Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY91C7GDC06AR3GJ0RGGWSQ

Run Details

Duration:
52.2s
Cost:
$0.000768
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted of overripe fruit and something metallic, a tang like blood without the warmth. Rory adjusted the strap of her bag, the weight of the Fae-Forged Blade a cold comfort against her ribs. Sunlight filtered strangely through the canopy, not in beams, but as a diffused amber glow. It painted the sprawling vineyards a sickly gold. “So, this is Dymas.” Nyx’s voice wasn’t a voice, not really. It resonated in her skull, a cool draft against bone. They drifted ahead, a shifting figure in the filtered light, their form solidifying and dissolving with each step. “Looks like someone had a really good harvest,” Rory replied, trying to sound casual. She didn't want to display how off-balance the sweet, cloying scent made her. Every breath felt thick with something she couldn’t quite place. She glanced at Isolde, whose pale lavender eyes scanned the rows of vines, unblinking. Isolde didn’t bother with a response, only extended a hand, stopping them all. “Listen.” Rory held her breath. At first, there was only the buzzing of unseen insects, unnaturally large and iridescent. Then, a sound like laughter. Not joyous, but brittle and sharp, echoing from somewhere deep within the orchard. It cracked the stillness, leaving a residue of… expectation. “Feasting,” Nyx whispered, the sound scraping against Rory’s mind. “Always feasting.” They moved forward, deeper into the gluttonous realm. The vineyards gave way to orchards laden with fruit Rory didn’t recognize - bulbous, purple things that pulsed with a faint light, and golden spheres that smelled like cinnamon and regret. Men and women, their faces flushed and slick with juice, reclined amongst the boughs, devouring the strange harvest with unrestrained abandon. Fine silks and glittering jewelry contrasted sharply with the raw, animalistic hunger in their eyes. “Helbound souls,” Isolde stated, her voice distant. She plucked a crimson fruit, turning it slowly in her fingers. “Rewarded. Or perhaps… punished.” Rory’s hand instinctively went to the Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt. It pulsed, a faint heat against her skin, reaffirming they were closer to a rift. The amber light seemed to intensify, pressing in on them, and the air grew heavy, viscous. “Notice the lack of waste.” Nyx observed, gliding past a table groaning under the weight of roasted meats and glistening pastries. “Nothing is refused here. Every morsel consumed.” A man, his cheeks stained a deep purple, caught Rory’s eye. He raised a goblet, overflowing with a ruby liquid, and grinned, revealing teeth filed to sharp points. He didn’t flinch, didn’t blink, just… watched. The grin didn't reach his eyes. Rory forced herself to meet his gaze, then deliberately turned away. “Charming.” They walked past elaborate kitchens carved into the trunks of ancient trees, the air thick with the aroma of a thousand spices. Chefs, seemingly oblivious to their presence, worked with frantic energy, preparing dishes that defied description. A whole roasted boar, stuffed with hummingbirds and glazed with honey. Towers of sugared insects. A bubbling cauldron filled with something that resembled molten gold. “This isn’t just indulgence,” Isolde said, her voice gaining a sharper edge. “It’s a perversion of it. A gilded cage built on desire.” “And who’s building the cage?” Rory asked, her hand tight around the hilt of the Fae blade. “Prince Belphegor, naturally.” Nyx responded. “He cultivates this realm. Feeds it with the basest appetites.” Further on, they came to a clearing where a culinary competition was underway. Teams of chefs, their faces contorted with concentration, raced against each other to create the most extravagant dish. Ingredients were flown in on the backs of winged creatures—scaled lizards with gemstone eyes, and plump, iridescent moths. One chef, a woman with a silver streak in her dark hair, presented a sculpture made entirely of cakes and candied fruits. It depicted a writhing mass of bodies, intertwined in what could’ve been ecstasy or agony. The judges, grotesque figures with bloated features and vacant eyes, devoured it with savage appetites. “They’re… competing for Belphegor’s favor?” Rory asked, a knot forming in her stomach. “More than favor.” Isolde’s gaze was fixed on the judges. “They’re competing for a reprieve. A temporary stay from the inevitable.” A flicker of movement caught Rory’s eye. A shadowed alcove between two enormous fig trees. Something… watching. She couldn't quite make it out. “What’s that?” Nyx flowed forward, becoming almost entirely incorporeal, slipping into the shadows. A moment later, they re-formed, their violet eyes burning with an unusual intensity. “A Warden,” they stated. “Guarding a rift. A small one, but… volatile.” They approached the alcove. The air grew colder, and the amber light seemed to dim. The Heartstone Pendant throbbed, its warmth almost painful against Rory’s skin. A shimmering distortion hung in the air, a tear in reality that pulsed with a dark energy. A figure stood before it – or rather, didn't stand. It was an absence of light, a gaping hole in the fabric of existence, vaguely humanoid in shape. “This one’s recent,” Isolde murmured, stepping closer. “The Veil is frayed here. Someone’s been forcing it open.” The Warden didn’t acknowledge their presence, focused entirely on containing the rift. Its form flickered, seeming to fray at the edges. “It’s struggling,” Nyx observed. “The energy is… chaotic.” Rory felt a prickling sensation on her skin, like static electricity. She drew the Fae-Forged Blade, its moonsilver surface glowing faintly in the dim light. The cold metal grounded her, a stark contrast to the oppressive warmth of Dymas. “What do we do?” she asked, her voice tight. Isolde tilted her head, her pale lavender eyes unreadable. “We observe. And we wait for the invitation.” The Warden finally turned, its faceless void fixing on Rory. A sound, like the grinding of stones, emanated from its form. “The Prince desires an audience. He knows you come.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount965
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"sharply"
2"slowly"
3"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount965
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"warmth"
count3
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"resonated"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count3
6
word"glistening"
count1
7
word"desire"
count1
8
word"raced"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"intensity"
count1
12
word"throbbed"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"chaotic"
count1
15
word"stark"
count1
16
word"oppressive"
count1
17
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"weight"
2"resonated"
3"scanned"
4"echoing"
5"pulsed"
6"glistening"
7"desire"
8"raced"
9"stomach"
10"flicker"
11"intensity"
12"throbbed"
13"flickered"
14"chaotic"
15"stark"
16"oppressive"
17"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords963
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
65.05% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount824
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.7
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Isolde7
Rory14
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Fae3
Nyx6
Further1
Warden2
Dymas1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Rory"
2"Pendant"
3"Nyx"
4"Warden"
places
0"Heartstone"
globalScore0.65
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite place"
1"smelled like cinnamon and regret"
2"Chefs, seemingly oblivious to their"
3"quite make it out"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.077
wordCount963
matches
0"not in beams, but as a diffused amber glow"
1"Not joyous, but brittle"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean31.06
std18.81
cv0.606
sampleLengths
058
139
251
314
445
511
675
722
842
928
1041
1112
1262
1323
1417
1515
1649
1752
1813
1921
2025
2124
2212
2371
2417
2521
268
2739
289
2917
3030
96.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences76
matches
0"were flown"
1"was fixed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs139
matches(empty)
47.62% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences90
ratio0.033
matches
0"The vineyards gave way to orchards laden with fruit Rory didn’t recognize - bulbous, purple things that pulsed with a faint light, and golden spheres that smelled like cinnamon and regret."
1"Ingredients were flown in on the backs of winged creatures—scaled lizards with gemstone eyes, and plump, iridescent moths."
2"A figure stood before it – or rather, didn't stand."
99.52% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount826
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.035108958837772396
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.020581113801452784
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean10.7
std5.59
cv0.523
sampleLengths
016
119
215
38
411
510
618
714
813
910
1014
1113
121
134
1414
155
1613
178
181
199
202
218
2231
2321
2415
257
2611
274
2811
2915
3016
3121
327
3311
3417
356
361
376
3811
391
4022
4115
4211
434
4410
4512
4611
4717
485
4910
74.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4888888888888889
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners44
96.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"Then, a sound like laughter."
1"Further on, they came to"
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences69
matches
0"It painted the sprawling vineyards"
1"It resonated in her skull,"
2"They drifted ahead, a shifting"
3"She didn't want to display"
4"She glanced at Isolde, whose"
5"It cracked the stillness, leaving"
6"They moved forward, deeper into"
7"She plucked a crimson fruit,"
8"It pulsed, a faint heat"
9"He raised a goblet, overflowing"
10"He didn’t flinch, didn’t blink,"
11"They walked past elaborate kitchens"
12"It depicted a writhing mass"
13"She couldn't quite make it"
14"They approached the alcove."
15"It was an absence of"
16"Its form flickered, seeming to"
17"She drew the Fae-Forged Blade,"
18"she asked, her voice tight"
ratio0.275
3.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences69
matches
0"The air tasted of overripe"
1"Rory adjusted the strap of"
2"Sunlight filtered strangely through the"
3"It painted the sprawling vineyards"
4"Nyx’s voice wasn’t a voice,"
5"It resonated in her skull,"
6"They drifted ahead, a shifting"
7"Rory replied, trying to sound"
8"She didn't want to display"
9"Every breath felt thick with"
10"She glanced at Isolde, whose"
11"Isolde didn’t bother with a"
12"Rory held her breath."
13"It cracked the stillness, leaving"
14"Nyx whispered, the sound scraping"
15"They moved forward, deeper into"
16"The vineyards gave way to"
17"Men and women, their faces"
18"Isolde stated, her voice distant"
19"She plucked a crimson fruit,"
ratio0.913
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.02% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"They drifted ahead, a shifting figure in the filtered light, their form solidifying and dissolving with each step."
1"The vineyards gave way to orchards laden with fruit Rory didn’t recognize - bulbous, purple things that pulsed with a faint light, and golden spheres that smell…"
2"Chefs, seemingly oblivious to their presence, worked with frantic energy, preparing dishes that defied description."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Rory replied, trying to sound casual"
1"Nyx whispered, the sound scraping against Rory’s mind"
2"Isolde stated, her voice distant"
3"Isolde said, her voice gaining a sharper edge"
4"Rory asked, her hand tight around the hilt of the Fae blade"
5"Rory asked, a knot forming in her stomach"
6"she asked, her voice tight"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde stated (state)"
2"Nyx observed (observe)"
3"Nyx responded (respond)"
4"they stated (state)"
5"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
6"Nyx observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.583
effectiveRatio0.5
71.6747%