| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.171 | | leniency | 0.343 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1269 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.14% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1269 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "flicked" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "echoing" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "raced" | | 10 | "jaw clenched" | | 11 | "pounding" | | 12 | "etched" | | 13 | "pulsed" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "jaw clenched" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 154 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 17 | | markdownWords | 21 | | totalWords | 1260 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "wrong" | | 1 | "pulled" | | 2 | "down" | | 3 | "feeding" | | 4 | "tear" | | 5 | "clot" | | 6 | "Flickered" | | 7 | "“You should have stayed away.”" | | 8 | "else" | | 9 | "wrong" | | 10 | "wrong" | | 11 | "collects" | | 12 | "At" | | 13 | "elsewhere" | | 14 | "screamed" | | 15 | "door" | | 16 | "mouth" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.72% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 71 | | wordCount | 1072 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.15 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 2 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 23 | | Morris | 13 | | Veil | 12 | | Compass | 10 | | Eva | 7 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Market | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Compass" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Kowalski" | | 6 | "Market" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.427 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 16.67% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "It was as if something had *pulled* at it" | | 1 | "looked like a scholar, but her eyes were" | | 2 | "quite fear" | | 3 | "quite a hand, not quite a shadow" | | 4 | "not quite a shadow" |
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| 41.27% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.587 | | wordCount | 1260 | | matches | | 0 | "not with a blade, but with something" | | 1 | "not at the body, but at something else" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 154 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 60 | | mean | 21 | | std | 17.77 | | cv | 0.846 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 85 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 36 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 47 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 47 |
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| 99.69% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | |
| 20.79% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 186 | | matches | | 0 | "was waiting" | | 1 | "was pulling was breathing" | | 2 | "was trying" | | 3 | "was feeding" |
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| 31.54% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 154 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the abandoned Tube station was thick with the scent of damp stone and something older—something that clung to the walls like a second skin." | | 1 | "The body lay sprawled in the center of the alcove, its face twisted in a rictus of pain, but the wounds were familiar—too precise, too surgical." | | 2 | "His face was pale, his jaw set in that way Quinn knew so well—he was either about to argue or about to agree with her." | | 3 | "Then, from the darkness, a voice—soft, almost musical—whispered:" | | 4 | "A figure emerged from the darkness—a woman with curly red hair and round glasses, her satchel slung over one shoulder." | | 5 | "The needle spun, pointing not at the body, but at something else—something that pulsed in the darkness, something that wasn’t just a rift, but a *door*." |
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| 93.72% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1081 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.04717853839037928 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004625346901017576 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 154 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 154 | | mean | 8.18 | | std | 5.65 | | cv | 0.691 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 39.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.18181818181818182 | | totalSentences | 154 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 84.03% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a clean, gaping hole." | | 1 | "Then the lights flickered." | | 2 | "Then, from the darkness, a" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped over the tape," | | 1 | "It was as if something" | | 2 | "She turned to see DS" | | 3 | "His face was pale, his" | | 4 | "She knelt beside the body," | | 5 | "It didn’t point east." | | 6 | "It pointed *down*, toward the" | | 7 | "He stepped closer, his breath" | | 8 | "She exhaled through her nose." | | 9 | "It was a *tear*." | | 10 | "It stayed pointed down, as" | | 11 | "She hadn’t expected Eva Kowalski" | | 12 | "It was a place where" | | 13 | "She stood, her boots echoing" | | 14 | "She didn’t recognize the voice." | | 15 | "They didn’t have to be" | | 16 | "She looked like a scholar," | | 17 | "She pulled the Veil Compass" | | 18 | "It wrapped around her ankle," | | 19 | "She grabbed the Veil Compass," |
| | ratio | 0.21 | |
| 27.23% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 103 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the abandoned" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the" | | 2 | "The station’s flickering fluorescent lights" | | 3 | "She stepped over the tape," | | 4 | "The body lay sprawled in" | | 5 | "The coroner’s report would call" | | 6 | "This wasn’t just a knife" | | 7 | "The edges of the cut" | | 8 | "The skin around it was" | | 9 | "It was as if something" | | 10 | "a voice cut through the" | | 11 | "She turned to see DS" | | 12 | "His face was pale, his" | | 13 | "Quinn didn’t answer." | | 14 | "She knelt beside the body," | | 15 | "The needle of the Veil" | | 16 | "The needle didn’t point north." | | 17 | "It didn’t point east." | | 18 | "It pointed *down*, toward the" | | 19 | "Morris said, his voice low" |
| | ratio | 0.866 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the abandoned Tube station was thick with the scent of damp stone and something older—something that clung to the walls like a second skin." | | 1 | "The Veil Market’s entrance was a rift in reality, a doorway that shouldn’t exist." | | 2 | "Morris was already moving, his boots pounding against the shifting floor." | | 3 | "She grabbed the Veil Compass, her fingers brushing the sigils etched into the brass casing." | | 4 | "The needle spun, pointing not at the body, but at something else—something that pulsed in the darkness, something that wasn’t just a rift, but a *door*." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Morris said, his voice low" | | 1 | "He stepped, his breath warm against her ear" | | 2 | "Quinn shouted, her voice echoing through the shifting space" |
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| 92.86% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he hissed (hiss)" | | 1 | "Quinn shouted (shout)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.114 | |