Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY99SMFJ352K07SA7ZZMVE9

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
1m 59s
Cost:
$0.047976
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn descended the crumbling concrete stairs into the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, her boots echoing against the tiled walls like muffled gunshots. The air hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something sharper—ozone, perhaps, or the faint tang of burnt herbs. She adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist, a habit from her military days, and flashed her badge at the uniformed officer guarding the entrance. He nodded, stepping aside without a word, his face pale under the harsh beam of his flashlight. "Detective Quinn," he murmured, as if speaking louder might wake something in the shadows. "It's... not like anything I've seen. Forensics is already down there, but they're stumped." She gave him a sharp nod, her brown eyes scanning the dim corridor ahead. Eighteen years on the force had taught her to trust her instincts, and right now, they screamed that this was no ordinary break-in. The call had come in anonymously: a disturbance at an "underground market" in a derelict station sealed off since the Blitz. No one should've been down here, yet the place buzzed with an undercurrent of wrongness, like a crime scene that had rewritten its own rules. The stairs opened into a vast, vaulted chamber, the remnants of platform edges overgrown with moss and graffiti. But this wasn't just decay. Makeshift stalls lined the tracks, draped in tattered fabrics that fluttered without breeze. Glass vials shimmered on improvised shelves, their contents glowing faintly blue or green. Bundles of dried herbs hung from rusted pipes, and odd trinkets—carved bones, etched stones—scattered across the ground like forgotten offerings. The Veil Market, the tipster had called it. A black market for the occult underworld, if rumors held true. Quinn had chased enough leads on fringe cases to know places like this existed in London's hidden veins, but seeing it twisted her gut. This wasn't her world; it was a shadow of it. Uniforms milled about, cordoning off a central area where a body lay sprawled. Male, mid-thirties, dressed in a threadbare coat that screamed street vendor. His throat was slashed clean, but no blood pooled beneath him—none at all, as if the wound had cauterized itself. Forensics techs in white suits knelt nearby, snapping photos and bagging what looked like shattered crystal shards. Quinn's sharp jaw tightened. Something was off. The evidence didn't add up; wounds like that should've left a lake of red, and the air hummed with an unnatural stillness, like the scene had been paused mid-chaos. "Harlow," a familiar voice called from the shadows. Eva Kowalski emerged from behind a stall, her curly red hair tucked behind her left ear in that nervous tic Quinn knew all too well. Eva adjusted her round glasses, green eyes wide behind the lenses, her worn leather satchel slung over one shoulder, bulging with books. At 5'4", she looked almost childlike amid the towering relics, her freckled complexion flushed from whatever she'd been digging into. They'd crossed paths before—Eva as a consultant on historical artifacts, Quinn as the no-nonsense cop who tolerated her "expertise" because results spoke louder than skepticism. "Eva? What the hell are you doing here?" Quinn's voice cut through the murmur of officers, her bearing snapping to military precision. She strode over, boots crunching on loose gravel. "This is a secured scene. Museum doesn't have jurisdiction in abandoned tunnels." Eva offered a sheepish smile, but her eyes darted to the body. "I got a tip from one of my archive contacts. Said there was something... anomalous down here. And before you kick me out, your sergeant let me in. Thought my background in ancient history might help with the weird stuff." She gestured to the stalls. "This isn't just a squatters' den, Harlow. It's the Veil Market. Moves every full moon, entry by bone token only. Sells enchanted goods, banned substances—real occult trade." Quinn snorted, crossing her arms. "Occult trade? Save the fairy tales for your Oxford seminars. We've got a dead vendor, throat cut, no blood loss. Looks like a robbery gone wrong, maybe some kind of cauterizing weapon. Forensics will sort it." But even as she said it, doubt gnawed at her. Three years ago, her partner DS Morris had died in a similar haze of impossibility—found in a locked warehouse with no entry points, his body drained like this one, circumstances that defied logic. Supernatural origins, the whispers said, but Quinn had buried that thought deep, chasing rational explanations instead. Now, staring at this scene, those whispers clawed back. Eva knelt beside the body, careful not to touch anything, her satchel thunking against the ground. "Look closer. The wound—it's not a blade. See the edges? Singed, like shadow fire. And no blood because it wasn't spilled; it was consumed. This market deals in rifts, portals to other realms. Something crossed over, fed on him." Quinn's eyes narrowed. "Consumed? You're reaching, Evie. Evidence points to a human perp. See those boot prints?" She pointed to muddy tracks leading from the body to a overturned stall. "Size ten, fresh. And the shattered vials—looks like a struggle. Robbery, plain and simple." Eva shook her head, tucking her hair again. "Not robbery. Look at what's missing. The stalls are intact except this one, and it's not valuables gone—it's information. He was a broker in secrets, dealt in rift locations. And those prints? They fade out midway, like the owner vanished into thin air. Classic rift residue." Quinn crouched beside her, the chill of the platform seeping through her trousers. Eva's words poked at the inconsistencies she'd already clocked. The boot prints did end abruptly, dissolving into a shimmer on the concrete, as if the ground had swallowed them. No exit tracks, no signs of dragging. And the body—his skin was too pale, veins collapsed, like he'd been exsanguinated without a drop spilled. She reached for a nearby shard, gloved hand hovering. It wasn't glass; it pulsed faintly, warm to the touch. "Alright, hypothetically," Quinn said, her voice low, "if this is some supernatural bollocks, what's the play? Why him?" Eva rummaged in her satchel, pulling out a small brass compass with a patina of verdigris. Its face was etched with protective sigils, the needle twitching erratically. "This is a Veil Compass. Points to the nearest supernatural rift. I... acquired it for research." She held it out, and the needle spun wildly before settling toward the body's stall. Quinn took it, feeling a faint vibration in her palm. She'd seen enough weird artifacts in her career to know this wasn't a toy. As she watched, the needle quivered, aligning not with north, but with a faint crack in the air above the tracks—a distortion, like heat haze over pavement. Her mind raced back to Morris: the warehouse had a similar anomaly, dismissed as optical illusion. But here, in this market of impossibilities, it fit. "Damn it," Quinn muttered, standing. The evidence was twisting before her eyes. No blood because it wasn't a knife—it was something that fed. No exit because the killer hadn't walked out; it'd slipped through a tear in reality. And the victim? Not random. His stall held maps, scrawled with symbols matching Eva's compass sigils. Rift locations, portals—information a certain clique might kill for. Quinn had been tracking them for months: a group of shadow dealers suspected inMorris's death, whispering about supernatural crimes she couldn't prove. Eva stood too, her green eyes meeting Quinn's brown ones. "You see it now, don't you? This isn't human. It's a rift breach. Something came through, took what it needed—blood, secrets—and vanished. Your clique? They've been poking at these portals. This could be blowback." Quinn pocketed the compass for a moment, her sharp jaw set. "If you're right, we're dealing with more than murder. But I need proof, not myths." She waved over a forensic tech. "Bag those shards—test for energy residues, not just prints. And scan for thermal anomalies over there." The tech blinked but nodded. As officers bustled, Quinn scanned the market again. Stalls whispered secrets in the dim light: a vial labeled "Dream Essence," a bone token like Eva mentioned. It all pointed to a hidden world bleeding into hers, just like with Morris. The tipster who'd called this in—anonymous, but timed perfectly. Someone wanted her here, wanted her to see. Eva touched her arm. "Harlow, be careful. If it's a rift, it could still be open. Things that cross over... they don't play by our rules." Quinn nodded, her military bearing masking the storm inside. For the first time since losing her partner, the pieces aligned not in logic, but in the impossible. The evidence didn't add up because it wasn't meant to—in this world, at least. She glanced at her watch, the leather strap a reminder of time's unyielding march. But down here, time bent, and so did truth. The compass in her pocket hummed, needle pulling toward the haze. Quinn stepped closer, heart pounding. Through careful eyes, she saw it: a faint outline, like a door ajar in the air. Not a crime scene exit, but a gateway. And whatever had slipped through might still be watching. She turned to Eva. "Get your books. We're not done here." The market's shadows deepened, but Quinn's resolve sharpened. This wasn't just a murder; it was the key to unraveling the supernatural thread that had stolen Morris and now threatened to pull her under. For once, she wouldn't miss what others had. The scene stretched on as they delved deeper. Quinn examined the stall's remnants: scattered papers with runes that matched Eva's descriptions, a ledger of trades in coded script. "Look," Eva said, pointing to a smudged entry. "He sold a rift key last week—to someone matching your clique's profile. Tall, hooded, paid in shadow coins." Quinn's mind whirred. Shadow coins—rumored currency in these markets, untraceable. The victim had been targeted, his knowledge the real prize. The slash wasn't random violence; it was a ritual drain, fueling whatever entity had been summoned. She recalled case files from Morris's death: similar runes etched into the warehouse floor, dismissed as vandalism. Now, they screamed pattern. An officer approached, holding a bagged item. "Detective, found this clutched in his hand. Some kind of token." It was a bone disc, carved with a sigil that made the compass needle spin. Entry to the market, perhaps—or a summons. Quinn held it up, and the air hummed, the haze thickening. A low whisper echoed, not from the officers, but from the rift itself. Words in a language she didn't know, but Eva paled. "That's Old Enochian. It's calling something back." Quinn's hand tightened on her sidearm, useless against shadows. But observation had armed her: the rift fed on blood, on energy. Disrupt it, and it closes. "Eva, those sigils on the compass—protective?" Eva nodded, frantic. "Yes! Etch them around the haze!" Quinn grabbed a shard, scratching the symbols into the concrete. The air crackled, the whisper turning to a shriek. Officers backed away as the haze collapsed, sealing with a pop like bursting eardrums. Silence fell. The evidence now fit: supernatural incursion, clique involvement, a market of secrets exposed. Quinn stood, wiping sweat from her brow. She'd seen what others missed—the veil between worlds, thin and tearing. And with Eva's help, she'd begun to mend it. But as the compass steadied in her pocket, pointing to new rifts, she knew this was just the start. The real mystery lurked deeper, in the shadows that had claimed her partner and now beckoned her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva stood too [too]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.659
leniency1
rawRatio0.034
effectiveRatio0.034
97.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1947
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1947
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"fluttered"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"etched"
count3
5
word"shattered"
count2
6
word"crystal"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"quivered"
count1
11
word"raced"
count1
12
word"scanned"
count1
13
word"aligned"
count1
14
word"reminder"
count1
15
word"pounding"
count1
16
word"resolve"
count1
17
word"unraveling"
count1
18
word"delved"
count1
19
word"coded"
count1
20
word"whisper"
count2
21
word"echoed"
count1
22
word"disrupt"
count1
23
word"etch"
count1
24
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"scanning"
2"fluttered"
3"shimmered"
4"etched"
5"shattered"
6"crystal"
7"familiar"
8"chill"
9"pulsed"
10"quivered"
11"raced"
12"scanned"
13"aligned"
14"reminder"
15"pounding"
16"resolve"
17"unraveling"
18"delved"
19"coded"
20"whisper"
21"echoed"
22"disrupt"
23"etch"
24"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen87
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1919
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Eighteen years on the force had taught her to trust her instincts, and right now, they screamed that this was no ordinar…"
79.58% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1633
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.41
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn23
Tube1
Camden1
Blitz1
Veil2
Market2
London1
Eva17
Kowalski1
Oxford1
Morris4
Evie1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
4"Morris"
5"Evie"
places
0"London"
1"Oxford"
globalScore0.796
windowScore0.833
75.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if speaking louder might wake something in the shadows"
1"looked like shattered crystal shards"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.084
wordCount1919
matches
0"not with north, but with a faint crack in the air above the tracks"
1"not in logic, but in the impossible"
2"Not a crime scene exit, but a gateway"
3"not from the officers, but from the rift itself"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences107
matches
0"screamed that this"
1"buried that thought"
83.99% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean58.15
std25.82
cv0.444
sampleLengths
090
128
283
3122
497
5100
642
784
841
968
1055
1144
1254
1385
1418
1558
1676
1785
1844
1953
2057
2126
2264
2349
2452
2554
2657
2718
2863
2932
309
3133
3278
85.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences105
matches
0"was slashed"
1"been paused"
2"was consumed"
3"been exsanguinated"
4"was etched"
5"been targeted"
6"been summoned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs318
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount21
semicolonCount7
flaggedSentences22
totalSentences107
ratio0.206
matches
0"The air hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something sharper—ozone, perhaps, or the faint tang of burnt herbs."
1"Bundles of dried herbs hung from rusted pipes, and odd trinkets—carved bones, etched stones—scattered across the ground like forgotten offerings."
2"This wasn't her world; it was a shadow of it."
3"His throat was slashed clean, but no blood pooled beneath him—none at all, as if the wound had cauterized itself."
4"The evidence didn't add up; wounds like that should've left a lake of red, and the air hummed with an unnatural stillness, like the scene had been paused mid-chaos."
5"Sells enchanted goods, banned substances—real occult trade.\""
6"But even as she said it, doubt gnawed at her. Three years ago, her partner DS Morris had died in a similar haze of impossibility—found in a locked warehouse with no entry points, his body drained like this one, circumstances that defied logic. Supernatural origins, the whispers said, but Quinn had buried that thought deep, chasing rational explanations instead. Now, staring at this scene, those whispers clawed back."
7"The wound—it's not a blade."
8"And no blood because it wasn't spilled; it was consumed."
9"And the shattered vials—looks like a struggle."
10"The stalls are intact except this one, and it's not valuables gone—it's information."
11"Quinn crouched beside her, the chill of the platform seeping through her trousers. Eva's words poked at the inconsistencies she'd already clocked. The boot prints did end abruptly, dissolving into a shimmer on the concrete, as if the ground had swallowed them. No exit tracks, no signs of dragging. And the body—his skin was too pale, veins collapsed, like he'd been exsanguinated without a drop spilled. She reached for a nearby shard, gloved hand hovering. It wasn't glass; it pulsed faintly, warm to the touch."
12"Quinn took it, feeling a faint vibration in her palm. She'd seen enough weird artifacts in her career to know this wasn't a toy. As she watched, the needle quivered, aligning not with north, but with a faint crack in the air above the tracks—a distortion, like heat haze over pavement. Her mind raced back to Morris: the warehouse had a similar anomaly, dismissed as optical illusion. But here, in this market of impossibilities, it fit."
13"\"Damn it,\" Quinn muttered, standing. The evidence was twisting before her eyes. No blood because it wasn't a knife—it was something that fed. No exit because the killer hadn't walked out; it'd slipped through a tear in reality. And the victim? Not random. His stall held maps, scrawled with symbols matching Eva's compass sigils. Rift locations, portals—information a certain clique might kill for. Quinn had been tracking them for months: a group of shadow dealers suspected inMorris's death, whispering about supernatural crimes she couldn't prove."
14"Something came through, took what it needed—blood, secrets—and vanished."
15"But I need proof, not myths.\" She waved over a forensic tech. \"Bag those shards—test for energy residues, not just prints."
16"As officers bustled, Quinn scanned the market again. Stalls whispered secrets in the dim light: a vial labeled \"Dream Essence,\" a bone token like Eva mentioned. It all pointed to a hidden world bleeding into hers, just like with Morris. The tipster who'd called this in—anonymous, but timed perfectly. Someone wanted her here, wanted her to see."
17"Quinn nodded, her military bearing masking the storm inside. For the first time since losing her partner, the pieces aligned not in logic, but in the impossible. The evidence didn't add up because it wasn't meant to—in this world, at least. She glanced at her watch, the leather strap a reminder of time's unyielding march. But down here, time bent, and so did truth."
18"We're not done here.\" The market's shadows deepened, but Quinn's resolve sharpened. This wasn't just a murder; it was the key to unraveling the supernatural thread that had stolen Morris and now threatened to pull her under. For once, she wouldn't miss what others had."
19"Quinn's mind whirred. Shadow coins—rumored currency in these markets, untraceable. The victim had been targeted, his knowledge the real prize. The slash wasn't random violence; it was a ritual drain, fueling whatever entity had been summoned. She recalled case files from Morris's death: similar runes etched into the warehouse floor, dismissed as vandalism. Now, they screamed pattern."
20"It was a bone disc, carved with a sigil that made the compass needle spin. Entry to the market, perhaps—or a summons. Quinn held it up, and the air hummed, the haze thickening. A low whisper echoed, not from the officers, but from the rift itself. Words in a language she didn't know, but Eva paled. \"That's Old Enochian."
21"Silence fell. The evidence now fit: supernatural incursion, clique involvement, a market of secrets exposed. Quinn stood, wiping sweat from her brow. She'd seen what others missed—the veil between worlds, thin and tearing. And with Eva's help, she'd begun to mend it. But as the compass steadied in her pocket, pointing to new rifts, she knew this was just the start. The real mystery lurked deeper, in the shadows that had claimed her partner and now beckoned her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1479
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.025016903313049357
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.006085192697768763
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean17.93
std19.06
cv1.063
sampleLengths
025
121
227
317
414
514
614
723
821
925
1018
115
1213
1313
1420
158
1611
1724
1810
1913
2011
2120
2217
234
243
2529
268
2725
2822
2945
301
3134
327
3322
344
353
3611
3724
384
399
407
417
428
4310
4412
454
4668
4718
485
493
85.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5233644859813084
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners56
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences100
matches
0"She adjusted the worn leather"
1"He nodded, stepping aside without"
2"he murmured, as if speaking"
3"She gave him a sharp"
4"His throat was slashed clean,"
5"It's the Veil Market."
6"We've got a dead vendor,"
7"You're reaching, Evie."
8"He was a broker in"
9"They fade out midway, like"
10"It's a rift breach."
11"They've been poking at these"
12"they don't play by our"
13"She turned to Eva."
14"We're not done"
15"It was a bone disc,"
16"It's calling something"
ratio0.17
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences100
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
1"The air hung thick with"
2"She adjusted the worn leather"
3"He nodded, stepping aside without"
4"he murmured, as if speaking"
5"She gave him a sharp"
6"The call had come in"
7"The stairs opened into a"
8"Glass vials shimmered on improvised"
9"The Veil Market, the tipster"
10"A black market for the"
11"Quinn had chased enough leads"
12"This wasn't her world; it"
13"Uniforms milled about, cordoning off"
14"His throat was slashed clean,"
15"Forensics techs in white suits"
16"Quinn's sharp jaw tightened."
17"Something was off."
18"The evidence didn't add up;"
19"a familiar voice called from"
ratio0.72
50.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"If it's a rift, it"
ratio0.01
7.72% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"No one should've been down here, yet the place buzzed with an undercurrent of wrongness, like a crime scene that had rewritten its own rules."
1"Male, mid-thirties, dressed in a threadbare coat that screamed street vendor."
2"His throat was slashed clean, but no blood pooled beneath him—none at all, as if the wound had cauterized itself."
3"But even as she said it, doubt gnawed at her. Three years ago, her partner DS Morris had died in a similar haze of impossibility—found in a locked warehouse wit…"
4"Quinn crouched beside her, the chill of the platform seeping through her trousers. Eva's words poked at the inconsistencies she'd already clocked. The boot prin…"
5"Quinn nodded, her military bearing masking the storm inside. For the first time since losing her partner, the pieces aligned not in logic, but in the impossible…"
6"Silence fell. The evidence now fit: supernatural incursion, clique involvement, a market of secrets exposed. Quinn stood, wiping sweat from her brow. She'd seen…"
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he murmured, as if speaking louder might wake something in the shadows"
1"Quinn said, her voice low,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.091
78.2843%