Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY952GTM19H3AFQRSS026WB

Run Details

Duration:
19.4s
Cost:
$0.000164
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against the corrugated iron roof of Silas’ bar, a relentless, drumming rhythm that usually soothed Rory. Tonight, it just amplified the thud in her chest. A hesitant knock vibrated through the cheap wood. She hadn’t expected anyone. Not after the way things ended with Lucien Moreau. She opened the door. He stood there, leaning against the frame, a tailored charcoal suit clinging to him despite the humidity. The rain plastered his platinum blond hair to his forehead, highlighting the disconcerting, mismatched colours of his eyes – amber and black swirling like oil. Lucien Moreau. A ghost she’d deliberately avoided for nearly two years. “You’re late,” she stated, already stepping back to let him in. The space above Silas’ bar was predictably chaotic: overflowing ashtrays, half-empty bottles of whiskey, and the lingering scent of stale beer and regret. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, regarded him with cautious disinterest from his perch atop a precarious stack of vinyl records. “Time is a fluid concept when dealing with certain… clientele,” he replied, his voice a smooth, accented baritone. He didn’t step inside immediately. Instead, he surveyed the flat with a detached, almost clinical, gaze. “It’s…smaller than I remember.” “It’s the price of living above a curry house,” Rory said, gesturing vaguely at the window overlooking Brick Lane. The neon glow of the Golden Empress restaurant bled through the rain-streaked glass. “You haven’t changed much,” he observed, his gaze lingering on her black hair, now pulled back into a messy braid. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist was still there, a pale, subtle reminder of a past she’d tried to bury. “Neither have you,” she countered, crossing her arms. The silence stretched, thick with unspoken history. He finally stepped inside, his movements precise, economical. He didn’t offer to take her coat. Didn’t even glance at Ptolemy. He moved directly to the small, scarred table by the window, pulling up a chair with a deliberate scrape. “I needed to see you,” he said, his voice low. “Is this about the package?” she asked, the words clipped and guarded. The package had been an assignment – a retrieval job that had brought him, and a fresh wave of uncomfortable memories, crashing back into her life. He didn’t immediately answer. He took a slow sip of something from a small, crystal tumbler. “It’s…complicated.” “Everything with you is complicated,” Rory retorted, turning to stare out at the rain. The city lights blurred into hazy streaks. “That’s a remarkably reductive assessment, considering the circumstances,” he said, his tone laced with a hint of amusement. “The circumstances being you vanishing without a word, leaving me to pick up the pieces after…after Evan,” she said, her voice tight. The name tasted like ash in her mouth. “I knew what I was doing,” he stated, his amber eye hardening. “It wasn't a decision I made lightly.” “Right,” she said, a sardonic smile twisting her lips. “Because running off to Marseille to spend time with a demon father is *totally* a rational response to a messy breakup.” He finally met her gaze, and the effect was disorienting. There was a depth in those mismatched eyes, a flicker of something she couldn’t quite decipher – regret? Perhaps something darker. “My father needs my assistance. Avaros isn’t exactly a welcoming place for half-breeds.” “And I suppose you felt a sudden urge to be a good son?” “It’s not about obligation,” he said, his voice gaining intensity. “It’s about… survival. And perhaps, a little bit of wanting to understand.” Rory shifted uncomfortably. Understanding was a luxury she couldn’t afford. “Don’t. Just don’t.” He ignored her, reaching into his inner pocket and producing a small, intricately carved wooden box. He placed it on the table between them. The wood was dark, polished to a sheen, and felt strangely warm to the touch. “This was part of the package. Untouched.” She cautiously examined the box. It contained a single, iridescent raven’s feather. “What does it mean?” “It signifies a shift in allegiance,” he said, his voice barely a whisper. “The sender wants someone else to take over the job. Someone… more discreet.” “And you think I'm discreet?" “You’re resourceful. Quick. You don’t announce your intentions. You simply *do*.” Rory considered him, weighing his words, assessing his motives. There was a desperation in his eyes that she hadn’t noticed before, a vulnerability beneath the carefully constructed facade of the aloof, impeccably dressed fixer. “Why now?” she asked, her voice quieter. He hesitated, his gaze flicking to the rain-streaked window, then back to her. “Because I realized I was running away. From you. From everything.” The admission hung in the air, a fragile, tentative thing. Rory felt a strange pull, a knot of conflicting emotions tightening in her stomach. The hurt, the anger, the frustration – they were still there, a familiar ache. But beneath it all, something else stirred. A flicker of the attraction they’d both tried so desperately to extinguish. “It’s been two years, Lucien,” she said, her voice laced with a bitterness she didn’t entirely feel. “A lot of things have happened.” “Some things never change,” he countered, his voice soft, almost pleading. He rose from the chair and moved towards her, his movements fluid, graceful. She instinctively stepped back, but he stopped a few feet away, his hand reaching out to gently brush a stray strand of hair from her face. The touch sent a jolt through her, a sudden, unexpected surge of heat. She stared into his heterochromatic eyes, searching for an answer, a hint of the man she’d once known, the man who had captivated her with his intelligence, his charm, and the unsettling darkness that lay beneath the surface. “You’re still a mess,” she said, her voice strained, a defense mechanism she’d perfected over the years. A ghost of a smile touched his lips. "Perhaps. But a mess you still find intriguing.” He leaned closer, his breath ghosting across her cheek. The rain continued to fall, drumming a steady rhythm against the roof, a counterpoint to the quiet intensity of the moment between them. The scent of rain and something else – something faintly metallic and vaguely demonic – filled the small flat. “The package is yours," he murmured, his voice a low rumble. “But I think you deserve a little something more.” He tilted his head, and for a fleeting second, Rory saw a glimpse of the boy she’d fallen for – a boy driven by a reckless curiosity, a thirst for adventure, and a devastatingly charming smile. Then, he straightened, the enigmatic mask sliding back into place. “Consider it collateral.”
created_at"2026-02-20T19:41:44.356Z" 2/20/2026, 7:41:44 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.541
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1100
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"cautiously"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"lightly"
2"cautiously"
3"carefully"
4"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1100
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"crystal"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count2
7
word"intensity"
count2
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"constructed"
count1
10
word"facade"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"charm"
count1
14
word"intriguing"
count1
15
word"fleeting"
count1
16
word"enigmatic"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"chaotic"
2"reminder"
3"silence"
4"unspoken"
5"crystal"
6"flicker"
7"intensity"
8"whisper"
9"constructed"
10"facade"
11"stomach"
12"familiar"
13"charm"
14"intriguing"
15"fleeting"
16"enigmatic"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1102
ratio0.002
matches
0"totally"
1"do"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount817
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Tonight1
Lucien2
Moreau2
Ptolemy2
Eva1
Brick1
Lane1
Golden1
Empress1
Rory6
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"Ptolemy"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
65.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like ash in her mouth"
1"quite decipher – regret"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1102
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean26.88
std15.05
cv0.56
sampleLengths
049
14
253
353
438
532
641
715
839
910
1038
1117
1221
1318
1430
1519
1630
1744
1813
1922
2013
2139
227
2316
2426
255
2611
2734
287
2924
3057
3123
3211
3339
3451
3517
3616
3751
3820
3936
4013
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs139
matches
0"was disorienting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences91
ratio0.066
matches
0"The rain plastered his platinum blond hair to his forehead, highlighting the disconcerting, mismatched colours of his eyes – amber and black swirling like oil."
1"The package had been an assignment – a retrieval job that had brought him, and a fresh wave of uncomfortable memories, crashing back into her life."
2"There was a depth in those mismatched eyes, a flicker of something she couldn’t quite decipher – regret?"
3"The hurt, the anger, the frustration – they were still there, a familiar ache."
4"The scent of rain and something else – something faintly metallic and vaguely demonic – filled the small flat."
5"He tilted his head, and for a fleeting second, Rory saw a glimpse of the boy she’d fallen for – a boy driven by a reckless curiosity, a thirst for adventure, and a devastatingly charming smile."
99.40% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount193
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.03626943005181347
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.02072538860103627
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean12.11
std7.07
cv0.584
sampleLengths
019
19
28
34
49
54
617
725
82
99
1011
1123
1219
1318
145
1511
164
1719
1813
1920
2021
218
227
238
247
255
2619
2710
2812
2926
304
3112
321
3314
347
3518
3622
378
3812
397
409
4121
4210
4318
443
4513
4613
4710
4812
493
53.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.37362637362637363
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences72
matches
0"Instead, he surveyed the flat"
1"Perhaps something darker."
2"Then, he straightened, the enigmatic"
ratio0.042
14.44% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences72
matches
0"She hadn’t expected anyone."
1"She opened the door."
2"He stood there, leaning against"
3"she stated, already stepping back"
4"he replied, his voice a"
5"He didn’t step inside immediately."
6"he observed, his gaze lingering"
7"she countered, crossing her arms"
8"He finally stepped inside, his"
9"He didn’t offer to take"
10"He moved directly to the"
11"he said, his voice low"
12"she asked, the words clipped"
13"He didn’t immediately answer."
14"He took a slow sip"
15"he said, his tone laced"
16"she said, her voice tight"
17"he stated, his amber eye"
18"she said, a sardonic smile"
19"He finally met her gaze,"
ratio0.514
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences72
matches
0"The rain hammered against the"
1"Tonight, it just amplified the"
2"A hesitant knock vibrated through"
3"She hadn’t expected anyone."
4"She opened the door."
5"He stood there, leaning against"
6"The rain plastered his platinum"
7"A ghost she’d deliberately avoided"
8"she stated, already stepping back"
9"The space above"
10"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, regarded"
11"he replied, his voice a"
12"He didn’t step inside immediately."
13"Rory said, gesturing vaguely at"
14"The neon glow of the"
15"he observed, his gaze lingering"
16"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
17"she countered, crossing her arms"
18"The silence stretched, thick with"
19"He finally stepped inside, his"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The package had been an assignment – a retrieval job that had brought him, and a fresh wave of uncomfortable memories, crashing back into her life."
1"She stared into his heterochromatic eyes, searching for an answer, a hint of the man she’d once known, the man who had captivated her with his intelligence, his…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"he replied, his voice a smooth, accented baritone"
1"he said, his voice low"
2"she asked, the words clipped and guarded"
3"Rory retorted, turning to stare out at the rain"
4"she said, her voice tight"
5"he stated, his amber eye hardening"
6"she said, a sardonic smile twisting her lips"
7"he said, his voice gaining intensity"
8"he said, his voice barely a whisper"
9"she asked, her voice quieter"
10"he countered, his voice soft, almost pleading"
11"he murmured, his voice a low rumble"
14.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she stated (state)"
1"he observed (observe)"
2"Rory retorted (retort)"
3"he stated (state)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.459
leniency0.919
rawRatio0.294
effectiveRatio0.27
73.6839%