| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He glanced nervously [nervously]" | | 1 | "He looked pointedly [pointedly]" | | 2 | "Herrera said quietly [quietly]" | | 3 | "He paused then [then]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.588 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |
| 82.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1123 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "nervously" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 10.95% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1123 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "footfall" | | 1 | "flicker" | | 2 | "pounding" | | 3 | "echoing" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "depths" | | 6 | "maw" | | 7 | "standard" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "vibrated" | | 10 | "dancing" | | 11 | "hulking" | | 12 | "intricate" | | 13 | "scanning" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "calculating" | | 16 | "flickered" | | 17 | "etched" | | 18 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1112 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 895 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.23 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Detective | 2 | | Harlow | 2 | | Quinn | 20 | | Silas | 8 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Morris | 3 | | Babel | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Herrera | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Raven" | | 4 | "Nest" | | 5 | "Morris" | | 6 | "Saint" | | 7 | "Christopher" | | 8 | "Herrera" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.383 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like she’d stumbled into a fever d" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "feeling that she" | | 1 | "recognized that voice" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 24.17 | | std | 19.23 | | cv | 0.795 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 82 | | 16 | 46 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 52 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 36 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 23 |
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| 97.80% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "being dropped" | | 1 | "was—held" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | | 0 | "was chasing" | | 1 | "was gesturing" |
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| 12.99% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, a figure—Silas, the proprietor of The Raven’s Nest—darted between overflowing bins and shadowed doorways." | | 1 | "It started subtly—odd artifacts, whispers of things that shouldn't exist." | | 2 | "But she couldn't shake the feeling that this—whatever this was—held the key to unlocking the secrets of Silas and potentially understanding what happened to Morris." | | 3 | "People—or things that resembled people—moved through the throng, their faces obscured by masks or shrouded in cloaks." | | 4 | "A flicker of movement caught her eye—a tall, gaunt figure cloaked in shadows, its face hidden by a deep hood." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 230 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 4 | | adverbRatio | 0.017391304347826087 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004347826086956522 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 10.11 | | std | 5.81 | | cv | 0.575 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 53.94% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.37272727272727274 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the relentless rain and" | | 1 | "Then, the darkness." | | 2 | "Then she looked down at" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 99.52% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "He moved with an unsettling" | | 1 | "she yelled, her voice swallowed" | | 2 | "He didn’t respond, just increased" | | 3 | "She scanned the street, her" | | 4 | "She knelt, ignoring the cold" | | 5 | "It rotated with a quiet" | | 6 | "It started subtly—odd artifacts, whispers" | | 7 | "She pulled out her phone," | | 8 | "She descended the stairs, her" | | 9 | "It was a market." | | 10 | "She spotted Silas near the" | | 11 | "He was gesturing wildly, his" | | 12 | "She moved cautiously, scanning the" | | 13 | "She could feel dozens of" | | 14 | "It didn’t move, just stood" | | 15 | "He was tall, with olive" | | 16 | "he replied, his voice calm," | | 17 | "He raised his hands in" | | 18 | "He didn’t deny it." | | 19 | "He paused, studying her face" |
| | ratio | 0.301 | |
| 44.34% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Each footfall sent a spray" | | 1 | "He moved with an unsettling" | | 2 | "Quinn pushed harder, her breath" | | 3 | "she yelled, her voice swallowed" | | 4 | "He didn’t respond, just increased" | | 5 | "Quinn followed without hesitation, ignoring" | | 6 | "The alley opened onto a" | | 7 | "Silas vanished behind a graffiti-covered" | | 8 | "Quinn rounded the corner, gun" | | 9 | "She scanned the street, her" | | 10 | "A metal ring, slightly tarnished." | | 11 | "She knelt, ignoring the cold" | | 12 | "It rotated with a quiet" | | 13 | "A gust of warm, damp" | | 14 | "The rain intensified, plastering her" | | 15 | "It started subtly—odd artifacts, whispers" | | 16 | "She pulled out her phone," | | 17 | "A muffled shout came from" | | 18 | "Quinn looked back at the" | | 19 | "Doubt gnawed at her." |
| | ratio | 0.831 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 67.67% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "He didn’t respond, just increased his pace, disappearing into a narrow alleyway reeking of stale beer and damp concrete." | | 1 | "Three years since Morris, since that case that twisted her understanding of reality." | | 2 | "Stalls lined the cavern walls, illuminated by flickering lanterns that cast long, dancing shadows." | | 3 | "People—or things that resembled people—moved through the throng, their faces obscured by masks or shrouded in cloaks." |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn said, her voice tight" | | 1 | "Silas said, his voice dropping to a menacing whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she yelled (yell)" | | 1 | "Quinn demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "Quinn repeated (repeat)" | | 3 | "Quinn insisted (insist)" | | 4 | "Herrera clarified (clarify)" | | 5 | "Quinn retorted (retort)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.382 | | leniency | 0.765 | | rawRatio | 0.462 | | effectiveRatio | 0.353 | |