Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY98WY6TARAA460WCGC1H7T

Run Details

Duration:
37.8s
Cost:
$0.000248
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement, slicking the cobblestones under Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots. Each footfall sent a spray of water into the already soaked air. Ahead, a figure—Silas, the proprietor of The Raven’s Nest—darted between overflowing bins and shadowed doorways. He moved with an unsettling grace for a man his age, a flicker of white hair catching the sodium glare of the streetlights. Quinn pushed harder, her breath misting in the frigid night. Eighteen years on the force hadn’t prepared her for this. Not for the lingering scent of ozone and old parchment clinging to Silas’ coat, not for the way the shadows seemed to stretch and writhe around him. Not for the feeling that she was chasing something far beyond the realm of petty theft or drug dealing. “Silas!” she yelled, her voice swallowed by the downpour. “Stop! You’re obstructing a police investigation!” He didn’t respond, just increased his pace, disappearing into a narrow alleyway reeking of stale beer and damp concrete. Quinn followed without hesitation, ignoring the prickle of unease crawling up her spine. The alley opened onto a quieter street, lined with boarded-up shops and forgotten doorways. Silas vanished behind a graffiti-covered wall. Quinn rounded the corner, gun drawn, heart pounding. Nothing. Just the relentless rain and the echoing drip from a leaking drainpipe. She scanned the street, her eyes catching on a small, almost imperceptible indentation in the pavement, concealed by shadows. A metal ring, slightly tarnished. She knelt, ignoring the cold seeping through her trousers, and grasped the ring. It rotated with a quiet click, and a section of the pavement groaned open, revealing a steep, dark staircase descending into the earth. A gust of warm, damp air, carrying an unfamiliar aroma of spices and something metallic, wafted up from the depths. Quinn hesitated. The rain intensified, plastering her hair to her forehead. Three years. Three years since Morris, since that case that twisted her understanding of reality. It started subtly—odd artifacts, whispers of things that shouldn't exist. Then, the darkness. And then, Morris. She pulled out her phone, but the signal was dead. Typical. A muffled shout came from below, followed by the clatter of something heavy being dropped. Silas. Quinn looked back at the rain-swept street, at the mundane normality of the shops and the passing cars. Then she looked down at the gaping maw in the pavement, the gateway to something unknown. Doubt gnawed at her. This wasn’t standard procedure. This wasn’t something she could explain to her superiors. But she couldn't shake the feeling that this—whatever this was—held the key to unlocking the secrets of Silas and potentially understanding what happened to Morris. She descended the stairs, her hand gripping the cold, damp stone. The air grew thicker, heavier, the scent of unfamiliar spices intensifying. The stairs opened into a vast, cavernous space. It was a market. But unlike anything Quinn had ever seen. The air throbbed with a strange energy, a hum that vibrated in her bones. Stalls lined the cavern walls, illuminated by flickering lanterns that cast long, dancing shadows. People—or things that resembled people—moved through the throng, their faces obscured by masks or shrouded in cloaks. There were vendors hawking glowing potions, antique weapons adorned with strange symbols, and vials filled with iridescent liquids. The language was a Babel of unfamiliar tongues, punctuated by the clinking of coins and the murmur of bartering. A figure with skin like polished obsidian bartered over a length of shimmering fabric with a woman whose eyes glowed with an unnatural luminescence. A hulking brute, covered in intricate tattoos, examined a set of bone dice. Quinn felt like she’d stumbled into a fever dream. She spotted Silas near the center of the market, speaking animatedly to a vendor behind a stall piled high with ornate boxes. He was gesturing wildly, his face flushed with excitement. She moved cautiously, scanning the crowd. The market felt…watched. She could feel dozens of eyes on her, assessing, calculating. A flicker of movement caught her eye—a tall, gaunt figure cloaked in shadows, its face hidden by a deep hood. It didn’t move, just stood there, observing. “Can I help you, officer?” Quinn spun around, gun raised. A man stood before her, leaning against a stall displaying an array of bizarre, pulsating fungi. He was tall, with olive skin, short, curly dark brown hair, and warm brown eyes. A Saint Christopher medallion hung around his neck. A thin scar ran along his left forearm. “Who are you?” Quinn demanded, keeping her weapon trained on him. “Tomás Herrera,” he replied, his voice calm, almost soothing. He raised his hands in a gesture of peace. “And you are clearly out of your element.” “I’m a detective,” Quinn said, her voice tight. “I’m looking for a man named Silas.” Herrera’s eyes flickered to Silas’ location. “Silas frequents this market. He’s…a collector of rare items.” “And what is this place?” Quinn asked, gesturing around the bustling market. “They call it the Veil Market,” Herrera said. “A place where things not found in the mundane world are bought and sold.” “Supernatural things?” He didn’t deny it. “Among other things.” He paused, studying her face. “Detective, you shouldn’t be here. This place…it’s not for people like you.” “People like me?” Quinn repeated. “People bound by laws, by reason,” Herrera said. “Here, those things hold little sway.” He glanced nervously at the cloaked figure still observing them from the shadows. “You’re drawing attention to yourself. Silas won’t appreciate it.” “I need to talk to him,” Quinn insisted. “He’s a suspect in a case.” Herrera shook his head. “That’s unwise. Things here can be…complicated.” He looked pointedly at her gun. “I can handle myself.” Quinn tightened her grip on the weapon. “You might be surprised,” Herrera said quietly. "And it gets moved every full moon. You'll be lost." He paused, then added, "Tell me, Detective... do you have a bone token?" Quinn frowned. "A what?" "Entry," Herrera clarified, gesturing to the crowd. "Everyone here has one. You don’t…” He didn’t finish the sentence. A gruff voice cut through the market’s clamor. “Quinn. What are you doing here?” Quinn froze. She recognized that voice. Deep, clipped, authoritative. Detective Harlow Quinn slowly turned around. Silas stood a few feet away, his face a mask of controlled fury. “I could ask you the same question,” Quinn retorted, keeping her gun trained on him. Silas chuckled, a dry, rasping sound. "I'm just here to shop. Isn't that right, Tomás?" Herrera met Quinn's gaze, a look of concern etched on his face. “You’re making a mistake, Quinn,” Silas said, his voice dropping to a menacing whisper. “Leave now, and I might let you walk away.”
created_at"2026-02-20T19:43:49.713Z" 2/20/2026, 7:43:49 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"He glanced nervously [nervously]"
1"He looked pointedly [pointedly]"
2"Herrera said quietly [quietly]"
3"He paused then [then]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.588
leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
82.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"nervously"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"cautiously"
2"nervously"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"footfall"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count2
2
word"pounding"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"depths"
count1
6
word"maw"
count1
7
word"standard"
count1
8
word"throbbed"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"dancing"
count1
11
word"hulking"
count1
12
word"intricate"
count1
13
word"scanning"
count1
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"calculating"
count1
16
word"flickered"
count1
17
word"etched"
count1
18
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"footfall"
1"flicker"
2"pounding"
3"echoing"
4"scanned"
5"depths"
6"maw"
7"standard"
8"throbbed"
9"vibrated"
10"dancing"
11"hulking"
12"intricate"
13"scanning"
14"could feel"
15"calculating"
16"flickered"
17"etched"
18"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences94
matches
0"d with excitement"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1112
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount895
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.23
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective2
Harlow2
Quinn20
Silas8
Raven1
Nest1
Morris3
Babel1
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera7
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Silas"
3"Raven"
4"Nest"
5"Morris"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
8"Herrera"
places(empty)
globalScore0.383
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like she’d stumbled into a fever d"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1112
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"feeling that she"
1"recognized that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean24.17
std19.23
cv0.795
sampleLengths
062
166
215
360
41
536
656
742
811
916
1034
1142
1230
134
147
1582
1646
1731
1846
195
2052
2111
2226
2315
2415
2512
2622
272
2824
295
3036
3114
3216
3311
3417
3513
364
3713
3813
396
409
4119
4215
4315
4412
4523
97.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"being dropped"
1"was—held"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs170
matches
0"was chasing"
1"was gesturing"
12.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences110
ratio0.045
matches
0"Ahead, a figure—Silas, the proprietor of The Raven’s Nest—darted between overflowing bins and shadowed doorways."
1"It started subtly—odd artifacts, whispers of things that shouldn't exist."
2"But she couldn't shake the feeling that this—whatever this was—held the key to unlocking the secrets of Silas and potentially understanding what happened to Morris."
3"People—or things that resembled people—moved through the throng, their faces obscured by masks or shrouded in cloaks."
4"A flicker of movement caught her eye—a tall, gaunt figure cloaked in shadows, its face hidden by a deep hood."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount230
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.017391304347826087
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.004347826086956522
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean10.11
std5.81
cv0.575
sampleLengths
012
112
215
323
410
510
627
719
89
96
1019
1113
1214
136
148
151
1612
1719
185
1913
2023
2120
222
239
242
2513
2610
273
283
2910
301
3115
321
3318
3416
354
364
379
3825
3911
4011
418
424
437
4414
4514
4617
4718
4819
4924
53.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.37272727272727274
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences83
matches
0"Just the relentless rain and"
1"Then, the darkness."
2"Then she looked down at"
ratio0.036
99.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences83
matches
0"He moved with an unsettling"
1"she yelled, her voice swallowed"
2"He didn’t respond, just increased"
3"She scanned the street, her"
4"She knelt, ignoring the cold"
5"It rotated with a quiet"
6"It started subtly—odd artifacts, whispers"
7"She pulled out her phone,"
8"She descended the stairs, her"
9"It was a market."
10"She spotted Silas near the"
11"He was gesturing wildly, his"
12"She moved cautiously, scanning the"
13"She could feel dozens of"
14"It didn’t move, just stood"
15"He was tall, with olive"
16"he replied, his voice calm,"
17"He raised his hands in"
18"He didn’t deny it."
19"He paused, studying her face"
ratio0.301
44.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences83
matches
0"Each footfall sent a spray"
1"He moved with an unsettling"
2"Quinn pushed harder, her breath"
3"she yelled, her voice swallowed"
4"He didn’t respond, just increased"
5"Quinn followed without hesitation, ignoring"
6"The alley opened onto a"
7"Silas vanished behind a graffiti-covered"
8"Quinn rounded the corner, gun"
9"She scanned the street, her"
10"A metal ring, slightly tarnished."
11"She knelt, ignoring the cold"
12"It rotated with a quiet"
13"A gust of warm, damp"
14"The rain intensified, plastering her"
15"It started subtly—odd artifacts, whispers"
16"She pulled out her phone,"
17"A muffled shout came from"
18"Quinn looked back at the"
19"Doubt gnawed at her."
ratio0.831
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He didn’t respond, just increased his pace, disappearing into a narrow alleyway reeking of stale beer and damp concrete."
1"Three years since Morris, since that case that twisted her understanding of reality."
2"Stalls lined the cavern walls, illuminated by flickering lanterns that cast long, dancing shadows."
3"People—or things that resembled people—moved through the throng, their faces obscured by masks or shrouded in cloaks."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice tight"
1"Silas said, his voice dropping to a menacing whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she yelled (yell)"
1"Quinn demanded (demand)"
2"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
3"Quinn insisted (insist)"
4"Herrera clarified (clarify)"
5"Quinn retorted (retort)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.382
leniency0.765
rawRatio0.462
effectiveRatio0.353
74.8131%