Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9923P15EJ3KPA5EK9TDER

Run Details

Duration:
38.9s
Cost:
$0.000259
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain tasted of coal dust and desperation. Harlow Quinn’s coat, a practical, dark grey number several years out of style, plastered to her legs as she pounded the slick pavement. Each breath hitched in her throat, a ragged counterpoint to the drumming of the downpour. Ahead, Silas—the proprietor of The Raven’s Nest, and currently her prime suspect—moved with a surprising agility for a man his age, his long coat billowing behind him like a shroud. He’d bolted from the bar the instant she'd mentioned needing to ask him a few questions about a shipment of “rare herbs” that had been delivered earlier that evening. Rare herbs, she suspected, were a euphemism for something considerably more potent. And illegal. Twenty years on the force hadn't dulled her instincts, but they sharpened with every case she pursued. This one, this prickling sense of wrongness, felt different. It clung to her like the damp chill seeping through her shoes. She risked a glance over her shoulder. Two uniformed officers were gaining on him, but not quickly enough. Silas had a head start, a familiarity with these labyrinthine alleyways that she lacked. The neon green glow of The Raven’s Nest’s sign, a faded raven perched on a swirling branch, receded behind her. The chase weaved through the narrow streets of Soho, a frantic dance amongst overflowing bins and flickering streetlights. Silas ducked under a sagging awning, disappearing momentarily into the shadows. Harlow pushed past, her hand instinctively moving to the SIG Sauer holstered at her hip. He reappeared at the mouth of a service tunnel, a rusted metal door set into the brickwork. Without hesitation, he fumbled with a lock, the screech of protesting metal echoing in the rain-swept night. “Silas!” Harlow shouted, her voice strained against the wind and rain. He didn't answer, only yanked the door open and plunged into the darkness. She hesitated, the raw scent of damp earth and something else… something ancient and unsettling… wafting out of the tunnel. It wasn’t the usual subterranean grime of London's underbelly. It was…different. Her watch gleamed faintly in the dim light – a worn leather piece, a relic from her father, a reminder of a life before the job consumed her. Checking the time offered no comfort. It only seemed to amplify the silence that pressed in on her. The uniformed officers arrived, panting and soaked, at the tunnel's entrance. “Detective Quinn! What’s down there?” the younger one, Miller, called out, his voice tight with apprehension. Harlow didn't respond. She glanced back at the tunnel entrance, a dark maw promising unknown dangers. This wasn’t a simple case of smuggling. Something else was at play, something she couldn't quite grasp. The missing pieces of her partner’s disappearance, three years ago, felt like they might be buried down there, too. She thought of DS Morris. The official report listed it as a tragic accident during a stakeout. But Harlow knew better. There were inconsistencies, shadows at the edges of the investigation that had never been fully illuminated. Shadows that whispered of something beyond the mundane. “He’s gone underground,” she stated, her voice low and steady despite the turmoil in her gut. “Secure the perimeter. Don’t let anyone in or out.” Miller’s face was a mask of confusion. “Underground? What are we even looking for, Detective?” “Something I don't understand yet,” Harlow replied, turning back to the tunnel entrance. “But I intend to find out.” Taking a deep breath, she engaged the tactical light on her weapon, a beam of white cutting through the oppressive darkness. The air grew colder as she stepped inside. The tunnel sloped downward, the walls slick with moisture. The familiar smell of sewage gradually faded, replaced by a musty odor that pricked at her nostrils. The tunnel opened into a vast, cavernous space. A low hum vibrated through the floor, resonating in her bones. The rain above was gone; the air was strangely still, thick with an almost palpable energy. And then she saw it. A sprawling marketplace spread out before her, bathed in the eerie glow of flickering lanterns suspended from the low-hanging ceiling. Stalls lined the cavern walls, displaying an array of bizarre and unsettling wares: dried herbs in unfamiliar shapes, vials filled with iridescent liquids, strange metallic objects that pulsed with an inner light. The architecture was impossible, defying conventional engineering – arches and pillars seemed to defy gravity, constructed from a black, obsidian-like material. This was no ordinary underground space. This was… the Veil Market. She’d heard whispers of it, legends dismissed as urban myths by her superiors. A black market for the supernatural, they said, a place where the veil between worlds thinned. A place that moved locations every full moon, hidden beneath the ever-changing landscape of London. A man with olive skin and short, curly dark brown hair hurried past, his Saint Christopher medallion swinging against his chest. Tomás Herrera. She recognized him instantly from his medical records. A former paramedic, now operating outside the bounds of the NHS, providing illicit care to… individuals. He spotted her and froze, his warm brown eyes widening in alarm. He didn’t stop, however, but darted deeper into the market. He was headed for a stall draped in heavy black cloth, the air around it shimmering with an unnatural heat. Harlow moved forward, her boots echoing on the damp stone floor. The crowd was strangely silent, a collection of shadowy figures cloaked in long robes and concealing hoods. She caught glimpses of inhuman features beneath the fabric – elongated ears, iridescent scales, eyes that glowed with an otherworldly light. The scent was almost overwhelming now – a mixture of exotic spices, decay, and something indefinably… magic. She felt a prickle of unease crawl across her skin, the instinctive warning of a predator sensing another. She scanned the crowd, searching for Silas. He was nowhere to be seen. Reaching the stall, she saw Silas engaged in a hushed conversation with a slender figure draped in crimson robes. The figure’s face was obscured by a deep hood, but Harlow caught a flash of silver rings adorning long, elegant fingers. Silas was handing over a small, intricately carved wooden box. The figure accepted it with a curt nod, then produced a small, bone-like token – a simple circle etched with strange runes. “The exchange is complete,” Silas said, his voice barely a whisper. “As agreed,” replied the figure. “The information will be delivered within the hour.” The figure turned to leave, disappearing into the throng of shoppers. Silas watched him go, a flicker of something unreadable in his eyes. Harlow stepped forward, her gun raised. “Silas,” she said, her voice ringing out through the unnatural quiet. He turned, his face pale, the facade of amiable bar owner crumbling to reveal a desperate man. "Detective Quinn," he said, his voice tight. “What are you doing here?” “That’s what I’d like to know,” Harlow countered, her grip tightening on her weapon. “And what you’re trading for.” He gestured vaguely towards the dark recesses of the market. “Just business, Detective. Nothing you need to concern yourself with.” “Business involving enchanted artifacts and clandestine information? You think I’m going to let that slide?” She shifted her weight, her posture radiating authority and intent. "Where did you get the bone token? And where does this market move to next?" He didn't answer. Harlow knew then; she'd stumbled onto something significant, something that threatened to unravel everything she thought she knew about London. And she was standing on the precipice of a world she barely understood. Turning back towards the tunnel entrance, she considered what awaited her: a potential reckoning, a heightening danger, a pathway to understanding the supernatural events that started with her partner's death. But did she really want to descend further into this darkness?
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.526
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1301
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1301
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"sense of"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"dance"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count2
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"apprehension"
count1
7
word"maw"
count1
8
word"oppressive"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"palpable"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
13
word"constructed"
count1
14
word"otherworldly"
count1
15
word"predator"
count1
16
word"scanned"
count1
17
word"etched"
count1
18
word"whisper"
count1
19
word"flicker"
count1
20
word"unreadable"
count1
21
word"facade"
count1
22
word"clandestine"
count1
23
word"weight"
count1
24
word"unravel"
count1
25
word"potential"
count1
highlights
0"sense of"
1"chill"
2"dance"
3"echoing"
4"reminder"
5"silence"
6"apprehension"
7"maw"
8"oppressive"
9"familiar"
10"vibrated"
11"palpable"
12"pulsed"
13"constructed"
14"otherworldly"
15"predator"
16"scanned"
17"etched"
18"whisper"
19"flicker"
20"unreadable"
21"facade"
22"clandestine"
23"weight"
24"unravel"
25"potential"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences97
matches
0"t with apprehension"
1"felt a prickle"
98.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences97
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1301
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"A black market for the supernatural, they said, a place where the veil between worlds thinned."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1189
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.93
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Quinn1
Silas8
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Sauer1
London3
Miller2
Harlow11
Morris1
Taking1
Veil1
Market1
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Silas"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Sauer"
5"Miller"
6"Harlow"
7"Morris"
8"Saint"
9"Christopher"
10"Herrera"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Market"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
88.27% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite grasp"
1"felt like they might be buried down the"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1301
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
94.88% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean35.16
std16.95
cv0.482
sampleLengths
076
143
238
352
444
534
624
731
846
927
1052
1145
1225
1315
1419
1555
1640
1773
1811
1944
2047
2142
2249
2335
2413
2540
2632
2711
2813
2923
3017
3129
3219
3320
3440
3566
3611
90.79% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences97
matches
0"been delivered"
1"was gone"
2"was headed"
3"was obscured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs205
matches
0"were gaining"
1"was handing"
2"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences105
ratio0.076
matches
0"Ahead, Silas—the proprietor of The Raven’s Nest, and currently her prime suspect—moved with a surprising agility for a man his age, his long coat billowing behind him like a shroud."
1"Her watch gleamed faintly in the dim light – a worn leather piece, a relic from her father, a reminder of a life before the job consumed her."
2"The rain above was gone; the air was strangely still, thick with an almost palpable energy."
3"The architecture was impossible, defying conventional engineering – arches and pillars seemed to defy gravity, constructed from a black, obsidian-like material."
4"She caught glimpses of inhuman features beneath the fabric – elongated ears, iridescent scales, eyes that glowed with an otherworldly light."
5"The scent was almost overwhelming now – a mixture of exotic spices, decay, and something indefinably…"
6"The figure accepted it with a curt nod, then produced a small, bone-like token – a simple circle etched with strange runes."
7"Harlow knew then; she'd stumbled onto something significant, something that threatened to unravel everything she thought she knew about London."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1189
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.03280067283431455
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.018502943650126155
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean12.39
std6.83
cv0.551
sampleLengths
08
123
215
330
429
512
62
717
89
912
107
1111
1214
1320
1418
1511
1615
1717
1817
1911
2013
2111
224
235
249
252
2628
276
2812
2911
3016
313
3213
337
3410
3519
365
3712
384
3916
408
4116
429
437
448
4513
466
4721
488
499
49.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.37142857142857144
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences91
matches
0"He’d bolted from the bar"
1"It clung to her like"
2"She risked a glance over"
3"He reappeared at the mouth"
4"He didn't answer, only yanked"
5"She hesitated, the raw scent"
6"It wasn’t the usual subterranean"
7"Her watch gleamed faintly in"
8"It only seemed to amplify"
9"She glanced back at the"
10"She thought of DS Morris."
11"she stated, her voice low"
12"She’d heard whispers of it,"
13"She recognized him instantly from"
14"He spotted her and froze,"
15"He didn’t stop, however, but"
16"He was headed for a"
17"She caught glimpses of inhuman"
18"She felt a prickle of"
19"She scanned the crowd, searching"
ratio0.297
47.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences91
matches
0"The rain tasted of coal"
1"Harlow Quinn’s coat, a practical,"
2"Each breath hitched in her"
3"He’d bolted from the bar"
4"This one, this prickling sense"
5"It clung to her like"
6"She risked a glance over"
7"Silas had a head start,"
8"The neon green glow of"
9"The chase weaved through the"
10"Silas ducked under a sagging"
11"Harlow pushed past, her hand"
12"He reappeared at the mouth"
13"Harlow shouted, her voice strained"
14"He didn't answer, only yanked"
15"She hesitated, the raw scent"
16"something ancient and unsettling…"
17"It wasn’t the usual subterranean"
18"Her watch gleamed faintly in"
19"It only seemed to amplify"
ratio0.824
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"A place that moved locations every full moon, hidden beneath the ever-changing landscape of London."
1"She caught glimpses of inhuman features beneath the fabric – elongated ears, iridescent scales, eyes that glowed with an otherworldly light."
2"Harlow knew then; she'd stumbled onto something significant, something that threatened to unravel everything she thought she knew about London."
3"Turning back towards the tunnel entrance, she considered what awaited her: a potential reckoning, a heightening danger, a pathway to understanding the supernatu…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Silas said, his voice barely a whisper"
1"she said, her voice ringing out through the unnatural quiet"
2"he said, his voice tight"
3"Harlow countered, her grip tightening on her weapon"
4"She shifted, her posture radiating authority and intent"
44.74% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Harlow shouted (shout)"
1"she stated (state)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.316
leniency0.632
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.211
76.0758%