Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY95T1CQH3PX89EQAD05D1X

Run Details

Duration:
9.5s
Cost:
$0.000385
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon glow of the Raven’s Nest pulsed like a slow heartbeat against the damp London night, casting jagged shadows across the bar’s worn wooden floor. Aurora Carter—Rory, as she preferred—leaned against the counter, her fingers tracing the rim of her whiskey glass. The amber liquid sloshed inside, catching the light just enough to make her eyes, that bright blue thing, seem to glow faintly. She hadn’t come here for the drink. Not really. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, his hands steady despite the slight limp in his left leg. He turned, wiping his palms on a rag, and his hazel eyes locked onto her before he set the rag down. The signet ring on his right hand gleamed under the neon, a silent reminder of the life he’d left behind. “You’re here,” he said, voice low, almost a growl. Not a greeting. A statement. Aurora exhaled through her nose, the breath curling around her scarred wrist. She’d forgotten how sharp his gaze could be. “I came for the whiskey.” Silas didn’t move, didn’t reach for her. “You look different.” She didn’t flinch. “So do you.” The air between them thickened, heavy with the weight of years. The bar’s walls, lined with old maps and black-and-white photos, seemed to hold their breath. Rory had been gone too long. Too long to notice how the lines around his mouth had deepened, how his beard had thickened, how the way he carried himself—quiet but unmistakably commanding—hadn’t changed, but everything else had. “You’re not the same girl who used to drag me out of bars at three in the morning,” Silas said, his voice rough. “You’re not the one who’d laugh at my jokes even when they were bad.” Aurora didn’t smile. “I’m not the girl who’d let Evan touch me like he did.” Silas’s jaw tightened. “Evan.” “Yeah.” She took a slow sip of whiskey, the burn sharp and immediate. “He was a mistake. A bad one.” Silas didn’t press. He just watched her, his expression unreadable. The bar’s hum filled the silence, the clink of glasses, the murmur of voices from the other end. Rory could feel the weight of it all pressing down on her shoulders, the ghosts of what she’d left behind, the life she’d built in London, the way she’d tried to forget. “You’re working at Golden Empress now,” Silas said finally. “Cheung’s place.” Aurora nodded. “Part-time. Delivery. It’s not much, but it’s something.” Silas’s lips curled slightly. “You’re still smart.” She didn’t deny it. “I’m still Rory.” “No, you’re not.” His voice was softer now, almost kind. “You’re Aurora.” The words hung between them, heavy with meaning. Rory looked away, her gaze flicking over the bar’s cluttered shelves, the flickering neon sign above the door. She’d come here for the whiskey, but she’d come for the memory too. The way Silas had looked at her then, the way he still looked at her now—like she was something worth saving. “You’re still in London?” Silas asked, breaking the silence. Aurora hesitated. “Yeah. For now.” Silas didn’t ask why. He just reached across the bar and slid a glass toward her, the amber liquid already poured. “Drink.” She did. The whiskey burned, but it was the taste of something else that lingered—old friendship, unspoken regrets, the quiet ache of a life that had changed, but not gone. The bar’s lights flickered, casting long shadows across Silas’s face. He watched her, his expression unreadable once more. “You ever miss it?” Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Silas didn’t answer right away. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a folded piece of paper, handing it to her. The bar’s hum filled the silence as she unfolded it, her fingers brushing over the inked words. *To Rory, wherever you are—* She looked up at Silas, her eyes wide. “What is this?” “A letter,” he said, his voice rough. “From Prague.” Rory’s breath hitched. “From when you were still in the service.” Silas nodded. “You ever read it?” She shook her head, her fingers tightening around the paper. “No.” Silas didn’t press. He just watched her, his expression unreadable once more. The bar’s hum filled the silence, the weight of the past pressing down on them both. “You’re still in London?” Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Silas didn’t answer right away. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a folded piece of paper, handing it to her. The bar’s hum filled the silence as she unfolded it, her fingers brushing over the inked words. “You ever miss it?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Silas didn’t answer. Instead, he stood, his limp more pronounced now, and stepped closer to the bar. The neon sign above the door pulsed, casting long shadows across the room. “You’re still smart,” he said, his voice rough. “You’re still Rory.” She didn’t deny it. “I’m still Aurora.” Silas reached across the bar and slid another glass toward her, the amber liquid already poured. “Drink.” She did. The whiskey burned, but the taste of something else lingered—old friendship, the quiet ache of a life that had changed, but not gone. The bar’s lights flickered, casting long shadows across Silas’s face. “You ever miss it?” Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Silas didn’t answer. He just watched her, his expression unreadable. The silence stretched, thick with the weight of years, of unspoken words, of lives that had diverged and yet remained intertwined. Aurora took another sip of whiskey, the burn sharp and immediate. She looked up at Silas, her eyes reflecting the flickering neon. “You ever miss it?” she repeated, her voice barely above a whisper. Silas didn’t answer. He just reached into his pocket, pulling out another piece of paper, and placed it on the bar between them. The bar’s hum filled the silence, the weight of the past pressing down on them both. Rory unfolded the paper, her fingers brushing over the inked words. She read them once, twice, before she looked up at Silas, her eyes wide with something she couldn’t quite name. “You’re still smart,” Silas said, his voice rough. “You’re still Rory.” Aurora didn’t say anything. She just watched him, the weight of the past pressing down on her shoulders, the ghosts of what she’d left behind, the life she’d built in London. Silas reached across the bar, his hand steady despite the slight limp in his left leg. He took her hand in his, his fingers warm and sure. “You’re still Aurora,” he said, his voice low and firm. “And I’m still Silas.” The bar’s lights flickered, casting long shadows across the room. Rory looked down at their joined hands, the weight of the past pressing down on them both. “You ever miss it?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Silas didn’t answer. He just watched her, his expression unreadable, his hand still holding hers. The silence stretched, thick with the weight of years, of unspoken words, of lives that had changed and yet remained intertwined. Aurora took another sip of whiskey, the burn sharp and immediate, the taste of something else lingering on her tongue. Silas pulled his hand back, his expression unreadable. “Come on,” he said, his voice rough. “Let’s get you home.” Aurora didn’t move right away. She just watched him, the weight of the past pressing down on her, the ghosts of what she’d left behind. Silas reached into his pocket again, pulling out a key. He placed it on the bar between them. “For your flat,” he said, his voice low and firm. “The one above my bar.” Aurora didn’t speak. She just took the key, her fingers brushing over it, feeling the weight of it in her palm. Silas turned to leave, his limp more pronounced now, the neon sign above the door pulsing faintly. “You ever miss it?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Silas didn’t look back. He just nodded once, his expression unreadable, and stepped out into the night. Aurora watched him go, the weight of the past pressing down on her shoulders. She took the key in her hand, the weight of it familiar, the ghosts of what she’d left behind lingering in the air. She turned to leave, her footsteps echoing softly against the bar’s worn floor. The neon sign above the door pulsed, casting long shadows across the room, the weight of the past pressing down on her. Aurora walked out into the night, the key in her pocket, the weight of the past pressing down on her. She looked back at the Raven’s Nest, the neon sign glowing faintly, the ghosts of what she’d left behind lingering in the air. She took a deep breath, the night air cool and fresh against her face. The weight of the past pressed down on her, but she didn’t look back. She walked on, her footsteps echoing softly against the pavement, the ghosts of what she’d left behind behind her. Silas stood at the bar’s entrance, his hand resting on the door handle. The neon sign pulsed, casting long shadows across the street. Aurora paused, her gaze fixed on him, the weight of the past pressing down on her. “You ever miss it?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Silas didn’t answer. He just watched her, his expression unreadable, the weight of the past pressing down on them both. Aurora took a step forward, her key still in her hand. She reached out, her fingers brushing over the handle, the weight of the past pressing down on her. Silas didn’t move. He just watched her, his expression unreadable, the weight of the past pressing down on them. Aurora turned the handle, the door creaking open. The night air rushed in, cool and fresh, the weight of the past pressing down on her. She stepped inside, her gaze fixed on Silas, the weight of the past pressing down on them both. Silas didn’t follow. He just watched her, his expression unreadable, the weight of the past pressing down on them. Aurora walked toward the door, her key still in her hand. She paused, her gaze flicking over the bar’s cluttered shelves, the flickering neon sign above the door. Silas didn’t move. He just stood there, the weight of the past pressing down on them both. Aurora turned back, her breath coming in shallow gasps. The weight of the past pressed down on her, but she didn’t look away. Silas reached into his pocket, pulling out another piece of paper. He handed it to her, his expression unreadable. Aurora unfolded it, her fingers brushing over the inked words. She read them once, twice, before she looked up at Silas, her eyes wide. “You’re still smart,” he said, his voice rough. “You’re still Rory.” She didn’t say anything. She just watched him, the weight of the past pressing down on her. Silas reached across the bar, his hand steady despite the slight limp. He took her hand in his, his fingers warm and sure. “You’re still Aurora,” he said, his voice low and firm. Aurora pulled her hand back, her expression unyielding. “I’m not coming back.” Silas didn’t argue. He just nodded, his expression unreadable, and turned to leave. Aurora watched him go, the weight of the past pressing down on her. She took the key in her hand, the weight of it familiar, and stepped out into the night. The door closed behind Silas, the weight of the past pressing down on her. Aurora stood there, the key in her hand, the weight of the past pressing down on her. She took a deep breath, the night air cool and fresh against her face. The weight of the past pressed down on her, but she didn’t look back. She walked on, her footsteps echoing softly against the pavement, the ghosts of what she’d left behind behind her. Aurora reached the end of the street, the key still in her hand. She paused, her gaze fixed on the flat above Silas’s bar. The weight of the past pressed down on her, but she didn’t hesitate. She turned the key in the lock, the door creaking open. The flat was dark, the weight of the past pressing down on her. Aurora stepped inside, the key still in her hand. The weight of the past pressed down on her, but she didn’t look back. She turned off the light, the weight of the past pressing down on her shoulders, and lay down on her bed. The weight of the past pressed down on her, but she didn’t think about it. She closed her eyes, the weight of the past pressing down on her, and slept.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:42:08.441Z" 2/20/2026, 7:42:08 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Silas said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.42
leniency0.84
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.04
69.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2133
totalAiIsmAdverbs13
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count8
3
adverb"softly"
count3
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2133
totalAiIsms85
found
0
word"pulsed"
count4
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"weight"
count36
4
word"unreadable"
count12
5
word"silence"
count8
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"unspoken"
count3
8
word"flickered"
count3
9
word"whisper"
count8
10
word"familiar"
count2
11
word"footsteps"
count3
12
word"echoing"
count3
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"tracing"
2"reminder"
3"weight"
4"unreadable"
5"silence"
6"could feel"
7"unspoken"
8"flickered"
9"whisper"
10"familiar"
11"footsteps"
12"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences169
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences169
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"seemed to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences197
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords2125
ratio0.002
matches
0"To Rory, wherever you are—"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions32
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions85
wordCount1922
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.19
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
London3
Carter1
Rory11
Blackwood1
Aurora23
Silas42
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Blackwood"
4"Aurora"
5"Silas"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.407
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences126
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite name"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.471
wordCount2125
matches
0"not much, but it’s something"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences197
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs93
mean22.85
std14.29
cv0.625
sampleLengths
074
158
214
325
410
56
663
737
815
94
1020
1160
1211
1310
147
157
1612
1760
189
195
2022
2130
2218
2312
2439
255
2611
279
2811
296
3011
3128
3212
3339
3412
3530
3611
377
3817
3935
4012
4131
4222
4312
4439
4531
4611
4731
4827
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences169
matches
0"been gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs321
matches(empty)
55.84% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences197
ratio0.03
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory, as she preferred—leaned against the counter, her fingers tracing the rim of her whiskey glass."
1"Too long to notice how the lines around his mouth had deepened, how his beard had thickened, how the way he carried himself—quiet but unmistakably commanding—hadn’t changed, but everything else had."
2"The way Silas had looked at her then, the way he still looked at her now—like she was something worth saving."
3"The whiskey burned, but it was the taste of something else that lingered—old friendship, unspoken regrets, the quiet ache of a life that had changed, but not gone."
4"*To Rory, wherever you are—*"
5"The whiskey burned, but the taste of something else lingered—old friendship, the quiet ache of a life that had changed, but not gone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1930
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount71
adverbRatio0.03678756476683938
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.00932642487046632
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences197
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences197
mean10.79
std6.64
cv0.615
sampleLengths
026
117
222
37
42
517
621
720
89
93
102
1112
128
135
147
153
163
173
1811
1915
206
2131
2223
2314
243
2512
263
271
2813
297
303
317
3218
3332
349
352
362
378
384
393
404
413
4210
432
448
4518
4613
4721
489
492
44.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.1319796954314721
totalSentences197
uniqueOpeners26
41.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences162
matches
0"Too long to notice how"
1"Instead, he stood, his limp"
ratio0.012
57.04% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount66
totalSentences162
matches
0"She hadn’t come here for"
1"He turned, wiping his palms"
2"he said, voice low, almost"
3"She’d forgotten how sharp his"
4"She didn’t flinch."
5"She took a slow sip"
6"He just watched her, his"
7"She didn’t deny it."
8"His voice was softer now,"
9"She’d come here for the"
10"He just reached across the"
11"He watched her, his expression"
12"He reached into his pocket"
13"She looked up at Silas,"
14"he said, his voice rough"
15"She shook her head, her"
16"He just watched her, his"
17"He reached into his pocket"
18"she asked, her voice barely"
19"he said, his voice rough"
ratio0.407
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount158
totalSentences162
matches
0"The neon glow of the"
1"Aurora Carter—Rory, as she preferred—leaned"
2"The amber liquid sloshed inside,"
3"She hadn’t come here for"
4"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
5"He turned, wiping his palms"
6"The signet ring on his"
7"he said, voice low, almost"
8"Aurora exhaled through her nose,"
9"She’d forgotten how sharp his"
10"Silas didn’t move, didn’t reach"
11"She didn’t flinch."
12"The air between them thickened,"
13"The bar’s walls, lined with"
14"Rory had been gone too"
15"Silas said, his voice rough"
16"Aurora didn’t smile."
17"Silas’s jaw tightened."
18"She took a slow sip"
19"Silas didn’t press."
ratio0.975
30.86% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences162
matches
0"*To Rory, wherever you are—*"
ratio0.006
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences95
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The whiskey burned, but it was the taste of something else that lingered—old friendship, unspoken regrets, the quiet ache of a life that had changed, but not go…"
1"The whiskey burned, but the taste of something else lingered—old friendship, the quiet ache of a life that had changed, but not gone."
2"She just took the key, her fingers brushing over it, feeling the weight of it in her palm."
3"She reached out, her fingers brushing over the handle, the weight of the past pressing down on her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount18
matches
0"he said, voice low, almost a growl"
1"Silas said, his voice rough"
2"Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
3"he said, his voice rough"
4"Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
5"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
6"he said, his voice rough"
7"Rory asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
8"she repeated, her voice barely above a whisper"
9"Silas said, his voice rough"
10"he said, his voice low and firm"
11"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
12"he said, his voice rough"
13"he said, his voice low and firm"
14"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
15"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
16"he said, his voice rough"
17"he said, his voice low and firm"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags20
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.04
77.7558%