| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 74.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 965 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 965 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "resonated" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "echoing" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "glistening" | | 7 | "desire" | | 8 | "raced" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "intensity" | | 12 | "throbbed" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "chaotic" | | 15 | "stark" | | 16 | "oppressive" | | 17 | "unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 963 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.05% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 824 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.7 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Isolde | 7 | | Rory | 14 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Nyx | 6 | | Further | 1 | | Warden | 2 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Warden" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.65 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite place" | | 1 | "smelled like cinnamon and regret" | | 2 | "Chefs, seemingly oblivious to their" | | 3 | "quite make it out" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.077 | | wordCount | 963 | | matches | | 0 | "not in beams, but as a diffused amber glow" | | 1 | "Not joyous, but brittle" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 31.06 | | std | 18.81 | | cv | 0.606 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 75 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 62 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 52 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 71 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 30 |
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| 96.03% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "were flown" | | 1 | "was fixed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.62% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "The vineyards gave way to orchards laden with fruit Rory didn’t recognize - bulbous, purple things that pulsed with a faint light, and golden spheres that smelled like cinnamon and regret." | | 1 | "Ingredients were flown in on the backs of winged creatures—scaled lizards with gemstone eyes, and plump, iridescent moths." | | 2 | "A figure stood before it – or rather, didn't stand." |
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| 99.52% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 826 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.035108958837772396 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.020581113801452784 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 10.7 | | std | 5.59 | | cv | 0.523 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 74.81% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4888888888888889 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 96.62% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a sound like laughter." | | 1 | "Further on, they came to" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "It painted the sprawling vineyards" | | 1 | "It resonated in her skull," | | 2 | "They drifted ahead, a shifting" | | 3 | "She didn't want to display" | | 4 | "She glanced at Isolde, whose" | | 5 | "It cracked the stillness, leaving" | | 6 | "They moved forward, deeper into" | | 7 | "She plucked a crimson fruit," | | 8 | "It pulsed, a faint heat" | | 9 | "He raised a goblet, overflowing" | | 10 | "He didn’t flinch, didn’t blink," | | 11 | "They walked past elaborate kitchens" | | 12 | "It depicted a writhing mass" | | 13 | "She couldn't quite make it" | | 14 | "They approached the alcove." | | 15 | "It was an absence of" | | 16 | "Its form flickered, seeming to" | | 17 | "She drew the Fae-Forged Blade," | | 18 | "she asked, her voice tight" |
| | ratio | 0.275 | |
| 3.48% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of overripe" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "Sunlight filtered strangely through the" | | 3 | "It painted the sprawling vineyards" | | 4 | "Nyx’s voice wasn’t a voice," | | 5 | "It resonated in her skull," | | 6 | "They drifted ahead, a shifting" | | 7 | "Rory replied, trying to sound" | | 8 | "She didn't want to display" | | 9 | "Every breath felt thick with" | | 10 | "She glanced at Isolde, whose" | | 11 | "Isolde didn’t bother with a" | | 12 | "Rory held her breath." | | 13 | "It cracked the stillness, leaving" | | 14 | "Nyx whispered, the sound scraping" | | 15 | "They moved forward, deeper into" | | 16 | "The vineyards gave way to" | | 17 | "Men and women, their faces" | | 18 | "Isolde stated, her voice distant" | | 19 | "She plucked a crimson fruit," |
| | ratio | 0.913 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 93.02% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "They drifted ahead, a shifting figure in the filtered light, their form solidifying and dissolving with each step." | | 1 | "The vineyards gave way to orchards laden with fruit Rory didn’t recognize - bulbous, purple things that pulsed with a faint light, and golden spheres that smell…" | | 2 | "Chefs, seemingly oblivious to their presence, worked with frantic energy, preparing dishes that defied description." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory replied, trying to sound casual" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered, the sound scraping against Rory’s mind" | | 2 | "Isolde stated, her voice distant" | | 3 | "Isolde said, her voice gaining a sharper edge" | | 4 | "Rory asked, her hand tight around the hilt of the Fae blade" | | 5 | "Rory asked, a knot forming in her stomach" | | 6 | "she asked, her voice tight" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde stated (state)" | | 2 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 3 | "Nyx responded (respond)" | | 4 | "they stated (state)" | | 5 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 6 | "Nyx observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.583 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |