Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY99TD902105RNR13F7JHTM

Run Details

Duration:
4.0s
Cost:
$0.000197
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The brass knocker scraped against the door of Eva’s flat like a fingernail on glass, the sound sharp and deliberate. Aurora Carter stood in the narrow hallway, her breath shallow, her fingers curling around the doorknob so tight her knuckles went white. The scar on her left wrist—small but vivid—pulled at her skin, a reminder of the accident that had left her with a habit of gripping things when she was nervous. She hadn’t expected him. Not really. But here he was. Lucien Moreau stood just inside the threshold, his tailored charcoal suit immaculate, his cane resting against the wall like a weapon at ease. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers, and for a heartbeat, the air between them crackled. He didn’t speak first. That was always how it had been between them, the silence stretching like a thread between two people who knew how to read each other’s unspoken words. “You’re late,” Aurora said, her voice quieter than she intended. Lucien’s lips twitched, just a fraction. “I had to stop at the bar. Silas said you’d be here.” She exhaled through her nose, the scent of coffee and something faintly metallic—old blood, maybe—washing over her. “You know I don’t drink.” “Then why did you ask for a whiskey?” She rolled her eyes, but her fingers twitched toward the scar on her wrist. “Because you’re always the one who shows up when things get messy.” Lucien’s expression softened, just for a second. “I’m here now.” The flat smelled of dust and old paper, the kind of place that held secrets like a well-worn book. Aurora stepped back, gesturing toward the door. “Come in. Ptolemy’s probably asleep.” The cat—tabby, with stripes like a map of the world—blinked up at them from his perch on the windowsill. He didn’t move. Not yet. Lucien followed her inside, his cane tapping against the floorboards with a quiet *clack*. The flat was small but lived-in, shelves lined with books and scrolls, their spines worn from years of handling. Aurora’s flatmate, Eva, had a way of collecting things—things that told stories, things that whispered secrets. “You’ve been working late,” Aurora said, her voice low. “Again.” Lucien shrugged, but his gaze didn’t leave hers. “Demons don’t sleep.” Aurora’s stomach twisted. “You’re not here about work.” He hesitated, then reached into his coat and pulled out a small, leather-bound journal. He handed it to her. “I wanted to see if you’d still have it.” Aurora’s fingers hovered over the cover. The book had been hers once, a gift from him, a promise of something they’d never fully explored. The pages were yellowed now, the ink faded, but the weight of it felt heavy in her palm. “You didn’t have to bring it,” she said. Lucien’s expression was unreadable. “I did.” She opened it, turning the pages slowly. The first one was blank, the rest filled with sketches—portraits, half-finished, of people she didn’t recognize. Of him, maybe. Of her, too, but not the way she remembered. “You were always good at drawing,” she murmured. Lucien’s jaw tightened. “I was trying to remember.” Aurora closed the book, her thumb brushing the faded ink. “You’ve changed.” He didn’t deny it. “I’ve changed.” The silence between them was thick, the kind that settled like dust. Aurora looked away, her gaze drifting to the scar on her wrist. “You know, I used to think you were the only one who could fix things.” Lucien’s eyes darkened. “And now?” She turned back to him, her voice quieter. “Now I think you’re the only one who can’t.” Ptolemy finally stirred, his tail flicking against the windowsill. He hissed, then padded over, rubbing against Aurora’s legs. She bent down, scratching behind his ears. “You’re a terrible judge of character, aren’t you?” Lucien watched them, his expression unreadable. “I’m not here to judge.” Aurora exhaled, her shoulders relaxing just a little. “Then what are you doing here?” Lucien stepped closer, his cane casting a shadow over the floor. “I’m here because I’m done running.” The words hung between them, heavy and final. Aurora looked at him—really looked at him—for the first time in years. The man standing before her was different. Older, sharper. But there was still that flicker of something in his eyes, something that made her breath catch. “You’re not running from me,” she said softly. Lucien’s gaze dropped to her lips. “No.” The flat was too quiet. Too still. Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing his arm. “Then what are you running from?” Lucien’s breath hitched. “From the past.” Aurora’s heart pounded. “Then let me help.” He looked at her—really looked at her—and for the first time in a long time, she saw the man she’d fallen in love with. The one who had been there, even when she’d been too afraid to admit it. “You always were,” he said. Aurora smiled, just a little. “I always was.” Ptolemy let out a low, satisfied growl, as if he understood something she didn’t. But then, maybe he did. Maybe he’d always known.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.063
70.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount857
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count3
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount857
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"reminder"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"unspoken"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count2
6
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"silence"
2"unspoken"
3"stomach"
4"weight"
5"unreadable"
6"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles went white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences70
matches
0"was nervous"
1"n in love"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords839
ratio0.001
matches
0"clack"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
38.23% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount671
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.24
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Carter1
Moreau1
Lucien12
Aurora15
persons
0"Eva"
1"Carter"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.382
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount839
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean19.98
std17.36
cv0.869
sampleLengths
076
12
24
371
410
518
622
78
826
910
1031
1124
1249
1310
1411
158
1628
1742
188
196
2035
218
228
2312
246
2539
265
2717
2833
2911
3014
3117
3246
338
347
3521
366
377
3839
395
408
4123
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"been between"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences96
ratio0.083
matches
0"The scar on her left wrist—small but vivid—pulled at her skin, a reminder of the accident that had left her with a habit of gripping things when she was nervous."
1"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers, and for a heartbeat, the air between them crackled."
2"She exhaled through her nose, the scent of coffee and something faintly metallic—old blood, maybe—washing over her."
3"The cat—tabby, with stripes like a map of the world—blinked up at them from his perch on the windowsill."
4"Aurora’s flatmate, Eva, had a way of collecting things—things that told stories, things that whispered secrets."
5"The first one was blank, the rest filled with sketches—portraits, half-finished, of people she didn’t recognize."
6"Aurora looked at him—really looked at him—for the first time in years."
7"He looked at her—really looked at her—and for the first time in a long time, she saw the man she’d fallen in love with."
89.63% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount689
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, leather-bound journal."
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.04499274310595065
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.011611030478955007
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean8.74
std6.28
cv0.719
sampleLengths
020
122
230
34
42
54
623
717
84
927
1010
116
1212
1317
145
158
1614
1712
187
193
2019
217
225
2319
243
252
2614
2719
2816
299
301
318
323
333
345
3514
365
379
386
3918
4018
418
424
432
447
4516
463
479
488
493
46.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.2604166666666667
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners25
52.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"Maybe he’d always known."
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences63
matches
0"She hadn’t expected him."
1"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
2"He didn’t speak first."
3"She exhaled through her nose,"
4"She rolled her eyes, but"
5"He didn’t move."
6"He hesitated, then reached into"
7"He handed it to her."
8"She opened it, turning the"
9"He didn’t deny it."
10"She turned back to him,"
11"He hissed, then padded over,"
12"She bent down, scratching behind"
13"she said softly"
14"He looked at her—really looked"
ratio0.238
7.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences63
matches
0"The brass knocker scraped against"
1"Aurora Carter stood in the"
2"The scar on her left"
3"She hadn’t expected him."
4"Lucien Moreau stood just inside"
5"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
6"He didn’t speak first."
7"That was always how it"
8"Aurora said, her voice quieter"
9"Lucien’s lips twitched, just a"
10"She exhaled through her nose,"
11"She rolled her eyes, but"
12"Lucien’s expression softened, just for"
13"The flat smelled of dust"
14"Aurora stepped back, gesturing toward"
15"The cat—tabby, with stripes like"
16"He didn’t move."
17"Lucien followed her inside, his"
18"The flat was small but"
19"Aurora’s flatmate, Eva, had a"
ratio0.905
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
5.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The scar on her left wrist—small but vivid—pulled at her skin, a reminder of the accident that had left her with a habit of gripping things when she was nervous…"
1"The flat smelled of dust and old paper, the kind of place that held secrets like a well-worn book."
2"Aurora’s flatmate, Eva, had a way of collecting things—things that told stories, things that whispered secrets."
3"But there was still that flicker of something in his eyes, something that made her breath catch."
4"Ptolemy let out a low, satisfied growl, as if he understood something she didn’t."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Aurora said, her voice quieter than she intended"
1"Aurora said, her voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.063
75.3025%