Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY91CPEG9706AXB6B0CDCHQ

Run Details

Duration:
2m 39s
Cost:
$0.013262
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory’s delivery jacket scraped against the bare oak branches of Richmond Park, the December wind nipping at her straight black shoulder-length hair. She tucked her left hand into her pocket, pressing her thumb to the crescent scar on her wrist—old habit from the childhood fall that had split the skin—before her fingers brushed the cold hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade. The moonsilver, leaf-shaped dagger sat in a leather sheath she’d stitched herself, its chill seeping through the fabric even through her jacket. Around her neck, the Heartstone Pendant thrummed—a deep crimson thumbnail-sized gem on a silver chain, warm as a sun-warmed stone, its faint glow visible through her shirt when she leaned into the weak winter light. Nyx drifted beside her, their humanoid shadow silhouette stretching to 6’2” in the dimming sun, faintly glowing violet eyes fixed on the circle of ancient oak standing stones ahead. Their voice was a whisper carried on the wind, barely audible over the rustle of dead leaves: “The shadows between these stones hum with the spaces I know. A rift lingers here—your pendant’s song is proof.” Isolde waited at the edge of the stone circle, her silver waist-length hair catching the light like spun starlight, pale lavender eyes crinkling at the corners in a smile that didn’t reach her ethereal, ageless face. She took a step forward, and Rory’s breath caught—there were no footprints in the frosted grass beneath her bare feet. The Half-Fae seer’s compulsion meant she couldn’t lie, but Rory had learned to read the gaps in her riddles since the seer had pressed the Fae blade into her hand three days prior. “Your pendant sings of Hel’s gluttonous realm,” Isolde said, her voice like wind through crystal. “The Veil weeps winter’s cold—its strength frays, as the solstice’s breath draws near.” Rory checked her phone, the screen glitching when she held it up to the stones. Her last delivery had been to a café near the park, and she’d told Yu-Fei she’d be back in an hour—now the time stamp flickered between 2:17 and 5:43. “I don’t have time for time tricks,” she said, cool-headed as ever, her quick thinking kicking in. “If the rift’s to Dymas—Prince Belphegor’s realm of vineyards and feasts—why’s it here, in your grove?” Nyx’s shadow form flickered, shifting to incorporeal for a heartbeat before solidifying again. “The grove is a pocket between worlds,” they whispered. “Shadows bleed through from all realms when the Veil weakens. I can slip into the crevices—see what lingers beyond.” Isolde gestured to the stones. “Cross the threshold, and the grove will show you its truths. But beware: an hour within may be a minute without… or a day. The earth does not dictate time here.” Rory hesitated, then stepped toward the first stone. The Heartstone’s thrumming intensified, its warmth spreading up her neck to her jaw. When she brushed her hand against the oak stone, it hummed—deep, resonant, like a cello string plucked by an invisible hand. Nyx drifted through the stone beside her, their shadow merging with the crevices before reemerging on the other side, their violet eyes glowing brighter. Inside the grove, Rory’s breath caught. Wildflowers bloomed in a riot of color at her feet—poppies red as her pendant, daisies white as snow, bluebells that glowed faintly in the shade—all blooming in December, when the rest of the park was bare. The oak trees above had lush, green leaves, their branches swaying to a rhythm that didn’t match the wind outside. A sharp, fermented tang mixed with the sweet honey scent of wildflowers, and Nyx’s whisper curled around her: “That is Dymas’ vineyard breath. The rift’s edge carries it here.” She knelt, running her fingers over a poppy’s waxy petal—when she pressed it, a drop of crimson sap oozed out, matching her pendant’s hue. She wiped the sap on her delivery jacket, her thumb brushing the crescent scar, and thought of Evan—his sharp words, the way he’d grabbed her wrist that night, the fall that had left the mark. The sap glowed faintly on her sleeve, and Isolde said, in a riddle: “The scar’s mark is a key. The sap’s song is a lock. The shadow’s hand is the turn.” Nyx drifted to a faint shimmer in the air—a rift edge only they and Isolde could see—and slipped into its shadow. When they emerged, their violet eyes burned brighter than ever. “I saw Dymas’ sprawling vineyards, helbound souls plucking grapes that rot as soon as they touch their hands. Prince Belphegor’s chefs hunt for new ingredients, and this rift is their door.” Rory stood, her bright blue eyes fixed on the shimmer, and pulled the Fae-Forged Blade from her pocket. Its cold hilt made her gasp, and she realized its moonsilver edge was faintly glowing in the grove’s light—reacting to the rift’s energy. “If Belphegor’s chefs want the grove’s wildflowers,” she said, cool-headed, “sealing the rift isn’t enough. We need to warn the Wardens—they monitor the Veil’s rifts, right?” Isolde shook her head, her silver hair cascading down her back. “The Wardens do not see the between places. They see only rifts that break Earth’s skin. This grove is a pocket—they cannot find it.” Nyx’s whisper carried unease: “I am bound to the mortal plane, but if the rift grows, I may be trapped between Dymas and the grove. My shadow form cannot withstand the glutton’s hunger for long.” Rory’s quick thinking kicked in. She plucked a wildflower from the ground, its waxy petal in her hand, and pressed it to the Heartstone Pendant. The pendant’s warmth merged with the flower’s sap, and she said: “If the wildflowers tie to the rift’s energy, we can mark its location. When the solstice comes, we’ll return to seal it permanently.” Isolde’s pale lavender eyes crinkled in a real smile—first time Rory had seen it. “You see what is not. The seer’s eye is blind to what the flightful heart sees.” Time shifted then. Rory checked her phone—two minutes had passed since she’d entered the grove, but her internal clock screamed that an hour had gone by. Unease coiled in her stomach as she noticed the grove’s wildflowers beginning to wilt at the rift’s edge, their sweet scent fading into the fermented tang of Dymas. Nyx’s shadow form flickered, and they whispered: “The rift is growing. Helbound souls drift through now—their hunger clinging to the wilted petals.” Rory pressed the Fae-Forged Blade into the ground beside the rift, its cold seeping into the earth, and wrapped both hands around the Heartstone Pendant. The warmth spread up her arms, and she began to hum the rhythm of its thrumming—low, steady, matching the rift’s faint pulse. Nyx emerged from the shadow, their form stabilizing, and whispered: “You bind the rift’s song to yours. The Veil’s fray slows.” Isolde’s voice dropped, no riddle this time: “You have the gift of the between—your flight from your past has made you a bridge between realms.” Rory stopped humming, her breath coming in short gasps. The rift’s shimmer faded, the fermented tang dissipated, and the wildflowers perked back up, their honey scent returning. She looked down at her left wrist—her crescent scar glowed faintly in the grove’s light. Isolde stepped beside her, her voice a final riddle: “The glutton’s vine bears fruit that rots. The seer’s eye sees what is not. The shadow’s hand holds what is lost.” Rory checked her phone again—2:19, only two minutes since she’d left the park’s frosted grass. She slipped the Fae-Forged Blade back into her pocket, the Heartstone resting warm against her chest. “I need to get back to my delivery shift,” she said. “Yu-Fei will fire me if I’m late.” Nyx drifted toward the oak standing stones, their shadow form feeling like cool air against her skin. “I will follow. The shadows will warn you if the rift returns.” Isolde took a step back, no footprints in the wildflower-strewn earth, and said: “The grove will wait. The solstice’s breath will test your bond.” Rory stepped through the standing stones, the winter wind nipping at her again. She glanced back—only bare oak branches and frosted grass greeted her, no sign of the grove’s wildflowers. She tucked her thumb into her pocket, pressing it to her crescent scar, and headed toward the café, the Heartstone’s faint thrumming a quiet reminder that her life as a delivery person in London was over—she was now a bridge between realms, a blade in hand, a shadow at her side.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags33
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Time shifted then. [then]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.917
leniency1
rawRatio0.03
effectiveRatio0.03
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1455
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1455
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count3
2
word"crystal"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count3
4
word"warmth"
count3
5
word"cascading"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"whisper"
2"crystal"
3"flickered"
4"warmth"
5"cascading"
6"stomach"
7"pulse"
8"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences48
matches(empty)
23.81% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences48
filterMatches
0"know"
1"see"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences48
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen92
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1412
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
88.65% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount1141
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity1.23
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
December2
Fae-Forged4
Blade4
Heartstone6
Pendant3
Isolde10
Rory14
Half-Fae1
Fae6
Yu-Fei1
Nyx9
Evan1
Belphegor1
Wardens1
Veil2
Earth1
Time1
Dymas1
Helbound1
London1
persons
0"Blade"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
3"Isolde"
4"Rory"
5"Nyx"
6"Evan"
7"Belphegor"
8"Veil"
9"Earth"
10"Time"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"December"
3"London"
globalScore0.887
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1412
matches(empty)
27.78% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences48
matches
0"rifts that break"
1"screamed that an"
78.31% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean58.83
std24.95
cv0.424
sampleLengths
0117
165
289
328
477
541
636
766
891
990
1062
1167
1235
1335
1459
1530
1676
1768
1825
1972
2049
2129
2224
2381
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs190
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount25
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences20
totalSentences48
ratio0.417
matches
0"She tucked her left hand into her pocket, pressing her thumb to the crescent scar on her wrist—old habit from the childhood fall that had split the skin—before her fingers brushed the cold hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade."
1"Around her neck, the Heartstone Pendant thrummed—a deep crimson thumbnail-sized gem on a silver chain, warm as a sun-warmed stone, its faint glow visible through her shirt when she leaned into the weak winter light."
2"A rift lingers here—your pendant’s song is proof.”"
3"Isolde waited at the edge of the stone circle, her silver waist-length hair catching the light like spun starlight, pale lavender eyes crinkling at the corners in a smile that didn’t reach her ethereal, ageless face. She took a step forward, and Rory’s breath caught—there were no footprints in the frosted grass beneath her bare feet. The Half-Fae seer’s compulsion meant she couldn’t lie, but Rory had learned to read the gaps in her riddles since the seer had pressed the Fae blade into her hand three days prior."
4"Rory checked her phone, the screen glitching when she held it up to the stones. Her last delivery had been to a café near the park, and she’d told Yu-Fei she’d be back in an hour—now the time stamp flickered between 2:17 and 5:43. “I don’t have time for time tricks,” she said, cool-headed as ever, her quick thinking kicking in. “If the rift’s to Dymas—Prince Belphegor’s realm of vineyards and feasts—why’s it here, in your grove?”"
5"I can slip into the crevices—see what lingers beyond.”"
6"Rory hesitated, then stepped toward the first stone. The Heartstone’s thrumming intensified, its warmth spreading up her neck to her jaw. When she brushed her hand against the oak stone, it hummed—deep, resonant, like a cello string plucked by an invisible hand. Nyx drifted through the stone beside her, their shadow merging with the crevices before reemerging on the other side, their violet eyes glowing brighter."
7"Inside the grove, Rory’s breath caught. Wildflowers bloomed in a riot of color at her feet—poppies red as her pendant, daisies white as snow, bluebells that glowed faintly in the shade—all blooming in December, when the rest of the park was bare. The oak trees above had lush, green leaves, their branches swaying to a rhythm that didn’t match the wind outside. A sharp, fermented tang mixed with the sweet honey scent of wildflowers, and Nyx’s whisper curled around her: “That is Dymas’ vineyard breath."
8"She knelt, running her fingers over a poppy’s waxy petal—when she pressed it, a drop of crimson sap oozed out, matching her pendant’s hue. She wiped the sap on her delivery jacket, her thumb brushing the crescent scar, and thought of Evan—his sharp words, the way he’d grabbed her wrist that night, the fall that had left the mark. The sap glowed faintly on her sleeve, and Isolde said, in a riddle: “The scar’s mark is a key."
9"Nyx drifted to a faint shimmer in the air—a rift edge only they and Isolde could see—and slipped into its shadow. When they emerged, their violet eyes burned brighter than ever. “I saw Dymas’ sprawling vineyards, helbound souls plucking grapes that rot as soon as they touch their hands."
10"Rory stood, her bright blue eyes fixed on the shimmer, and pulled the Fae-Forged Blade from her pocket. Its cold hilt made her gasp, and she realized its moonsilver edge was faintly glowing in the grove’s light—reacting to the rift’s energy. “If Belphegor’s chefs want the grove’s wildflowers,” she said, cool-headed, “sealing the rift isn’t enough."
11"We need to warn the Wardens—they monitor the Veil’s rifts, right?”"
12"This grove is a pocket—they cannot find it.”"
13"Isolde’s pale lavender eyes crinkled in a real smile—first time Rory had seen it. “You see what is not."
14"Time shifted then. Rory checked her phone—two minutes had passed since she’d entered the grove, but her internal clock screamed that an hour had gone by. Unease coiled in her stomach as she noticed the grove’s wildflowers beginning to wilt at the rift’s edge, their sweet scent fading into the fermented tang of Dymas. Nyx’s shadow form flickered, and they whispered: “The rift is growing."
15"Helbound souls drift through now—their hunger clinging to the wilted petals.”"
16"Rory pressed the Fae-Forged Blade into the ground beside the rift, its cold seeping into the earth, and wrapped both hands around the Heartstone Pendant. The warmth spread up her arms, and she began to hum the rhythm of its thrumming—low, steady, matching the rift’s faint pulse. Nyx emerged from the shadow, their form stabilizing, and whispered: “You bind the rift’s song to yours."
17"Rory stopped humming, her breath coming in short gasps. The rift’s shimmer faded, the fermented tang dissipated, and the wildflowers perked back up, their honey scent returning. She looked down at her left wrist—her crescent scar glowed faintly in the grove’s light. Isolde stepped beside her, her voice a final riddle: “The glutton’s vine bears fruit that rots."
18"Rory checked her phone again—2:19, only two minutes since she’d left the park’s frosted grass. She slipped the Fae-Forged Blade back into her pocket, the Heartstone resting warm against her chest. “I need to get back to my delivery shift,” she said. “Yu-Fei will fire me if I’m late.”"
19"Rory stepped through the standing stones, the winter wind nipping at her again. She glanced back—only bare oak branches and frosted grass greeted her, no sign of the grove’s wildflowers. She tucked her thumb into her pocket, pressing it to her crescent scar, and headed toward the café, the Heartstone’s faint thrumming a quiet reminder that her life as a delivery person in London was over—she was now a bridge between realms, a blade in hand, a shadow at her side."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount793
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"resting warm against her"
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.015132408575031526
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007566204287515763
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences48
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences48
mean29.42
std25.69
cv0.873
sampleLengths
022
138
222
335
457
58
689
728
877
932
109
1116
1210
133
147
1566
1685
176
1878
196
206
2149
2213
2356
2411
2519
268
278
2825
2910
3049
3110
3219
3311
3465
3511
3664
374
3825
3958
407
417
4249
4320
449
4517
467
4781
65.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4166666666666667
totalSentences48
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences48
matches
0"She tucked her left hand"
1"I can slip into the"
2"She knelt, running her fingers"
3"We need to warn the"
4"They see only rifts that"
5"My shadow form cannot withstand"
ratio0.125
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences48
matches
0"Rory’s delivery jacket scraped against"
1"She tucked her left hand"
2"The moonsilver, leaf-shaped dagger sat"
3"Nyx drifted beside her, their"
4"A rift lingers here—your pendant’s"
5"Isolde waited at the edge"
6"Isolde said, her voice like"
7"Rory checked her phone, the"
8"Nyx’s shadow form flickered, shifting"
9"I can slip into the"
10"Isolde gestured to the stones."
11"The earth does not dictate"
12"Rory hesitated, then stepped toward"
13"The rift’s edge carries it"
14"She knelt, running her fingers"
15"The sap’s song is a"
16"The shadow’s hand is the"
17"Nyx drifted to a faint"
18"Prince Belphegor’s chefs hunt for"
19"Rory stood, her bright blue"
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences8
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She tucked her left hand into her pocket, pressing her thumb to the crescent scar on her wrist—old habit from the childhood fall that had split the skin—before …"
1"Isolde waited at the edge of the stone circle, her silver waist-length hair catching the light like spun starlight, pale lavender eyes crinkling at the corners …"
2"Rory hesitated, then stepped toward the first stone. The Heartstone’s thrumming intensified, its warmth spreading up her neck to her jaw. When she brushed her h…"
3"Rory stepped through the standing stones, the winter wind nipping at her again. She glanced back—only bare oak branches and frosted grass greeted her, no sign o…"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Prince Belphegor’s chefs hunt, and this rift is their door"
1"We need, right"
2"Nyx emerged, their form stabilizing, and whispered:"
3"Isolde stepped, her voice a final riddle:"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"We need (need)"
1"Rory pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.083
leniency0.167
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.111
73.2266%