Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY978KQ8HFMCBH1VT868JY5

Run Details

Duration:
4.1s
Cost:
$0.000211
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon glow of the Raven’s Nest flickered like a dying ember against the storm’s relentless howl. Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath fogged the cold air as she sprinted down the slick pavement, her boots crunching over wet leaves. The scent of damp earth and old wood clung to the air, thick with the weight of London’s nocturnal secrets. She’d been chasing Tomás Herrera for hours now, her pulse hammering against her ribs. The man had vanished into the labyrinth of alleys, leaving behind only a trail of wet footprints and the faint, acrid tang of something unnatural—like ozone and burnt copper. Quinn’s fingers tightened around the worn leather watch on her wrist. The clock had stopped at 2:17 AM. Three years of chasing ghosts, and here she was, chasing a man who might not even be human. A flicker of movement caught her eye—a shadow darting between the flickering lights of a boarded-up shop. Quinn lunged, her instincts screaming for her to follow. The suspect—if that’s what he was—had already vanished into the darkness, but the scent lingered. Something metallic, sharp, like the edge of a blade she’d never seen. She didn’t hesitate. The chase took her beneath the city, down into the belly of the earth where the Veil Market pulsed like a living thing. The air grew thick with the scent of damp stone and something sweeter, like honeyed smoke. The entrance was a rusted metal door, half-hidden behind a pile of discarded newspapers. Quinn kicked it open with her boot, the hinges groaning in protest. Inside, the world tilted. The walls were lined with shelves of strange, glowing objects—vials of liquid that shimmered like liquid starlight, jars of preserved things that shouldn’t exist, and bundles of cloth wrapped in patterns that made her stomach twist. The market was alive with whispers, voices murmuring in languages she didn’t recognize. Somewhere, a child’s laughter echoed, too bright, too wrong. Quinn’s boots sank into a pile of damp leaves as she moved deeper. The scent of the suspect grew stronger, now mixed with something else—something metallic and warm, like blood and sweat. She followed the trail, her pulse roaring in her ears. The market stretched endlessly, a maze of tunnels and hidden nooks, each one more surreal than the last. Then she saw him. Tomás Herrera stood in the center of a clearing, his back to her, his dark curls damp with rain. A figure crouched beside him, their face obscured by a hood. Quinn’s breath caught. The man’s hands were wrapped around Tomás’s throat, his fingers digging into the soft flesh of his neck. Tomás didn’t fight. His eyes were closed, his body limp, but his Saint Christopher medallion glinted faintly in the dim light. Quinn didn’t think. She moved without sound, her boots silent on the damp stone. The hooded figure turned, their face a mask of fury. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She grabbed the man by the collar, her fingers digging into the fabric of his coat. The hood fell back, revealing a face she’d seen before—sharp features, cold eyes. “Detective Quinn,” the man said, his voice smooth, dangerous. “I didn’t expect you to follow me this far.” Quinn’s grip tightened. “You’re not Tomás Herrera.” The man’s smile was a blade. “No. But I know what you’re looking for.” Quinn’s mind raced. She had to move. She had to get out. But the market was a trap, a labyrinth of illusions and dangers. She could hear the distant hum of voices, the clink of glass, the whisper of something unseen. “Let him go,” Quinn said, her voice steady despite the fear clawing at her throat. “I don’t want trouble.” The man’s smile widened. “You always were too trusting, Quinn.” She lunged, her fist connecting with his jaw. He stumbled back, but he wasn’t done. Before Quinn could react, he grabbed her wrist, his grip iron. She screamed, but the sound was lost in the chaos of the market. The clearing dissolved around them, the world twisting and turning. Quinn’s vision blurred, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The man’s voice was in her ear, close, intimate. “You’ll never find what you’re looking for here, Detective. Not if you don’t know where to look.” She fought, her body moving against his, her mind racing. The market was a maze, a test, a trap. She had to get out. She had to get out now. The man’s grip loosened, just enough for Quinn to slip free. She stumbled forward, her boots sinking into the damp earth. The market faded around her, the voices and whispers dissolving into the night. She was back on the streets, the rain pounding against her face, her body trembling. She didn’t look back. She couldn’t. The chase was over. For now. But she knew, deep in her bones, that this wasn’t the end. It was only the beginning.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:42:56.135Z" 2/20/2026, 7:42:56 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount821
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount821
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"roaring"
count1
9
word"surreal"
count1
10
word"raced"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"racing"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"pulse"
3"flicker"
4"pulsed"
5"shimmered"
6"stomach"
7"echoed"
8"roaring"
9"surreal"
10"raced"
11"whisper"
12"racing"
13"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords813
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount760
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.84
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Harlow1
Quinn14
London1
Tomás4
Herrera2
Veil1
Market1
Saint1
Christopher1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Harlow"
3"Quinn"
4"Tomás"
5"Herrera"
6"Market"
7"Saint"
8"Christopher"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.579
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount813
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean40.65
std22.55
cv0.555
sampleLengths
058
179
253
368
462
560
64
772
856
918
107
1114
1241
1319
1410
1539
1645
1730
1849
1929
84.92% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences69
matches
0"were lined"
1"were wrapped"
2"were closed"
3"was lost"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs127
matches
0"was, chasing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences75
ratio0.08
matches
0"The man had vanished into the labyrinth of alleys, leaving behind only a trail of wet footprints and the faint, acrid tang of something unnatural—like ozone and burnt copper."
1"A flicker of movement caught her eye—a shadow darting between the flickering lights of a boarded-up shop."
2"The suspect—if that’s what he was—had already vanished into the darkness, but the scent lingered."
3"The walls were lined with shelves of strange, glowing objects—vials of liquid that shimmered like liquid starlight, jars of preserved things that shouldn’t exist, and bundles of cloth wrapped in patterns that made her stomach twist."
4"The scent of the suspect grew stronger, now mixed with something else—something metallic and warm, like blood and sweat."
5"The hood fell back, revealing a face she’d seen before—sharp features, cold eyes."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount768
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.024739583333333332
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006510416666666667
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean10.84
std6.48
cv0.598
sampleLengths
017
121
220
314
429
511
67
718
817
99
1015
1112
123
1323
1416
1514
1612
174
1836
1913
209
2113
2219
2310
2418
254
2619
2711
283
2918
303
3118
323
3311
3410
353
3616
3713
389
399
403
414
426
438
443
454
465
4712
4817
4915
40.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.28
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners21
99.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"Somewhere, a child’s laughter echoed,"
1"Then she saw him."
ratio0.03
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences67
matches
0"She’d been chasing Tomás Herrera"
1"She didn’t hesitate."
2"She followed the trail, her"
3"His eyes were closed, his"
4"She moved without sound, her"
5"She grabbed the man by"
6"She had to move."
7"She had to get out."
8"She could hear the distant"
9"She lunged, her fist connecting"
10"He stumbled back, but he"
11"She screamed, but the sound"
12"She fought, her body moving"
13"She had to get out."
14"She had to get out"
15"She stumbled forward, her boots"
16"She was back on the"
17"She didn’t look back."
18"It was only the beginning."
ratio0.284
12.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences67
matches
0"The neon glow of the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath fogged"
2"The scent of damp earth"
3"She’d been chasing Tomás Herrera"
4"The man had vanished into"
5"Quinn’s fingers tightened around the"
6"The clock had stopped at"
7"A flicker of movement caught"
8"Quinn lunged, her instincts screaming"
9"The suspect—if that’s what he"
10"Something metallic, sharp, like the"
11"She didn’t hesitate."
12"The chase took her beneath"
13"The air grew thick with"
14"The entrance was a rusted"
15"Quinn kicked it open with"
16"The walls were lined with"
17"The market was alive with"
18"Quinn’s boots sank into a"
19"The scent of the suspect"
ratio0.896
74.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Before Quinn could react, he"
ratio0.015
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She’d been chasing Tomás Herrera for hours now, her pulse hammering against her ribs."
1"The walls were lined with shelves of strange, glowing objects—vials of liquid that shimmered like liquid starlight, jars of preserved things that shouldn’t exis…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"the man said, his voice smooth, dangerous"
1"Quinn said, her voice steady despite the fear clawing at her throat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.3535%