Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY92CSBDA43TV187YVRB39J

Run Details

Duration:
2m 58s
Cost:
$0.015999
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory slung her delivery bag higher on her shoulder. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the winter sun as she adjusted the strap— a memento from the childhood fall that had broken her wrist and her faith in her barrister father’s overbearing rules, a fall he’d dismissed as a “foolish lapse in focus” during a cross-examination drill. Nyx loomed beside her, their solid form a 6’2” silhouette of living shadow with faintly glowing violet eyes that cut through the park’s gray mist like shards of stained glass. Isolde walked ahead, her silver waist-length hair streaming behind her like a frozen waterfall; Rory watched, fascinated, as no footprints marred the dew-dusted grass in her wake, not even a crinkle of frost under her bare feet. They reached a cluster of ancient oak standing stones, their gnarled branches twisted into knots that looked like clenched fists, their bark scored with faint runes Rory couldn’t decode. The air shifted here—thicker, sweeter, laced with the scent of jasmine and pine even though neither plant bloomed or grew in Richmond Park’s winter landscape. A faint hum thrummed through the ground, vibrating up Rory’s boots. Rory’s Heartstone Pendant pressed against her chest under her shirt. The deep crimson gem, strung on a thin silver chain and given to her by an unknown benefactor outside the Golden Empress restaurant, pulsed once with faint warmth, its glow seeping through the fabric. She stopped. “Something’s off with the pendant.” Nyx’s shadow form rippled at the words, a faint wisp of black smoke leaking from their elbow— a sign of their discomfort as a Shade bound between realms. They tilted their head, their whispery wind-carried voice cutting through the stillness, each word a cool breath on Rory’s neck. “It tastes of Hel’s excess here—sweet rot under honeyed air, the same tang I smelled when I slipped through a portal to Dymas’ vineyards last moon.” Isolde turned. Her pale lavender eyes locked on Rory’s bright blue ones. She traced a finger along the edge of a standing stone, her ethereal features unreadable, her touch leaving a faint silver dust on the rough oak. “Knots untangle for those who do not fear the thread’s fray.” Rory frowned. Her quick, out-of-the-box thinking kicked in—she’d learned to decode cryptic words from her father’s cross-examinations, to pick out truths hidden in roundabout phrases. “You’re saying we pass through the stones.” Isolde’s lips curved into a faint smile. “Footsteps that do not exist lead to doors that do not show.” Rory stepped forward. She placed a hand on the rough oak of a standing stone. The pendant pulsed again, faster this time, its warmth seeping into her skin like a cup of spiced tea she’d forgotten she’d held. Nyx followed, their solid form flickering as they crossed the invisible boundary between Richmond Park and the Fae Grove, their violet eyes narrowing at the shift in magic. The world shifted. Rory blinked. Wildflowers burst from the ground at her feet—snowdrops tangled with sunflowers, poppies nodding next to frost-kissed daisies—all blooming in a riot of color that defied the winter outside, their petals glistening with a dew that never evaporated. The sky stretched overhead, a pearlescent blend of pink and silver that had no trace of the park’s gray mist, its light casting no shadows even though Nyx’s form should have blackened the grass. Ancient oak trees lined the clearing, their leaves glowing with a faint moonlit sheen that cast dappled patterns across the grass, patterns that shifted when no wind blew. She checked her phone. The screen was dead—no battery, no signal, no trace of the 3 PM delivery of sweet and sour pork she’d bailed on to follow Isolde. She pulled her father’s old pocket watch from her jeans pocket, a brass thing he’d given her for her 18th birthday before she’d fled Cardiff, and found its hands frozen at 2:17. Nyx stumbled. Their shadow form wavered, shrinking for a heartbeat before they reclaimed their solid shape, more black smoke leaking from their shoulders. They gripped a standing stone’s edge to steady themselves, their whispery voice holding a edge of fear—something Rory had never heard from the ageless Shade who’d once been Aldric the sorcerer trapped between realms in 1643. “It carries Fae magic—poison to those bound between worlds. It sears my shadow, makes me crave the cold of the spaces between realms.” Isolde turned. She stepped toward a stream that curved through the clearing, its water singing a wordless tune that mimicked the pendant’s pulse, its current glistening with silver dust. “Water that remembers forgets the thirst of those who drink.” Rory knelt beside the stream. She dipped her fingers into the water. It was cold—colder than the winter rain she’d delivered through that morning, colder than the ice Evan had pressed to her wrist after a fight—yet it didn’t make her shiver. Her crescent scar burned for a heartbeat before the sensation faded, leaving a faint silver dust on the scar’s edge. “The water’s got a kick—leaves dust on my scar.” Nyx leaned away from the stream, their shadow form flickering so much they almost slipped into incorporeal form. Their whispery voice cracked slightly, a reminder of their human past. “It’s Fae-forged water—washes away the bonds of those who are not Fae. I’d dissolve into shadow if I touched it.” Rory pulled her hand from the water. She wiped it on her jeans, her eyes darting to the standing stones they’d crossed. No sign of the park lay beyond them—only the glowing oak trees and the singing stream, their sounds blending into a hum that throbbed in her skull. She adjusted her delivery bag, her fingers brushing the Fae-Forged Blade Isolde had given her—moonsilver, leaf-shaped, always cold to the touch—tucked into the bag’s side pocket, a weapon she’d hidden from her flatmates above Silas’ bar. Isolde continued forward. She stepped onto a circle of white mushrooms that glowed faintly with moonlight, their caps thick and fleshy, their stems oozing a clear sap that glistened like glass. The mushrooms brightened when her foot touched them, casting a soft silver glow across the grass that mixed with the pendant’s crimson pulse. “Mushrooms that glow mark paths that stretch beyond the clock’s tick.” Rory followed. She stepped onto a mushroom. It hummed under her weight, its glow seeping into her shoe, making her toes tingle. The pendant pulsed again, faster this time, its warmth seeping into her chest, making her breath catch. “How long have we been here?” Isolde turned. Her voice was sharp, her riddle laced with a truth she couldn’t hide—she was bound by Fae compulsion to never lie, but she twisted her words to mislead. “An hour’s breath is a minute’s blink is a day’s slumber—choose your count, for the clock’s hands are blind here.” Nyx’s shadow form rippled again, more black smoke leaking from their elbows. They gestured to the sky, their violet eyes narrowing at the unchanging pearlescent light. “The light hasn’t shifted. Not since we entered. No sunrise, no sunset—just this endless glow.” Rory’s stomach tightened. She’d fled Cardiff to avoid her abusive ex Evan, to build a quiet life as a delivery person in London, to sleep without waking to his shouts, but now she stood in a pocket realm where time bent like a broken ruler, where Fae magic seared Shades and water left silver dust on her scar. She adjusted her delivery bag again, her fingers brushing the blade’s cold hilt, and ran a finger over her crescent scar, a nervous tic she’d developed after Evan had mocked the scar as a “weak spot.” She stepped off the mushroom circle. She walked toward a cluster of oak trees, their glowing leaves rustling in a wind that had no source, their branches twisting into shapes that looked like faces. A wildflower—a deep blue bloom she’d never seen before, its petals edged with silver—brushed her ankle. Its petals left a faint silver dust on her jeans, dust that glowed when she touched it. “The flowers don’t make sense—they bloom out of season, leave dust that glows.” Isolde’s voice carried from behind her, her footsteps silent even though she’d moved closer. “Sense is a mortal chain—break it to see the bloom, to taste the truth under the honeyed air.” Nyx followed Rory. They reached out a shadowy hand to touch a glowing oak leaf. The leaf shriveled under their touch, turning to ash before it hit the ground, the ash dissolving into the grass without a trace. Their whispery voice held a note of sorrow, a reminder of their failed summoning ritual in 1643. “Fae magic rejects my shadow—sees me as a intruder from Hel’s excess, even though I’m bound between realms.” Rory’s tongue touched her lips. She tasted the sweet air of the Grove and then the faint tang of Hel’s excess (as Nyx mentioned) on her tongue, a sweet rot that clung to her throat. She walked toward the stream again, her eyes locked on the silver dust floating on its surface. “The water’s singing matches the pendant’s pulse.” Isolde’s voice carried from the mushroom circle. “Pulses are ties—bind the Hel-made to the Fae-forged, bind the mortal to the ageless.” Rory pulled the Fae-Forged Blade from her delivery bag. Its moonsilver metal glowed faintly in the oak tree’s light, its cold touch sending a jolt up her arm, making her grip tighten. The blade’s leaf shape caught the pendant’s crimson glow, mixing the two colors into a deep purple that glistened on the blade’s edge. She held the blade aloft. Her crescent scar was fully visible on her left wrist as she did, the silver dust from the wildflower glistening on its edge. “I’m not leaving without knowing who gave me the pendant.” Isolde’s lips curved into a smile. She traced a rune on the oak tree’s bark, her fingers leaving a silver trail that glowed for a heartbeat before fading. “Answers are thorns—pluck them and bleed, for the giver’s hands are stained with Dymas’ vineyard wine and helbound souls.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1710
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1710
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"streaming"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"traced"
count2
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count2
7
word"glistening"
count3
8
word"wavered"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count3
10
word"reminder"
count2
11
word"throbbed"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"streaming"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"traced"
5"unreadable"
6"footsteps"
7"glistening"
8"wavered"
9"pulse"
10"reminder"
11"throbbed"
12"weight"
13"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences36
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences36
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences56
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen104
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1673
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount1362
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory17
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Golden1
Empress1
Shade2
Fae5
Grove2
Nyx9
Isolde10
Cardiff2
Aldric1
Evan3
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
London1
Shades1
Hel1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Pendant"
2"Shade"
3"Nyx"
4"Isolde"
5"Evan"
6"Hel"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
5"Cardiff"
6"London"
globalScore0.876
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like clenched fists, their bark sc"
1"looked like faces. A wildflower—a deep bl"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1673
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean52.28
std27.79
cv0.532
sampleLengths
0126
165
244
37
474
549
632
719
866
9104
1061
1182
1239
1362
149
1549
1685
1765
1845
1950
2041
2194
2267
2313
2432
2573
2652
277
2821
2955
3038
3147
95.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences36
matches
0"was bound"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs214
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences56
ratio0.232
matches
0"The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the winter sun as she adjusted the strap— a memento from the childhood fall that had broken her wrist and her faith in her barrister father’s overbearing rules, a fall he’d dismissed as a “foolish lapse in focus” during a cross-examination drill."
1"Nyx loomed beside her, their solid form a 6’2” silhouette of living shadow with faintly glowing violet eyes that cut through the park’s gray mist like shards of stained glass. Isolde walked ahead, her silver waist-length hair streaming behind her like a frozen waterfall; Rory watched, fascinated, as no footprints marred the dew-dusted grass in her wake, not even a crinkle of frost under her bare feet."
2"They reached a cluster of ancient oak standing stones, their gnarled branches twisted into knots that looked like clenched fists, their bark scored with faint runes Rory couldn’t decode. The air shifted here—thicker, sweeter, laced with the scent of jasmine and pine even though neither plant bloomed or grew in Richmond Park’s winter landscape. A faint hum thrummed through the ground, vibrating up Rory’s boots."
3"Nyx’s shadow form rippled at the words, a faint wisp of black smoke leaking from their elbow— a sign of their discomfort as a Shade bound between realms. They tilted their head, their whispery wind-carried voice cutting through the stillness, each word a cool breath on Rory’s neck."
4"Rory frowned. Her quick, out-of-the-box thinking kicked in—she’d learned to decode cryptic words from her father’s cross-examinations, to pick out truths hidden in roundabout phrases."
5"Rory blinked. Wildflowers burst from the ground at her feet—snowdrops tangled with sunflowers, poppies nodding next to frost-kissed daisies—all blooming in a riot of color that defied the winter outside, their petals glistening with a dew that never evaporated. The sky stretched overhead, a pearlescent blend of pink and silver that had no trace of the park’s gray mist, its light casting no shadows even though Nyx’s form should have blackened the grass. Ancient oak trees lined the clearing, their leaves glowing with a faint moonlit sheen that cast dappled patterns across the grass, patterns that shifted when no wind blew."
6"She checked her phone. The screen was dead—no battery, no signal, no trace of the 3 PM delivery of sweet and sour pork she’d bailed on to follow Isolde. She pulled her father’s old pocket watch from her jeans pocket, a brass thing he’d given her for her 18th birthday before she’d fled Cardiff, and found its hands frozen at 2:17."
7"Nyx stumbled. Their shadow form wavered, shrinking for a heartbeat before they reclaimed their solid shape, more black smoke leaking from their shoulders. They gripped a standing stone’s edge to steady themselves, their whispery voice holding a edge of fear—something Rory had never heard from the ageless Shade who’d once been Aldric the sorcerer trapped between realms in 1643."
8"Rory knelt beside the stream. She dipped her fingers into the water. It was cold—colder than the winter rain she’d delivered through that morning, colder than the ice Evan had pressed to her wrist after a fight—yet it didn’t make her shiver. Her crescent scar burned for a heartbeat before the sensation faded, leaving a faint silver dust on the scar’s edge."
9"Rory pulled her hand from the water. She wiped it on her jeans, her eyes darting to the standing stones they’d crossed. No sign of the park lay beyond them—only the glowing oak trees and the singing stream, their sounds blending into a hum that throbbed in her skull. She adjusted her delivery bag, her fingers brushing the Fae-Forged Blade Isolde had given her—moonsilver, leaf-shaped, always cold to the touch—tucked into the bag’s side pocket, a weapon she’d hidden from her flatmates above Silas’ bar."
10"Isolde turned. Her voice was sharp, her riddle laced with a truth she couldn’t hide—she was bound by Fae compulsion to never lie, but she twisted her words to mislead."
11"No sunrise, no sunset—just this endless glow.”"
12"She stepped off the mushroom circle. She walked toward a cluster of oak trees, their glowing leaves rustling in a wind that had no source, their branches twisting into shapes that looked like faces. A wildflower—a deep blue bloom she’d never seen before, its petals edged with silver—brushed her ankle. Its petals left a faint silver dust on her jeans, dust that glowed when she touched it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount799
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.015018773466833541
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0025031289111389237
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences56
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences56
mean29.88
std25.33
cv0.848
sampleLengths
09
150
267
365
444
52
65
748
826
938
1011
1125
127
137
1412
1566
163
17101
1861
1959
209
2114
2229
2310
2462
259
2629
2712
288
2985
3054
3111
3239
336
3430
3520
3626
374
384
397
4094
4167
4213
4314
4418
4555
4618
4752
487
497
63.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.39285714285714285
totalSentences56
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences35
matches
0"They reached a cluster of"
1"She checked her phone. The"
2"It sears my shadow, makes"
3"I’d dissolve into shadow if"
4"She stepped off the mushroom"
5"She held the blade aloft."
ratio0.171
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount33
totalSentences35
matches
0"Rory slung her delivery bag"
1"The crescent scar on her"
2"Nyx loomed beside her, their"
3"They reached a cluster of"
4"Rory’s Heartstone Pendant pressed against"
5"Nyx’s shadow form rippled at"
6"Isolde turned. Her pale lavender"
7"Rory frowned. Her quick, out-of-the-box"
8"Isolde’s lips curved into a"
9"Rory stepped forward. She placed"
10"The world shifted."
11"Rory blinked. Wildflowers burst from"
12"She checked her phone. The"
13"Nyx stumbled. Their shadow form"
14"It sears my shadow, makes"
15"Isolde turned. She stepped toward"
16"Rory knelt beside the stream."
17"Nyx leaned away from the"
18"I’d dissolve into shadow if"
19"Rory pulled her hand from"
ratio0.943
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences35
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"They reached a cluster of ancient oak standing stones, their gnarled branches twisted into knots that looked like clenched fists, their bark scored with faint r…"
1"Rory stepped forward. She placed a hand on the rough oak of a standing stone. The pendant pulsed again, faster this time, its warmth seeping into her skin like …"
2"Rory blinked. Wildflowers burst from the ground at her feet—snowdrops tangled with sunflowers, poppies nodding next to frost-kissed daisies—all blooming in a ri…"
3"Nyx stumbled. Their shadow form wavered, shrinking for a heartbeat before they reclaimed their solid shape, more black smoke leaking from their shoulders. They …"
4"Isolde turned. She stepped toward a stream that curved through the clearing, its water singing a wordless tune that mimicked the pendant’s pulse, its current gl…"
5"Isolde continued forward. She stepped onto a circle of white mushrooms that glowed faintly with moonlight, their caps thick and fleshy, their stems oozing a cle…"
6"Rory followed. She stepped onto a mushroom. It hummed under her weight, its glow seeping into her shoe, making her toes tingle. The pendant pulsed again, faster…"
7"She stepped off the mushroom circle. She walked toward a cluster of oak trees, their glowing leaves rustling in a wind that had no source, their branches twisti…"
8"Nyx followed Rory. They reached out a shadowy hand to touch a glowing oak leaf. The leaf shriveled under their touch, turning to ash before it hit the ground, t…"
9"Rory’s tongue touched her lips. She tasted the sweet air of the Grove and then the faint tang of Hel’s excess (as Nyx mentioned) on her tongue, a sweet rot that…"
10"Rory pulled the Fae-Forged Blade from her delivery bag. Its moonsilver metal glowed faintly in the oak tree’s light, its cold touch sending a jolt up her arm, m…"
11"Isolde’s lips curved into a smile. She traced a rune on the oak tree’s bark, her fingers leaving a silver trail that glowed for a heartbeat before fading."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
74.9950%