| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said firmly [firmly]" | | 1 | "He paused then [then]" | | 2 | "He leaned back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.467 | | leniency | 0.933 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |
| 59.94% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1248 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "slightly" | | 5 | "cautiously" | | 6 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1248 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "constructed" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "chaotic" | | 3 | "testament" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "down her spine" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "potential" | | 11 | "firmly" | | 12 | "magnetic" | | 13 | "tapestry" | | 14 | "tracing" | | 15 | "tension" | | 16 | "perfect" | | 17 | "enigmatic" | | 18 | "reminder" |
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| 0.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 4 | | maxInWindow | 4 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
| | 3 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of his words" | | 1 | "hung in the air" | | 2 | "sent a shiver down" | | 3 | "a flicker of hope" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a chill" | | 1 | "a flicker of hope" |
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| 76.41% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1254 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 24 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 910 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.88 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 3 | | Rory | 8 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Lucien | 3 | | Chinese | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Celtic | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 68.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "grace that seemed to defy the stiffness in his posture, the cane tapping lightly against the floor" | | 1 | "look that seemed to strip away her defenses, to see straight into her soul" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1254 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 26.68 | | std | 15.47 | | cv | 0.58 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 34 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 71 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 61 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 54 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 62 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 37 | | 46 | 53 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 152 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.082 | | matches | | 0 | "The tailored charcoal suit, the slicked-back platinum blond hair, the unsettlingly mismatched eyes – one amber, one black – all of it was a carefully constructed shield." | | 1 | "The flicker of something – regret?" | | 2 | "– crossed his face, gone so quickly she almost missed it." | | 3 | "Her life was complicated enough as it was – delivering Chinese food, dodging Evan’s increasingly erratic calls, trying to keep Eva from accidentally summoning something she couldn’t control." | | 4 | "Despite everything – the lies, the betrayals, the near-death experiences – she still felt a pull towards him, a magnetic force that defied logic and reason." | | 5 | "A flicker of something – relief?" | | 6 | "– crossed his face." | | 7 | "The past rushed back – the shared laughter, the stolen kisses, the agonizing pain of their separation." | | 8 | "But there was something else too – a spark of something that hadn’t been extinguished, a flicker of hope in the darkness." |
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| 82.99% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 904 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.05530973451327434 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.024336283185840708 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 11.4 | | std | 6.83 | | cv | 0.599 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 61.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.41818181818181815 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 1.82% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t been expecting anyone." | | 1 | "she asked, the name tasting" | | 2 | "He stood there, impossibly elegant" | | 3 | "He hadn’t aged a day." | | 4 | "he replied, his voice a" | | 5 | "He didn’t offer a smile," | | 6 | "She crossed her arms, the" | | 7 | "He didn’t argue." | | 8 | "He simply stepped inside, the" | | 9 | "She gestured towards a worn" | | 10 | "He settled into the chair" | | 11 | "She laughed, a short, brittle" | | 12 | "she reminded him, her voice" | | 13 | "He ignored the sarcasm." | | 14 | "he said, his voice dropping" | | 15 | "He paused, letting the weight" | | 16 | "He leaned forward slightly, his" | | 17 | "he said, choosing his words" | | 18 | "He didn’t flinch at her" | | 19 | "Her life was complicated enough" |
| | ratio | 0.545 | |
| 11.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The deadbolts clicked, a series" | | 1 | "Rory squinted, the dim hallway" | | 2 | "She hadn’t been expecting anyone." | | 3 | "she asked, the name tasting" | | 4 | "He stood there, impossibly elegant" | | 5 | "The tailored charcoal suit, the" | | 6 | "He hadn’t aged a day." | | 7 | "he replied, his voice a" | | 8 | "He didn’t offer a smile," | | 9 | "She crossed her arms, the" | | 10 | "He didn’t argue." | | 11 | "He simply stepped inside, the" | | 12 | "Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, materialized" | | 13 | "Lucien observed, his gaze flicking" | | 14 | "Rory retorted, stepping aside to" | | 15 | "The space was, as always," | | 16 | "Books overflowed from shelves, spilling" | | 17 | "Scrolls lay unrolled on every" | | 18 | "The air smelled of old" | | 19 | "Lucien surveyed the scene with" |
| | ratio | 0.896 | |
| 64.94% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 86.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory looked around the cluttered flat, at the piles of books and scrolls, at Ptolemy, who was now cautiously sniffing at Lucien’s polished shoes." | | 1 | "Despite everything – the lies, the betrayals, the near-death experiences – she still felt a pull towards him, a magnetic force that defied logic and reason." | | 2 | "But there was something else too – a spark of something that hadn’t been extinguished, a flicker of hope in the darkness." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien observed, his gaze flicking to the cat before returning to her" | | 1 | "Rory agreed, her voice tight" | | 2 | "he said, his voice dropping to a near whisper," | | 3 | "she whispered, the word barely audible" | | 4 | "she asked, the words escaping her lips before she could stop them" | | 5 | "he said, his voice regaining its usual composure," | | 6 | "she asked, her voice barely a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien observed (observe)" | | 1 | "Rory retorted (retort)" | | 2 | "Rory agreed (agree)" | | 3 | "She laughed (laugh)" | | 4 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 5 | "he insisted (insist)" | | 6 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.356 | | leniency | 0.711 | | rawRatio | 0.438 | | effectiveRatio | 0.311 | |