"The air hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something sharper—ozone, perhaps, or the faint tang of burnt herbs."
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"Bundles of dried herbs hung from rusted pipes, and odd trinkets—carved bones, etched stones—scattered across the ground like forgotten offerings."
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"This wasn't her world; it was a shadow of it."
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"His throat was slashed clean, but no blood pooled beneath him—none at all, as if the wound had cauterized itself."
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"The evidence didn't add up; wounds like that should've left a lake of red, and the air hummed with an unnatural stillness, like the scene had been paused mid-chaos."
"But even as she said it, doubt gnawed at her. Three years ago, her partner DS Morris had died in a similar haze of impossibility—found in a locked warehouse with no entry points, his body drained like this one, circumstances that defied logic. Supernatural origins, the whispers said, but Quinn had buried that thought deep, chasing rational explanations instead. Now, staring at this scene, those whispers clawed back."
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"The wound—it's not a blade."
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"And no blood because it wasn't spilled; it was consumed."
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"And the shattered vials—looks like a struggle."
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"The stalls are intact except this one, and it's not valuables gone—it's information."
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"Quinn crouched beside her, the chill of the platform seeping through her trousers. Eva's words poked at the inconsistencies she'd already clocked. The boot prints did end abruptly, dissolving into a shimmer on the concrete, as if the ground had swallowed them. No exit tracks, no signs of dragging. And the body—his skin was too pale, veins collapsed, like he'd been exsanguinated without a drop spilled. She reached for a nearby shard, gloved hand hovering. It wasn't glass; it pulsed faintly, warm to the touch."
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"Quinn took it, feeling a faint vibration in her palm. She'd seen enough weird artifacts in her career to know this wasn't a toy. As she watched, the needle quivered, aligning not with north, but with a faint crack in the air above the tracks—a distortion, like heat haze over pavement. Her mind raced back to Morris: the warehouse had a similar anomaly, dismissed as optical illusion. But here, in this market of impossibilities, it fit."
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"\"Damn it,\" Quinn muttered, standing. The evidence was twisting before her eyes. No blood because it wasn't a knife—it was something that fed. No exit because the killer hadn't walked out; it'd slipped through a tear in reality. And the victim? Not random. His stall held maps, scrawled with symbols matching Eva's compass sigils. Rift locations, portals—information a certain clique might kill for. Quinn had been tracking them for months: a group of shadow dealers suspected inMorris's death, whispering about supernatural crimes she couldn't prove."
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"Something came through, took what it needed—blood, secrets—and vanished."
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"But I need proof, not myths.\" She waved over a forensic tech. \"Bag those shards—test for energy residues, not just prints."
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"As officers bustled, Quinn scanned the market again. Stalls whispered secrets in the dim light: a vial labeled \"Dream Essence,\" a bone token like Eva mentioned. It all pointed to a hidden world bleeding into hers, just like with Morris. The tipster who'd called this in—anonymous, but timed perfectly. Someone wanted her here, wanted her to see."
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"Quinn nodded, her military bearing masking the storm inside. For the first time since losing her partner, the pieces aligned not in logic, but in the impossible. The evidence didn't add up because it wasn't meant to—in this world, at least. She glanced at her watch, the leather strap a reminder of time's unyielding march. But down here, time bent, and so did truth."
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"We're not done here.\" The market's shadows deepened, but Quinn's resolve sharpened. This wasn't just a murder; it was the key to unraveling the supernatural thread that had stolen Morris and now threatened to pull her under. For once, she wouldn't miss what others had."
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"Quinn's mind whirred. Shadow coins—rumored currency in these markets, untraceable. The victim had been targeted, his knowledge the real prize. The slash wasn't random violence; it was a ritual drain, fueling whatever entity had been summoned. She recalled case files from Morris's death: similar runes etched into the warehouse floor, dismissed as vandalism. Now, they screamed pattern."
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"It was a bone disc, carved with a sigil that made the compass needle spin. Entry to the market, perhaps—or a summons. Quinn held it up, and the air hummed, the haze thickening. A low whisper echoed, not from the officers, but from the rift itself. Words in a language she didn't know, but Eva paled. \"That's Old Enochian."
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"Silence fell. The evidence now fit: supernatural incursion, clique involvement, a market of secrets exposed. Quinn stood, wiping sweat from her brow. She'd seen what others missed—the veil between worlds, thin and tearing. And with Eva's help, she'd begun to mend it. But as the compass steadied in her pocket, pointing to new rifts, she knew this was just the start. The real mystery lurked deeper, in the shadows that had claimed her partner and now beckoned her."
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"No one should've been down here, yet the place buzzed with an undercurrent of wrongness, like a crime scene that had rewritten its own rules."
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"Male, mid-thirties, dressed in a threadbare coat that screamed street vendor."
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"His throat was slashed clean, but no blood pooled beneath him—none at all, as if the wound had cauterized itself."
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"But even as she said it, doubt gnawed at her. Three years ago, her partner DS Morris had died in a similar haze of impossibility—found in a locked warehouse wit…"
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"Quinn crouched beside her, the chill of the platform seeping through her trousers. Eva's words poked at the inconsistencies she'd already clocked. The boot prin…"
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"Quinn nodded, her military bearing masking the storm inside. For the first time since losing her partner, the pieces aligned not in logic, but in the impossible…"
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"Silence fell. The evidence now fit: supernatural incursion, clique involvement, a market of secrets exposed. Quinn stood, wiping sweat from her brow. She'd seen…"