Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY93HZR1V3R2PFRAHB3VWKR

Run Details

Duration:
4.1s
Cost:
$0.000220
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon glow of the Raven’s Nest pulsed like a slow heartbeat against the damp London night, casting jagged shadows across the bar’s worn wood. Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who knew her—stood at the counter, her fingers tracing the rim of a whiskey glass. The scent of aged bourbon and something sharper, like burnt sugar and old paper, clung to the air. She hadn’t come here for the drink. She’d come for the man who used to be her best friend. Silas Blackwood leaned against the bar, his silver signet ring catching the light as he tapped it against the glass. His beard was still neat, but his eyes—hazel now, not the deep brown of their youth—held a quiet weariness. He didn’t look up first. That was fine. She’d waited long enough. “You’re here,” he said, voice rougher than she remembered. Aurora didn’t turn. “You’re here too.” A beat. The kind of pause that didn’t need filling. The kind that carried the weight of years. “Eva told me you’d be back,” Silas said, finally meeting her gaze. His left leg twitched beneath the table, a habit she’d noticed before but never let bother her. Now it felt like a reminder. “She did.” Aurora took a sip of her drink, the burn sharp and deliberate. “She said you’d be the one to tell me.” Silas exhaled through his nose, the sound low and tired. “She didn’t say much else.” The bar’s hum filled the silence. Somewhere, a piano played a slow, familiar tune—something Eva had always hated. Rory turned then, just enough to see the way the light caught the scar on her wrist, small and pale against her skin. She’d forgotten how sharp it still was. “You look different,” Silas said, not unkindly. Aurora didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. The change was in the way her shoulders were straighter, the way her hair fell just so, the way her hands moved with purpose when she worked at the restaurant. She’d left Cardiff behind, left the life she’d thought she’d built. She’d come to London, to the flat above Silas’s bar, to start over. “You’re still here,” she said, voice quieter than she intended. Silas’s jaw tightened. “I’m still here.” A customer slid onto the stool beside her, his voice loud and familiar. “Rory! You look like hell.” Aurora didn’t look at him. “I know.” The man—someone she hadn’t seen in years—grinned, his fingers brushing against her arm. “You’ve got that look again. The one that says you’re about to lose your mind.” She didn’t flinch. “I’m not.” “Sure you’re not,” he said, leaning in. “You’re always about to lose your mind.” Silas’s voice cut through the noise, sharp and quiet. “Enough.” The man’s grin faltered. “What?” Silas didn’t answer. He just gestured to the empty stool beside Rory. “Sit.” She didn’t move. “Rory,” he said, softer now. “Sit.” She did. The man—Evan, she realized—stared at her for a long moment before turning to Silas. “What the hell is going on?” Silas didn’t look at him. “Nothing.” Aurora’s fingers tightened around her glass. Evan had been her first love, her first mistake. She’d left him in Cardiff, in the middle of a fight, in the middle of everything. She’d thought she’d never see him again. “You’re not here for him,” Silas said, finally breaking the silence. Aurora didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. Evan’s voice dropped, low and dangerous. “You’re here for him?” She looked at him then, really looked at him for the first time in years. The man who’d broken her heart, the man who’d left her broken. The man who’d never come back. “No,” she said, quiet. “I’m here for you.” Silas’s hand found hers under the table, his grip firm. “You’re not.” Aurora pulled away. “I am.” The bar’s lights flickered, casting long shadows across the faces of the patrons. Somewhere, a door slammed. The piano stopped. Silas exhaled, slow and deep. “You’re not.” Aurora didn’t look at him. She didn’t have to. The weight of it all pressed down on her, the years, the choices, the things she’d left behind. She’d come back to London, to Silas, to the life she’d thought she’d lost. But she hadn’t come for him. She’d come for herself. “You’re not,” she said, finally turning to him. “You’re not the same person I left behind.” Silas’s eyes burned into hers. “I’m not.” The bar’s hum grew louder, louder, until it drowned out everything else. Somewhere, a door slammed. The piano started up again, slow and familiar. Aurora took a step back. “I’m not here for you.” Silas didn’t move. He didn’t speak. She turned and walked out, the door swinging shut behind her. The night air was cold, the city lights a blur of colors against the dark. She didn’t look back. Somewhere, a piano played a slow, familiar tune. Somewhere, a door slammed. Somewhere, a man’s voice called her name. She didn’t answer.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.303
leniency0.606
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount833
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount833
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"carried the weight"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"familiar"
count4
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"tracing"
2"carried the weight"
3"reminder"
4"silence"
5"familiar"
6"flickered"
7"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords824
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount705
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.27
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London3
Carter1
Rory3
Blackwood1
Aurora10
Silas16
Eva1
Cardiff2
Evan3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Blackwood"
4"Aurora"
5"Silas"
6"Eva"
7"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.365
windowScore0.333
98.98% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a reminder"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount824
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean18.31
std17.15
cv0.937
sampleLengths
081
151
29
36
418
535
623
715
848
97
1061
1110
126
1318
147
1528
165
1714
1810
195
2013
213
226
232
2420
256
2638
2711
287
2910
3033
318
3212
335
3420
357
3651
3716
387
3924
4010
416
4230
4319
443
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs132
matches(empty)
10.58% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences108
ratio0.046
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who knew her—stood at the counter, her fingers tracing the rim of a whiskey glass."
1"His beard was still neat, but his eyes—hazel now, not the deep brown of their youth—held a quiet weariness."
2"Somewhere, a piano played a slow, familiar tune—something Eva had always hated."
3"The man—someone she hadn’t seen in years—grinned, his fingers brushing against her arm."
4"The man—Evan, she realized—stared at her for a long moment before turning to Silas."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount714
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.0392156862745098
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0070028011204481795
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean7.63
std5.65
cv0.74
sampleLengths
025
119
218
37
412
520
619
75
83
94
109
113
123
132
148
158
1612
1717
186
1914
209
2110
225
236
2412
2523
267
277
283
294
3030
3111
3213
3310
343
353
3613
375
385
392
4013
4115
423
432
447
457
469
471
484
491
41.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2037037037037037
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners22
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences83
matches
0"Somewhere, a piano played a"
1"Somewhere, a door slammed."
2"Somewhere, a door slammed."
3"Somewhere, a piano played a"
4"Somewhere, a door slammed."
5"Somewhere, a man’s voice called"
ratio0.072
75.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences83
matches
0"She hadn’t come here for"
1"She’d come for the man"
2"His beard was still neat,"
3"He didn’t look up first."
4"She’d waited long enough."
5"he said, voice rougher than"
6"His left leg twitched beneath"
7"She’d forgotten how sharp it"
8"She didn’t have to."
9"She’d left Cardiff behind, left"
10"She’d come to London, to"
11"she said, voice quieter than"
12"She didn’t flinch."
13"he said, leaning in"
14"He just gestured to the"
15"She didn’t move."
16"he said, softer now"
17"She’d left him in Cardiff,"
18"She’d thought she’d never see"
19"She didn’t have to."
ratio0.361
8.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences83
matches
0"The neon glow of the"
1"Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who"
2"The scent of aged bourbon"
3"She hadn’t come here for"
4"She’d come for the man"
5"Silas Blackwood leaned against the"
6"His beard was still neat,"
7"He didn’t look up first."
8"That was fine."
9"She’d waited long enough."
10"he said, voice rougher than"
11"Aurora didn’t turn."
12"The kind of pause that"
13"The kind that carried the"
14"Silas said, finally meeting her"
15"His left leg twitched beneath"
16"Aurora took a sip of"
17"Silas exhaled through his nose,"
18"The bar’s hum filled the"
19"Rory turned then, just enough"
ratio0.904
60.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Now it felt like a"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, voice rougher than she remembered"
1"Silas said, not unkindly"
2"she said, voice quieter than she intended"
3"she said, quiet"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.6795%