Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY906PPG9T5XRSYDXAJYSEQ

Run Details

Duration:
35.8s
Cost:
$0.000254
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air tasted of damp concrete and something vaguely metallic, like old pennies and ozone. Harlow Quinn ignored it, her boots echoing on the grimy platform of the abandoned Tube station. Overhead, flickering fluorescent lights buzzed, casting a sickly yellow glow over the scene. The Veil Market. Officially, it was just an abandoned ticket office and connecting tunnels. Unofficially, it was a place that shouldn’t exist, a seam in reality stitched together with bone and shadow. She knelt beside the body, the chill of the concrete seeping through her trousers. A man, late fifties maybe, sprawled face-down near a vendor stall that had been selling vials of shimmering liquid – alchemical tinctures, judging by the shattered glass and residual scent. No obvious signs of trauma. No visible wounds. But the man’s skin was the color of ash, his fingers clenched into useless claws. “Cause of death?” Quinn asked, her voice flat, clipped. Sergeant Davies, a fresh-faced constable barely out of training, shifted nervously. "Looks like... rapid cellular decay, ma'am. Doctor says he was perfectly healthy an hour ago. Just... dissolved.” He gestured with his pen toward a small, circular scorch mark on the platform nearby. "Found this too. Looks like some kind of residue.” Quinn examined the scorch mark. It was oddly precise, a perfect circle about the diameter of her palm. The residue felt cool to the touch, almost brittle. Not burn residue. Something… else. She stood, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair brushing against the collar of her coat. Her gaze swept the market. Even in its disrupted state, the place pulsed with a strange energy. Stalls lay overturned, wares scattered – dried herbs, carved bone trinkets, bizarre, unidentifiable objects glinting under the harsh fluorescent light. A handful of vendors huddled together, their faces pale and drawn, whispering amongst themselves. The full moon was high above, bathing the hidden market in its ethereal glow. “Witnesses?” Quinn asked Davies. “Few and far between, ma’am. Most claim they didn’t see anything. Said the chaos started suddenly. One vendor insists he saw a ‘shadow flicker’ right before the man collapsed.” Quinn scoffed internally at the expected vagueness. Shadow flicker. Right. “Get those vendors down to the station. I want statements. All of them.” She then noticed Eva Kowalski standing near the entrance to the platform, her round glasses perched precariously on her nose, a worn leather satchel slung across her shoulder. Eva had been a fixture at these bizarre crime scenes ever since Quinn had reluctantly accepted her “expertise” on supernatural matters. “Evie,” Quinn said, acknowledging her with a curt nod. “Your assessment?” Eva chewed on her lower lip, tucking a strand of curly red hair behind her left ear – her signature nervous habit. "The decay… it’s unlike anything I’ve encountered. It felt… targeted. As if something actively consumed him.” “Targeted by what?” Quinn asked, her brown eyes narrowed. “I’m not certain. But the scorch mark… it resonates with a particular kind of energy. A draining energy. It’s almost… resonant.” "Resonant with what?" Quinn pressed. Eva bit her lip more firmly. "Something that feeds on vitality. Something that draws life force.” Quinn’s gaze returned to the scorch mark. “And you think this was an attack?” “It’s… complicated. The Veil Market is chaotic, but it’s usually… stable. This level of disruption feels deliberate. The man wasn’t just a random victim.” “He was buying something,” Quinn pointed out, gesturing towards the overturned stall. “Perhaps something that went wrong.” “Perhaps,” Eva conceded. “But I don't think so. I ran a quick scan. No residual energies from the tinctures, nothing that could have caused this.” Eva drew a small brass compass from her satchel. The casing bore a patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with protective sigils. A Veil Compass. Crafted by a Shade artisan. "The Compass is agitated. There’s a powerful energy signature nearby, residual from what happened.” She held it out, allowing Quinn to examine it. The needle spun wildly, then settled, pointing directly at the scorch mark. Quinn took the Compass, its weight familiar in her hand. She’d acquired it during a previous, equally unsettling investigation. It was her insurance policy against the things that went bump in the night, the things that defied logic and reason. “So, a targeted attack by something that drains life force, centered around a scorch mark,” Quinn summarized, her voice laced with skepticism. “Sounds… specific. Davies, have forensics analyze that residue. I want a full spectrum breakdown. Everything.” Davies saluted, already scribbling in his notebook. "Yes, ma'am." Quinn turned back to the body, carefully observing the scene. Something wasn’t right. The vendors’ fear seemed… performative. And the scattering of goods, while chaotic, felt… staged. "Look at these stalls,” Quinn said, her voice quiet, almost to herself. “Notice anything odd?” Eva approached, her gaze following Quinn's. "They’re overturned, yes. But the items... they haven't been rifled through. It’s like someone created a scene, made it look like a panic.” Quinn nodded slowly. “Exactly. A robbery wouldn't leave items neatly stacked like this. This was about creating a distraction. The man's death was the spectacle, but the robbery was a misdirection.” She crouched down, her sharp jawline tightening, again examining the scorch mark. The residue. It wasn't just cool; it felt… dry. Almost like finely ground dust. Suddenly, it clicked. A memory surfaced, dredged from the murky depths of her mind – a briefing from MI13, a shadowy organization that dealt with the inexplicable. A briefing on Shade technology. "Davies," Quinn called out, her voice gaining an edge. "I need you to run a scan. Check for traces of micro-metallurgy. Specifically, a compound known as Umbra Dust." Davies looked bewildered. "Umbra... Dust, ma'am? What is that?" "It’s a Shade material used in cloaking devices. It absorbs light and energy, rendering objects virtually invisible. It is also incredibly draining to be in close proximity to.” Quinn stood, her gaze sweeping the platform once more. “It isn’t a natural occurrence. And it doesn’t just dissolve people.” Eva’s eyes widened behind her glasses. “Umbra Dust? That's… incredibly dangerous. It's not readily available, even here.” Quinn ignored her, her mind racing. A cloaking device. A targeted attack. A staged scene. It was beginning to coalesce. "Someone used Umbra Dust to neutralize a target, made it look like a sudden death, and then created a diversion," Quinn said, her voice low and dangerous. "They wanted us to focus on the chaos, the potential for something supernatural. They wanted us to miss the subtle details.” She looked at Eva then back at Davies. "Davies, secure the area. No one leaves. I want every inch of this platform scrutinized. And Evie, re-run the energy scan. I need to know if there’s any residual cloaking signature." Quinn took a deep breath, the metallic tang in the air suddenly more potent, more sinister. This wasn't a random act. It was a carefully orchestrated play. And she was starting to suspect that this play had just begun. The question now was who was pulling the strings, and why they chose the Veil Market as their stage. And more importantly, what were they planning to hide?
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.486
leniency0.973
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
62.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1189
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"nervously"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count3
3
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count2
5
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"nervously"
1"perfectly"
2"suddenly"
3"reluctantly"
4"carefully"
5"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1189
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"disrupted"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count2
8
word"firmly"
count1
9
word"chaotic"
count2
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"depths"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"potential"
count1
16
word"sinister"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"chill"
2"shattered"
3"perfect"
4"disrupted"
5"pulsed"
6"glinting"
7"flicker"
8"firmly"
9"chaotic"
10"etched"
11"weight"
12"familiar"
13"depths"
14"racing"
15"potential"
16"sinister"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1189
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount742
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity3.1
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn23
Tube1
Veil3
Market2
Sergeant1
Davies5
Eva9
Kowalski1
Compass2
Shade2
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Sergeant"
2"Davies"
3"Eva"
4"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1189
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"suspect that this"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean33.03
std22.99
cv0.696
sampleLengths
076
167
29
352
432
579
64
729
810
962
1011
1138
129
1321
145
1516
1614
1724
1817
1992
2040
2137
229
2327
2415
2529
2657
2732
2828
299
3048
3117
3220
3348
3439
3567
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"was etched"
51.85% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was beginning"
1"was starting"
2"was pulling"
5.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences104
ratio0.048
matches
0"A man, late fifties maybe, sprawled face-down near a vendor stall that had been selling vials of shimmering liquid – alchemical tinctures, judging by the shattered glass and residual scent."
1"Stalls lay overturned, wares scattered – dried herbs, carved bone trinkets, bizarre, unidentifiable objects glinting under the harsh fluorescent light."
2"Eva chewed on her lower lip, tucking a strand of curly red hair behind her left ear – her signature nervous habit."
3"It wasn't just cool; it felt…"
4"A memory surfaced, dredged from the murky depths of her mind – a briefing from MI13, a shadowy organization that dealt with the inexplicable."
79.17% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount711
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.052039381153305204
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.03234880450070324
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean11.43
std9.2
cv0.805
sampleLengths
015
116
213
33
411
518
614
730
85
93
1015
119
1211
1332
149
155
1613
179
183
191
201
2114
225
2312
2420
2514
2614
274
2829
297
302
311
3241
3321
349
352
3622
3716
389
3921
405
416
4210
437
447
4524
4612
475
483
4931
76.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences74
matches
0"Officially, it was just an"
1"Unofficially, it was a place"
2"Almost like finely ground dust."
3"Suddenly, it clicked."
ratio0.054
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences74
matches
0"She knelt beside the body,"
1"He gestured with his pen"
2"It was oddly precise, a"
3"She stood, her closely cropped"
4"Her gaze swept the market."
5"She then noticed Eva Kowalski"
6"She held it out, allowing"
7"She’d acquired it during a"
8"It was her insurance policy"
9"She crouched down, her sharp"
10"It wasn't just cool; it"
11"It was beginning to coalesce."
12"She looked at Eva then"
13"It was a carefully orchestrated"
ratio0.189
61.35% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences74
matches
0"The air tasted of damp"
1"Harlow Quinn ignored it, her"
2"The Veil Market."
3"She knelt beside the body,"
4"A man, late fifties maybe,"
5"Quinn asked, her voice flat,"
6"Sergeant Davies, a fresh-faced constable"
7"He gestured with his pen"
8"Quinn examined the scorch mark."
9"It was oddly precise, a"
10"The residue felt cool to"
11"She stood, her closely cropped"
12"Her gaze swept the market."
13"A handful of vendors huddled"
14"The full moon was high"
15"Quinn asked Davies"
16"Quinn scoffed internally at the"
17"She then noticed Eva Kowalski"
18"Eva had been a fixture"
19"Quinn said, acknowledging her with"
ratio0.797
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Even in its disrupted state,"
ratio0.014
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A man, late fifties maybe, sprawled face-down near a vendor stall that had been selling vials of shimmering liquid – alchemical tinctures, judging by the shatte…"
1"It was her insurance policy against the things that went bump in the night, the things that defied logic and reason."
2"A memory surfaced, dredged from the murky depths of her mind – a briefing from MI13, a shadowy organization that dealt with the inexplicable."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Quinn asked, her voice flat, clipped"
1"Quinn said, her voice quiet, almost to herself"
2"She crouched down, her sharp jawline tightening, again examining the scorch mark"
3"Quinn called out, her voice gaining an edge"
4"Quinn stood, her gaze sweeping the platform once more"
5"Quinn said, her voice low and dangerous"
41.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Quinn pressed (press)"
1"Eva conceded (concede)"
2"Quinn summarized (summarize)"
3"Quinn called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.27
leniency0.541
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.216
76.3333%