| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.526 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.31% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1301 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1301 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "sense of" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "dance" | | 3 | "echoing" | | 4 | "reminder" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "apprehension" | | 7 | "maw" | | 8 | "oppressive" | | 9 | "familiar" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "palpable" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "constructed" | | 14 | "otherworldly" | | 15 | "predator" | | 16 | "scanned" | | 17 | "etched" | | 18 | "whisper" | | 19 | "flicker" | | 20 | "unreadable" | | 21 | "facade" | | 22 | "clandestine" | | 23 | "weight" | | 24 | "unravel" | | 25 | "potential" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "t with apprehension" | | 1 | "felt a prickle" |
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| 98.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1301 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "A black market for the supernatural, they said, a place where the veil between worlds thinned." |
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| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1189 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.93 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 1 | | Silas | 8 | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Soho | 1 | | Sauer | 1 | | London | 3 | | Miller | 2 | | Harlow | 11 | | Morris | 1 | | Taking | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Herrera | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Nest" | | 4 | "Sauer" | | 5 | "Miller" | | 6 | "Harlow" | | 7 | "Morris" | | 8 | "Saint" | | 9 | "Christopher" | | 10 | "Herrera" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Market" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 88.27% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite grasp" | | 1 | "felt like they might be buried down the" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1301 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.88% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 35.16 | | std | 16.95 | | cv | 0.482 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 52 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 55 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 73 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 40 | | 35 | 66 | | 36 | 11 |
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| 90.79% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "been delivered" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was headed" | | 3 | "was obscured" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 205 | | matches | | 0 | "were gaining" | | 1 | "was handing" | | 2 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.076 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, Silas—the proprietor of The Raven’s Nest, and currently her prime suspect—moved with a surprising agility for a man his age, his long coat billowing behind him like a shroud." | | 1 | "Her watch gleamed faintly in the dim light – a worn leather piece, a relic from her father, a reminder of a life before the job consumed her." | | 2 | "The rain above was gone; the air was strangely still, thick with an almost palpable energy." | | 3 | "The architecture was impossible, defying conventional engineering – arches and pillars seemed to defy gravity, constructed from a black, obsidian-like material." | | 4 | "She caught glimpses of inhuman features beneath the fabric – elongated ears, iridescent scales, eyes that glowed with an otherworldly light." | | 5 | "The scent was almost overwhelming now – a mixture of exotic spices, decay, and something indefinably…" | | 6 | "The figure accepted it with a curt nod, then produced a small, bone-like token – a simple circle etched with strange runes." | | 7 | "Harlow knew then; she'd stumbled onto something significant, something that threatened to unravel everything she thought she knew about London." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1189 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.03280067283431455 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018502943650126155 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 12.39 | | std | 6.83 | | cv | 0.551 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 49.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.37142857142857144 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "He’d bolted from the bar" | | 1 | "It clung to her like" | | 2 | "She risked a glance over" | | 3 | "He reappeared at the mouth" | | 4 | "He didn't answer, only yanked" | | 5 | "She hesitated, the raw scent" | | 6 | "It wasn’t the usual subterranean" | | 7 | "Her watch gleamed faintly in" | | 8 | "It only seemed to amplify" | | 9 | "She glanced back at the" | | 10 | "She thought of DS Morris." | | 11 | "she stated, her voice low" | | 12 | "She’d heard whispers of it," | | 13 | "She recognized him instantly from" | | 14 | "He spotted her and froze," | | 15 | "He didn’t stop, however, but" | | 16 | "He was headed for a" | | 17 | "She caught glimpses of inhuman" | | 18 | "She felt a prickle of" | | 19 | "She scanned the crowd, searching" |
| | ratio | 0.297 | |
| 47.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain tasted of coal" | | 1 | "Harlow Quinn’s coat, a practical," | | 2 | "Each breath hitched in her" | | 3 | "He’d bolted from the bar" | | 4 | "This one, this prickling sense" | | 5 | "It clung to her like" | | 6 | "She risked a glance over" | | 7 | "Silas had a head start," | | 8 | "The neon green glow of" | | 9 | "The chase weaved through the" | | 10 | "Silas ducked under a sagging" | | 11 | "Harlow pushed past, her hand" | | 12 | "He reappeared at the mouth" | | 13 | "Harlow shouted, her voice strained" | | 14 | "He didn't answer, only yanked" | | 15 | "She hesitated, the raw scent" | | 16 | "something ancient and unsettling…" | | 17 | "It wasn’t the usual subterranean" | | 18 | "Her watch gleamed faintly in" | | 19 | "It only seemed to amplify" |
| | ratio | 0.824 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "A place that moved locations every full moon, hidden beneath the ever-changing landscape of London." | | 1 | "She caught glimpses of inhuman features beneath the fabric – elongated ears, iridescent scales, eyes that glowed with an otherworldly light." | | 2 | "Harlow knew then; she'd stumbled onto something significant, something that threatened to unravel everything she thought she knew about London." | | 3 | "Turning back towards the tunnel entrance, she considered what awaited her: a potential reckoning, a heightening danger, a pathway to understanding the supernatu…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas said, his voice barely a whisper" | | 1 | "she said, her voice ringing out through the unnatural quiet" | | 2 | "he said, his voice tight" | | 3 | "Harlow countered, her grip tightening on her weapon" | | 4 | "She shifted, her posture radiating authority and intent" |
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| 44.74% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Harlow shouted (shout)" | | 1 | "she stated (state)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.316 | | leniency | 0.632 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.211 | |