Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY97T53TGGATTE314NESBC9

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Duration:
17.2s
Cost:
$0.000143
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain was a greasy film on the windows of Eva’s flat, mirroring the feeling in Aurora’s stomach. It wasn’t a pleasant rain, the kind that washed clean; this was the London rain that clung, bitter and insistent. She’d been lost in a particularly dense chapter of a grimoire – a study of ancient warding rituals she’d picked up from a dusty stall in Camden Market – when a sharp rap echoed through the small space. Three insistent raps. “Eva?” she called out, already knowing the answer. Eva hadn’t spoken to her in six months, not since the fallout with Evan and Aurora’s desperate flight to London. The door swung inward before she could fully process it. Standing there, illuminated by the weak glow of the hallway light, was Lucien Moreau. He was, as always, an unsettlingly perfect embodiment of expensive trouble. His tailored charcoal suit seemed to absorb the light, and the slicked-back platinum blond framed a face that was both sharp and utterly captivating. He held a single, perfect crimson rose, a jarring splash of colour against the grey backdrop of the room. “Carter,” he said, his voice a smooth baritone that cut through the drumming rain. “I trust I haven't intruded.” Aurora straightened, pulling her black hair back from her face. The scent of sandalwood and something distinctly…metallic clung to him, a familiar, unsettling aroma. “Lucien,” she acknowledged, her voice tight. “You have.” He stepped inside, his movements fluid and deliberate, and surveyed the chaos of Eva’s flat with a detached, almost clinical expression. Books spilled from shelves, scrolls lay stacked on the floor, and a half-eaten plate of curry sat precariously on a precarious pile of research notes. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, regarded him with feline suspicion from his perch atop a towering stack of occult texts. “It’s…organized chaos,” Aurora observed, gesturing vaguely. Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, scanned her up and down. “A reflection of its occupant, I presume.” He placed the rose on the table, its velvety petals a fragile counterpoint to the room’s general disarray. “I require your expertise.” “I deliver food,” she stated flatly, returning to her grimoire. “Not exorcisms.” “This is slightly more complicated than a delivery,” he countered, his tone devoid of any discernible humour. “It involves a misplaced talisman, a disgruntled djinn, and a surprisingly wealthy collector with a penchant for suffering.” Aurora finally looked up, intrigued despite herself. “And you need me to find it?” “You have a…unique skillset,” Lucien said, carefully choosing his words. "Your ability to decipher archaic languages and your, shall we say, pragmatic approach to problem-solving are remarkably valuable.” He paused, a subtle shift in his expression that she couldn’t quite decipher. “And frankly, dealing with this particular djinn requires a certain…discretion. A discretion I’m not entirely equipped to provide.” The air thickened, charged with a tension that had been dormant for far too long. Six months. Six months of carefully constructed walls built between them, each brick a deliberate attempt to bury the lingering attraction, the ghost of a shared past. She’d told herself it was simply a professional association, a mutually beneficial arrangement born from a shared interest in the supernatural. But looking at him now, the scent of sandalwood and metal swirling around her, she knew it was so much more. “What exactly did you have in mind?” she asked, her voice carefully neutral. “The talisman was taken from a private collection in Mayfair,” Lucien began, his gaze unwavering. “It’s a small, silver pendant depicting a stylized raven. It’s…volatile. Left unattended, it can induce a rather unpleasant bout of spontaneous combustion.” Aurora snorted. “Spontaneous combustion. Charming.” “Indeed. The collector, Mr. Alistair Finch, is...difficult. He believes he’s entitled to possess all things magical, regardless of their provenance.” He took a step closer, and the scent of him intensified. “I’ve located a lead. A former associate of Finch's, a retired antiquarian named Silas Blackwood. He’s residing above this establishment.” Her gaze flicked to Silas’ bar across the street, a dimly lit haven for late-night drinkers and whispered secrets. She hadn't thought of Silas in months. He’d always been a comforting presence, a reliable anchor in a city that often felt relentlessly chaotic. “Silas won’t give up information easily,” Lucien continued, sensing her hesitation. “He’s a creature of habit, and a rather stubborn one at that. I believed that a…personal touch might expedite the process.” He smiled, a brief, unsettling flash of teeth. “You, Miss Carter, have a reputation for being persuasive.” A blush crept up her neck. It had been a long time since anyone had called her “Miss Carter.” And certainly not with that implication. “You’re asking me to work with you,” she stated, the words feeling surprisingly unfamiliar on her tongue. “I'm requesting your assistance,” Lucien corrected, his voice smooth again. “And offering a considerable sum, naturally. Transportation, accommodation, and a generous donation to your preferred charity.” She knew he was offering more than just money. He was offering a connection, a sliver of something lost and desperately missed. The rain outside intensified, a relentless drumming against the windows. “What do you want me to do?” she finally asked, her voice softer now, laced with a vulnerability she hadn't intended to reveal. Lucien’s amber eye gleamed with an unreadable emotion. “Let’s start with Silas. He’s currently nursing a brandy in his bar. I believe a brief conversation, accompanied by a certain…compelling argument, might prove fruitful.” He paused, extending a hand towards her. “Shall we?” Aurora stared at his hand, then at his face, at the way the platinum blond shimmered in the weak light. The past, sharp and painful, threatened to overwhelm her. But beneath the hurt, beneath the carefully erected defenses, a spark of something undeniable flickered to life. It wasn’t a comfortable feeling, not by a long shot. It was a dangerous, intoxicating pull that she knew, with a growing sense of dread and exhilaration, she couldn't resist. She took his hand.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she stated flatly [flatly]"
1"she finally asked [finally]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
69.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount997
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count4
highlights
0"utterly"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount997
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"constructed"
count1
8
word"unwavering"
count1
9
word"flicked"
count1
10
word"comforting"
count1
11
word"chaotic"
count1
12
word"implication"
count1
13
word"unreadable"
count1
14
word"shimmered"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count1
16
word"comfortable"
count1
17
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"echoed"
2"perfect"
3"familiar"
4"scanned"
5"charged"
6"tension"
7"constructed"
8"unwavering"
9"flicked"
10"comforting"
11"chaotic"
12"implication"
13"unreadable"
14"shimmered"
15"flickered"
16"comfortable"
17"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences56
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords995
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.86% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount698
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Aurora7
London2
Camden1
Market1
Evan1
Lucien7
Moreau1
Silas1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
4"Moreau"
5"Silas"
places
0"London"
1"Camden"
globalScore0.999
windowScore1
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite decipher"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount995
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean39.8
std23.98
cv0.602
sampleLengths
079
128
278
319
432
565
66
741
812
935
1014
1159
1284
1313
1437
155
1651
1743
1849
1942
2026
2155
2242
2376
244
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"been lost"
73.02% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs105
matches
0"was offering"
1"was offering"
60.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences69
ratio0.029
matches
0"It wasn’t a pleasant rain, the kind that washed clean; this was the London rain that clung, bitter and insistent."
1"She’d been lost in a particularly dense chapter of a grimoire – a study of ancient warding rituals she’d picked up from a dusty stall in Camden Market – when a sharp rap echoed through the small space."
88.49% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount558
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.04659498207885305
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.026881720430107527
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean14.42
std8.24
cv0.571
sampleLengths
018
120
238
33
48
520
610
714
811
924
1019
1114
125
1310
1414
156
162
1721
1825
1919
206
2112
2225
234
2410
252
2617
2718
287
297
3010
3131
3218
3315
342
3525
3621
3721
3813
3915
4022
412
423
4331
4420
4519
467
4717
4811
4929
64.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.42028985507246375
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
5.19% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences54
matches
0"It wasn’t a pleasant rain,"
1"She’d been lost in a"
2"she called out, already knowing"
3"He was, as always, an"
4"His tailored charcoal suit seemed"
5"He held a single, perfect"
6"he said, his voice a"
7"she acknowledged, her voice tight"
8"He stepped inside, his movements"
9"He placed the rose on"
10"she stated flatly, returning to"
11"he countered, his tone devoid"
12"He paused, a subtle shift"
13"She’d told herself it was"
14"she asked, her voice carefully"
15"He took a step closer,"
16"Her gaze flicked to"
17"She hadn't thought of Silas"
18"He’d always been a comforting"
19"He smiled, a brief, unsettling"
ratio0.537
6.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences54
matches
0"The rain was a greasy"
1"It wasn’t a pleasant rain,"
2"She’d been lost in a"
3"she called out, already knowing"
4"Eva hadn’t spoken to her"
5"The door swung inward before"
6"He was, as always, an"
7"His tailored charcoal suit seemed"
8"He held a single, perfect"
9"he said, his voice a"
10"Aurora straightened, pulling her black"
11"The scent of sandalwood and"
12"she acknowledged, her voice tight"
13"He stepped inside, his movements"
14"Books spilled from shelves, scrolls"
15"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, regarded"
16"Aurora observed, gesturing vaguely"
17"Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes, one amber,"
18"He placed the rose on"
19"she stated flatly, returning to"
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"It wasn’t a pleasant rain, the kind that washed clean; this was the London rain that clung, bitter and insistent."
1"His tailored charcoal suit seemed to absorb the light, and the slicked-back platinum blond framed a face that was both sharp and utterly captivating."
2"The air thickened, charged with a tension that had been dormant for far too long."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she acknowledged, her voice tight"
1"he countered, his tone devoid of any discernible humour"
2"she asked, her voice carefully neutral"
3"Lucien began, his gaze unwavering"
4"she stated, the words feeling surprisingly unfamiliar on her tongue"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"she acknowledged (acknowledge)"
2"Aurora observed (observe)"
3"she stated flatly (state)"
4"Lucien continued (continue)"
5"she stated (state)"
6"Lucien corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.344
leniency0.688
rawRatio0.636
effectiveRatio0.438
69.9949%