Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9286E3XC8HQKVFQSJCQ0M

Run Details

Duration:
11.5s
Cost:
$0.000477
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain fell in sheets, turning the cobblestones of Soho into a slick, treacherous mirror. Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles that reflected the sickly glow of the streetlights, her breath steady despite the adrenaline. She kept the suspect in her sights—a wiry figure in a long coat, moving with purpose through the labyrinth of alleys. The man had slipped through her fingers twice already, but not this time. Not when she had the scent of him now, the faint metallic tang of fear clinging to the damp air. She pressed herself against the brick wall of a shuttered tailor’s shop, her sharp jaw set. The suspect had ducked into a narrow passage between two buildings, one hand clutching a small, leather-bound object. Quinn’s fingers twitched toward the holster at her side, but she held back. No shots. Not yet. Not until she knew what he was carrying. The passage opened into a dimly lit courtyard, the air thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that prickled at the back of her neck like static. The suspect hesitated at the edge of the courtyard, glancing over his shoulder as if sensing her presence. Then he was moving again, his footsteps echoing against the wet stone. Quinn followed, her military precision keeping her silent. The courtyard was a dead end—or so it seemed. But the suspect didn’t stop. Instead, he pressed his palm against the wall, and with a quiet *click*, a section of the brickwork swung inward, revealing a darkness beyond. Quinn’s pulse jumped. She knew this place. Or at least, she knew the rumors. The Veil Market. A black market for things that didn’t belong in the light. She’d heard whispers of it from informants, but no one had ever seen it. No one had ever *been* there. The suspect was already disappearing into the darkness, the leather-bound object clutched tight in his gloved hand. Quinn hesitated. The market was uncharted territory. If she followed him down there, she’d be stepping into the unknown—no backup, no rules, just the cold certainty that something was very wrong. But she couldn’t let him go. She exhaled, then stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the damp earth. The hidden door groaned shut behind her, sealing her in the dark. The air was thick, humid, the scent of damp stone and something elsesomething like ozone and old blood. A flickering lantern cast long shadows across the tunnel walls, where strange symbols had been carved into the rock. Quinn’s flashlight cut through the gloom, revealing a path that sloped downward, the walls lined with stalls that hadn’t existed the last time she’d been above ground. People moved through the crowd—no, not people. Some were human, their faces gaunt, their eyes too bright. Others were not. A woman with skin like polished obsidian passed by, her fingers trailing over a glass case filled with jars of swirling liquid. A man with too many teeth grinned at Quinn from the shadows, his voice a wet whisper. *"Lost, detective?"* Quinn ignored them, her gaze locked on the suspect. He was weaving through the crowd, his movements sharp, desperate. She followed, her hand resting on the butt of her service weapon. The market was a maze, the stalls selling things that made her stomach clench—bottles of black liquid, bundles of herbs that hummed with energy, small cages containing things that *moved* even when they shouldn’t. A stall caught her eye—a man in a long coat, his fingers stained with ink, offering *"truths for the asking."* Quinn’s instincts screamed at her to turn away, but she forced herself to look closer. The man’s eyes were milky white, his smile too wide. *"You want to know about your partner, detective?"* he murmured. *"I know things. Things that will make you sleep better at night."* Quinn’s breath hitched. Morris. His name was a ghost in her chest, a wound that never closed. She took a step forward— A hand clamped around her wrist, yanking her back. She whirled, her free hand flying to her weapon, but it was only Tomás Herrera, his dark eyes wide, his scarred forearm flexing as he pulled her deeper into the shadows. *"You don’t want to talk to him,"* Tomás hissed. *"He’s not selling truths. He’s selling *lies*."* Quinn wrenched her arm free. *"I don’t have time for this. My suspect—"* *"Is already gone."* Tomás jerked his chin toward the far end of the market, where the suspect had vanished into a side tunnel. *"And you’re about to walk into something you can’t handle."* Quinn’s jaw tightened. *"I don’t need your help."* *"You do if you want to leave this place alive."* Tomás’s voice was low, urgent. *"This isn’t just a market. It’s a *door*. And once you step through, the rules change."* Quinn looked back at the tunnel where the suspect had disappeared. She could still chase him. She could still— A sound cut through the noise of the market—a wet, tearing noise, like fabric being ripped. Then a scream. Not human. Something *else*. Quinn’s blood turned to ice. Tomás grabbed her arm again, dragging her toward a side passage. *"Now you listen to me. There’s another way out. But we have to move."* She let him pull her, her mind racing. The suspect was gone. The market was a trap. And whatever had made that sound was closing in. They ran, the lantern light flickering behind them, the air growing colder with every step. Quinn’s flashlight beam caught movement ahead—a figure, hunched and wrong, blocking their path. Its eyes gleamed in the dark, too many teeth bared in a grin. Tomás cursed, shoving Quinn behind him. *"Run,"* he ordered. She didn’t hesitate. They turned down another tunnel, the sound of pursuit echoing behind them. Quinn’s lungs burned, her boots slipping on the damp stone. Then, suddenly, light. The exit—a rusted metal ladder leading up into the dark night. Tomás didn’t wait. He climbed first, his hands gripping the rungs, his body disappearing into the darkness above. Quinn followed, her muscles screaming, her mind replaying the sounds of the market—the screams, the whispers, the things that moved in the dark. She emerged into the rain-soaked alley, gasping for air. Tomás was already there, his back against the wall, his breath ragged. *"You okay?"* he asked. Quinn wiped rain from her face, her fingers trembling. *"No."* Tomás studied her, his warm brown eyes searching hers. *"What did you see down there?"* She thought of the suspect, of the things in the market, of the voice that had whispered about Morris. *"Enough to know I don’t want to go back."* Tomás exhaled, running a hand through his dark curls. *"Good. Because you won’t."* Quinn looked back at the hidden door, now just another section of brick in the wall. The market was gone. For now. But the questions remained. And she wasn’t done yet.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.316
leniency0.632
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1166
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1166
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"treacherous"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"treacherous"
1"footsteps"
2"echoing"
3"pulse"
4"gloom"
5"whisper"
6"stomach"
7"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans23
markdownWords125
totalWords1151
ratio0.109
matches
0"click"
1"been"
2"\"Lost, detective?\""
3"moved"
4"\"truths for the asking.\""
5"\"You want to know about your partner, detective?\""
6"\"I know things. Things that will make you sleep better at night.\""
7"\"You don’t want to talk to him,\""
8"\"He’s not selling truths. He’s selling *lies"
9"\"I don’t have time for this. My suspect—\""
10"\"Is already gone.\""
11"\"And you’re about to walk into something you can’t handle.\""
12"\"I don’t need your help.\""
13"\"You do if you want to leave this place alive.\""
14"\"This isn’t just a market. It’s a *door"
15"else"
16"\"Now you listen to me. There’s another way out. But we have to move.\""
17"\"Run,\""
18"\"You okay?\""
19"\"No.\""
20"\"What did you see down there?\""
21"\"Enough to know I don’t want to go back.\""
22"\"Good. Because you won’t.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1022
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.96
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Quinn20
Veil1
Market1
Tomás10
Herrera1
Morris2
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Market"
globalScore0.522
windowScore0.5
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if sensing her presence"
1"something like ozone and old blood"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1151
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"made that sound"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean31.11
std21.52
cv0.692
sampleLengths
089
159
260
346
448
548
66
725
864
961
1065
1167
1222
1340
1416
1513
1633
178
1831
1919
2023
215
2225
2326
2441
259
263
2736
2841
2925
3010
3115
3228
3313
3422
354
365
90.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences96
matches
0"been carved"
1"being ripped"
2"was gone"
3"was gone"
77.30% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs163
matches
0"was carrying"
1"was weaving"
2"was closing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences108
ratio0.13
matches
0"She kept the suspect in her sights—a wiry figure in a long coat, moving with purpose through the labyrinth of alleys."
1"The passage opened into a dimly lit courtyard, the air thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that prickled at the back of her neck like static."
2"The courtyard was a dead end—or so it seemed."
3"If she followed him down there, she’d be stepping into the unknown—no backup, no rules, just the cold certainty that something was very wrong."
4"The air was thick, humid, the scent of damp stone and something else—something like ozone and old blood."
5"People moved through the crowd—no, not people."
6"The market was a maze, the stalls selling things that made her stomach clench—bottles of black liquid, bundles of herbs that hummed with energy, small cages containing things that *moved* even when they shouldn’t."
7"A stall caught her eye—a man in a long coat, his fingers stained with ink, offering *\"truths for the asking.\"* Quinn’s instincts screamed at her to turn away, but she forced herself to look closer."
8"She took a step forward—"
9"She could still—"
10"A sound cut through the noise of the market—a wet, tearing noise, like fabric being ripped."
11"Quinn’s flashlight beam caught movement ahead—a figure, hunched and wrong, blocking their path."
12"The exit—a rusted metal ladder leading up into the dark night."
13"Quinn followed, her muscles screaming, her mind replaying the sounds of the market—the screams, the whispers, the things that moved in the dark."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1037
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, leather-bound object."
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.029893924783027964
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0048216007714561235
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean10.66
std7.45
cv0.699
sampleLengths
015
120
221
313
420
516
618
713
82
92
108
1130
1218
1312
148
159
165
1724
183
194
207
213
2211
2314
246
2517
262
275
2824
296
3013
3112
3218
3319
3427
357
3610
373
3822
3917
402
419
4210
4312
4434
4535
4610
4710
4812
493
46.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3148148148148148
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences85
matches
0"Then he was moving again,"
1"Instead, he pressed his palm"
2"Then a scream."
3"Then, suddenly, light."
ratio0.047
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences85
matches
0"She kept the suspect in"
1"She pressed herself against the"
2"She knew this place."
3"She’d heard whispers of it"
4"She exhaled, then stepped forward,"
5"He was weaving through the"
6"She followed, her hand resting"
7"His name was a ghost"
8"She took a step forward—"
9"She whirled, her free hand"
10"She could still chase him."
11"She could still—"
12"She let him pull her,"
13"They ran, the lantern light"
14"Its eyes gleamed in the"
15"She didn’t hesitate."
16"They turned down another tunnel,"
17"He climbed first, his hands"
18"She emerged into the rain-soaked"
19"She thought of the suspect,"
ratio0.235
42.35% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences85
matches
0"The rain fell in sheets,"
1"Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through"
2"She kept the suspect in"
3"The man had slipped through"
4"She pressed herself against the"
5"The suspect had ducked into"
6"Quinn’s fingers twitched toward the"
7"The passage opened into a"
8"The suspect hesitated at the"
9"Quinn followed, her military precision"
10"The courtyard was a dead"
11"Quinn’s pulse jumped."
12"She knew this place."
13"The Veil Market."
14"A black market for things"
15"She’d heard whispers of it"
16"The suspect was already disappearing"
17"The market was uncharted territory."
18"She exhaled, then stepped forward,"
19"The hidden door groaned shut"
ratio0.835
58.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"If she followed him down"
ratio0.012
18.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles that reflected the sickly glow of the streetlights, her breath steady despite the adrenaline."
1"The passage opened into a dimly lit courtyard, the air thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something that prickled at the back of her neck li…"
2"The suspect hesitated at the edge of the courtyard, glancing over his shoulder as if sensing her presence."
3"Quinn’s flashlight cut through the gloom, revealing a path that sloped downward, the walls lined with stalls that hadn’t existed the last time she’d been above …"
4"A woman with skin like polished obsidian passed by, her fingers trailing over a glass case filled with jars of swirling liquid."
5"The market was a maze, the stalls selling things that made her stomach clench—bottles of black liquid, bundles of herbs that hummed with energy, small cages con…"
6"He climbed first, his hands gripping the rungs, his body disappearing into the darkness above."
7"Quinn followed, her muscles screaming, her mind replaying the sounds of the market—the screams, the whispers, the things that moved in the dark."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Tomás hissed (hiss)"
2"he ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.316
76.5521%