Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY97QM3T7C3QWWWNY1YDFP1

Run Details

Duration:
55.3s
Cost:
$0.000656
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chipped porcelain felt cool against my knuckles. Steam curled from the mug, carrying the scent of Earl Grey and a small measure of defiance. I hadn't expected a visitor, not after… everything. Not after I’d deliberately faded into the background, built a life deliberately unremarkable. “Rory?” The voice, low and laced with a familiar, infuriating elegance, sent a shiver down my spine that had nothing to do with the November chill seeping through the single-paned windows. I hadn’t heard him say my name, really *say* my name, in… far too long. I set the mug down with a sharp clink. Ptolemy, Eva’s perpetually unimpressed tabby, arched his back and let out a low growl, fixing his stare on the doorway. “Lucien,” I managed, the word rusty from disuse. He stood framed in the doorway, an improbability sculpted in charcoal wool and platinum blond. Tailored, as always. Impeccable. The kind of man who made ordinary men look slovenly by comparison. Even the way he held himself—relaxed, yet coiled with a predatory grace—was infuriatingly familiar. Rain plastered the front of his coat, darkening the fabric. He hadn't bothered with an umbrella. Of course not. “May I come in?” The question wasn’t a request. It was a statement, veiled in a thin layer of politeness. It hadn’t changed, that. Lucien always got what he wanted. I stepped back, gesturing him inside with a reluctance I couldn't quite mask. The flat, perpetually cluttered with Eva’s research and my own attempts at order, felt suddenly too small, too… exposed. He moved with a fluid ease, shaking off the rain as if it were nothing more than a minor inconvenience. The scent of him—sandalwood and something darker, something indefinably *dangerous*—filled the small space. Ptolemy, unimpressed, continued his growl, puffing up his already substantial fur. “Charming,” Lucien murmured, glancing at the cat. “Still protecting your territory, I see.” He didn’t offer a greeting, didn’t ask about Eva, didn’t acknowledge the obvious tension that hung between us like a physical weight. Just… stood there, assessing me with those unsettling eyes – one amber, one black, always watching, always calculating. “What do you want, Lucien?” I asked, my voice sharper than I intended. He finally met my gaze, a flicker of something unreadable passing across his face. It wasn’t amusement, not exactly. More like… curiosity. It made my skin crawl. “Business,” he said, his voice smooth as silk. “A delicate matter. I require your… particular skillset.” “My ‘skillset’?” I scoffed, crossing my arms. “You mean delivering noodles? Or navigating Brick Lane on a scooter?” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “You underestimate yourself, Aurora. You have a knack for finding things. For seeing patterns others miss. A certain… ruthlessness, when necessary.” “Ruthlessness?” The word tasted foul on my tongue. It wasn’t a compliment coming from him. Not after… “Don’t pretend innocence, Rory. We both know you’re capable of more than you let on.” He took a step closer, invading my personal space. Ptolemy hissed, finally taking a swipe at Lucien’s polished shoe. He didn’t flinch. Didn’t even seem to notice. “Who is it?” “A client. Discreet. Extremely wealthy. And… in a predicament.” He finally moved past me, examining the chaotic arrangement of books and scrolls that dominated the flat's main room. He paused by Eva’s desk, running a gloved hand over a stack of ancient-looking maps. “Eva’s still chasing shadows, I see.” “She’s a researcher,” I said tightly, pushing past him and back toward the kitchen. "She studies ancient languages and folklore. It’s what she *does*." “And occasionally stumbles upon things best left forgotten.” He followed me, his movements unnervingly silent. "This particular predicament involves a missing artefact. One of some historical significance. And a rather unpleasant group of individuals who want it back.” “And you want me to find it,” I finished, already knowing the answer. Why else would Lucien Moreau, half-demon fixer, be standing in my cramped flat in the middle of the night? “I want you to retrieve it,” he corrected, his voice dropping to a near whisper. "There’s been a… complication. Let’s just say subtlety won’t suffice." "Subtlety isn’t exactly your forte either," I retorted, pouring myself more tea, as if it would somehow steady my nerves. He ignored the jab. “The artifact's current location is… a private collection. Belonging to a man named Alistair Finch. Very influential. Very well-protected.” “What makes you think I can get to something ‘very well-protected’?” “Because you’re resourceful,” he said, turning to face me, his mismatched eyes locking onto mine. “And because you owe me.” The accusation hit me like a physical blow. I hadn’t expected him to bring it up. Not now. “I don’t owe you anything.” I forced the words out, but my voice lacked conviction. The memory of our last encounter—a tangle of desperation and betrayal—flared in my mind, hot and painful. “Don’t lie, Aurora. Not to me.” He took another step closer. “I covered for you. Cleaned up your mess. A considerable mess, I might add. And I did it because…” He paused, as if searching for the right words. “Because I’m a fool.” “You’re a manipulative bastard, Lucien. Don’t suddenly pretend you were doing me a favor.” “Sentiment is a weakness I typically avoid. Yet, here we are.” He reached into his coat, producing a slim, silver cigarette case and a lighter. The click of the lighter echoed in the small flat, a small, metallic punctuation mark to the simmering tension. He lit a cigarette, inhaling deeply, the tip glowing like a malevolent eye in the dim light. “Finch is… eccentric,” he continued, exhaling a plume of smoke. “He collects rare books, ancient relics, and… people. He has a penchant for acquiring things he shouldn’t. And a rather unsettling interest in the occult.” “Wonderful,” I said dryly. “Just what I needed. Another dose of the bizarre.” “The artifact is a small, obsidian box. Supposedly dating back to the Roman Empire. It contains… something. Something Finch isn't supposed to have.” “And you know what’s in the box, obviously.” “Let’s just say I have a strong suspicion. And a pressing need to ensure it doesn’t fall into the wrong hands.” Ptolemy, sensing my growing agitation, jumped onto my lap, kneading his paws into my thighs. I stroked his fur, trying to find some grounding in his solid weight. “I’m not doing this,” I said, my voice firmer this time. “I’m done with getting involved in your… world, Lucien.” He didn’t react, didn't plead or threaten. He simply stared at me, his expression unreadable. “You weren’t done when you left Cardiff. You weren’t done when you ran to London. And you certainly weren’t done when you took that job at the Golden Empress.” His words were a deliberate twist of the knife. He knew exactly what buttons to push. “That’s low, even for you.” “Truth often is,” he replied calmly. He flicked ash from his cigarette. “Finch is hosting a gathering tonight. A masquerade ball. It will be your point of entry.” He reached into his coat again, this time producing a mask—a delicate, silver filigree creation that concealed the upper half of the face. “Wear this,” he said, handing it to me. “And be careful, Aurora. Finch has a particular taste for broken things.” He paused. “And so do I.” He held my gaze for another agonizing moment, the air thick with unspoken history and simmering attraction. Then, a sharp rap at the door. Not a polite knock, but a demanding pound. Lucien’s eyes narrowed. He moved towards the door, his hand already reaching inside his coat. "Looks like our complication just arrived," he murmured, a dangerous glint returning to his eyes. "And they aren't here for tea."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.15% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"I said tightly [tightly]"
1"I finished already [already]"
2"I said dryly [dryly]"
3"he replied calmly [calmly]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.154
65.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1295
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"really"
2"suddenly"
3"tightly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1295
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"porcelain"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"down my spine"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"tension"
count2
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"calculating"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count2
9
word"silk"
count1
10
word"navigating"
count1
11
word"chaotic"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"encounter"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count1
15
word"simmering"
count2
16
word"ensure"
count1
17
word"flicked"
count1
18
word"unspoken"
count1
19
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"porcelain"
1"familiar"
2"down my spine"
3"chill"
4"tension"
5"weight"
6"calculating"
7"flicker"
8"unreadable"
9"silk"
10"navigating"
11"chaotic"
12"whisper"
13"encounter"
14"echoed"
15"simmering"
16"ensure"
17"flicked"
18"unspoken"
19"glint"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences89
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1285
ratio0.002
matches
0"say"
1"dangerous"
2"does"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount834
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.6
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Earl1
Grey1
November1
Eva4
Ptolemy4
Lucien5
Moreau1
persons
0"Earl"
1"Grey"
2"November"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Lucien"
6"Moreau"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite mask"
1"as if searching for the right words"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.778
wordCount1285
matches
0"Not a polite knock, but a demanding pound"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean24.71
std13.92
cv0.563
sampleLengths
046
11
245
329
48
564
64
726
832
944
1013
1140
1213
1327
1416
1518
1629
1717
1834
198
203
2149
2224
2338
2432
2525
2620
2723
2811
2920
3018
3132
3243
3314
3444
3517
3635
3713
3823
398
4021
4128
4220
4344
4416
455
4651
4726
4817
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences115
ratio0.043
matches
0"Even the way he held himself—relaxed, yet coiled with a predatory grace—was infuriatingly familiar."
1"The scent of him—sandalwood and something darker, something indefinably *dangerous*—filled the small space."
2"stood there, assessing me with those unsettling eyes – one amber, one black, always watching, always calculating."
3"The memory of our last encounter—a tangle of desperation and betrayal—flared in my mind, hot and painful."
4"“Finch is hosting a gathering tonight. A masquerade ball. It will be your point of entry.” He reached into his coat again, this time producing a mask—a delicate, silver filigree creation that concealed the upper half of the face."
85.11% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount842
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.05344418052256532
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.023752969121140142
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean11.17
std7.36
cv0.659
sampleLengths
08
117
27
31
413
51
630
712
83
99
1020
118
1215
133
141
1512
1614
1710
186
193
204
215
2211
234
246
2513
2618
271
2820
2913
3011
317
326
3322
341
3517
3613
3714
385
392
401
415
428
438
447
4511
468
4721
488
497
68.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4434782608695652
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences80
matches
0"Even the way he held"
1"Of course not."
2"Then, a sharp rap at"
ratio0.038
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences80
matches
0"I hadn't expected a visitor,"
1"I hadn’t heard him say"
2"I set the mug down"
3"I managed, the word rusty"
4"He stood framed in the"
5"He hadn't bothered with an"
6"It was a statement, veiled"
7"It hadn’t changed, that."
8"I stepped back, gesturing him"
9"He moved with a fluid"
10"He didn’t offer a greeting,"
11"I asked, my voice sharper"
12"He finally met my gaze,"
13"It wasn’t amusement, not exactly."
14"It made my skin crawl."
15"he said, his voice smooth"
16"I scoffed, crossing my arms"
17"It wasn’t a compliment coming"
18"He took a step closer,"
19"He didn’t flinch."
ratio0.625
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences80
matches
0"The chipped porcelain felt cool"
1"Steam curled from the mug,"
2"I hadn't expected a visitor,"
3"The voice, low and laced"
4"I hadn’t heard him say"
5"I set the mug down"
6"Ptolemy, Eva’s perpetually unimpressed tabby,"
7"I managed, the word rusty"
8"He stood framed in the"
9"The kind of man who"
10"Rain plastered the front of"
11"He hadn't bothered with an"
12"The question wasn’t a request."
13"It was a statement, veiled"
14"It hadn’t changed, that."
15"Lucien always got what he"
16"I stepped back, gesturing him"
17"The flat, perpetually cluttered with"
18"He moved with a fluid"
19"The scent of him—sandalwood and"
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The voice, low and laced with a familiar, infuriating elegance, sent a shiver down my spine that had nothing to do with the November chill seeping through the s…"
1"He moved with a fluid ease, shaking off the rain as if it were nothing more than a minor inconvenience."
2"Ptolemy, sensing my growing agitation, jumped onto my lap, kneading his paws into my thighs."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"I asked, my voice sharper than I intended"
1"he said, his voice smooth as silk"
2"He followed, his movements unnervingly silent"
3"he corrected, his voice dropping to a near whisper"
4"he said, turning to face me, his mismatched eyes locking onto mine"
5"I forced, but my voice lacked conviction"
6"He paused, as if searching for the right words"
7"I said, my voice firmer this time"
8"he murmured, a dangerous glint returning to his eyes"
53.85% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"he corrected (correct)"
2"I retorted (retort)"
3"he continued (continue)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.385
effectiveRatio0.192
73.4356%