Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY8ZMX9HE9RVRVSX088P0S4

Run Details

Duration:
11.9s
Cost:
$0.000501
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon green sign of *The Raven’s Nest* flickered like a dying ember as Rory Carter pushed through the heavy door, the bell above jingling against the weight of her thoughts. The air inside smelled of stale beer, polished wood, and something faintly metallic—like old coins or blood. She hadn’t been here in months, not since Silas had started acting strange, his usual easy charm replaced by something sharper, colder. But tonight, she’d needed a drink that wasn’t from a bottle in her flat, and the Nest had been the only place that didn’t feel like a mistake. She slid onto a stool near the back, where the light was dim enough to hide the way her hands trembled. The bar was half-full, the usual mix of late-night regulars and the occasional tourist who’d wandered in off the street. Rory ordered a gin and tonic—neat, no ice—and watched the bartender’s reflection in the mirror behind the shelves. His back was to her, but she knew that stance. The way he moved, slow and deliberate, like a man who’d spent too many years waiting for something to happen. Then the door swung open again. The air shifted. Rory didn’t turn. She didn’t have to. She recognised the weight of the silence before the words even formed. A beat of hesitation, then the scrape of a stool being pulled out, the faint creak of leather against wood. “Well,” a voice said, smooth as aged whiskey. “If it isn’t Rory Carter.” She exhaled through her nose, fingers tightening around her glass. The ice clinked. Silas Blackwood stood there, broader than she remembered, his auburn hair streaked with silver now, his beard trimmed close to his jaw. The limp in his left leg was more pronounced, a ghost of the old knee injury that had ended his career. He wore a dark suit tonight, the kind that looked expensive but had seen better days—like a man who still dressed for a job that no longer existed. His hazel eyes, sharp as flint, locked onto hers. Rory swirled her drink. “Silas.” A pause. The kind that used to mean he was about to say something clever, something that would make her laugh. Now it just meant he was deciding how much of himself he was willing to show. “You look well,” he said finally. She almost laughed. “You’re lying.” His mouth twitched. “Fair.” The silence settled again, thick and unspoken. Rory remembered the last time they’d talked like this—years ago, in his flat above the bar, the two of them drunk on cheap wine and bad decisions, laughing about nothing and everything. Back then, Silas had still been *Silas*, the man who’d pulled her out of more scrapes than she could count. The man who’d taught her how to lie with a straight face, how to disappear when she needed to, how to trust no one but herself. Now, he was just a stranger with a signet ring on his right hand. “You’ve changed,” she said. His fingers brushed the rim of his glass—whiskey, no ice either. “So have you.” Rory didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. The scar on her left wrist, the one from the childhood accident, was still there, but it wasn’t the only thing that had marked her. The way she carried herself now was different. Tighter. Like she was always bracing for something. Silas studied her for a long moment. “You’re working for Yu-Fei again, aren’t you?” She blinked. “How do you—” “London’s a small city when you know where to look.” His voice was mild, but there was an edge to it, something like disappointment. “Thought you’d gone straight.” “Thought you’d retired for good.” His jaw tightened. “So did I.” The bartender slid a fresh drink toward Silas without being asked. Rory watched the way his fingers curled around the glass, the way his thumb traced the rim. Old habits. “You still running the Nest as a front?” she asked. Silas didn’t flinch. “And you still delivering takeaway like it’s some grand rebellion.” She took a sip. “It pays the rent.” “Does it?” The question hung between them, heavy as the silence that followed. Rory set her glass down with a little too much force. “What do you want, Silas?” He leaned back, just slightly, like he was considering his next move. “Same as always. To talk.” “About what?” “About the fact that you haven’t been back here in months.” His gaze flicked to the scar on her wrist, then away. “About the fact that you look like you’re one wrong move away from running.” Rory’s fingers twitched. “I’m fine.” “Bullshit.” The word hit like a punch. She didn’t react. Didn’t flinch. Just stared at him, her bright blue eyes cold. Silas sighed, running a hand over his beard. “You always were terrible at lying.” “And you always were terrible at subtlety.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “Still am.” Rory exhaled, slow and controlled. “What happened to you, Silas?” His expression shut down. “What do you mean?” “You used to be the guy who’d drag me out of trouble. Now you’re the guy who lets me walk right into it.” She leaned forward, voice low. “What changed?” Silas’s fingers tightened around his glass. “People do.” “Not like this.” For a long moment, he just looked at her. Then, quietly: “I got hurt. Bad enough that I couldn’t do the job anymore. So I opened a bar. Kept the contacts. Kept the… *habits*.” Rory’s stomach twisted. “You’re still in it.” “Not the way you think.” “Then what way?” He didn’t answer. Just stared at her, his hazel eyes dark with something she couldn’t name. The bartender moved to the other end of the bar, giving them space. Rory watched the way Silas’s gaze followed him, the way his fingers tapped once against the wood. Old instincts. “You ever think about what we could’ve been?” Silas asked suddenly. Rory’s breath caught. “What?” “You and me. Back then.” His voice was rough. “Before the jobs, before the scars. Before the lies.” She looked away. “That wasn’t real.” “Wasn’t it?” The question burned. Rory stood abruptly, her stool scraping back. “This was a mistake.” Silas didn’t move. Didn’t stop her. Just watched as she turned, her black hair swinging over her shoulder, her bright blue eyes flashing with something raw and unguarded. The door swung shut behind her. Silas stayed where he was, his glass half-full, his mind replaying the last five minutes like a loop he couldn’t turn off. He should’ve let her go. But he didn’t.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"Silas asked suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.156
leniency0.311
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.089
90.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1106
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1106
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"charm"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"unspoken"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"charm"
3"trembled"
4"silence"
5"unspoken"
6"traced"
7"flicked"
8"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of the silence"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords5
totalWords1098
ratio0.005
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"Silas"
2"habits"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount863
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Rory14
Carter1
Silas13
Nest2
Blackwood1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Nest"
5"Blackwood"
places(empty)
globalScore0.689
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like disappointment"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.911
wordCount1098
matches
0"no one but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences123
matches
0"knew that stance"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean18.3
std21.69
cv1.185
sampleLengths
098
189
26
33
439
513
613
780
85
937
106
115
124
1385
1414
154
1614
1748
1814
195
2028
215
226
2330
2410
2513
268
272
2827
2917
302
3136
325
331
3420
3514
367
3710
3810
398
4030
418
423
4334
447
455
463
4716
4832
4911
97.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"being pulled"
1"being asked"
72.61% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs157
matches
0"was deciding was willing"
1"was considering"
26.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences123
ratio0.041
matches
0"The air inside smelled of stale beer, polished wood, and something faintly metallic—like old coins or blood."
1"Rory ordered a gin and tonic—neat, no ice—and watched the bartender’s reflection in the mirror behind the shelves."
2"He wore a dark suit tonight, the kind that looked expensive but had seen better days—like a man who still dressed for a job that no longer existed."
3"Rory remembered the last time they’d talked like this—years ago, in his flat above the bar, the two of them drunk on cheap wine and bad decisions, laughing about nothing and everything."
4"His fingers brushed the rim of his glass—whiskey, no ice either."
85.72% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount870
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.05632183908045977
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009195402298850575
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean8.93
std7.86
cv0.88
sampleLengths
031
117
222
328
421
520
618
710
820
96
103
113
124
1312
1420
158
165
1710
183
1922
2021
2128
229
234
241
252
2619
2716
286
293
302
313
321
337
3432
3520
3626
3714
384
3911
403
413
424
4325
448
451
467
477
487
492
49.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3252032520325203
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences79
matches
0"Then the door swung open"
1"Just stared at him, her"
2"Just stared at her, his"
3"Just watched as she turned,"
ratio0.051
93.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences79
matches
0"She hadn’t been here in"
1"She slid onto a stool"
2"His back was to her,"
3"She didn’t have to."
4"She recognised the weight of"
5"She exhaled through her nose,"
6"He wore a dark suit"
7"His hazel eyes, sharp as"
8"he said finally"
9"She almost laughed."
10"His mouth twitched."
11"His fingers brushed the rim"
12"She didn’t have to."
13"His voice was mild, but"
14"His jaw tightened."
15"She took a sip."
16"He leaned back, just slightly,"
17"His gaze flicked to the"
18"She didn’t react."
19"His expression shut down."
ratio0.316
35.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences79
matches
0"The neon green sign of"
1"The air inside smelled of"
2"She hadn’t been here in"
3"She slid onto a stool"
4"The bar was half-full, the"
5"Rory ordered a gin and"
6"His back was to her,"
7"The way he moved, slow"
8"The air shifted."
9"Rory didn’t turn."
10"She didn’t have to."
11"She recognised the weight of"
12"A beat of hesitation, then"
13"a voice said, smooth as"
14"She exhaled through her nose,"
15"The ice clinked."
16"Silas Blackwood stood there, broader"
17"The limp in his left"
18"He wore a dark suit"
19"His hazel eyes, sharp as"
ratio0.848
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"Now it just meant he"
1"Now, he was just a"
ratio0.025
56.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The bar was half-full, the usual mix of late-night regulars and the occasional tourist who’d wandered in off the street."
1"The way he moved, slow and deliberate, like a man who’d spent too many years waiting for something to happen."
2"The limp in his left leg was more pronounced, a ghost of the old knee injury that had ended his career."
3"He wore a dark suit tonight, the kind that looked expensive but had seen better days—like a man who still dressed for a job that no longer existed."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She leaned, voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.2526%