| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.303 | | leniency | 0.606 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 833 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.97% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 833 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "carried the weight" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 824 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 20 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 705 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.27 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | London | 3 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 3 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Aurora | 10 | | Silas | 16 | | Eva | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Evan | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Blackwood" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Silas" | | 6 | "Eva" | | 7 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.365 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 98.98% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 824 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 18.31 | | std | 17.15 | | cv | 0.937 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 51 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 30 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 132 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 10.58% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 108 | | ratio | 0.046 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who knew her—stood at the counter, her fingers tracing the rim of a whiskey glass." | | 1 | "His beard was still neat, but his eyes—hazel now, not the deep brown of their youth—held a quiet weariness." | | 2 | "Somewhere, a piano played a slow, familiar tune—something Eva had always hated." | | 3 | "The man—someone she hadn’t seen in years—grinned, his fingers brushing against her arm." | | 4 | "The man—Evan, she realized—stared at her for a long moment before turning to Silas." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 714 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.0392156862745098 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0070028011204481795 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 108 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 108 | | mean | 7.63 | | std | 5.65 | | cv | 0.74 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 41.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.2037037037037037 | | totalSentences | 108 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere, a piano played a" | | 1 | "Somewhere, a door slammed." | | 2 | "Somewhere, a door slammed." | | 3 | "Somewhere, a piano played a" | | 4 | "Somewhere, a door slammed." | | 5 | "Somewhere, a man’s voice called" |
| | ratio | 0.072 | |
| 75.42% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t come here for" | | 1 | "She’d come for the man" | | 2 | "His beard was still neat," | | 3 | "He didn’t look up first." | | 4 | "She’d waited long enough." | | 5 | "he said, voice rougher than" | | 6 | "His left leg twitched beneath" | | 7 | "She’d forgotten how sharp it" | | 8 | "She didn’t have to." | | 9 | "She’d left Cardiff behind, left" | | 10 | "She’d come to London, to" | | 11 | "she said, voice quieter than" | | 12 | "She didn’t flinch." | | 13 | "he said, leaning in" | | 14 | "He just gestured to the" | | 15 | "She didn’t move." | | 16 | "he said, softer now" | | 17 | "She’d left him in Cardiff," | | 18 | "She’d thought she’d never see" | | 19 | "She didn’t have to." |
| | ratio | 0.361 | |
| 8.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "The neon glow of the" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who" | | 2 | "The scent of aged bourbon" | | 3 | "She hadn’t come here for" | | 4 | "She’d come for the man" | | 5 | "Silas Blackwood leaned against the" | | 6 | "His beard was still neat," | | 7 | "He didn’t look up first." | | 8 | "That was fine." | | 9 | "She’d waited long enough." | | 10 | "he said, voice rougher than" | | 11 | "Aurora didn’t turn." | | 12 | "The kind of pause that" | | 13 | "The kind that carried the" | | 14 | "Silas said, finally meeting her" | | 15 | "His left leg twitched beneath" | | 16 | "Aurora took a sip of" | | 17 | "Silas exhaled through his nose," | | 18 | "The bar’s hum filled the" | | 19 | "Rory turned then, just enough" |
| | ratio | 0.904 | |
| 60.24% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, voice rougher than she remembered" | | 1 | "Silas said, not unkindly" | | 2 | "she said, voice quieter than she intended" | | 3 | "she said, quiet" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.273 | | leniency | 0.545 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |