| 46.15% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 26 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "I said tightly [tightly]" | | 1 | "I finished already [already]" | | 2 | "I said dryly [dryly]" | | 3 | "he replied calmly [calmly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |
| 65.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1295 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "deliberately" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "tightly" | | 4 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 3.47% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1295 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "down my spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "porcelain" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "down my spine" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "calculating" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "unreadable" | | 9 | "silk" | | 10 | "navigating" | | 11 | "chaotic" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "encounter" | | 14 | "echoed" | | 15 | "simmering" | | 16 | "ensure" | | 17 | "flicked" | | 18 | "unspoken" | | 19 | "glint" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "sent a shiver down" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 115 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1285 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | 0 | "say" | | 1 | "dangerous" | | 2 | "does" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 834 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.6 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Earl | 1 | | Grey | 1 | | November | 1 | | Eva | 4 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | Lucien | 5 | | Moreau | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Earl" | | 1 | "Grey" | | 2 | "November" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" | | 5 | "Lucien" | | 6 | "Moreau" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 73.08% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite mask" | | 1 | "as if searching for the right words" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.778 | | wordCount | 1285 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a polite knock, but a demanding pound" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 24.71 | | std | 13.92 | | cv | 0.563 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 1 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 43 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 44 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 35 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 28 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 44 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 51 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 18.63% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 115 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the way he held himself—relaxed, yet coiled with a predatory grace—was infuriatingly familiar." | | 1 | "The scent of him—sandalwood and something darker, something indefinably *dangerous*—filled the small space." | | 2 | "stood there, assessing me with those unsettling eyes – one amber, one black, always watching, always calculating." | | 3 | "The memory of our last encounter—a tangle of desperation and betrayal—flared in my mind, hot and painful." | | 4 | "“Finch is hosting a gathering tonight. A masquerade ball. It will be your point of entry.” He reached into his coat again, this time producing a mask—a delicate, silver filigree creation that concealed the upper half of the face." |
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| 85.11% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 842 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.05344418052256532 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.023752969121140142 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 115 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 115 | | mean | 11.17 | | std | 7.36 | | cv | 0.659 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 68.70% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4434782608695652 | | totalSentences | 115 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the way he held" | | 1 | "Of course not." | | 2 | "Then, a sharp rap at" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "I hadn't expected a visitor," | | 1 | "I hadn’t heard him say" | | 2 | "I set the mug down" | | 3 | "I managed, the word rusty" | | 4 | "He stood framed in the" | | 5 | "He hadn't bothered with an" | | 6 | "It was a statement, veiled" | | 7 | "It hadn’t changed, that." | | 8 | "I stepped back, gesturing him" | | 9 | "He moved with a fluid" | | 10 | "He didn’t offer a greeting," | | 11 | "I asked, my voice sharper" | | 12 | "He finally met my gaze," | | 13 | "It wasn’t amusement, not exactly." | | 14 | "It made my skin crawl." | | 15 | "he said, his voice smooth" | | 16 | "I scoffed, crossing my arms" | | 17 | "It wasn’t a compliment coming" | | 18 | "He took a step closer," | | 19 | "He didn’t flinch." |
| | ratio | 0.625 | |
| 22.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The chipped porcelain felt cool" | | 1 | "Steam curled from the mug," | | 2 | "I hadn't expected a visitor," | | 3 | "The voice, low and laced" | | 4 | "I hadn’t heard him say" | | 5 | "I set the mug down" | | 6 | "Ptolemy, Eva’s perpetually unimpressed tabby," | | 7 | "I managed, the word rusty" | | 8 | "He stood framed in the" | | 9 | "The kind of man who" | | 10 | "Rain plastered the front of" | | 11 | "He hadn't bothered with an" | | 12 | "The question wasn’t a request." | | 13 | "It was a statement, veiled" | | 14 | "It hadn’t changed, that." | | 15 | "Lucien always got what he" | | 16 | "I stepped back, gesturing him" | | 17 | "The flat, perpetually cluttered with" | | 18 | "He moved with a fluid" | | 19 | "The scent of him—sandalwood and" |
| | ratio | 0.875 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 66.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The voice, low and laced with a familiar, infuriating elegance, sent a shiver down my spine that had nothing to do with the November chill seeping through the s…" | | 1 | "He moved with a fluid ease, shaking off the rain as if it were nothing more than a minor inconvenience." | | 2 | "Ptolemy, sensing my growing agitation, jumped onto my lap, kneading his paws into my thighs." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 26 | | uselessAdditionCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "I asked, my voice sharper than I intended" | | 1 | "he said, his voice smooth as silk" | | 2 | "He followed, his movements unnervingly silent" | | 3 | "he corrected, his voice dropping to a near whisper" | | 4 | "he said, turning to face me, his mismatched eyes locking onto mine" | | 5 | "I forced, but my voice lacked conviction" | | 6 | "He paused, as if searching for the right words" | | 7 | "I said, my voice firmer this time" | | 8 | "he murmured, a dangerous glint returning to his eyes" |
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| 53.85% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "he corrected (correct)" | | 2 | "I retorted (retort)" | | 3 | "he continued (continue)" | | 4 | "he murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.385 | | effectiveRatio | 0.192 | |