Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY99KT8YDKTB0G9RS6H4R4T

Run Details

Duration:
9.7s
Cost:
$0.000448
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain fell in sheets, turning the cobbled streets of Soho into a slick, reflective mirror. Harlow Quinn pulled her collar tighter, the damp seeping through her jacket like a living thing. The suspect—a wiry man with a leather satchel slung over his shoulder—ducked into the narrow alley between *The Raven’s Nest* and the boarded-up tailor’s shop. She didn’t hesitate. Her boots splashed through puddles as she closed the distance, the neon glow of the bar’s green sign bleeding into the gloom. The alley stank of stale beer and something older, something metallic. She pressed herself against the brick wall, listening. A distant drip. The susurrus of the city, indifferent. Then—footsteps. Light, quick. He was moving deeper. Quinn exhaled through her nose, the cold air burning her lungs. She drew her service pistol, the weight familiar in her grip. The suspect had been tailing her informant for weeks, slipping in and out of the shadows like a rat. Tonight, he’d made a mistake. Left a trail of blood on the pavement outside the pub. Not enough to kill, but enough to draw her in. She rounded the corner just as he vanished behind a bookshelf. The wood groaned under her palm as she shoved it aside. The hidden door yawned open, revealing a stairwell descending into darkness. A stale, earthy scent curled up from below—damp stone, something herbal, the faint tang of ozone. Her pulse kicked. She’d heard whispers of this place. *The Veil Market.* A black-market den for things that didn’t belong in the light. The suspect was already halfway down, his satchel bouncing against his hip. Quinn hesitated. The stairs were narrow, the air thick with the hum of unseen energy. She could turn back. Call for backup. But backup would take time. And time was the one thing she didn’t have. She stepped forward. The moment her boot touched the bottom step, the door slammed shut behind her. The bookshelf sealed itself with a final, ominous *click*. Quinn spun, her finger tightening on the trigger. The stairwell was empty. No exit. No way out but down. A flicker of movement. A shadow detached itself from the wall—a figure in a long coat, their face obscured by a wide-brimmed hat. “Lost, Detective?” The voice was smooth, amused. “Or just late for the party?” Quinn didn’t lower the gun. “Who the hell are you?” The figure tilted their head. “Names don’t matter down here. But if you’re looking for your friend”—a jerk of the chin toward the tunnel ahead—“he’s already gone. And you? You’re standing in the wrong place.” She didn’t flinch. “I don’t follow orders well.” A chuckle, low and knowing. “Neither do we.” The figure stepped aside, revealing the tunnel stretching into blackness. “But if you’re set on playing catch-up, the market’s that way. Just don’t blame me when the rules change.” Quinn holstered her pistol. She wasn’t here for games. She was here for answers. The tunnel twisted, the walls slick with condensation. Strange symbols glowed faintly in the dark—carved into the stone, or pressed into it, she couldn’t tell. The air grew heavier, charged like the moment before a storm. Distant voices echoed, a babble of languages she didn’t recognize. Laughter. The clink of glass. The scent of incense and something sharper, like burnt copper. Then she saw them. Stalls lined the tunnel, their wares displayed under flickering lanterns. Bottles of swirling liquid that shouldn’t exist. Bundles of herbs that withered and bloomed in seconds. A cage in the corner, its bars humming with energy, containing something that wasn’t quite an animal. Quinn’s stomach twisted. This wasn’t a market. It was a graveyard. A hand clamped onto her shoulder. She whirled, her hand going for her gun again— “Easy.” Tomás Herrera’s voice, sharp with urgency. His olive skin was pale, his dark eyes wide. “You shouldn’t be here.” She shoved him off. “Where’s he going?” Tomás didn’t answer. Instead, he grabbed her wrist, dragging her deeper into the market. “They’ll sense you. They’ll *know* you’re not supposed to be here.” “Who?” “The ones who run this place.” His grip tightened. “And they don’t take kindly to visitors.” Quinn wrenched free. “I’m not leaving without him.” Tomás exhaled, frustrated. “He’s already sold what he came for. And now they’ll come for *you*.” A ripple of movement. Figures emerged from the shadows—tall, gaunt, their faces half-hidden beneath hoods. One of them stepped forward, their voice a dry rasp. “Detective Harlow Quinn. We’ve been expecting you.” She didn’t look away. “Where’s my suspect?” The figure smiled, or something like it. “Gone. But not before he gave us what we wanted.” Quinn’s fingers twitched toward her gun. “What did he sell?” The figure tilted their head. “Information. The kind that gets people killed.” A beat of silence. Then, from the darkness behind them, a sound—wet, guttural. Something dragged itself across the stone. Tomás grabbed her arm. “We need to move. *Now.*” Quinn didn’t resist. She let him pull her forward, her eyes locked on the figures retreating into the shadows. The market was a maze. And she was lost. But not for long.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:44:13.14Z" 2/20/2026, 7:44:13 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The figure stepped aside [aside]"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.091
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount867
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount867
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"footsteps"
2"weight"
3"familiar"
4"pulse"
5"flicker"
6"charged"
7"echoed"
8"stomach"
9"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences91
matches
0"p with urgency"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords10
totalWords854
ratio0.012
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"The Veil Market."
2"click"
3"know"
4"you"
5"Now."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.26% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount697
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Quinn10
Raven1
Veil1
Tomás4
Herrera1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.783
windowScore1
43.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite an animal"
1"something like it"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.342
wordCount854
matches
0"Not enough to kill, but enough to draw her in"
1"No way out but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean25.12
std19.88
cv0.791
sampleLengths
060
157
267
311
461
548
63
742
836
910
1035
118
1237
1314
1461
154
1654
1715
1820
197
2025
211
2216
238
2416
2532
267
2717
2810
2912
3019
319
3228
334
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs116
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences109
ratio0.073
matches
0"The suspect—a wiry man with a leather satchel slung over his shoulder—ducked into the narrow alley between *The Raven’s Nest* and the boarded-up tailor’s shop."
1"Then—footsteps."
2"A stale, earthy scent curled up from below—damp stone, something herbal, the faint tang of ozone."
3"A shadow detached itself from the wall—a figure in a long coat, their face obscured by a wide-brimmed hat."
4"Strange symbols glowed faintly in the dark—carved into the stone, or pressed into it, she couldn’t tell."
5"She whirled, her hand going for her gun again—"
6"Figures emerged from the shadows—tall, gaunt, their faces half-hidden beneath hoods."
7"Then, from the darkness behind them, a sound—wet, guttural."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount709
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.018335684062059238
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0014104372355430183
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean7.83
std5.3
cv0.677
sampleLengths
016
116
225
33
422
511
68
73
86
91
102
114
1211
1311
1419
155
1611
1710
1811
1911
2011
2116
223
236
2414
2512
262
2713
284
293
305
319
323
3314
349
358
364
372
385
394
4019
417
426
435
445
455
4630
473
485
495
62.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.41284403669724773
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences86
matches
0"Then she saw them."
1"Instead, he grabbed her wrist,"
2"Then, from the darkness behind"
ratio0.035
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences86
matches
0"She didn’t hesitate."
1"Her boots splashed through puddles"
2"She pressed herself against the"
3"He was moving deeper."
4"She drew her service pistol,"
5"She rounded the corner just"
6"Her pulse kicked."
7"She’d heard whispers of this"
8"She could turn back."
9"She stepped forward."
10"She didn’t flinch."
11"She wasn’t here for games."
12"She was here for answers."
13"It was a graveyard."
14"She whirled, her hand going"
15"His olive skin was pale,"
16"She shoved him off."
17"His grip tightened"
18"She didn’t look away."
19"She let him pull her"
ratio0.233
47.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences86
matches
0"The rain fell in sheets,"
1"Harlow Quinn pulled her collar"
2"The suspect—a wiry man with"
3"She didn’t hesitate."
4"Her boots splashed through puddles"
5"The alley stank of stale"
6"She pressed herself against the"
7"A distant drip."
8"The susurrus of the city,"
9"He was moving deeper."
10"Quinn exhaled through her nose,"
11"She drew her service pistol,"
12"The suspect had been tailing"
13"Tonight, he’d made a mistake."
14"She rounded the corner just"
15"The wood groaned under her"
16"The hidden door yawned open,"
17"A stale, earthy scent curled"
18"Her pulse kicked."
19"She’d heard whispers of this"
ratio0.826
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A cage in the corner, its bars humming with energy, containing something that wasn’t quite an animal."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.4602%