Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9421E45DECV1RS4E5MF3Z

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
2m 27s
Cost:
$0.064670
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, its three deadbolts already unlatched from Rory's earlier fumbling. She peered out, one hand gripping the edge, the scent of curry wafting up from the shop below. Rain slicked the Brick Lane pavement outside, turning the streetlights into hazy orbs. Her bright blue eyes widened at the figure on the threshold. Lucien Moreau stood there, water beading on his tailored charcoal suit, platinum hair slicked back without a strand out of place. His heterochromatic gaze locked on her—one amber eye warm like embers, the other black as void. He leaned on that ivory-handled cane, the one she knew hid a blade sharper than regret. "Rory." His voice carried that faint Marseille lilt, smooth as aged wine. No hello, no apology. Just her name, like it belonged to him. She froze, fingers tightening on the door. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, slunk around her ankles, brushing fur against her jeans. The flat behind her sprawled in chaos—books piled on every surface, ancient scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, notes scribbled in margins about demonic realms and underworld pacts. Research she'd buried herself in since he'd vanished. "You've got some nerve showing up here." She stepped back, but didn't slam the door. Her shoulder-length black hair fell forward as she crossed her arms, hiding the small crescent scar on her left wrist. The one from childhood, the one he'd kissed once, tracing it with lips that promised more. He didn't move. Rain dripped from his collar. "Nerve? That's rich coming from the woman who once outmaneuvered a room full of shadow dealers." "Flattery won't get you inside." But her pulse quickened, betraying her. Memories flooded back—the way his hands had mapped her skin in a dingy hotel room off the Thames, the hurt when he'd slipped away before dawn, leaving only a note: *It's safer this way.* Lucien tilted his head, amber eye catching the light. "Then what will? The truth? I didn't come for games." She laughed, sharp and short. Ptolemy meowed, weaving between her legs before darting toward the kitchenette. "Truth from you? That's a first. Last time, you left me with half a story and a broken lockpick." His black eye narrowed. He tapped the cane once against the doorstep, a habit she remembered from tense negotiations in smoke-filled backrooms. "Evan was closing in. Your ex—the one with fists like hammers. I handled it." "Handled it?" She pushed the door wider, anger flaring. The cramped one-bedroom flat felt smaller already, walls closing in with stacks of leather-bound tomes on fae lore and demon hierarchies. "You disappeared for months. No call, no message. Just poof, like some ghost in one of these bloody scrolls." He stepped forward, crossing the threshold without invitation. The door clicked shut behind him, sealing them in. His suit carried the scent of rain and something darker, like brimstone faint on the wind. "Ghosts don't bleed, Rory. And I did bleed for you." She turned away, striding to the kitchen counter cluttered with takeaway containers from Golden Empress. Her part-time gig there kept her afloat, but right now, it mocked her. "Save the dramatics. You're half-demon. Bleeding's just foreplay in your world." Lucien followed, cane thumping softly on the threadbare rug. He set it against the wall, movements precise. "Foreplay? Is that what you call what we had?" "Don't." She whirled, bright blue eyes flashing. Ptolemy jumped onto the counter, tail flicking as he eyed the intruder. "We had nothing. A few nights, some stolen moments in your underworld deals. Then you bailed when it got real." He closed the distance, his presence filling the room. One hand reached out, hesitating inches from her arm. "Real? You think I didn't feel it? That pull, like Avaros itself dragging me under?" She batted his hand away, but her fingers lingered a second too long on his skin. Warm, alive, not the cold she'd imagined in her angriest dreams. "Then why leave? Why not say it?" "Say what?" His voice dropped, amber eye searching her face. Rain pattered against the window, the curry house below humming with muffled voices. "That you wanted more." She swallowed, throat tight. The scar on her wrist itched, a phantom ache. "That it wasn't just convenience. Me, the human girl crashing your supernatural party, and you, the fixer with secrets stacked higher than these books." Lucien exhaled, running a hand through his slicked-back hair, disrupting the perfection. Strands fell forward, softening his sharp features. "Because wanting more means risk. My father's realm—Avaros—doesn't forgive attachments. They exploit them." "Excuses." She backed against the counter, Ptolemy leaping down to rub against Lucien's leg, traitor that he was. "You could've trusted me. I'm not some fragile thing. I left Evan, fled Cardiff, built this life. Delivery runs by day, dodging your kind by night." He smirked, but it didn't reach his eyes. "Dodging? You've been neck-deep in it. These scrolls—research on half-breeds like me? Or on how to bind one?" Her cheeks heated. She'd scavenged those texts from black-market dealers, piecing together what his demon side meant. The attraction had started as curiosity, bloomed into something fierce during late-night stakeouts in London's underbelly. But the hurt? That came when he'd chosen silence over them. "Not binding. Understanding." She shoved a stack of notes aside, yellowed pages fluttering. "You never explained. Just kissed me like it was goodbye and vanished." Lucien's black eye darkened further. He gripped the counter's edge, knuckles white. "Goodbye? It was protection. Evan tracked you to London. I made sure he wouldn't bother you again." She stilled. The air thickened, charged like the storm outside. "What did you do?" "Nothing permanent." His tone edged sharper. "A warning. The kind that sticks." "You had no right." But relief flickered through her, unwanted. Evan—the abusive shadow from her past, the reason Eva had urged her to London. She'd thought she'd escaped on her own terms. Lucien pushed off the counter, closing in again. His breath ghosted her cheek. "Rights? In our world, survival trumps them. But you're right—I should've stayed. Faced it with you." She met his gaze, blue clashing with amber and black. Heat built between them, the old spark igniting. "Then why come back now? Another job? Information you need?" "No." He cupped her face, thumb brushing her jaw. Gentle, but firm. "You. Us. The things I left unsaid." Her heart hammered. She leaned into his touch, despite herself. Ptolemy circled their feet, purring low. The flat's chaos faded—the books, the scrolls, the deadbolts—leaving only them. "Unsaid?" She whispered, lips inches from his. "Like what?" "Like how every deal I brokered since tasted empty without you there, thinking three steps ahead." His other hand found her waist, pulling her closer. "Like how your laugh cut through the noise of Marseille streets in my dreams." She gripped his lapels, fabric damp under her fingers. "You dreamed of me?" "Every night." His mouth hovered over hers. "And woke cursing myself for leaving." The kiss came fierce, no hesitation. His lips claimed hers, tasting of rain and unresolved fire. She responded, hands sliding up to his neck, tangling in platinum strands. The cane clattered forgotten against the wall. Hurt melted into hunger, things unsaid pouring out in the press of bodies. He broke away first, forehead against hers. "Rory—Aurora—I never stopped wanting this." She traced his heterochromatic eyes with her gaze. "Then don't leave again." "I won't." His arms tightened around her. "But there's more. Evan—he's not the only threat. My father's pulling strings from Avaros." She pulled back slightly, scanning his face. "Tell me everything. No secrets this time." Lucien nodded, black eye gleaming. "Everything. Starting with why I came tonight." Ptolemy meowed insistently, batting at a fallen scroll. She scooped him up, setting him on a chair piled with research. The flat smelled of curry and old paper, a reminder of her pieced-together life. "Start talking." She poured two mugs of tea from the kettle, handing him one. Steam curled between them. "And make it good. I've got deadbolts for a reason." He accepted the mug, fingers brushing hers deliberately. "It begins with a deal gone south. One that involves your friend Eva." Her grip tightened on her mug. Eva—the one who'd dragged her to London, the childhood mate now neck-deep in her own supernatural tangles. "What about her?" Lucien sipped, expression turning grave. "She's missing. And I think it's tied to why I left you." Rage bubbled up, mixing with the lingering heat of their kiss. "Missing? And you're just telling me now?" "I came straight here." He set the mug down, reclaiming his cane. "We need to find her. Together." She slammed her mug on the counter, tea sloshing. "You think you can waltz in, kiss me, and drop this bomb?" His amber eye sparked. "Not think. Know. Because you're the only one I trust with this." Trust. The word hung heavy. She paced the small space, kicking aside a book on demon pacts. Ptolemy watched from his perch, tail twitching. "Fine." She stopped, facing him. "But we do it my way. No vanishing acts." "Agreed." He extended a hand. She took it, their palms sealing the pact. Electricity shot through her, old attraction roaring back. Hurt lingered, but so did possibility. They moved to the coffee table, unrolling a map of London's hidden alleys amid the scrolls. His shoulder brushed hers as they leaned in, planning the search. Rain hammered the window, but inside, the storm shifted— from parting to reunion. Hours slipped by in murmurs and shared glances. Lucien's multilingual whispers translated ancient texts, his voice a low rumble that sent shivers down her spine. She countered with quick insights, her mind racing ahead as always. When fatigue hit, she collapsed onto the sagging sofa, him beside her. His arm draped over her shoulders, natural as breathing. "You stayed." She murmured, head on his chest. "For good." He kissed her hair. Ptolemy curled at their feet, the flat quiet except for the rain. Unsaid words found voice in the dark, weaving them closer. Attraction burned brighter, hurt fading to scars—like the one on her wrist, now traced again by his fingers.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
1"His arms tightened around [around]"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.355
leniency0.71
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.065
91.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1722
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1722
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"lilt"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"quickened"
count1
4
word"disrupting"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"traced"
count2
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"gleaming"
count1
11
word"reminder"
count1
12
word"grave"
count1
13
word"roaring"
count1
14
word"sent shivers down"
count1
15
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"lilt"
1"tracing"
2"pulse"
3"quickened"
4"disrupting"
5"silence"
6"charged"
7"flickered"
8"traced"
9"scanning"
10"gleaming"
11"reminder"
12"grave"
13"roaring"
14"sent shivers down"
15"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences122
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences162
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords4
totalWords1694
ratio0.002
matches
0"It's safer this way."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1178
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.85
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory1
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
Marseille1
Memories1
Thames1
Lucien10
Golden1
Empress1
Ptolemy8
Rain4
London4
Evan1
Eva2
Gentle1
Steam1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Memories"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Rain"
6"Evan"
7"Eva"
8"Steam"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"Thames"
4"Golden"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1694
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences162
matches(empty)
91.80% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean27.77
std13.09
cv0.471
sampleLengths
055
153
224
356
451
524
645
719
835
936
1049
1143
1239
1326
1439
1533
1634
1723
1841
1932
2044
2126
2244
2325
2429
2514
2612
2732
2829
2928
3019
3127
329
3339
3413
3513
3648
3712
3812
3921
4014
4112
4234
4328
4421
4526
4617
4718
4818
4921
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs222
matches(empty)
1.76% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences162
ratio0.049
matches
0"His heterochromatic gaze locked on her—one amber eye warm like embers, the other black as void."
1"The flat behind her sprawled in chaos—books piled on every surface, ancient scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, notes scribbled in margins about demonic realms and underworld pacts."
2"Memories flooded back—the way his hands had mapped her skin in a dingy hotel room off the Thames, the hurt when he'd slipped away before dawn, leaving only a note: *It's safer this way.*"
3"Evan—the abusive shadow from her past, the reason Eva had urged her to London."
4"The flat's chaos faded—the books, the scrolls, the deadbolts—leaving only them."
5"Eva—the one who'd dragged her to London, the childhood mate now neck-deep in her own supernatural tangles."
6"Rain hammered the window, but inside, the storm shifted— from parting to reunion."
7"Attraction burned brighter, hurt fading to scars—like the one on her wrist, now traced again by his fingers."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1196
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03177257525083612
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005852842809364548
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences162
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences162
mean10.46
std5.37
cv0.514
sampleLengths
013
118
213
311
421
516
616
712
84
98
107
1113
1228
138
1415
1520
1616
173
185
1916
2011
2134
229
2310
245
2511
2619
274
2818
2914
309
3121
3219
338
349
3516
3610
3715
3813
3911
409
418
429
437
4412
4520
469
479
4815
4916
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4074074074074074
totalSentences162
uniqueOpeners66
27.78% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences120
matches
0"Just her name, like it"
ratio0.008
10.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount63
totalSentences120
matches
0"She peered out, one hand"
1"Her bright blue eyes widened"
2"His heterochromatic gaze locked on"
3"He leaned on that ivory-handled"
4"His voice carried that faint"
5"She froze, fingers tightening on"
6"She stepped back, but didn't"
7"Her shoulder-length black hair fell"
8"He didn't move."
9"She laughed, sharp and short."
10"His black eye narrowed."
11"He tapped the cane once"
12"She pushed the door wider,"
13"He stepped forward, crossing the"
14"His suit carried the scent"
15"She turned away, striding to"
16"Her part-time gig there kept"
17"He set it against the"
18"She whirled, bright blue eyes"
19"He closed the distance, his"
ratio0.525
14.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount107
totalSentences120
matches
0"The door creaked open, its"
1"She peered out, one hand"
2"Rain slicked the Brick Lane"
3"Her bright blue eyes widened"
4"Lucien Moreau stood there, water"
5"His heterochromatic gaze locked on"
6"He leaned on that ivory-handled"
7"His voice carried that faint"
8"She froze, fingers tightening on"
9"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, slunk"
10"The flat behind her sprawled"
11"Research she'd buried herself in"
12"She stepped back, but didn't"
13"Her shoulder-length black hair fell"
14"The one from childhood, the"
15"He didn't move."
16"Rain dripped from his collar."
17"Memories flooded back—the way his"
18"Lucien tilted his head, amber"
19"She laughed, sharp and short."
ratio0.892
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She responded, hands sliding up to his neck, tangling in platinum strands."
1"Lucien's multilingual whispers translated ancient texts, his voice a low rumble that sent shivers down her spine."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"But relief flickered, unwanted"
1"He cupped, thumb brushing her jaw"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She whispered (whisper)"
1"She murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.032
leniency0.065
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.065
81.1215%