Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9A0HTGN77RNFY006ZWGV8

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clicked, a series of metallic protests against intrusion. Rory squinted, the dim hallway light catching the bright blue of her eyes. She hadn’t been expecting anyone. Not after… well, not after everything. “Lucien?” she asked, the name tasting like ash on her tongue. He stood there, impossibly elegant even leaning heavily on his ivory-handled cane. The tailored charcoal suit, the slicked-back platinum blond hair, the unsettlingly mismatched eyes – one amber, one black – all of it was a carefully constructed shield. He hadn’t aged a day. “Rory,” he replied, his voice a low, melodic rumble that still sent a tremor through her. He didn’t offer a smile, just that unsettling, assessing gaze. “Forgive the intrusion. I hoped you might be… available.” Available. As if she were a commodity to be bartered for. She crossed her arms, the familiar ache in her wrist throbbing faintly beneath the crescent-shaped scar. “I’m not. And you shouldn’t be here.” He didn’t argue. He simply stepped inside, the scent of expensive cologne and something else, something indefinably foreign and sharp, filling the small hallway. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, materialized from beneath a pile of scrolls, arching his back and emitting a low hiss at the intruder. “Ptolemy seems displeased,” Lucien observed, his gaze flicking to the cat before returning to her. “He has good taste,” Rory retorted, stepping aside to allow him entry into the flat. The space was, as always, a chaotic testament to Eva’s relentless research. Books overflowed from shelves, spilling onto the floor in precarious stacks. Scrolls lay unrolled on every available surface, covered in cryptic symbols and faded ink. The air smelled of old paper, incense, and the lingering aroma of last night’s curry from the restaurant below. Lucien surveyed the scene with a detached amusement. “A veritable labyrinth of knowledge. Your friend is… dedicated.” “She is,” Rory agreed, her voice tight. She gestured towards a worn armchair. “Sit. But I’m still not sure why you’re here.” He settled into the chair with a grace that seemed to defy the stiffness in his posture, the cane tapping lightly against the floor. “I require your assistance, Rory. A matter of some urgency.” “My assistance?” She laughed, a short, brittle sound. “Last time I assisted you, it nearly got me killed.” The flicker of something – regret? – crossed his face, gone so quickly she almost missed it. “That was… unfortunate. A miscalculation on my part.” “A miscalculation that involved a rogue grimoire, a summoning circle, and a very angry demon,” she reminded him, her voice laced with sarcasm. The memory was still vivid, a knot of anxiety that tightened in her chest whenever she thought about it. He ignored the sarcasm. “This is different. This concerns… Avaros.” The name hit her like a physical blow. Avaros. His home. The realm he’d so carefully concealed from her, the source of his power, the reason for his guarded nature. “Why would I help you with anything related to Avaros?” “Because,” he said, his voice dropping to a near whisper, “it concerns you as well.” He paused, letting the weight of his words settle. Rory felt a chill crawl down her spine, despite the stuffy warmth of the flat. “Explain.” He leaned forward slightly, his mismatched eyes fixed on hers. “There’s been a disturbance. A ripple in the veil between realms. Something… is escaping.” “Escaping what?” “Avaros is not always a place of order. There are… entities contained within its borders. Powerful entities. And one of them is attempting to breach the barrier.” Rory frowned. “And you think this has something to do with me?” “Your connection to me,” he said, choosing his words carefully, “makes you a potential conduit. A focal point.” She scoffed. “You’re saying I’m some kind of magical antenna?” “Essentially, yes.” He didn’t flinch at her disbelief. “The entity… it senses your presence. It’s drawn to you.” “Great,” she muttered. “Just what I needed. A demon trying to use me as a doorway to another dimension.” “It’s not that simple,” he insisted. “If it succeeds, the consequences could be… catastrophic. For both realms.” Rory looked around the cluttered flat, at the piles of books and scrolls, at Ptolemy, who was now cautiously sniffing at Lucien’s polished shoes. Her life was complicated enough as it was – delivering Chinese food, dodging Evan’s increasingly erratic calls, trying to keep Eva from accidentally summoning something she couldn’t control. She didn’t need a cross-dimensional demon on her plate. “I’m not doing this, Lucien,” she said firmly. “I’m not getting involved.” He didn’t argue. He simply looked at her, a long, searching look that seemed to strip away her defenses, to see straight into her soul. “You’re lying, Rory.” The words hung in the air, heavy and accusatory. She felt her cheeks flush, a familiar heat rising in her chest. He knew her too well. He always had. “I’m being realistic,” she countered, avoiding his gaze. “Realism is a luxury we can’t afford right now.” He paused, then added, softly, “You care, Rory. You always have.” She wanted to deny it, to lash out, to tell him to leave and never come back. But the words wouldn’t come. The truth was, she did care. Despite everything – the lies, the betrayals, the near-death experiences – she still felt a pull towards him, a magnetic force that defied logic and reason. “Don’t,” she whispered, the word barely audible. He ignored her plea. “I know you, Rory. You can’t stand by and watch something terrible happen, even if it means putting yourself at risk.” She looked away, focusing on a faded tapestry depicting a scene from Celtic mythology. The colors were muted, the figures indistinct, but she found herself tracing the outline of a warrior with her finger. “What do you need me to do?” she asked, the words escaping her lips before she could stop them. A flicker of something – relief? – crossed his face. He didn’t smile, but the tension in his shoulders seemed to ease slightly. “First,” he said, his voice regaining its usual composure, “we need to find Eva. She has knowledge that will be invaluable.” “She’s at the library,” Rory replied. “Researching something about ancient wards.” “Perfect.” He leaned back in the chair, his gaze fixed on her. “Then, we prepare. This won’t be easy, Rory. And it will require all of your… unique talents.” She met his gaze, the amber and black eyes piercing and intense. The past rushed back – the shared laughter, the stolen kisses, the agonizing pain of their separation. The hurt was still there, a dull ache beneath the surface. But there was something else too – a spark of something that hadn’t been extinguished, a flicker of hope in the darkness. “What kind of talents are we talking about?” she asked, her voice barely a whisper. He smiled then, a slow, enigmatic smile that sent a shiver down her spine. “The kind that only you possess, Laila.” The use of her old alias, the name he’d given her, was a deliberate provocation. A reminder of their shared history, of the woman she used to be, of the woman he still saw beneath the surface. Rory didn’t respond. She simply stared at him, the weight of their past, and the uncertain future, pressing down on her. She knew, with a certainty that settled deep in her bones, that her life was about to become a whole lot more complicated. And that, somehow, she was already regretting saying yes.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said firmly [firmly]"
1"He paused then [then]"
2"He leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.133
59.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1248
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count3
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count2
5
adverb"cautiously"
count1
6
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"lightly"
2"quickly"
3"very"
4"slightly"
5"cautiously"
6"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1248
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"constructed"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"testament"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count3
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count2
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"potential"
count1
11
word"firmly"
count1
12
word"magnetic"
count1
13
word"tapestry"
count1
14
word"tracing"
count1
15
word"tension"
count1
16
word"perfect"
count1
17
word"enigmatic"
count1
18
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"constructed"
1"familiar"
2"chaotic"
3"testament"
4"flicker"
5"whisper"
6"weight"
7"chill"
8"down her spine"
9"warmth"
10"potential"
11"firmly"
12"magnetic"
13"tapestry"
14"tracing"
15"tension"
16"perfect"
17"enigmatic"
18"reminder"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
3
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of his words"
1"hung in the air"
2"sent a shiver down"
3"a flicker of hope"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences86
matches
0"felt a chill"
1"a flicker of hope"
76.41% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1254
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount910
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Rory8
Ptolemy2
Lucien3
Chinese1
Evan1
Celtic1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Evan"
places
0"Ptolemy"
1"Celtic"
globalScore1
windowScore1
68.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"grace that seemed to defy the stiffness in his posture, the cane tapping lightly against the floor"
1"look that seemed to strip away her defenses, to see straight into her soul"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1254
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean26.68
std15.47
cv0.58
sampleLengths
034
111
244
335
434
546
615
771
817
922
1034
1118
1225
1342
1410
1540
1615
1725
1824
192
2027
2112
2218
2310
2418
2519
2617
2761
2812
2928
3029
318
3220
3354
347
3525
3634
3719
3823
3921
4011
4129
4262
4315
4421
4537
4653
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"been extinguished"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs152
matches
0"was – delivering"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences110
ratio0.082
matches
0"The tailored charcoal suit, the slicked-back platinum blond hair, the unsettlingly mismatched eyes – one amber, one black – all of it was a carefully constructed shield."
1"The flicker of something – regret?"
2"– crossed his face, gone so quickly she almost missed it."
3"Her life was complicated enough as it was – delivering Chinese food, dodging Evan’s increasingly erratic calls, trying to keep Eva from accidentally summoning something she couldn’t control."
4"Despite everything – the lies, the betrayals, the near-death experiences – she still felt a pull towards him, a magnetic force that defied logic and reason."
5"A flicker of something – relief?"
6"– crossed his face."
7"The past rushed back – the shared laughter, the stolen kisses, the agonizing pain of their separation."
8"But there was something else too – a spark of something that hadn’t been extinguished, a flicker of hope in the darkness."
82.99% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount904
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.05530973451327434
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.024336283185840708
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean11.4
std6.83
cv0.599
sampleLengths
010
113
25
32
44
511
612
727
85
916
1010
119
121
1310
1416
157
163
1721
1822
1915
2015
2112
2211
2314
2419
258
269
277
286
299
3024
3110
328
3310
346
3511
368
3723
3819
394
406
418
421
432
4419
4510
4615
479
4815
491
61.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.41818181818181815
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
1.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences77
matches
0"She hadn’t been expecting anyone."
1"she asked, the name tasting"
2"He stood there, impossibly elegant"
3"He hadn’t aged a day."
4"he replied, his voice a"
5"He didn’t offer a smile,"
6"She crossed her arms, the"
7"He didn’t argue."
8"He simply stepped inside, the"
9"She gestured towards a worn"
10"He settled into the chair"
11"She laughed, a short, brittle"
12"she reminded him, her voice"
13"He ignored the sarcasm."
14"he said, his voice dropping"
15"He paused, letting the weight"
16"He leaned forward slightly, his"
17"he said, choosing his words"
18"He didn’t flinch at her"
19"Her life was complicated enough"
ratio0.545
11.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences77
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked, a series"
1"Rory squinted, the dim hallway"
2"She hadn’t been expecting anyone."
3"she asked, the name tasting"
4"He stood there, impossibly elegant"
5"The tailored charcoal suit, the"
6"He hadn’t aged a day."
7"he replied, his voice a"
8"He didn’t offer a smile,"
9"She crossed her arms, the"
10"He didn’t argue."
11"He simply stepped inside, the"
12"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, materialized"
13"Lucien observed, his gaze flicking"
14"Rory retorted, stepping aside to"
15"The space was, as always,"
16"Books overflowed from shelves, spilling"
17"Scrolls lay unrolled on every"
18"The air smelled of old"
19"Lucien surveyed the scene with"
ratio0.896
64.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"As if she were a"
ratio0.013
86.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory looked around the cluttered flat, at the piles of books and scrolls, at Ptolemy, who was now cautiously sniffing at Lucien’s polished shoes."
1"Despite everything – the lies, the betrayals, the near-death experiences – she still felt a pull towards him, a magnetic force that defied logic and reason."
2"But there was something else too – a spark of something that hadn’t been extinguished, a flicker of hope in the darkness."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Lucien observed, his gaze flicking to the cat before returning to her"
1"Rory agreed, her voice tight"
2"he said, his voice dropping to a near whisper,"
3"she whispered, the word barely audible"
4"she asked, the words escaping her lips before she could stop them"
5"he said, his voice regaining its usual composure,"
6"she asked, her voice barely a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Lucien observed (observe)"
1"Rory retorted (retort)"
2"Rory agreed (agree)"
3"She laughed (laugh)"
4"she muttered (mutter)"
5"he insisted (insist)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.356
leniency0.711
rawRatio0.438
effectiveRatio0.311
66.0240%