French1
Marseille2
Avaros1
London1
Books1
Lane1
Aurora3
Lucien10
Eva3
Heat3
Silk1
Scrolls1
Evan1
Golden1
Empress1
Tongues2
Gooseflesh1
Laughter1
Obsession1
Suit1
Fingers2
Gasps1
Ptolemy10
Hurt3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Books"
2"Aurora"
3"Lucien"
4"Eva"
5"Heat"
6"Silk"
7"Scrolls"
8"Evan"
9"Tongues"
10"Laughter"
11"Suit"
12"Fingers"
13"Gasps"
14"Ptolemy"
15"Hurt"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Avaros"
2"London"
3"Lane"
4"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.682
wordCount1467
matches
0"not fully manifest, but enough to terrify"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences195
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean18.81
std11.56
cv0.615
sampleLengths
047
149
213
334
436
517
658
735
832
917
1013
1143
1215
1328
1427
157
1634
1715
1827
1914
2013
2131
2228
2321
2413
2515
2619
2746
2817
2923
3015
3126
3239
3310
3417
3518
3631
376
3815
3926
406
4117
4220
4313
445
4513
4612
4720
486
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences160
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs260
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences16
totalSentences195
ratio0.082
matches
0"Heterochromatic eyes—one amber flame, one void-black—locked onto hers."
1"Three years since Marseille—nights tangled in his sheets, his demon heat searing her skin, whispers of forever shattered by his sudden vanishing act."
2"Books towered on every surface—shelves bowed under grimoires, scrolls cascaded across the kitchen counter, notes pinned to walls like frantic spiderwebs."
3"Three deadbolts snicked home under his free hand—practiced, precise."
4"Brick Lane buzzed below—hawkers shouting, rickshaws honking."
5"She paced the cramped space, boots thudding past stacks of Eva's occult notes—symbols of binding circles, demon hierarchies."
6"Pleasure edged with pain, his horns flickering in ecstasy—not fully manifest, but enough to terrify and thrill."
7"Hurt twisted with want—three years of lonely nights, delivery routes blurring Evan’s threats into nightmares."
8"\"Not always.\" He claimed her mouth—fierce, no gentleness."
9"Door buzzer shrieked—Eva's code, probably."
10"Hurt thawed in waves—his absence a shield, not abandonment."
11"Amber eye pleaded; black vowed."
12"Bare skin met scorching flesh—half-demon pulse thrumming against her core."
13"Rhythm built—hips snapping, scrolls fluttering to floor."
14"Release crashed—hers first, clenching around him."
15"Door rattled—Eva's key in first deadbolt."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1189
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.021026072329688814
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005046257359125316
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences195
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences195
mean7.52
std4.59
cv0.61
sampleLengths
09
125
213
35
414
517
68
75
813
913
1017
114
123
1318
1415
159
166
172
183
1923
2012
2113
227
2310
2421
254
268
276
289
299
3011
316
324
339
3413
3510
368
3712
3811
394
4012
416
4210
433
448
457
469
477
485
493
87.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5230769230769231
totalSentences195
uniqueOpeners102
21.79% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences153
matches
0"Then dawn brought silence, his"
ratio0.007
55.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount63
totalSentences153
matches
0"She gripped the edge, bright"
1"His charcoal suit hugged his"
2"His voice rolled low, French"
3"She crossed her arms, shoulder-length"
4"He didn't budge."
5"His gaze traced the scar,"
6"Her pulse kicked."
7"She'd walked away, or tried"
8"She stepped back, but the"
9"He entered anyway, cane clicking"
10"He tapped the cane once"
11"She snatched a scroll from"
12"His jaw tightened."
13"He crossed to the window,"
14"Her laugh bit sharp."
15"She paced the cramped space,"
16"She halted inches from him,"
17"His cane clattered to the"
18"She yanked free, but her"
19"He advanced, suit jacket brushing"
ratio0.412
31.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount131
totalSentences153
matches
0"Aurora twisted the last deadbolt"
1"The door swung inward on"
2"She gripped the edge, bright"
3"Lucien Moreau filled the threshold."
4"Platinum blond hair gleamed under"
5"His charcoal suit hugged his"
6"His voice rolled low, French"
7"She crossed her arms, shoulder-length"
8"The crescent scar on her"
9"He didn't budge."
10"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, slunk"
11"The cat paused, yellow eyes"
12"Lucien leaned the cane against"
13"His gaze traced the scar,"
14"Her pulse kicked."
15"Lies about threats from Avaros,"
16"She'd walked away, or tried"
17"She stepped back, but the"
18"Books towered on every surface—shelves"
19"He entered anyway, cane clicking"
ratio0.856
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"She stepped back, but the door stayed open"
1"Her voice cracked, fists balling his lapels"
2"free hand slid, palm scorching ribs"
3"She yanked, knot unraveling like their past"
4"He inhaled, voice muffled"
5"She freed, metal clinking"
6"His kiss softened, exploratory"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He claimed (claim)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.017
leniency0.033
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.033
80.3201%