Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY93KD1A1Y71BFSGCEN3PG2

Run Details

Duration:
43.8s
Cost:
$0.001757
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the Soho pavements outside The Raven's Nest, turning gutters into rushing veins. Aurora Carter shoved the door open, shoulder-length black hair plastered to her neck. She shook droplets from her jacket, the chill clinging like a bad memory. Dim light spilled across scarred wooden tables, old maps peeling at the edges on the walls—yellowed charts of forgotten coasts, black-and-white photographs of stern faces staring from another era. The air hung thick with peat smoke and spilled ale. Few patrons dotted the stools tonight. A couple hunched in the corner, murmuring over pints. Rory scanned the bar, bright blue eyes cutting through the haze. Her fingers brushed the crescent scar on her left wrist, habit from tense moments. She needed a drink, something to blunt the day's deliveries—endless boxes from Yu-Fei's Golden Empress, dodging traffic and ghosts. Behind the counter, Silas Blackwood wiped a glass with a rag, grey-streaked auburn hair catching the low lamp's glow. His neatly trimmed beard framed a jaw set in quiet focus. Silver signet ring glinted on his right hand as he moved. A slight hitch marked his left leg when he shifted weightecho of Prague, though no one here knew that tale. He looked up. Their eyes locked. Hazel met blue. The glass paused mid-circle. Rory froze mid-step. Silas set the tumbler down, deliberate. His fingers drummed once on the oak. "Rory Carter." She blinked, pulse kicking. Last time those hazel eyes fixed on her—God, fifteen years? Cardiff summers, her da's old mate dropping by with stories that made her ten-year-old world spin. Spymaster tales disguised as pub yarns. He promised her the stars once, or London at least. "Silas." Her voice cut flat, edged with rust. He leaned forward, elbows on the bar. The limp stayed hidden for now, but she clocked it—the subtle brace of his stance. "Christ. Sit. Pint?" She slid onto the stool, leather creaking under her. The bar top bore knife scars and ring stains, a map of nights long past. Her jacket dripped a puddle. "Whiskey. Neat." He poured, amber liquid sloshing precise. No ice clink. Pushed it over. She wrapped fingers around the glass, scar whitening under pressure. Sipped. Fire bloomed down her throat. "You look..." He trailed, eyes tracing her face—sharper cheekbones, shadows under those blue eyes. No girl anymore. "Older." She finished it, smirk faint. Set the glass down. "You too. Beard suits." He chuckled low, poured himself a finger. Raised it. "To ghosts." They clinked. Drank. Silence stretched, broken by rain lashing the window. A map behind him showed Istanbul, pins marking spots she imagined held secrets. "Been a while." His voice gravelled soft. "Last I heard, Cardiff Uni. Law books and all." She stared into the whiskey swirl. Da pushed that path—Brendan Carter, barrister sharp as a blade. Mum's Welsh lilt cheering from the sidelines. Until Evan. Fists and lies. She fled, Eva's call dragging her to London. "Dropped out." Flat. "Da still on about it?" Silas nodded once. "Saw him last year. Court function. Asked after you." Her gut twisted. Brendan never forgave the quit. "Tell him I'm grand." He eyed her wrist, scar peeking from sleeve cuff. She tugged the fabric down. "Delivery gig now?" He nodded at her jacket—Golden Empress logo faded on the pocket. "Yu-Fei's place. Pays rent upstairs." She jerked thumb ceilingward. Her flat above, cramped but hers. His brow arched. Signet ring tapped wood. "Upstairs? Since when?" "Month back. Didn't know it was yours till the sign buzzed green last night." He straightened, poured refills without asking. Steam rose faint from fresh glasses. "Opened this hole fifteen years ago. After the knee." He flexed left leg under counter, wince ghosting his face. "Prague. Botched drop. Bullet grazed bone." She leaned in, blue eyes narrowing. Kid-Silas ran marathons in her memory—da's fishing pal turned legend, MI6 whispers over tea. No limp then. "Spymaster Blackwood, hobbled." She raised glass. "World's cruel." He drank deep. "World's patient. You? Not the girl chasing my stories round the garden." Rain drummed harder. A patron laughed sharp from the corner. She traced glass rim. "Evan happened. Uni boyfriend. Turned sour." Silas's jaw tightened, beard shadowing the clench. "Heard fragments. Eva rang your da once." "Fragments." She snorted. "Fists first. Words later. Packed a bag, bolted." He reached across, stopped short of her hand. Ring caught light. "Should've called me." "You vanished." Her voice sharpened. "Da said you retired, went dark. No number, no Nest till now." "Needed quiet." His hazel eyes dropped to the bar. "Knee ended field work. Contacts dried. This—" Wave at walls, maps, photos. "Keeps the network humming. Front for old debts." She sipped, warmth spreading. Photos showed younger Silas—clean-shaven, auburn full, arm round strangers in trench coats. Istanbul pins, Prague shadows. "Debts." She echoed. "Like me?" He met her gaze, steady. "Promised your da. Watch the kid if trouble hit. Trouble hit." Regret hung unspoken, thick as smoke. Fifteen years. She pictured calling then—huddled in Eva's spare room, bruises blooming. His voice, gravel anchor. Instead, silence. "You changed." She tilted head. "No more shadows. Just pints." He limped around the bar end, fetched a stool. Sat opposite, knee protesting faint creak. "Shadows chew you hollow." Poured from bottle on shelf—label worn, single malt. "You changed more. Eyes harder. Scar new?" "Wrist." She extended arm, sleeve up. Crescent moon, faded white. "Evan's parting gift. Glass shard." Silas's fingers hovered, then dropped. "Bastard." "Past." She pulled back. "London suits. Deliveries dodge the hours. Upstairs flat—views of nothing, rent fair." He leaned back, beard twitching smile. "Stay. Proper." Patron called for tab. Silas rose, limped over, settled it cash-quick. Returned. "Network hears things." Voice low. "Evan surfaced. Cardiff outskirts." Her glass paused mid-air. Blue eyes flashed. "Stalking?" "Whispers. Bar talk." She drained whiskey, slammed glass. "Let him." Silence again. Maps rustled in a draft. Green neon hummed outside. "You were fire then." Silas murmured. "Outsmarted my riddles at ten. Quick head." "Still am." She met his eyes. "Just singed." He nodded slow. Signet ring spun on finger—habit. "Regret that?" "Uni. Da's face." She shrugged. "You? Spymaster to barkeep." "Every op." His voice roughened. "Prague mates gone. One bullet, my fault." Rain eased to drizzle. Couple left, bell tinkling. She slid cash across. "Another round." He poured. Glasses touched. "To what was." Drank. Conversation flowed jagged—Cardiff rains, da's cases, mum's Welsh songs. Her deliveries: dodging cabbies, Yu-Fei's sharp nods. His bar: hidden room through bookshelf, meetings in smoke. "You live above unfinished business." He said finally. Leg ached; he shifted. "Like you." She countered. Hazel eyes crinkled. "Touché." Door swung. New face, coat dripping. Silas rose, limped to serve. Rory watched. Time carved them—her from dreamer to survivor, him from hunter to watcher. Unspoken: roads not taken. His promise half-kept. Her call unsent. He returned, fresh pours. "Stick around, Rory. Nest needs fire." She smirked, scar itching. "Maybe." Rain picked up. Maps whispered secrets. Glasses gleamed. "Tell me a real one." She leaned elbows down. "Prague. Full." He settled, voice dropping to thread. "Checkpoint. Informant double-crossed..." Words wove night onward, regrets buried in tales, changes etched in silences. Bar emptied slow. Green sign buzzed sentinel. She listened, blue eyes alive flicker. Old friends, remade. Time's weight pressed, heavy, unmoving.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:40:56.114Z" 2/20/2026, 7:40:56 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She pulled back [back]"
1"He said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.329
leniency0.657
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.057
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1240
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1240
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"lilt"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count2
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"sentinel"
count1
14
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"scanned"
2"weight"
3"echo"
4"pulse"
5"tracing"
6"silence"
7"lilt"
8"traced"
9"warmth"
10"echoed"
11"unspoken"
12"etched"
13"sentinel"
14"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences153
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences197
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1207
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount915
uniqueNames25
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Carter2
Yu-Fei2
Golden2
Empress2
Silas10
Blackwood1
Prague2
God1
London2
Set1
Istanbul2
Brendan2
Welsh2
Evan1
Eva2
Wave1
Crescent1
Rain4
Cardiff2
Leg1
Hazel2
Rory3
persons
0"Nest"
1"Carter"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Empress"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
6"Set"
7"Brendan"
8"Evan"
9"Eva"
10"Rain"
11"Leg"
12"Hazel"
13"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Prague"
3"London"
4"Istanbul"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore0.954
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1207
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences197
matches
0"knew that tale"
1"pushed that path"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs88
mean13.72
std12.75
cv0.929
sampleLengths
079
159
261
36
47
53
613
72
846
98
1022
113
1229
132
1412
1516
1617
1714
189
192
203
2121
2216
2336
248
2512
2612
2714
2814
2915
3010
3114
3212
3325
3423
358
3615
3710
3810
3914
4011
4111
423
4317
4429
4520
465
4716
4824
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs217
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences16
totalSentences197
ratio0.081
matches
0"Dim light spilled across scarred wooden tables, old maps peeling at the edges on the walls—yellowed charts of forgotten coasts, black-and-white photographs of stern faces staring from another era."
1"She needed a drink, something to blunt the day's deliveries—endless boxes from Yu-Fei's Golden Empress, dodging traffic and ghosts."
2"A slight hitch marked his left leg when he shifted weight—echo of Prague, though no one here knew that tale."
3"Last time those hazel eyes fixed on her—God, fifteen years?"
4"The limp stayed hidden for now, but she clocked it—the subtle brace of his stance."
5"\"You look...\" He trailed, eyes tracing her face—sharper cheekbones, shadows under those blue eyes."
6"Da pushed that path—Brendan Carter, barrister sharp as a blade."
7"\"Delivery gig now?\" He nodded at her jacket—Golden Empress logo faded on the pocket."
8"Kid-Silas ran marathons in her memory—da's fishing pal turned legend, MI6 whispers over tea."
9"Photos showed younger Silas—clean-shaven, auburn full, arm round strangers in trench coats."
10"She pictured calling then—huddled in Eva's spare room, bruises blooming."
11"\"Shadows chew you hollow.\" Poured from bottle on shelf—label worn, single malt."
12"Signet ring spun on finger—habit."
13"Conversation flowed jagged—Cardiff rains, da's cases, mum's Welsh songs."
14"Leg ached; he shifted."
15"Time carved them—her from dreamer to survivor, him from hunter to watcher."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount945
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.022222222222222223
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0021164021164021165
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences197
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences197
mean6.13
std4.29
cv0.7
sampleLengths
014
113
213
329
410
56
69
711
814
919
1019
1111
1211
1320
143
153
163
174
183
196
207
212
224
2310
2416
256
2610
278
287
2915
303
319
3215
335
342
356
363
373
3810
391
405
4114
423
436
444
454
467
472
482
492
89.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5380710659898477
totalSentences197
uniqueOpeners106
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount62
totalSentences131
matches
0"She shook droplets from her"
1"Her fingers brushed the crescent"
2"She needed a drink, something"
3"His neatly trimmed beard framed"
4"He looked up."
5"Their eyes locked."
6"His fingers drummed once on"
7"She blinked, pulse kicking."
8"He promised her the stars"
9"Her voice cut flat, edged"
10"He leaned forward, elbows on"
11"She slid onto the stool,"
12"Her jacket dripped a puddle."
13"He poured, amber liquid sloshing"
14"She wrapped fingers around the"
15"He trailed, eyes tracing her"
16"She finished it, smirk faint"
17"He chuckled low, poured himself"
18"His voice gravelled soft"
19"She stared into the whiskey"
ratio0.473
40.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount110
totalSentences131
matches
0"Aurora Carter shoved the door"
1"She shook droplets from her"
2"The air hung thick with"
3"Few patrons dotted the stools"
4"A couple hunched in the"
5"Rory scanned the bar, bright"
6"Her fingers brushed the crescent"
7"She needed a drink, something"
8"His neatly trimmed beard framed"
9"A slight hitch marked his"
10"He looked up."
11"Their eyes locked."
12"Hazel met blue."
13"The glass paused mid-circle."
14"Rory froze mid-step."
15"Silas set the tumbler down,"
16"His fingers drummed once on"
17"She blinked, pulse kicking."
18"Cardiff summers, her da's old"
19"Spymaster tales disguised as pub"
ratio0.84
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rain hammered the Soho pavements outside The Raven's Nest, turning gutters into rushing veins."
1"Cardiff summers, her da's old mate dropping by with stories that made her ten-year-old world spin."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He flexed, wince ghosting his face"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Silas murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.057
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.029
81.8384%