"The scent hit her first – not unpleasant, exactly, but profoundly *wrong*."
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"Beside her, Nyx – they were currently favouring the androgynous ‘they’ – shifted, their shadow-form rippling slightly as if adjusting to the change in atmosphere."
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"“Caution,” she rasped, her voice brittle with age and something else – a profound sadness."
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"It was a gap, an absence within the abbey wall – a section of rock that had dissolved, not crumbled, into a swirling vortex of iridescent colour."
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"The stone floor beneath her boots was no longer cold and damp; it was warm, yielding, almost…"
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"The sound was equally bizarre – a constant, low hum punctuated by the dripping of an unseen liquid and the occasional, high-pitched chime."
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"Figures, vaguely humanoid, moved amongst the foliage - elongated, pale shapes draped in shimmering silks."
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"As the spray dissipated, she saw it – a thin, silvery chain, intricately linked with a thumbnail-sized crimson gem."
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"“Information comes at a price, little mortal. Dymas offers pleasures beyond your wildest imaginings. Indulge, and the knowledge will be freely given.” He gestured towards a table laden with delicacies – fruits that pulsed with light, pastries filled with shimmering creams, and goblets overflowing with a viscous, ruby-red wine."
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"The air shimmered, and a figure emerged from the swirling foliage – Isolde Varga, her silver hair glowing faintly in the otherworldly light."
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"As she spoke, a small, grotesque creature – a tiny, winged being with a face like peeling fruit – darted forward and swiped at Aurora's pendant."
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"Aurora, Nyx, and Isolde exchanged a glance - a silent acknowledgement of the danger that lay ahead."
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"It was a gap, an absence within the abbey wall – a section of rock that had dissolved, not crumbled, into a swirling vortex of iridescent colour."
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"The abbey walls, grey and crumbling moments before, had dissolved into flowing, iridescent vines that clung to a ceiling that stretched upwards into an impossib…"
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"Vineyards the size of forests sprawled over rolling hills, laden with fruit that shimmered with an unnatural iridescence."
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"Orchards filled with trees bearing fruit that resembled polished gemstones."
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"Others were engaged in a bizarre ritual, offering perfectly sculpted fruits to grotesque, winged creatures that resembled oversized moths."