Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY93GJFP4XY7ZFQWD2ZXZB7

Run Details

Duration:
21.4s
Cost:
$0.001019
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock comes at 2:17 a.m., sharp and insistent, through the thin wood of the door. Rory pauses with a takeout container in her hand—garlic naan, still warm from Golden Empress—and her keys clinking in her pocket. The deadbolts click as she twists the lock, half-expecting a late-night delivery, half-hoping it’s a paramedic (Eva’s had another coughing fit). But the peephole shows only a man. Platinum-blond hair, slicked back like he spent a century rearranging it, though it falls a little loose today, as if he ran a hand through it a dozen times in transit. Tailored charcoal suit, the cuffs neatly pressed, no wrinkles—even in the gutter, he’d look like he stepped out of a catalog. That’s Lucien. Her breath hitches. She knows that spine, that broad shoulder, even before the face comes into focus. Heterochromatic eyes: one amber, like burnt honey, the other black, deeper than the Thames at high tide. The scar above his left eyebrow, a thin white line from a demon blade, silver in the hall light. “Rory,” he says, and his voice is lower than she remembers, rougher, like he’s been shouting into the wind. He lifts a folder, leather-bound, embossed with a snake eating its tail—his family crest. “Can I come in? It’s… cold out.” She blinks. The words stick in her throat. *It’s cold out*—as if he cares. As if he ever cared about the cold. “What are you doing here?” she asks, her voice steadier than she feels. She steps back, and he slips past her, the door shutting softly behind him. The lock clicks again, deliberate. His eyes dart around the room. It’s her usual chaos: a stack of leather-bound books (LGBTQ+ law, ancient demon contracts, a dog-eared copy of *Pride and Prejudice*—Eva insisted), a half-finished mug of nettle tea, a blanket slung over the arm of a chair. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, emerges from under the bookshelf, tail twitching. He sniffs the air, then rubs against Lucien’s calf. “Ptolemy,” Lucien says, scratching behind the cat’s ears. “Still as greedy for attention as when you were a kitten.” Rory’s fingers curl into the fabric of her apron—she’d changed out of her delivery uniform, but the stain of soy sauce on the sleeve lingers. “Stop that. Don’t act like you remember him.” “I remember everything about you,” he says, too quickly. He turns, and for a second, their eyes meet. The amber one flickers, like he’s fighting something. “May I?” He nods to the rickety kitchen chair by the table, where a half-empty bowl of takeout sits. She hesitates, then seats herself on the edge of the couch, her legs crossed. The scar on her left wrist itches, a dull throb. *Childhood accident*, she’d told Eva a hundred times. *Cut myself on a kitchen knife*. But it was Evan, her ex, 22 and drunk, yelling that she was “ruining his perfect life” before he pushed her into the counter. The knife had been his, not hers. She’d never told anyone but Eva. “Your cane,” she says, nodding to his hand. It’s propped against the wall, ivory handle carved with vines. “Broken?” He glances down. “A *demon* with a trident. Got lucky. Didn’t break the blade, though.” He sets the folder on the table, the snake crest catching the light. “I need your help, Rory.” That stops her. The steady rhythm of her breath stutters. “You need my help? Or you need someone to do the job you can’t handle, again?” “It’s not again. This is… different.” He pulls a chair over, sits, and his suit creaks. “I can’t go to the Guild. Can’t go to the fae. Can’t go to anyone who knows my name. Not anymore.” “Not anymore? Since when?” “Since they started asking questions about the amulet. The one you gave me.” The amulet. She closes her eyes. It was a birthday present, 21st birthday, when they were stupid and in love and thought the world was a place where demons could go to coffee shops without getting torched. A small, unassuming thing, carved from white stone. She’d bought it at a market in Camden, didn’t know it was a ward against possession, didn’t know Lucien’s father had been the one to craft it. “Who’s asking questions?” she says, her voice tight. “Malphora.” Her name. *Malphora*. The folder on the table snaps shut. She leans forward, the scar on her wrist burning. “Why her?” “Because she thinks I have it. Or that I know where it is. She’s been tracking me for months. I can feel her—like a nail in my spine, all the time.” He runs a hand through his hair, and the platinum blond shifts, catching the light. “I need you to hide it. To keep it safe. Until I can figure out how to get it back.” “Why me?” The words are out before she can stop them. “Why not Eva? She’s got deadbolts on her door. She can shoot. She—” “Because you see the world differently than anyone else. You notice the cracks. The things the rest of us miss.” He meets her eyes, and for a second, she’s 21 again, at his flat in Kensington, his hands on her hips, his mouth on hers, promising forever. “You’re the only one who can keep me alive. And the amulet.” “You’re not alive? From where I’m standing, you’ve been living like a king for three years.” “I haven’t *lived* in three years. I’ve been running. From her. From the guilt. From the fact that I let you think I didn’t care.” His voice cracks. “I’m sorry, Rory. For the way I left. For the silence. I never meant—” “You never meant to stay. You were a fixer, a *demon”,* whatever the hell you are. You had business, and I was… I was *human*. A distraction.” She stands, pacing, her shoes scuffing the floor. “Evan was bad, but you… you left before I could even try to fix it. Before I could—” “Before you could love me back,” he says, quiet. That stops her. She turns. His face is vulnerable, the hard edge of the fixer gone, replaced by a man who’s been carrying something heavy for too long. “You thought I loved you?” He steps toward her, and she doesn’t back away. “I know I loved you. More than anything. And then I had to go. To Avaros. My father was dying, and Malphora… she was gaining power, and if she knew I had the amulet—” “So you left me. To die. Or to marry some demon princess?” “I left to *protect* you. You know what happens to humans who get close to us. Her kind, they don’t just kill—they *consume*. They take pieces of you, and you’re left hollow. I couldn’t… I couldn’t let that happen to you.” He reaches out, his hand hovering inches from her cheek. “I’m sorry I scared you. I’m sorry I made you think I wasn’t worth fighting for.” She closes her eyes. The scent of his cologne—sandalwood and something sharper, like rain on hot stone—fills her nose. *Stay*, her body begs. *Touch me. Tell me it’s not over.* But her mind screams *no*. Evan’s face flashes in her memory: red, drunk, pulling her hair, calling her a “pathetic human fool.” She can’t be a fool again. “I think I need to sit,” she says, and sits, her legs giving way. Her hands shake, and she presses them to her knees. “You can’t just… show up here. You can’t just—” “I know. I know. And I’m sorry. I should have sent a message. I should have—” “Rory,” she says, cutting him off. “Why did you tell me your name? Malphora calls you Luc. The Frenchman. Why change that for me?” He flinches. “Because when I’m with you, I’m not Luc. I’m not the fixer. I’m just… me. A man who’s never been good at anything but running.” The cat jumps onto the couch, settling on her lap. He purrs, warm and heavy, and for a second, she feels safe. “You need to leave,” she says, but her voice is soft, not angry. He takes a step closer, and this time, she lets him touch her—his thumb brushes her cheek, his skin warm against her cold flesh. “Just one night. Let me stay. Just… let me explain.” “No,” she says, but she tilts her face into his hand, and he knows it’s a yes. He leans down, and his kiss is slow, careful, like he’s afraid she’ll break. His lips are soft, not chapped, his breath warm against her jaw. She thinks of all the nights she’d cried into her pillow, wondering where he’d gone, how he could forget her so easily. But now, as his hands cup her face, as he pulls her closer, she remembers the way he used to laugh at her terrible jokes, the way he’d read her legal cases aloud and mock the judges, the way he’d call her *Rory* instead of Aurora, like it was a secret. “I’m here,” he says, when he pulls away. “I’m not leaving again. Not while I still have a chance.” She kisses him again, harder this time, her hands tangled in his hair. The scar on her wrist throbsonly once, a faint reminder of the past, but the present is warm, and alive, and for the first time in years, she feels like she’s not running. The door creaks, and they jump apart. Eva stands in the doorway, arms crossed, a mug of tea in her hand. “Took you long enough,” she says, but her eyes are soft. She sets the mug on the table, next to the folder. “I heard the name *Malphora*. You two better not be plotting murder. I want in.” Rory laughs, wet and shaky, and Lucien pulls her close. Outside, the rain starts to fall, drumming against the window. Inside, the lamp glows, and Ptolemy purrs, and for the first time in a long time, Rory feels like she might survive.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:40:53.209Z" 2/20/2026, 7:40:53 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags31
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"they jump apart [apart]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.525
leniency1
rawRatio0.032
effectiveRatio0.032
94.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1685
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1685
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"throb"
2"perfect"
3"silence"
4"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences111
matches
0"d in love"
52.77% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"know"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
1"happens to"
2"happen to"
3"starts to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen99
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans16
markdownWords32
totalWords1667
ratio0.019
matches
0"It’s cold out"
1"Pride and Prejudice"
2"Childhood accident"
3"Cut myself on a kitchen knife"
4"demon"
5"Malphora"
6"lived"
7"demon”,"
8"human"
9"protect"
10"consume"
11"Stay"
12"Touch me. Tell me it’s not over."
13"no"
14"Rory"
15"Malphora"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1262
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.4
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Eva5
Lucien5
Thames1
Rory5
Evan2
Camden1
Kensington1
You4
Avaros1
Malphora3
Luc1
Frenchman1
Aurora1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"You"
5"Malphora"
6"Luc"
places
0"Golden"
1"Thames"
2"Kensington"
3"Avaros"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1667
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences130
matches
0"knows that spine"
1"let that happen"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean37.04
std22.12
cv0.597
sampleLengths
065
154
253
340
454
563
619
733
845
975
1019
1133
1226
1337
144
1513
1672
178
181
193
2018
2166
2224
2359
2416
2542
2653
279
2833
2943
3012
3167
3258
3333
3416
3524
3627
3735
3834
3917
4099
4119
4246
4358
4442
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs237
matches
0"was dying"
1"was gaining"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences130
ratio0.069
matches
0"Rory pauses with a takeout container in her hand—garlic naan, still warm from Golden Empress—and her keys clinking in her pocket."
1"Tailored charcoal suit, the cuffs neatly pressed, no wrinkles—even in the gutter, he’d look like he stepped out of a catalog."
2"He lifts a folder, leather-bound, embossed with a snake eating its tail—his family crest."
3"*It’s cold out*—as if he cares."
4"It’s her usual chaos: a stack of leather-bound books (LGBTQ+ law, ancient demon contracts, a dog-eared copy of *Pride and Prejudice*—Eva insisted), a half-finished mug of nettle tea, a blanket slung over the arm of a chair."
5"Rory’s fingers curl into the fabric of her apron—she’d changed out of her delivery uniform, but the stain of soy sauce on the sleeve lingers."
6"Her kind, they don’t just kill—they *consume*."
7"She closes her eyes. The scent of his cologne—sandalwood and something sharper, like rain on hot stone—fills her nose. *Stay*, her body begs. *Touch me. Tell me it’s not over.* But her mind screams *no*. Evan’s face flashes in her memory: red, drunk, pulling her hair, calling her a “pathetic human fool.” She can’t be a fool again."
8"He takes a step closer, and this time, she lets him touch her—his thumb brushes her cheek, his skin warm against her cold flesh. “Just one night."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount906
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02869757174392936
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005518763796909493
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean12.82
std13.59
cv1.06
sampleLengths
016
121
221
37
431
521
62
73
814
917
1019
1119
1214
137
142
156
166
178
1813
1914
205
216
2237
2311
249
258
2611
2725
288
299
309
318
3219
3314
3410
358
366
3724
387
396
408
4110
421
433
4425
455
463
477
4816
4916
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.34615384615384615
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners45
36.23% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"More than anything."
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences92
matches
0"Her breath hitches."
1"She knows that spine, that"
2"he says, and his voice"
3"He lifts a folder, leather-bound,"
4"*It’s cold out*—as if he"
5"she asks, her voice steadier"
6"She steps back, and he"
7"His eyes dart around the"
8"It’s her usual chaos: a"
9"He sniffs the air, then"
10"he says, too quickly"
11"He turns, and for a"
12"He nods to the rickety"
13"She hesitates, then seats herself"
14"She’d never told anyone but"
15"she says, nodding to his"
16"It’s propped against the wall,"
17"He glances down."
18"He sets the folder on"
19"He pulls a chair over,"
ratio0.554
41.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences92
matches
0"The knock comes at 2:17"
1"Rory pauses with a takeout"
2"The deadbolts click as she"
3"Her breath hitches."
4"She knows that spine, that"
5"The scar above his left"
6"he says, and his voice"
7"He lifts a folder, leather-bound,"
8"The words stick in her"
9"*It’s cold out*—as if he"
10"she asks, her voice steadier"
11"She steps back, and he"
12"The lock clicks again, deliberate."
13"His eyes dart around the"
14"It’s her usual chaos: a"
15"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, emerges"
16"He sniffs the air, then"
17"Lucien says, scratching behind the"
18"Rory’s fingers curl into the"
19"he says, too quickly"
ratio0.837
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"As if he ever cared"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Platinum-blond hair, slicked back like he spent a century rearranging it, though it falls a little loose today, as if he ran a hand through it a dozen times in …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"he says, and his voice is lower than she remembers, rougher, like he’s been shouting into the wind"
1"she asks, her voice steadier than she feels"
2"He sets, the snake crest catching the light"
3"she says, her voice tight"
4"he says, quiet"
5"she says, but her voice is soft, not angry"
6"she says, but her eyes are soft"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.186
leniency0.373
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.4699%