Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY98QAJM8JDCTBCJWB6QP24

Run Details

Duration:
34.7s
Cost:
$0.000244
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air tasted of dust and something else, something acrid and faintly metallic, like old blood. Detective Harlow Quinn scanned the cavernous space, her gaze sweeping over the damp concrete walls and the grimy tracks disappearing into the darkness. An abandoned Tube station. Not just any abandoned station, but a section of the Northern Line shuttered in the aftermath of the Blitz, rumored to have been repurposed decades ago for…well, rumors varied. Most centered on smuggling and illegal gambling. This? This was different. The victim lay sprawled on the tracks, a man in a tailored suit, impeccably dressed despite his demise. No obvious wounds. Just a stillness that felt wrong, unnatural. He hadn’t been shot, stabbed, or bludgeoned. He simply…stopped. “Tripped,” Sergeant Davies had called it over the radio. “Fell on the tracks. Tragic accident.” Quinn didn’t believe in tragic accidents, not in her eighteen years on the force. Especially not in places like this. She knelt beside the body, ignoring the grit that clung to her knees. The suit was expensive; Italian wool, hand-stitched. The man’s face was pale, almost translucent. His eyes were open, staring blankly at the vaulted ceiling. A single, perfect white rose lay on his chest. “Rose seems a bit much for a random fall,” she murmured, her voice echoing in the silence. Her gaze drifted to the tracks themselves. Clean. Too clean. There wasn't a smear of blood, not a single scuff mark to indicate a struggle or even a desperate grab for purchase as he fell. A man tumbling from the platform onto these tracks would leave a mess. This…this was staged. "Doesn't look like he was running from anything," Officer Miller offered, standing a little too far away from the body, his face pale in the flickering beam of his flashlight. "No sign of forced entry. Looks like he walked right in." Quinn ignored him, her attention caught by something glinting in the shadows near the tunnel entrance. She moved closer, her worn leather watch pressing against her wrist as she navigated the uneven ground. It was a small, brass object, tarnished with green verdigris. A compass. Not just any compass. It was intricately crafted, its casing etched with unfamiliar sigils. It hummed faintly in her hand, a subtle vibration she felt more than heard. A Veil Compass. She recognized it from whispered accounts and hushed conversations within the Met’s more discreet departments. A tool for navigating the supernatural undercurrents of London. “What’s that?” Davies asked, appearing beside her, his breath misting in the cold air. He was a young sergeant, eager to please, but easily distracted. “Evidence,” Quinn said, her voice clipped. “Bag it.” Davies fumbled with evidence bags, his brow furrowed in confusion. “A compass? What’s that got to do with anything? He could have been an explorer, a collector…” “This isn’t a collector’s item, Davies. This is something…else.” She turned her attention to the compass face. The needle spun wildly for a moment before settling, pointing directly towards the dark tunnel mouth. Not north. Not south. Toward something…else. "Agreed," a dry voice said from behind her. Quinn turned to see Eva Kowalski, bundled in a thick coat, her round glasses perched on her nose. Eva clutched her worn leather satchel, its buckles glinting in the flashlight beam. "Surreal, isn't it?" Eva said, her green eyes alight with a mixture of fascination and apprehension. "The rose, the pristine tracks...it’s all…theatrical." "That's what I'm saying," Quinn confirmed. "This wasn’t an accident. Someone wanted this to look like an accident." Eva nodded, tucking a strand of her curly red hair behind her left ear. A nervous habit Quinn had come to recognize. “The Veil Market. You think it's connected?” Quinn considered the question, her gaze returning to the compass. “It’s a possibility. A Veil Compass doesn’t just appear in abandoned Tube stations by chance.” The Veil Market, a notorious black market trading in enchanted goods and forbidden knowledge, only opened on the night of the full moon, shifting locations to avoid detection. This wasn't a full moon. But someone could’ve brought something from there… “The rose," Eva continued, her voice low. "Roses are often associated with portals, thresholds. Boundaries between worlds.” Quinn’s sharp jawline tightened. She felt that familiar gnawing sensation, the one that always accompanied a case that pricked at the edges of her understanding. The inexplicable. The impossible. The case that cost her DS Morris his life three years ago. “Morris would have seen this immediately,” she muttered, the memory of his sharp eyes and steady hand a painful ache in her gut. He’d always had an uncanny knack for spotting the inconsistencies, the gaps in the narrative. “He respected the unseen,” Eva said softly, as if reading her thoughts. “You do too, Quinn. You just don’t want to admit it.” Quinn ignored the comment, focusing on the layout of the station. The tracks split ahead, leading deeper into the subterranean labyrinth. There was a faint shimmer in the air down one of the tunnels, almost imperceptible, but it was there. A distortion, like heat rising off asphalt on a summer day. "Davies, Miller, secure the perimeter. No one leaves. Anyone coming in, I want their names, their stories, and what they're doing down here." She issued the orders, her voice ringing with the authority of years of experience. “Eva, I need you to run this compass. See if you can identify the symbols. And check the archives. See if there are any records of similar incidents—anyone found dead in this station, or any others, with a single white rose.” Eva nodded, already digging in her satchel. "And what about the victim? Any leads?" Quinn shook her head. "Nothing yet. Wallet's clean. No ID. But something about him…he looks familiar. I just can't place it.” Her eyes scanned the surrounding concrete and metal, as if searching for an invisible clue. "Maybe he *was* just passing through," Davies offered, still seeming unsure of himself. “Maybe he got lost, wandered down here, and…it was just bad luck.” Quinn fixed him with a look that could curdle milk. “Bad luck doesn’t leave sigils on a compass, Sergeant. Bad luck doesn’t plant a single white rose on a corpse. Bad luck doesn’t create a shimmering distortion in the air.” She pointed towards the tunnel where the shimmering distortion was most intense. The Veil Compass needle pulsed, vibrating urgently against her palm. “This isn’t a random event, Davies. This is a signal. And I think someone, or *something*, wanted us to find it.” She felt a chill crawl down her spine, a premonition of something dark and unsettling. The scent of dust and metal deepened, mingling with a new odor - ozone, like the aftermath of a lightning strike. And beneath it all, that faintest echosomething old, something powerful, something not of this world. "The question is," Quinn said, her gaze fixed on the dark tunnel, “what are we supposed to do with it now?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.581
leniency1
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.056
95.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1161
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1161
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"scanned"
count2
1
word"aftermath"
count2
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count2
6
word"navigated"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"navigating"
count1
9
word"furrowed"
count1
10
word"surreal"
count1
11
word"apprehension"
count1
12
word"pristine"
count1
13
word"familiar"
count2
14
word"uncanny"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count1
16
word"chill"
count1
17
word"down her spine"
count1
18
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"aftermath"
2"perfect"
3"echoing"
4"silence"
5"glinting"
6"navigated"
7"etched"
8"navigating"
9"furrowed"
10"surreal"
11"apprehension"
12"pristine"
13"familiar"
14"uncanny"
15"pulsed"
16"chill"
17"down her spine"
18"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences83
matches
0"d in confusion"
1"felt a chill"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1160
ratio0.002
matches
0"was"
1"something"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount844
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.54
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn13
Tube1
Northern1
Line1
Blitz1
Davies4
Italian1
Miller1
Veil3
Compass2
Met1
London1
Eva7
Kowalski1
Market1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Line"
3"Blitz"
4"Davies"
5"Miller"
6"Eva"
7"Kowalski"
8"Market"
9"Morris"
places
0"Compass"
1"Met"
2"London"
globalScore0.73
windowScore0.667
68.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if reading her thoughts"
1"as if searching for an invisible clue"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.862
wordCount1160
matches
0"Not just any abandoned station, but a section of the Northern Line shuttered in the aftermath of"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean35.15
std19.18
cv0.546
sampleLengths
083
137
215
320
446
517
651
741
845
955
1025
118
1227
1339
148
1531
1622
1718
1829
1965
2017
2141
2238
2323
2451
2578
2614
2736
2825
2940
3022
3172
3221
92.58% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences83
matches
0"been repurposed"
1"been shot"
2"was staged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs137
matches(empty)
83.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences96
ratio0.021
matches
0"The suit was expensive; Italian wool, hand-stitched."
1"The scent of dust and metal deepened, mingling with a new odor - ozone, like the aftermath of a lightning strike."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount844
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"single, perfect white rose"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.035545023696682464
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.015402843601895734
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean12.08
std8.93
cv0.739
sampleLengths
016
123
24
329
47
51
63
718
83
97
107
112
129
136
1414
156
1613
177
187
1910
209
2117
227
231
242
2525
2613
273
2830
2911
3016
3117
3210
332
344
3510
3614
373
3815
399
4014
4111
426
432
4410
4517
4617
4716
482
492
59.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4166666666666667
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners40
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences72
matches
0"Just a stillness that felt"
1"Especially not in places like"
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences72
matches
0"He hadn’t been shot, stabbed,"
1"She knelt beside the body,"
2"His eyes were open, staring"
3"she murmured, her voice echoing"
4"Her gaze drifted to the"
5"She moved closer, her worn"
6"It was a small, brass"
7"It was intricately crafted, its"
8"It hummed faintly in her"
9"She recognized it from whispered"
10"He was a young sergeant,"
11"She turned her attention to"
12"She felt that familiar gnawing"
13"she muttered, the memory of"
14"He’d always had an uncanny"
15"She issued the orders, her"
16"Her eyes scanned the surrounding"
17"She pointed towards the tunnel"
18"She felt a chill crawl"
ratio0.264
29.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences72
matches
0"The air tasted of dust"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn scanned the"
2"An abandoned Tube station."
3"This was different."
4"The victim lay sprawled on"
5"He hadn’t been shot, stabbed,"
6"Sergeant Davies had called it"
7"Quinn didn’t believe in tragic"
8"She knelt beside the body,"
9"The suit was expensive; Italian"
10"The man’s face was pale,"
11"His eyes were open, staring"
12"A single, perfect white rose"
13"she murmured, her voice echoing"
14"Her gaze drifted to the"
15"A man tumbling from the"
16"This…this was staged."
17"Officer Miller offered, standing a"
18"Quinn ignored him, her attention"
19"She moved closer, her worn"
ratio0.861
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She felt that familiar gnawing sensation, the one that always accompanied a case that pricked at the edges of her understanding."
1"The case that cost her DS Morris his life three years ago."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she murmured, her voice echoing in the silence"
1"Quinn said, her voice clipped"
2"Eva continued, her voice low"
3"Eva said softly, as if reading her thoughts"
4"She issued, her voice ringing with the authority of years of experience"
5"Her eyes scanned, as if searching for an invisible clue"
6"She felt, a premonition of something dark and unsettling"
20.97% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"Quinn confirmed (confirm)"
2"Eva continued (continue)"
3"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.323
leniency0.645
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.258
80.1096%