Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY96VT8WH4KSCTWX85GJM07

Run Details

Duration:
44.8s
Cost:
$0.000260
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the grimy concrete of the abandoned tube platform. Water dripped from the curved ceiling, echoing in the cavernous space. The air tasted metallic, thick with dampness and something else– something indefinable, faintly floral, yet unsettling. Detective Harlow Quinn ignored the chill seeping into her bones, her gaze sweeping across the tableau before her. A body lay sprawled near a disused ticket booth, a man in a bespoke suit, his face frozen in a silent scream. Not a violent scream, not one of fear, but of… surprise? His eyes were wide, fixed on a point directly above him. A single, crimson stain bloomed across his crisp white shirt. “Clean puncture,” Sergeant Davies said, his voice echoing too loudly. He gestured towards the wound. “Looks like something sharp. One swift strike.” Quinn knelt, careful not to disturb anything. The man’s expensive shoes were spotless, his briefcase lay untouched beside him. No signs of a struggle. No defensive wounds. Just the stark, unsettling calm of a life extinguished. “Anything on him?” Quinn asked, already knowing the answer. “Wallet, phone, keys. All in order. ID says Alistair Finch. Investment banker. Lives in Kensington.” Davies offered. He shifted uncomfortably, running a hand over his thinning hair. "Strange place for him to end up, wouldn’t you say?” Quinn grunted, her eyes tracing the perimeter of the platform. The walls were covered in faded advertisements for long-forgotten travel destinations. Scrawled graffiti hinted at past inhabitants, a mix of teenage rebellion and something darker, something with symbols she didn’t recognize. “Strange doesn’t begin to cover it,” Quinn murmured, pulling on a latex glove. Her fingers brushed against something small and metallic near the victim's hand. She picked it up. A small brass compass. The casing was dull with verdigris, the face etched with intricate, swirling sigils. The needle spun wildly before settling, not north, but pointing… up. “What is it?” Davies peered over her shoulder. “A compass,” Quinn stated, rotating it slowly. It hummed faintly in her hand, a vibration she felt more than heard. "Not one I recognize." A voice cut through the stillness. “Impressive, isn't it?” Detective Inspector Mallory, Quinn’s immediate superior, approached, his face grim. He wore a tailored suit that seemed out of place in the abandoned station. "The brass is a tell. Shade artisan. Very rare, very expensive.” Quinn turned, her brown eyes locking onto Mallory’s. “So, a collector’s item? Why would Finch have one?” Mallory shrugged, his expression unreadable. “Maybe he was collecting. Or maybe it was a gift. Doesn’t mean a thing, Quinn. Looks like a simple mugging gone wrong. He stumbled upon something he shouldn’t have, someone panicked.” “Simple?” Quinn frowned, rising to her feet. “There’s nothing simple about this. No forced entry, no sign of a struggle. And this,” she held up the compass, “doesn’t scream random robbery.” She scanned the platform again, her military precision kicking in. Her gaze settled on a patch of shimmering distortion near the ceiling, almost invisible against the damp concrete. It flickered, like heat rising from asphalt, and for a moment, Quinn could swear she saw something move within it—a fleeting glimpse of impossible geometry. "I think we're missing something," Quinn declared, ignoring Mallory’s dismissive sigh. "Look at the angle of the wound. It’s not a downward strike. It’s… upward. As if he was attacked from above.” Davies squinted, examining the body more closely. “You’re saying… someone dropped from the ceiling?” “Possibly. Or something,” Quinn corrected. She pointed to the shimmering distortion. “That’s our ‘something’." Mallory scoffed. “You’re reaching, Quinn. It’s a trick of the light. This place is falling apart." Suddenly, Eva Kowalski appeared, pushing her way through the small crowd of uniformed officers. Her curly red hair was pulled back in a messy bun, her round glasses perched on her nose. She clutched her worn leather satchel, her freckled complexion flushed with urgency. “Harlow! I… I need to talk to you,” Eva blurted out, her nervous habit of tucking her hair behind her left ear pronounced. “About this place. About what it *is*.” Quinn raised an eyebrow. “What’s that, Evie? You're researching abandoned tube stations now?” Eva ignored the sarcasm. "This isn't just an abandoned station, Harlow. This is... it aligns. With historical records I've been researching. The alignments… the full moon…" She fumbled with the straps of her satchel. “They converge here. It’s a nexus point.” Mallory rolled his eyes. “Here we go," he muttered under his breath. “The occult expert.” Quinn silenced him with a look. She'd learned long ago to trust Eva's instincts, even when they seemed outlandish. Eva’s expertise in ancient history and forgotten lore was often surprisingly relevant. "Explain," Quinn demanded. "The Veil Market," Eva said, her voice low and urgent. "It moves every full moon. The records indicate it often manifests in places where the veil between worlds is thin. Abandoned, forgotten spaces—like this." Davies looked utterly bewildered. “The Veil Market? What in God’s name is that?” “A black market,” Quinn explained, her gaze fixed on Eva. “For… unusual goods. Things you can’t buy on the high street.” Eva nodded. “Enchanted items, alchemical substances, information… things that shouldn’t exist.” She reached into her satchel and pulled out a worn, leather-bound book. She flipped through the pages, stopping at a faded illustration. "Bone tokens. That's what you need to enter." "Bone tokens?" Quinn repeated, her mind racing. The compass. The strange wound. The shimmering distortion. It was all starting to coalesce into a disturbing picture. “They’re used as currency. As proof of intent. To access the Market,” Eva clarified. “It appears Finch was here for a reason. He had access.” Quinn's eyes fell on the compass again. The sigils on its face seemed to pulse faintly. The needle still pointed upwards, toward the distortion. “This compass,” Quinn said slowly, “it’s not just pointing north. It’s pointing… towards something else. Something supernatural.” She felt a prickle of unease crawl down her spine. She knew this feeling – it had haunted her ever since the case that took her partner. Mallory remained unconvinced. “This is ridiculous. We’re chasing shadows, Quinn. A dead investment banker, a crazy woman with a book, and a brass trinket. Let's focus on finding the actual killer. Someone with a knife." Quinn ignored him, her gaze returning to the shimmering distortion. It seemed to intensify, blurring the concrete wall behind it. She noticed something new. Faint, almost imperceptible, scratches on the wall directly beneath the distortion. Scratches that looked… otherworldly. “Davies,” Quinn ordered, her voice sharp. “Get forensics down here. I want those scratches analyzed. And Evie, I need to know everything you can tell me about the Veil Market. Everything.” She approached the distortion cautiously, the compass humming louder in her hand. The floral scent intensified, almost overpowering. Something was definitely wrong. This wasn't a simple mugging gone wrong. This was something far more complex. Far more dangerous.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.488
leniency0.977
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.047
69.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1149
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"utterly"
count1
4
adverb"cautiously"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"suddenly"
3"utterly"
4"cautiously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1149
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"echoing"
count2
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"fleeting"
count1
10
word"eyebrow"
count1
11
word"racing"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"down her spine"
count1
14
word"otherworldly"
count1
15
word"analyzed"
count1
16
word"complex"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"chill"
2"stark"
3"tracing"
4"etched"
5"intricate"
6"unreadable"
7"scanned"
8"flickered"
9"fleeting"
10"eyebrow"
11"racing"
12"pulse"
13"down her spine"
14"otherworldly"
15"analyzed"
16"complex"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences91
matches
0"d with urgency"
1"felt a prickle"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1147
ratio0.001
matches
0"is"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
8.87% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount744
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.82
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn21
Davies5
Inspector1
Mallory7
Eva9
Kowalski1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Davies"
3"Inspector"
4"Mallory"
5"Eva"
6"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0.089
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed outlandish"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.616
wordCount1147
matches
0"Not a violent scream, not one of fear, but of…"
1"not one of fear, but of…"
2"not north, but pointing…"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
87.44% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean28.68
std13.08
cv0.456
sampleLengths
055
154
222
336
49
537
641
733
824
98
1024
119
1235
1317
1436
1531
1653
1732
1814
1914
2016
2144
2230
2313
2441
2515
2631
273
2834
2913
3021
3141
3225
3325
3424
3544
3635
3739
3831
3938
97.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"were covered"
1"was pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
67.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences113
ratio0.027
matches
0"The air tasted metallic, thick with dampness and something else– something indefinable, faintly floral, yet unsettling."
1"It flickered, like heat rising from asphalt, and for a moment, Quinn could swear she saw something move within it—a fleeting glimpse of impossible geometry."
2"She knew this feeling – it had haunted her ever since the case that took her partner."
78.51% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount746
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"lay untouched beside him."
1"worn, leather-bound book."
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.04691689008042895
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.024128686327077747
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean10.15
std6.74
cv0.664
sampleLengths
010
111
216
318
422
510
61
711
810
910
105
117
127
1312
145
153
169
179
1817
1910
2010
2110
2211
2320
2413
2512
264
274
2813
2910
301
318
327
3313
344
356
363
3710
3814
3911
408
419
425
4331
447
4524
4610
4718
4825
4911
70.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.46017699115044247
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners52
82.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"Just the stark, unsettling calm"
1"Suddenly, Eva Kowalski appeared, pushing"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences81
matches
0"His eyes were wide, fixed"
1"He gestured towards the wound."
2"He shifted uncomfortably, running a"
3"Her fingers brushed against something"
4"She picked it up."
5"It hummed faintly in her"
6"He wore a tailored suit"
7"she held up the compass"
8"She scanned the platform again,"
9"Her gaze settled on a"
10"It flickered, like heat rising"
11"She pointed to the shimmering"
12"Her curly red hair was"
13"She clutched her worn leather"
14"She fumbled with the straps"
15"he muttered under his breath"
16"She'd learned long ago to"
17"She reached into her satchel"
18"She flipped through the pages,"
19"It was all starting to"
ratio0.296
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences81
matches
0"Rain slicked the grimy concrete"
1"Water dripped from the curved"
2"The air tasted metallic, thick"
3"Detective Harlow Quinn ignored the"
4"A body lay sprawled near"
5"His eyes were wide, fixed"
6"A single, crimson stain bloomed"
7"Sergeant Davies said, his voice"
8"He gestured towards the wound."
9"Quinn knelt, careful not to"
10"The man’s expensive shoes were"
11"Quinn asked, already knowing the"
12"He shifted uncomfortably, running a"
13"Quinn grunted, her eyes tracing"
14"The walls were covered in"
15"Quinn murmured, pulling on a"
16"Her fingers brushed against something"
17"She picked it up."
18"A small brass compass."
19"The casing was dull with"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ignored the chill seeping into her bones, her gaze sweeping across the tableau before her."
29.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Sergeant Davies said, his voice echoing too loudly"
1"Eva said, her voice low and urgent"
2"Quinn repeated, her mind racing"
3"Quinn ordered, her voice sharp"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
1"Quinn stated (state)"
2"Quinn declared (declare)"
3"Quinn corrected (correct)"
4"Eva blurted out (blurt out)"
5"he muttered (mutter)"
6"Quinn demanded (demand)"
7"Quinn explained (explain)"
8"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
9"Eva clarified (clarify)"
10"Quinn ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.349
leniency0.698
rawRatio0.733
effectiveRatio0.512
74.2904%