Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY91SZXBA7AEQAG2JMNJ7ZH

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Duration:
44.2s
Cost:
$0.000414
Provider:
DeepInfra

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
"I didn't invite you in," I said, the words sharper than I intended. The chain rattled as I nudged the door further open, just enough to see him. Lucien. Of course. He leaned against the doorframe, a tailored charcoal suit clinging to his frame like a second skin. Platinum blond hair, slicked back as always, caught the meagre light filtering from Silas’ bar next door. His eyes, one amber, one black, seemed to absorb the shadows of the hallway. He hadn't changed a bit. Still elegant. Still infuriating. "A social call," he murmured, that French accent smooth as aged cognac. "I trust I haven’t disturbed you?" "You have," I retorted, gripping the door handle a little tighter. "State your business, Lucien. Quickly." He pushed off the doorframe, crossing the threshold with a deliberate languor that made my pulse stutter. The scent of sandalwood and something indefinably expensive filled the small hallway. "Always so direct, Rory. I admire that. Most women prefer a little dance." The flat was small – a one-bedroom above Silas’ pub, a stone’s throw from Brick Lane. Spare. Certainly not designed for hosting impromptu visits from exes, especially those with a penchant for theatrics. "The dance is over," I said, stepping back to allow him space. "Eva's not here, by the way. She's in Edinburgh, chasing some obscure manuscript.” His gaze flickered to the haphazard stacks of books and scrolls overflowing from every surface. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, emerged from beneath a pile of occult texts, arching his back and fixing Lucien with a disdainful stare. “A pity,” Lucien said, ignoring the cat. “She’s always been an excellent conversationalist. Though her taste in décor leaves something to be desired." He gestured around with a dismissive flick of his wrist. “This is my home now, Lucien,” I reminded him. “And you’re trespassing.” He smiled then, a slow, dangerous curve of his lips that I remembered far too well. “Are I am? Or am I simply seeking refuge from the rain?” He glanced pointedly past me, though the night was clear. He had a way of twisting words, of layering meaning until they became something else entirely. “There is no rain,” I snapped. "And I did not give you permission to enter." He ignored that too, moving further into the flat. His gaze swept over the room, lingering on the maps pinned to the wall, the scattered notes on my desk. “A delivery person by day, cartographer by night, I presume?" I bristled. “It’s a hobby.” “A discerning one. This section,” he traced a finger over a map of London's underground tunnels, “shows a rather detailed knowledge of the old Fleet line. Few bother with those lines anymore.” My hand instinctively moved to the crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist, a phantom ache pulsing beneath my skin. A childhood accident. A reminder of a life before London. Before Lucien. "What do you want?" I asked, my voice dangerously low. He stopped pacing, turning to face me fully. His heterochromatic eyes locked on mine, a silent challenge simmering within their depths. “Information, Rory. A small favour.” "Favours are rarely small with you. It always comes at a cost." "Indeed," he admitted, a flicker of amusement in his eyes. "But this time, the cost is minimal. I require your assistance. A simple translation.” "Translation? What language?" He pulled a small, intricately carved box from his pocket. It was made of dark wood, inlaid with silver patterns I didn’t recognize. He set it on my desk, the click of the box echoing in the quiet flat. "Avarosan," he said, his voice dropping slightly. "An ancient dialect spoken only by a select few in my… family." Avarosan. The language of demons. Always the demons. I took a step back. “I don't translate demonic languages, Lucien.” He chuckled softly, a low rumble that vibrated in the air. "Don't be absurd, Rory. You have a knack for languages. You once deciphered a Sumerian tablet for Eva that had baffled scholars for decades.” “That’s different. This is…” “Necessary,” he interrupted sharply. The amusement vanished from his eyes, replaced by a chilling intensity. “The contents of this box are… delicate. And it requires a specific skillset.” I stared at the box, then back at him. The air crackled with unspoken history, with lingering desire and a profound sense of distrust. "And what happens if I refuse?" I asked, stalling. He leaned closer, his breath warm against my ear. "Let's not be dramatic, Rory. I wouldn't want to dislike you further. You know I loathe a stubborn woman. However," his smile returned, a predatory flash of white teeth, “refusal can have… repercussions." I shivered, despite myself. Lucien had a way of making threats sound like whispered promises. "What's inside the box?" "A message," he said, deliberately vague. "A warning, perhaps. From across the veil." “The veil?” I repeated, the term sending a fresh wave of unease through me. “What veil?” He ignored my question, his gaze fixed on my face. "The translation is relatively straightforward. A few archaic phrases, some symbolic references. It shouldn't take you more than an hour." That was a blatant lie. Avarosan wasn't straightforward. It was deliberately obscure, layered in symbolism and infused with power. And I knew, instinctively, that this was far more complicated than he was letting on. "I need to see it first," I said, trying to buy myself some time. He hesitated for a moment, then nodded slowly. With a practiced ease, he opened the box. Inside, nestled on a bed of scarlet velvet, was a single, obsidian shard. It pulsed with a faint, internal light, a dark, oily luminescence that seemed to swallow the surrounding shadows. As I looked at it, a wave of nausea washed over me, a sense of ancient wrongness clinging to the air. I felt Ptolemy hiss, arching his back further and retreating beneath my chair. "The inscription is etched on the underside," Lucien said, his voice almost a whisper. "Use the light. It will reveal the script." He produced a small, silver lamp from his pocket, its beam casting a ghostly glow on the shard. As the light touched the obsidian, faint, looping symbols appeared, writhing across the surface like living things. The language was brutally unfamiliar, yet… somehow, I recognized the architecture of its symbols. My breath hitched. This wasn’t just an archaic dialect. It was something older. Something darker. "What is it?" Lucien pressed, his eyes fixed on my face. I tried to focus, to decipher the message, but my head was swimming. The symbols seemed to shift and rearrange themselves, mocking my efforts. The room felt colder, the shadows deeper. “It’s… complex,” I stammered, pushing past, trying to clear the fog in my mind. "Very complex." He chuckled softly, a sound that sent a jolt of fear through me. "Indeed. But I know you're up to the task, Rory. You always were the cleverest of us." He began to adjust his suit, a clear sign that he expected me to proceed. I knew instinctively trying to refuse now was pointless. “How long?” I asked, my voice barely a whisper. His smile widened. “A few hours. I'll return tomorrow evening to collect the translation.” He paused, his gaze dropping to my wrist. “And Rory?” I looked up. “Don’t tell Eva.” The threat hung in the air, heavy and suffocating. Before I could respond, he turned and walked towards the door. Then, he stopped, turning back with a final, unsettling smile. "Oh, and Rory? It's good to be home." He was gone, leaving the scent of sandalwood and a chilling sense of dread in his wake. The obsidian shard pulsed on my desk, radiating an ominous glow. Ptolemy continued to hiss, huddled fearfully beneath the chair. I was trapped.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
43.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"blond hair slicked back [back]"
1"He gestured around [around]"
2"He glanced pointedly [pointedly]"
3"he interrupted sharply [sharply]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.49
leniency0.98
rawRatio0.16
effectiveRatio0.157
65.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1297
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count2
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
4
adverb"deliberately"
count2
5
adverb"slowly"
count1
6
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"slightly"
2"softly"
3"sharply"
4"deliberately"
5"slowly"
6"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1297
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"dance"
count2
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"simmering"
count1
6
word"depths"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"chilling"
count2
11
word"intensity"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count1
13
word"desire"
count1
14
word"profound"
count1
15
word"sense of"
count3
16
word"practiced ease"
count1
17
word"velvet"
count1
18
word"pulsed"
count2
19
word"etched"
count1
20
word"whisper"
count2
21
word"complex"
count2
highlights
0"pulse"
1"dance"
2"flickered"
3"traced"
4"reminder"
5"simmering"
6"depths"
7"flicker"
8"echoing"
9"vibrated"
10"chilling"
11"intensity"
12"unspoken"
13"desire"
14"profound"
15"sense of"
16"practiced ease"
17"velvet"
18"pulsed"
19"etched"
20"whisper"
21"complex"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"wave of emotion"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a wave of nausea"
1"hung in the air"
2"a flicker of amusement"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences99
matches
0"a jolt of fear"
70.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1296
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount909
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
French1
Spare1
Eva1
Lucien7
London2
Avarosan2
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"luminescence that seemed to swallow the surrounding shadows"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1296
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"murmured, that French"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean21.6
std13.57
cv0.628
sampleLengths
028
13
257
318
416
542
633
725
837
933
1012
1154
1215
1339
145
1532
1631
1710
1826
1912
2024
213
2239
2319
2413
256
2635
274
2828
2924
309
3142
3215
334
3413
3516
3630
3734
3814
3916
4052
4113
4222
4335
4414
4515
4611
4731
4816
4930
98.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"was made"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs175
matches
0"was letting"
1"was swimming"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences126
ratio0.008
matches
0"The flat was small – a one-bedroom above Silas’ pub, a stone’s throw from Brick Lane."
78.63% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount326
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.06441717791411043
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.012269938650306749
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean10.29
std6.33
cv0.615
sampleLengths
013
115
21
32
417
517
614
75
82
92
1012
116
1211
135
1417
1512
1613
1716
181
1916
2012
2113
2215
2322
247
2526
269
273
2816
2922
3016
316
329
339
3420
3510
362
373
3832
3919
403
417
422
4310
448
4513
465
4712
4810
4914
56.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.36507936507936506
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences89
matches
0"Certainly not designed for hosting"
1"Always the demons."
2"somehow, I recognized the architecture"
3"Then, he stopped, turning back"
ratio0.045
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences89
matches
0"I said, the words sharper"
1"He leaned against the doorframe,"
2"His eyes, one amber, one"
3"He hadn't changed a bit."
4"he murmured, that French accent"
5"I retorted, gripping the door"
6"He pushed off the doorframe,"
7"I said, stepping back to"
8"His gaze flickered to the"
9"He gestured around with a"
10"I reminded him"
11"He smiled then, a slow,"
12"He glanced pointedly past me,"
13"He had a way of"
14"He ignored that too, moving"
15"His gaze swept over the"
16"he traced a finger over"
17"My hand instinctively moved to"
18"I asked, my voice dangerously"
19"He stopped pacing, turning to"
ratio0.629
16.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences89
matches
0"I said, the words sharper"
1"The chain rattled as I"
2"He leaned against the doorframe,"
3"Platinum blond hair, slicked back"
4"His eyes, one amber, one"
5"He hadn't changed a bit."
6"he murmured, that French accent"
7"I retorted, gripping the door"
8"He pushed off the doorframe,"
9"The scent of sandalwood and"
10"The flat was small –"
11"I said, stepping back to"
12"His gaze flickered to the"
13"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, emerged"
14"Lucien said, ignoring the cat"
15"He gestured around with a"
16"I reminded him"
17"He smiled then, a slow,"
18"He glanced pointedly past me,"
19"He had a way of"
ratio0.888
56.18% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Before I could respond, he"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He pushed off the doorframe, crossing the threshold with a deliberate languor that made my pulse stutter."
1"It pulsed with a faint, internal light, a dark, oily luminescence that seemed to swallow the surrounding shadows."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"he murmured, that French accent smooth as aged cognac"
1"He glanced pointedly, though the night was clear"
2"I asked, my voice dangerously low"
3"he admitted, a flicker of amusement in his eyes"
4"he said, his voice dropping slightly"
5"I repeated, the term sending a fresh wave of unease through me"
6"I said, trying to buy myself some time"
7"Lucien said, his voice almost a whisper"
8"I asked, my voice barely a whisper"
9"He paused, his gaze dropping to my wrist"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"I retorted (retort)"
2"I snapped (snap)"
3"he admitted (admit)"
4"he interrupted sharply (interrupt)"
5"I repeated (repeat)"
6"Lucien pressed (press)"
7"I stammered (stammer)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.353
leniency0.706
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.314
73.9245%