| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 69.73% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 991 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "cautiously" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 991 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "down my spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "wavered" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "down my spine" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "vibrated" | | 8 | "cascading" | | 9 | "chilled" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "depths" | | 12 | "crystalline" | | 13 | "palpable" | | 14 | "echoing" | | 15 | "resonated" | | 16 | "fleeting" | | 17 | "familiar" | | 18 | "searing" | | 19 | "echo" | | 20 | "sense of" | | 21 | "profound" | | 22 | "intensity" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 34 | | totalWords | 985 | | ratio | 0.035 | | matches | | 0 | "have" | | 1 | "were" | | 2 | "is" | | 3 | "“Welcome, seekers. You have found the Root. But not all who find the Root are meant to pass.”" | | 4 | "“The guardians watch. The answers lie within. But be warned—knowledge has a price.”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.39% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 837 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.79 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 6 | | Rory | 15 | | Nyx | 6 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Further | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Silas | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Silas" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.604 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 985 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 25.92 | | std | 15.23 | | cv | 0.588 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 28 |
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| 93.57% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "were composed" | | 1 | "was twisted" | | 2 | "was strained" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 148 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "They weren't carved – they *were* the wood, somehow woven into the very grain." | | 1 | "A scent assaulted her – a riot of blossoms unlike anything she'd ever known." | | 2 | "The ground sloped downwards, carpeted in a riot of wildflowers—crimson, indigo, gold—blooming in a season that shouldn't exist." | | 3 | "Not insects – something larger, stranger." | | 4 | "It wasn't spoken—it resonated in their minds, vibrating in their skulls." | | 5 | "A rush of images flooded her mind—fleeting glimpses of landscapes both beautiful and horrifying, faces both familiar and unknown." | | 6 | "The spores dissipated, leaving behind a lingering echo of knowledge—and a sense of profound unease." |
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| 99.67% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 842 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.040380047505938245 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019002375296912115 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 9.38 | | std | 4.33 | | cv | 0.462 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 53.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.3904761904761905 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Further in, the ground began" | | 1 | "Cautiously, Rory started down the" | | 2 | "Suddenly, the ground shifted beneath" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "It hadn't done this before." | | 1 | "Their branches intertwined overhead, blotting" | | 2 | "They weren't carved – they" | | 3 | "Their violet eyes glowed brighter," | | 4 | "It was a bowl." | | 5 | "He reached out a hand," | | 6 | "Its petals shimmered, catching the" | | 7 | "It vibrated in her bones," | | 8 | "She reached out, brushing against" | | 9 | "They stood before a waterfall" | | 10 | "It flowed like liquid moonlight," | | 11 | "It pooled at the base," | | 12 | "He tentatively dipped a finger" | | 13 | "It emerged dry." | | 14 | "It wasn’t a tremor, more" | | 15 | "They were composed of interwoven" | | 16 | "Its trunk was twisted and" | | 17 | "Its branches reached upwards, disappearing" | | 18 | "They drifted towards the tree," | | 19 | "It wasn't spoken—it resonated in" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pulsed hotter against" | | 1 | "It hadn't done this before." | | 2 | "Silas trailed behind, fidgeting with" | | 3 | "Silas’s voice, usual confident, wavered" | | 4 | "Rory ignored him, focused on" | | 5 | "Their branches intertwined overhead, blotting" | | 6 | "They weren't carved – they" | | 7 | "Rory murmured, pushing past the" | | 8 | "The air thickened, becoming viscous" | | 9 | "A scent assaulted her –" | | 10 | "Something sweet and almost cloying," | | 11 | "Nyx flowed past the stones," | | 12 | "Their violet eyes glowed brighter," | | 13 | "Silas, ever the pragmatist, cautiously" | | 14 | "The grove wasn't a clearing." | | 15 | "It was a bowl." | | 16 | "The ground sloped downwards, carpeted" | | 17 | "Silas breathed, forgetting his unease" | | 18 | "He reached out a hand," | | 19 | "Its petals shimmered, catching the" |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 56.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, it throbbed with the" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "It pooled at the base, forming a lagoon that glowed with the same unearthly light." | | 1 | "The air here thrummed with power, a palpable energy that raised the hairs on Rory’s arms." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their voice a mere breath" | | 1 | "Silas trailed, overwhelmed" | | 2 | "Rory said, her voice strained" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Silas breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Rory observed (observe)" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Silas muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.357 | | leniency | 0.714 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.429 | |