Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9108P53NVV5K40XH1RJTR

Run Details

Duration:
35.9s
Cost:
$0.000245
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted like wet concrete and something else… ozone, maybe? Detective Harlow Quinn wrinkled her nose, the scent prickling the back of her throat. She swept her gaze across the cavernous space, the beam of her flashlight cutting through the gloom of the abandoned Tube station. Water dripped from the arched ceiling, each drop echoing in the unnatural stillness. This wasn’t just any abandoned space. This was beneath Camden, a dead zone on most maps. It was the Veil Market’s usual haunt this full moon. A body lay sprawled near a makeshift stall, illuminated by the flickering light of a single, overturned lantern. A man. Mid-forties, expensive suit, now stained crimson. The initial assessment—multiple stab wounds—suggested a straightforward mugging gone wrong. Except… nothing felt straightforward. “Anything, Miller?” Quinn asked, her voice echoing slightly. A younger officer, Miller, knelt beside the body, carefully bagging evidence. “Looks clean, Detective. No witnesses. Just… this.” He held up a small, intricately carved bone token, its surface slick with moisture. “Entry token for the Market, standard issue.” Quinn circled the body, her worn leather watch catching the light. The wounds were precise, almost surgical. Not the frantic slashing of a street thug. And the victim’s pockets were untouched. Wallet, phone, a thick roll of cash—all present. A robbery wouldn't explain that. “He put up a fight?” Quinn asked, her eyes scanning the surrounding area for signs of a struggle. Miller shook his head. “Doesn’t appear so. No defensive wounds. Like he… let it happen.” “Let it happen?” Quinn paused, tilting her head. “Explain that.” "Maybe he surprised someone, snapped. Got scared.” Miller's voice was hesitant. He was fresh out of the academy, and this – this wasn’t a regular crime scene. Quinn ignored his suggestion. She moved past the body, her flashlight beam settling on the stall. It was mostly overturned, merchandise scattered across the floor: vials of shimmering liquids, strange herbs, a few tarnished silver trinkets. Nothing obviously missing. Except… something felt off. Too neat. Too staged. “Forensics find anything unusual in the blood spatter?” Quinn questioned, stepping over a spilled pile of dried flowers. “Preliminary analysis points to standard human physiology,” Miller replied, consulting his tablet. “No anomalies detected.” Quinn grunted, unconvinced. “Run a full spectral analysis. I want to know *everything* in that blood. Everything.” She moved towards a darkened corner of the station, drawn by a faint shimmer in the air. A residue of magical energy. A ripple in reality. “Detective Quinn, I’ve been thinking,” a voice said from behind her. Detective Inspector Davies, her superior, approached, his face grim in the dim light. “Given the location, the token… it’s likely connected to the Market. We should focus on identifying who this man was, what dealings he had.” Quinn didn't turn. She knelt, examining the shimmering distortion. “That’s what everyone thinks, isn’t it, Davies? Always the obvious answer.” Davies frowned. “What are you suggesting?” “I’m suggesting this wasn’t about the Market. Or, at least, not entirely.” She ran a gloved hand over the distortion, feeling a faint vibration. “Look at this. A residual rift. Small, unstable, but present. Someone opened a gateway here. Recently.” Davies scoffed. “Rifts? Gateways? Quinn, we’re investigating a murder, not writing a fantasy novel.” “Maybe they’re connected, Davies. Maybe this man wasn’t killed *in* the Market, but *because* of something that came through it.” Quinn stood, her eyes fixed on the ground where the rift had been. “Notice the pattern of the disturbance? It's... deliberate. Like someone tried to cover their tracks." She gestured to the meticulously arranged stall. The overturned lantern. The scattered merchandise. It all felt too perfect, too theatrical. “The killer wanted us to think this was a Market-related incident,” Quinn declared, her voice low and firm. “They wanted to misdirect us.” Davies remained skeptical. “And you think someone brought a rift-generating device into the Market to kill this man? Why?” Quinn ignored him, her gaze sweeping over the scene once more. Her focus landed on something Miller had overlooked—a single, iridescent scale, clinging to the hem of the victim’s suit. Small, almost invisible, with a faint, metallic sheen. She carefully plucked it with tweezers, placing it in an evidence bag. “Because,” she said, holding up the scale, “whatever came through that rift left more than just a trace.” Just then Eva Kowalski pushed through the crowd of officers, her round glasses flashing in the flashlight beams. She hurried towards Quinn, her satchel bumping against her legs. “Aurora! Thank God I found you. I have something you need to see,” Eva said, breathlessly. She fiddled with her hair behind her ear, an old habit. “This just came through from the Museum archives." She produced a faded, leather-bound book. "It’s a bestiary—a really old one—and I found a description that matches that scale.” Quinn took the book, her eyes scanning the archaic script. Eva pointed to a detailed illustration of a serpentine creature. “A Shadow Serpent,” she explained. “They’re native to the Umbral Plane. Legends say their scales can disrupt dimensional barriers. And their venom… well, it's not exactly lethal, but it induces a state of complete paralysis.” “Paralysis,” Quinn repeated slowly, the pieces beginning to click into place. “He didn’t struggle because he couldn’t. The stab wounds… pinpoint accuracy. Someone wanted him alive, but immobile.” Davies spluttered. "Shadow Serpents? This is absurd!" “Is it?” Quinn retorted, her brown eyes fixed on Davies. “Or is it a possibility we haven’t considered because we were too busy looking for the obvious?” She flipped through the bestiary, finding a passage describing the Shadow Serpents’ symbiotic relationship with a rare type of fungus that grows near dimensional rifts. The fungus emitted a specific pheromone, one that induced a hypnotic state in certain individuals. It explained the victim’s apparent lack of resistance. “The killer didn’t just want to kill him. They wanted to *control* him.” Quinn closed the book, her mind racing. “And I’ll bet the contents of his pockets weren’t the point either.” She looks at Miller. “Did you find any specialized equipment on this victim? Strange devices?” Miller frowned, tapping at his tablet. "Actually, yes. Found a small, brass compass tucked into his inner jacket pocket. Seems pretty old, heavily worn." Quinn's eyes narrowed. "A Veil Compass. Get it bagged and sent to forensics. I want a full analysis – origin, modifications, *everything*." She looks back at Davies. "We're not dealing with a simple murder, Inspector. We're dealing with someone who understands the Veil Market better than we do. Someone who knows how to manipulate the fabric of reality itself."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn repeated slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.512
leniency1
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.048
77.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1102
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
2"really"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1102
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count2
2
word"standard"
count2
3
word"scanning"
count2
4
word"spectral"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"disrupt"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"echoing"
2"standard"
3"scanning"
4"spectral"
5"perfect"
6"disrupt"
7"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences80
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords1094
ratio0.005
matches
0"everything"
1"in"
2"because"
3"control"
4"everything"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
6.23% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount626
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.88
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn18
Tube1
Camden1
Veil1
Market1
Miller7
Detective2
Inspector1
Davies7
Eva3
Kowalski1
Shadow1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Miller"
4"Inspector"
5"Davies"
6"Eva"
7"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0.062
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like wet concrete and something el"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.914
wordCount1094
matches
0"not exactly lethal, but it induces a state of complete paralysis"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean32.18
std18.17
cv0.565
sampleLengths
086
140
28
339
444
518
615
710
827
947
1018
1115
1243
1348
1420
156
1640
1714
1848
1920
2023
2119
2250
2318
2428
2555
2655
2728
287
2927
3048
3147
3224
3359
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs114
matches(empty)
28.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences100
ratio0.04
matches
0"The initial assessment—multiple stab wounds—suggested a straightforward mugging gone wrong."
1"Wallet, phone, a thick roll of cash—all present."
2"He was fresh out of the academy, and this – this wasn’t a regular crime scene."
3"Her focus landed on something Miller had overlooked—a single, iridescent scale, clinging to the hem of the victim’s suit."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount675
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faded, leather-bound book."
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03851851851851852
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.014814814814814815
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean10.94
std7.47
cv0.682
sampleLengths
09
12
214
322
413
56
610
710
818
92
106
1110
121
133
148
1511
1621
177
1811
196
208
216
228
235
2418
254
2611
278
282
2911
3016
314
3212
3320
343
351
363
372
382
3918
4012
413
423
4331
445
454
4611
4713
4824
493
80.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.52
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners52
47.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Just then Eva Kowalski pushed"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences70
matches
0"She swept her gaze across"
1"It was the Veil Market’s"
2"He held up a small,"
3"He was fresh out of"
4"She moved past the body,"
5"It was mostly overturned, merchandise"
6"She moved towards a darkened"
7"She knelt, examining the shimmering"
8"She ran a gloved hand"
9"She gestured to the meticulously"
10"It all felt too perfect,"
11"Her focus landed on something"
12"She carefully plucked it with"
13"she said, holding up the"
14"She hurried towards Quinn, her"
15"She fiddled with her hair"
16"She produced a faded, leather-bound"
17"She flipped through the bestiary,"
18"It explained the victim’s apparent"
19"She looks at Miller"
ratio0.3
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences70
matches
0"The air tasted like wet"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn wrinkled her"
2"She swept her gaze across"
3"Water dripped from the arched"
4"This wasn’t just any abandoned"
5"This was beneath Camden, a"
6"It was the Veil Market’s"
7"A body lay sprawled near"
8"The initial assessment—multiple stab wounds—suggested"
9"nothing felt straightforward."
10"Quinn asked, her voice echoing"
11"A younger officer, Miller, knelt"
12"He held up a small,"
13"Quinn circled the body, her"
14"The wounds were precise, almost"
15"Wallet, phone, a thick roll"
16"A robbery wouldn't explain that."
17"Quinn asked, her eyes scanning"
18"Miller shook his head."
19"Quinn paused, tilting her head"
ratio0.929
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
29.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Quinn asked, her voice echoing slightly"
1"Quinn declared, her voice low and firm"
2"Eva said, breathlessly"
3"Quinn closed, her mind racing"
28.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Quinn questioned (question)"
1"Quinn declared (declare)"
2"she explained (explain)"
3"Quinn repeated slowly (repeat)"
4"Quinn retorted (retort)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.268
leniency0.537
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.244
78.0768%