| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.423 | | leniency | 0.846 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |
| 85.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1031 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "cautiously" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1031 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "echoes" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "resonance" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "throb" | | 8 | "encounter" | | 9 | "dancing" | | 10 | "resonated" | | 11 | "cascading" | | 12 | "flicker" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "lurch" | | 16 | "stomach" | | 17 | "scanned" | | 18 | "steeled" | | 19 | "resolve" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1027 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "other" | | 1 | "deeper" | | 2 | "compulsion" | | 3 | "towards" | | 4 | "something" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.79% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 860 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.74 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 6 | | Park | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Isolde | 9 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Waterloo | 1 | | Bridge | 1 | | Ahead | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Half-Fae" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Waterloo" | | 2 | "Bridge" | | 3 | "Veil" | | 4 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.628 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "as if testing the density of the air" | | 1 | "as if reading her mind" | | 2 | "shadows that seemed to twist and writhe with a life of their own" | | 3 | "something akin to spiced wine, but sharper, alm" | | 4 | "patterns that seemed to shift and rearrange themselves as she watched" | | 5 | "as if reciting an ancient litany" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 4.869 | | wordCount | 1027 | | matches | | 0 | "Not colder, not warmer, but…thicker" | | 1 | "not warmer, but…thicker" | | 2 | "not brighter, but *deeper*, bathing the grove in an ethereal glow" | | 3 | "Not a landscape, not a place, but a feeling" | | 4 | "not a place, but a feeling" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 31.12 | | std | 20.8 | | cv | 0.669 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 79 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 61 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 71 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 59 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 38 | | 32 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.07% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t coming" | | 1 | "were holding" | | 2 | "were swirling" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.05% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 864 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.04282407407407408 | | lyAdverbCount | 24 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.027777777777777776 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 93 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 93 | | mean | 11.04 | | std | 6.3 | | cv | 0.57 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 61.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.40860215053763443 | | totalSentences | 93 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "They weren’t hostile, not exactly," | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "She glanced down at her" | | 3 | "they murmured, their voice sounding" | | 4 | "It had been pulsing more" | | 5 | "She’d first received the pendant" | | 6 | "He’d simply pressed it into" | | 7 | "They ventured deeper." | | 8 | "Her lips moved silently, as" | | 9 | "She pulled it out, the" | | 10 | "She could feel a pull," | | 11 | "she said, her voice tight" | | 12 | "She scanned the clearing, following" | | 13 | "It led her to the" | | 14 | "It was subtle, barely visible," | | 15 | "she said, her voice barely" | | 16 | "She might be just a" | | 17 | "She clutched the Fae-Forged Blade" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 36.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shifted the moment" | | 1 | "Rory blinked, adjusting to the" | | 2 | "Isolde hadn’t said much, just" | | 3 | "Nyx, a shifting darkness beside" | | 4 | "Rory felt the familiar prickle" | | 5 | "They weren’t hostile, not exactly," | | 6 | "The grove wasn't what she’d" | | 7 | "Richmond Park was famed for" | | 8 | "The silence wasn’t peaceful, it" | | 9 | "Wildflowers, impossibly vibrant shades of" | | 10 | "Each petal shimmered with a" | | 11 | "Rory bent down and touched" | | 12 | "The Half-Fae didn't answer immediately," | | 13 | "Possibilities didn't reassure Rory." | | 14 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 15 | "Isolde had gifted it to" | | 16 | "She glanced down at her" | | 17 | "A nervous tick." | | 18 | "Isolde replied, her voice barely" | | 19 | "Nyx moved ahead, their form" |
| | ratio | 0.847 | |
| 69.44% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, with all three of" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 73.17% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory blinked, adjusting to the diffuse glow that wasn’t coming from the sun, which was entirely obscured by the canopy even before they’d crossed the boundary m…" | | 1 | "Nyx, a shifting darkness beside her, made no sound, only subtly altering their form, thinning and solidifying as if testing the density of the air." | | 2 | "The silence wasn’t peaceful, it was expectant, as if the trees themselves were holding their breath." | | 3 | "The trees grew taller, their branches intertwining overhead, blotting out the last vestiges of the ordinary sky." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde replied, her voice barely a whisper" | | 1 | "they murmured, their voice sounding like wind chimes in a graveyard" | | 2 | "Isolde said, as if reading her mind" | | 3 | "Nyx commented, their form flickering" | | 4 | "Isolde whispered, her voice strained" | | 5 | "she said, her voice tight" | | 6 | "she said, her voice barely a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "He’d simply (would)" | | 3 | "Nyx commented (comment)" | | 4 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.423 | | leniency | 0.846 | | rawRatio | 0.455 | | effectiveRatio | 0.385 | |