Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY92F4ZT2Y4N2R8898GJDT1

Run Details

Duration:
22.0s
Cost:
$0.001537
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed Camden's crooked streets, turning gutters into rushing black rivers. Detective Harlow Quinn pounded pavement, coat heavy with water, boots churning spray that soaked her trousers to the knees. Neon from shuttered kebab shops bled pink into puddles, shattering under her strides. Ahead, Tomás Herrera cut sharp right, shoulders hunched, curly dark hair flattened like wet rope against his olive neck. She had picked up his trail outside The Raven's Nest two blocks back. Green neon buzzed overhead as he burst from the door, Saint Christopher medallion bouncing against his chest. Suspicious glance toward the bookshelf-hidden room inside—clique business, she bet. Her stakeout pint sat abandoned on the bar stool. Now this. Harlow's legs burned from the sprint, military bearing forcing rhythm. Salt-and-pepper hair clung cropped to her scalp. Brown eyes locked on his back. Worn leather watch ticked sodden seconds on her left wrist. "Police! Herrera, halt!" Wind swallowed her bark. He didn't flinch, darted past overflowing bins reeking of stale curry and piss. Soho's pulse faded behind; Camden's grit closed in. Abandoned market stalls loomed like skeletal ribs. Tomás vaulted a low wall, landed in mud that splattered his calves. Scar along his left forearm gleamed slick under sodium lamps as he pumped arms. She cleared it cleaner, sharp jaw clenched, gaining ten yards. Crowd thinned at this hour—drunks huddled in doorways, hoods up. One lurched into her path. Harlow shouldered him aside; he spun into a lamppost with a meaty thud. Street narrowed to alleys, walls graffiti-tagged with occult symbols: eyes within triangles, coiled serpents. Rain drummed bin lids like frantic Morse. Tomás slipped on cobblestones glazed with runoff, arms windmilling. He caught balance on a rusted railing, medallion swinging wild. She closed. Fingers brushed his coat hem. He whipped around, elbow cracking her collarbone. Fire lanced; she grunted, stumbled back two steps. Bastard packed paramedic muscle. He bolted straighter, toward the old rail yard fringes. Chain-link fences rattled in gusts. Harlow shook pain off, pursued. Breath rasped throat raw. 18 years on the force; chases never got easier at 41. They hit Inverness Street's flank. Empty stalls creaked, tarps flapping like ghosts. Tomás zigzagged between them, kicking fruit crates that splintered underfoot. Oranges rolled, pulped in puddles. Harlow leaped debris, coat flapping leaden. Her holster dug hip. Pistol stayed holstered—backup none in this storm, radio fritzed wet. "Herrera! You're done!" He vaulted a stall counter, vanished into shadows. She hurdled after, wood cracking under weight. Alley beyond twisted downhill, toward disused tracks. Air thickened with ozone bite, undercut by sulfur rot. Camden's underbelly. Whispers from bent coppers: Veil Market. Bone tokens. Things that slithered from fog. Morris died chasing similar shadows three years back. Unexplained. Supernatural bollocks she shoved down till evidence screamed. Tomás hit the fence line first. Barbed coils crowned chain-link. He gripped, hauled up with forearm scar flexing pale. Medallion caught wire, yanked free with a snap. Harlow slammed fence seconds later. Gloves shredded on barbs; blood welled hot. She climbed, muscles corded, boots scraping metal. Dropped to gravel other side, rolled shoulder to kill momentum. He sprinted across cracked concrete, toward boarded-up entrance. Victorian brick swallowed light: abandoned Tube station, bricked since the Blitz. Graffiti wards peeled: "Veil Below – Enter at Bone." Tomás skidded at the plywood sheets nailed crooked. Tore two free with bare hands, nails splintering wood. Bone token dangled from his fist—ivory shard carved rune-twisted. He flashed it at a hidden seam; stone ground aside, revealing stairwell mouth. Stairs plunged black, lit faint by bioluminescent fungi clinging walls. Echoes rose: haggling voices twisted inhuman, clink of vials, low growls. Smells punched up: incense charred, blood copper-fresh, alchemical tang that burned nostrils. He descended, token vanishing into pocket. Footsteps echoed rapid. Harlow reached the breach, chest heaving. Rain sheeted her face, dripping jawline. Pistol cleared leather now, grip cold. Thumbed safety off. Brown eyes pierced gloom. Stairwell walls wept moisture, stairs uneven, pitted with age. Faint green glow pulsed below. Shouts drifted: "Fresh eyes! Unblinking pair, fifty quid!" Her pulse thundered ears. Backup? Miles off, drowned in storm. Alone. Follow, corner the bastard in his den. Clique secrets: what killed Morris? Herrera's treatments—off-books for freaks. Proof waited down there. Or seal the entrance, call the cavalry. Unknowns crawled those depths: enchanted blades thirsty for normie blood, beasts bartering souls. Informants vanished into the Veil. One-way trips. She edged forward, boot on first step. Gravel crunched loud. A voice below sharpened—Tomás? "Hurry, it's hot!" Reply hissed back, guttural. Not English. Pistol rose two-handed. Watch strap itched blood-mixed rain. Sharp jaw ticked. Decision clawed throat. Dive in, risk the abyss. Or surface, play safe. Stairs beckoned slick. Harlow's free hand gripped the jamb, knuckles white. Below, shadows writhed. A figure flickered at the landing—cloaked, eyes compound-reflecting light. Tomás's voice cut clearer. "Token check—move!" She inhaled deep, ozone thick. Pistol barrel dipped toward dark. One step. Gravel shifted under sole. Voices surged louder: "Cop scent! Fresh meat!" Her boot froze mid-air. Rain hammered outside, indifferent. Pistol steadied. Brown eyes narrowed. Down or out? The stairwell exhaled cold breath, fungi pulsing welcome. She held. Token's rune echo lingered in her mind—Herrera's scar, his medallion, the Raven's hidden room. Threads pulled taut. A growl bubbled up, wet and hungry. Harlow's jaw locked harder. Finger tightened on trigger guard. Dark swallowed sound. She balanced on the edge. One false move. Everything. The chase's endgame yawned. Her call.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:40:18.986Z" 2/20/2026, 7:40:18 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount926
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount926
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"churning"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"jaw clenched"
count1
4
word"lurched"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"echoes"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"thundered"
count1
12
word"depths"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"churning"
1"pulse"
2"loomed"
3"jaw clenched"
4"lurched"
5"weight"
6"echoes"
7"footsteps"
8"echoed"
9"gloom"
10"pulsed"
11"thundered"
12"depths"
13"flickered"
14"echo"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences134
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen19
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords903
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.63% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount876
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Pistol"
discoveredNames
Camden3
Harlow9
Quinn1
Tomás8
Herrera3
Raven2
Nest1
Saint1
Christopher1
Morse1
Inverness1
Street2
Veil2
Market1
Tube1
Blitz1
Morris2
English1
Rain4
Brown3
One4
Pistol5
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
5"Raven"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
8"Morris"
9"Rain"
10"Brown"
11"One"
12"Pistol"
places
0"Inverness"
1"Street"
2"Veil"
globalScore0.986
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount903
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean16.72
std14.39
cv0.861
sampleLengths
062
151
233
33
432
536
628
740
822
94
1034
1127
1220
133
1431
1532
1627
1729
1828
1939
2033
219
2225
2322
2411
2520
2627
2714
283
296
3011
3112
323
3324
342
3510
366
377
384
394
405
413
428
432
4417
457
464
475
483
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs210
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount6
flaggedSentences14
totalSentences138
ratio0.101
matches
0"Suspicious glance toward the bookshelf-hidden room inside—clique business, she bet."
1"Soho's pulse faded behind; Camden's grit closed in."
2"Crowd thinned at this hour—drunks huddled in doorways, hoods up."
3"Harlow shouldered him aside; he spun into a lamppost with a meaty thud."
4"Fire lanced; she grunted, stumbled back two steps."
5"18 years on the force; chases never got easier at 41."
6"Pistol stayed holstered—backup none in this storm, radio fritzed wet."
7"Gloves shredded on barbs; blood welled hot."
8"Bone token dangled from his fist—ivory shard carved rune-twisted."
9"He flashed it at a hidden seam; stone ground aside, revealing stairwell mouth."
10"Herrera's treatments—off-books for freaks."
11"A voice below sharpened—Tomás?"
12"A figure flickered at the landing—cloaked, eyes compound-reflecting light."
13"Token's rune echo lingered in her mind—Herrera's scar, his medallion, the Raven's hidden room."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount899
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"copper-fresh, alchemical tang"
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.010011123470522803
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0033370411568409346
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean6.54
std3.7
cv0.566
sampleLengths
011
119
213
319
413
517
610
79
82
910
107
116
1210
133
144
1513
168
177
1812
1914
2010
2110
225
2313
2414
257
269
2710
282
295
307
318
324
339
345
355
364
3711
385
397
4010
415
426
434
4410
453
468
477
487
499
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.6159420289855072
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners85
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences119
matches
0"She had picked up his"
1"Her stakeout pint sat abandoned"
2"He didn't flinch, darted past"
3"She cleared it cleaner, sharp"
4"He caught balance on a"
5"He whipped around, elbow cracking"
6"He bolted straighter, toward the"
7"They hit Inverness Street's flank."
8"Her holster dug hip."
9"He vaulted a stall counter,"
10"She hurdled after, wood cracking"
11"He gripped, hauled up with"
12"She climbed, muscles corded, boots"
13"He sprinted across cracked concrete,"
14"He flashed it at a"
15"He descended, token vanishing into"
16"Her pulse thundered ears."
17"She edged forward, boot on"
18"She inhaled deep, ozone thick."
19"Her boot froze mid-air."
ratio0.176
77.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences119
matches
0"Rain lashed Camden's crooked streets,"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn pounded pavement,"
2"Neon from shuttered kebab shops"
3"She had picked up his"
4"Her stakeout pint sat abandoned"
5"Harlow's legs burned from the"
6"Salt-and-pepper hair clung cropped to"
7"Brown eyes locked on his"
8"Wind swallowed her bark."
9"He didn't flinch, darted past"
10"Soho's pulse faded behind; Camden's"
11"Tomás vaulted a low wall,"
12"She cleared it cleaner, sharp"
13"Crowd thinned at this hour—drunks"
14"Harlow shouldered him aside; he"
15"Street narrowed to alleys, walls"
16"Rain drummed bin lids like"
17"Tomás slipped on cobblestones glazed"
18"He caught balance on a"
19"Fingers brushed his coat hem."
ratio0.765
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn pounded pavement, coat heavy with water, boots churning spray that soaked her trousers to the knees."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.0184%