Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY962JHBBSSFC9BYYQVZ7A1

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
2m 8s
Cost:
$0.050367
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain pelted the cobbled streets of Soho, turning gutters into shallow rivers that reflected the green neon glow from The Raven's Nest. Aurora Carter shoved through the door, her black hair plastered to her shoulders, water dripping from the hem of her jacket. She needed a drink. Something stiff to chase away the chill of another endless delivery shift at the Golden Empress. The bar smelled of aged wood and spilled whiskey, walls crammed with dusty maps and faded photographs that whispered of forgotten places. She slid onto a stool at the far end of the counter, waving off the bartender with a quick nod. "Whiskey, neat. Whatever's cheapest." The man behind the bar paused, his hand freezing mid-reach for a bottle. Hazel eyes locked on her, narrowing as recognition flickered. He set the glass down hard enough to slosh the amber liquid. "Aurora?" She looked up, bright blue eyes widening. The face staring back belonged to a ghost. Grey-streaked auburn hair, a neatly trimmed beard, and that silver signet ring glinting on his right hand. Silas Blackwood. Older, sure, with lines etched deeper around his mouth, and a slight hitch in his step as he leaned against the counter. But unmistakable. "Silas?" Her voice cracked, the word tumbling out like a stone into still water. He poured himself a matching glass, sliding it across the scarred wood. "It's been... what, eight years? Nine?" She gripped the glass, knuckles whitening. "Something like that. Last I saw you, you were still dodging shadows in Prague. Or was it Berlin?" "Prague." He lifted his drink, the liquid catching the dim light. "Botched that one proper. Knee's never forgiven me." She noticed the limp then, the way he favored his right leg, shifting weight like an old habit. Time had carved him differently—sharper edges softened by age, but that quiet authority lingered, coiled tight beneath the surface. "You own this place?" She glanced around, taking in the green neon sign's faint hum through the window, the hidden bookshelf in the corner that probably concealed more than books. "Bought it after I cashed out. Retirement gift to myself." He clinked his glass against hers. "What about you? Last I heard, you were buried in law books at Cardiff, set to follow in Brendan's footsteps." Her father. The mention stung, pulling at threads she'd long tried to sever. She downed half her whiskey, the burn steadying her. "Plans change. Evan... well, you remember him." Silas's jaw tightened, a muscle twitching beneath the beard. "I remember warning you about that prick. Told you he had the eyes of a man who'd break more than promises." "You did." She traced the crescent scar on her left wrist, the pale curve a reminder of a different fracture—a childhood fall from a tree in her mother's garden. This hurt ran deeper. "I didn't listen. Thought I knew better." He refilled her glass without asking, the bottle thudding against the counter. "And now? Delivery gigs in London? That's a far cry from barrister robes." "Yu-Fei's place. Golden Empress. Pays the rent." She forced a laugh, bitter and short. "Got a flat upstairs, actually. Above this very bar. Small world." His eyebrows shot up. "You're kidding. I've got tenants up there—wait, the one who blasts that godawful indie rock at midnight?" "Guilty." She smirked, but it didn't reach her eyes. "Eva dragged me here after everything blew up. Said London would swallow my past whole." "Eva always had a knack for trouble." Silas leaned in, voice dropping. "But you? Rory, you were the sharp one. Quick thinker, always three steps ahead. What happened?" The name—Rory—hit like a forgotten melody. No one called her that anymore, not since Cardiff. She swirled the whiskey, watching eddies form and vanish. "Evan happened. Beat the ambition right out of me. Literally. Broke my arm once, said it was an accident. I believed him until I couldn't anymore." Silas's fist clenched around his glass, the signet ring digging into his skin. "Bastard. If I'd known—" "You were gone. Off saving the world, or whatever MI6 calls it." Her tone sharpened, old resentment bubbling up. "Disappeared after that one visit to Dad's office. What was it, some favor for a case? You patched up that knee of yours in our guest room, told stories that kept me up nights dreaming of adventure." He rubbed his leg, the limp more pronounced as he paced behind the bar. "That was the point. Keep you dreaming, not diving in. World chews up people like you." "Like me?" She set her glass down hard. "Or like the girl I was? Bright-eyed, full of out-of-the-box schemes. Now I'm just... surviving." The bar emptied slowly around them, patrons filtering out into the rain-slicked night. A photograph on the wall caught her eye—a black-and-white shot of Prague's Charles Bridge, shrouded in fog. Silas followed her gaze. "Took that before it all went south." He poured another round, slower this time. "Partner double-crossed us. Knee shattered in the getaway. Woke up in a hospital bed, wondering if it'd been worth it." "Was it?" She met his eyes, searching for the man who'd once taught her how to pick a lock with a bobby pin, just for laughs. He hesitated, the hazel depths clouding. "Some days, no. Left too many loose ends. People I should've checked on." Like her. The unspoken words hung between them, thick as the bar's haze. She remembered the letters she'd written after he vanished—updates on university, silly anecdotes about her mother's latest classroom drama. They'd gone unanswered, lost in whatever shadows he chased. "You changed," she said finally, voice low. "Not just the hair or the limp. You're... quieter. Like you've swallowed all that fire." "And you?" He countered, stepping around the counter with a wince. "That spark in your eyes—it's dimmed. Used to light up a room with your ideas. Now you look like you're carrying the weight of ten lifetimes." She stood, closing the distance. At 5'6", she had to tilt her head to meet his gaze, the 6'1" frame still imposing despite the years. "Time does that. Regrets pile up." "What regrets?" His hand hovered near her shoulder, then dropped. "Not leaving sooner. Not fighting back." She touched the scar again, fingers lingering. "Letting Evan twist me into someone small. And you—disappearing like that. Thought we were friends." "We were." He turned away, busying himself with a rag, wiping down the counter in brisk strokes. "Are. But after Prague, I couldn't drag anyone else into my mess. Retired here, built this network. The Nest—it's a front, you know. Contacts come and go through that back room." She glanced at the bookshelf, the secret room's outline faint in the dim light. "Spymaster Silas. Figures you'd turn a bar into a lair." He chuckled, but it rang hollow. "Keeps me sharp. But seeing you... Christ, Rory. If I'd reached out—" "Don't." She cut him off, grabbing his arm. The fabric of his shirt felt worn under her fingers. "We both made choices. Mine landed me here, delivering dumplings by day, crashing above a bar I didn't know was yours." "Fate's got a twisted sense of humor." He covered her hand with his, the signet ring cool against her skin. "Stay for another? Catch up properly?" She pulled back, but nodded. The rain outside hammered harder, drumming a rhythm that echoed their pulse. They settled into a booth, the leather creaking under their weight. Silas slid a fresh bottle between them, the clink of glasses a fragile bridge over the chasm of years. "Tell me about London," he prompted, pouring. "Beyond the deliveries. Any schemes brewing in that head of yours?" She sipped, the warmth spreading. "Nothing grand. Dodged a few close calls with shady customers. Once delivered to a guy who looked like he'd stepped out of one of your old stories—tattoos, whispers about underground deals." His eyes sharpened. "Details?" "Nothing actionable." She leaned back, crossing her arms. "But it reminded me of you. The thrill of it. Made me wonder what if I'd chased that instead of law." "You could've." Regret laced his words, unspoken apologies woven in. "I saw it in you back then. Quick mind, cooler under pressure than most agents I trained." "Then why vanish?" The question burst out, raw. "One day you're there, patching up in our house, teaching me surveillance tricks over tea. Next, radio silence." He stared into his glass, the auburn hair catching lamplight. "Feared I'd taint you. My world's poison, Rory. Saw too many bright ones snuffed out. Your dad begged me to steer you clear—said you were meant for courtrooms, not shadows." "Dad." She scoffed, the sound sharp. "Always plotting my path. But you listened to him over me?" "Not just him." Silas set his glass down, meeting her gaze. "After Prague, I limped home broken. Couldn't risk pulling you down with me." She reached across, tracing the lines on his hand—the scars of a life lived hard. "And now? We're both here, limping in our own ways." He turned his palm up, clasping hers. "Now we fix what we can." The conversation shifted, weaving through memories. She recounted fleeing Cardiff, Eva's frantic calls pulling her to London. He shared fragments of operations, sanitized versions that still carried the sting of loss. Laughter punctuated regrets—her mimicking his old accents, him recalling her childhood pranks. But tension simmered beneath, the weight of what-ifs pressing down. Every pause held unspoken words: her regret for staying with Evan too long, his for abandoning connections. Time had reshaped them—her once-vibrant energy tempered by survival, his authority frayed by isolation. As the bottle emptied, she glanced at the clock. Midnight loomed, the bar's shadows lengthening. "Suppose I should head up. Flat's calling." He stood with her, the limp pulling him back a beat. "Door's always open, Rory. No more vanishing acts." She squeezed his shoulder, the gesture bridging years. "Promise?" "Scout's honor." His smile cracked through the beard, genuine. Outside, the rain eased to a drizzle, but inside, the air felt heavier with revelations. They parted at the stairs, her ascending to the flat above, him retreating to the bar's depths. The green neon flickered, casting long shadows over what remained unsaid.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She glanced around [around]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"She leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.366
leniency0.732
rawRatio0.115
effectiveRatio0.085
94.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1732
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1732
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"weight"
count4
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
9
word"depths"
count2
10
word"unspoken"
count3
11
word"imposing"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
16
word"silence"
count1
17
word"tracing"
count1
18
word"tension"
count1
19
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"flickered"
2"glinting"
3"etched"
4"weight"
5"footsteps"
6"traced"
7"reminder"
8"shattered"
9"depths"
10"unspoken"
11"imposing"
12"sense of"
13"echoed"
14"pulse"
15"warmth"
16"silence"
17"tracing"
18"tension"
19"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"fist clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences137
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1707
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount977
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
Blackwood1
Silas7
Rory1
Cardiff2
Prague1
Charles1
Bridge1
Regret1
Eva1
London1
Evan1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Blackwood"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Regret"
5"Eva"
6"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Golden"
3"Cardiff"
4"Prague"
5"Charles"
6"Bridge"
7"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1707
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
95.42% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean28.93
std14
cv0.484
sampleLengths
085
124
234
31
458
514
618
724
819
937
1030
1136
1229
1330
1440
1525
1625
1721
1824
1928
2050
2117
2256
2330
2423
2534
2634
2726
2819
2941
3022
3137
3231
3310
3428
3548
3624
3718
3839
3926
4047
4118
4236
434
4429
4527
4626
4740
4817
4924
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs196
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences137
ratio0.058
matches
0"Time had carved him differently—sharper edges softened by age, but that quiet authority lingered, coiled tight beneath the surface."
1"\"You did.\" She traced the crescent scar on her left wrist, the pale curve a reminder of a different fracture—a childhood fall from a tree in her mother's garden."
2"The name—Rory—hit like a forgotten melody."
3"A photograph on the wall caught her eye—a black-and-white shot of Prague's Charles Bridge, shrouded in fog."
4"She remembered the letters she'd written after he vanished—updates on university, silly anecdotes about her mother's latest classroom drama."
5"She reached across, tracing the lines on his hand—the scars of a life lived hard."
6"Laughter punctuated regrets—her mimicking his old accents, him recalling her childhood pranks."
7"Time had reshaped them—her once-vibrant energy tempered by survival, his authority frayed by isolation."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount993
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02920443101711984
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006042296072507553
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean12.46
std6.95
cv0.558
sampleLengths
022
121
24
316
422
520
64
713
89
912
101
117
128
1317
142
1522
162
1714
1812
196
206
2118
2211
238
2418
2519
2630
2716
2820
292
3011
319
327
339
3421
3529
364
377
3812
3913
4014
4111
424
4317
449
4515
4612
4716
486
499
86.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5255474452554745
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners72
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences89
matches
0"She needed a drink."
1"She slid onto a stool"
2"He set the glass down"
3"She looked up, bright blue"
4"Her voice cracked, the word"
5"He poured himself a matching"
6"She gripped the glass, knuckles"
7"He lifted his drink, the"
8"She noticed the limp then,"
9"She glanced around, taking in"
10"He clinked his glass against"
11"She downed half her whiskey,"
12"She traced the crescent scar"
13"He refilled her glass without"
14"She forced a laugh, bitter"
15"His eyebrows shot up."
16"She smirked, but it didn't"
17"She swirled the whiskey, watching"
18"Her tone sharpened, old resentment"
19"He rubbed his leg, the"
ratio0.584
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences89
matches
0"Rain pelted the cobbled streets"
1"Aurora Carter shoved through the"
2"She needed a drink."
3"Something stiff to chase away"
4"The bar smelled of aged"
5"She slid onto a stool"
6"The man behind the bar"
7"Hazel eyes locked on her,"
8"He set the glass down"
9"She looked up, bright blue"
10"The face staring back belonged"
11"Her voice cracked, the word"
12"He poured himself a matching"
13"She gripped the glass, knuckles"
14"He lifted his drink, the"
15"She noticed the limp then,"
16"Time had carved him differently—sharper"
17"She glanced around, taking in"
18"He clinked his glass against"
19"The mention stung, pulling at"
ratio0.921
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rain pelted the cobbled streets of Soho, turning gutters into shallow rivers that reflected the green neon glow from The Raven's Nest."
1"The bar smelled of aged wood and spilled whiskey, walls crammed with dusty maps and faded photographs that whispered of forgotten places."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Her voice cracked, the word tumbling out like a stone into still water"
1"He lifted, the liquid catching the dim light"
2"Silas leaned in, voice dropping"
3"she said finally, voice low"
4"She touched, fingers lingering"
5"He covered, the signet ring cool against her skin"
6"The question burst out, raw"
7"His smile cracked, genuine"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.014
leniency0.028
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.6187%