Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9A50WZ6T0WWYFPYV6KK8K

Run Details

Duration:
2m 48s
Cost:
$0.013605
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest bleached the rain-slicked Soho pavement a sickly lime as Rory Carter shoved through the door. She scraped rain from her straight black shoulder-length hair, her bright blue eyes darting to the dim corners of the bar—walls papered with frayed old maps, some marked with faded red ink, and black-and-white photographs of unsmiling men in tailored suits. A map of Prague hung center, its edges curled like burnt paper, and beside it a photo of a man with a raven perched on his shoulder. She leaned her scuffed delivery bag against the bar, her left wrist brushing the worn oak; the crescent scar there (a childhood fall off her father’s barrister’s bookshelf, when she’d reached for a first edition of Sherlock Holmes) caught the glow of a brass table lamp. Rain dripped from her coat collar onto the bar, leaving dark rings that merged with the faint watermarks of old drinks. A man’s limp thud echoed from the back storage room. He emerged, 6’1” with grey-streaked auburn hair and a neatly trimmed matching beard that dusted his collar, his left leg dragging slightly as he shifted a wooden crate of whiskey bottles to the bar top. His right hand wore a silver signet ring, its face etched with a raven’s head, and he wiped his palms on a stained linen towel slung over his shoulder. He paused mid-wipe when he saw her wrist. That scar. Rory’s breath caught in her throat. She’d not heard that low, rumbling voice since she was 15, when the man had helped her fish her father’s lost barrister briefcase from the churning Taff River in Cardiff—its contents soaked but salvageable, thanks to her quick idea to stuff the case in a plastic bag before they waded in. You’re Silas. She stepped back, her scuffed boot kicking the delivery bag; a container of dumplings clattered inside, its lid slipping. The crate in his hands clattered to the bar top—two bottles sloshing, their amber liquid swirling against the glass. I thought you vanished off the face of the earth. Rory’s fingers curled around the bar edge, her nails digging into the worn wood. She’d read a tiny snippet in the Cardiff Evening Post five years prior: ex-intelligence operative injured in foreign operation, status unknown. She’d stared at the words for an hour, her bright blue eyes burning, but she’d never picked up the phone to call the number listed for the story—too afraid of what she’d hear, too wrapped up in her own crumbling pre-law studies and Evan’s growing temper. The paper said you took a hit overseas. Silas shifted his weight to his right leg, his hazel eyes locking on her bright blue ones. He’d remembered her as a sharp, quick-thinking kid who’d outargued her father’s law clerks over scones and tea in the family’s Cardiff kitchen—who’d once pointed out a flaw in a high-profile case brief that even her father had missed. Now she wore a frayed delivery uniform from the Golden Empress restaurant, her knuckles scraped raw from hauling heavy food boxes up London’s narrow staircases, and her coat had a torn sleeve she’d tried to patch with black thread. Prague. Botched op. My knee gave out mid-escape, and I got captured for three days. He gestured to the center map of Prague, its red ink marks faint escape routes he’d abandoned when his knee failed. The map’s edges were singed, a souvenir from the fire he’d set to destroy evidence before he was caught. I left Cardiff without a word. Regret clamped his jaw tight, his beard twitching. He’d slipped out of her father’s study at 2 a.m. to meet a MI6 contact, and he’d never looked back. I owed you a thank-you for covering for me that night. Rory’s throat tightened. She’d lied to her father—Brendan the Irish barrister, a man who valued truth above all else—saying Silas had left to pick up urgent legal documents, not to meet a contact in a hidden alley. That lie had earned her a week of grounded dinners alone in her bedroom, her plate of shepherd’s pie growing cold as she stared at the raven figurine Silas had given her for her 14th birthday. I forgot that lie until this second. She pulled a crumpled receipt from her coat pocket, the name Evan scrawled on the back in his messy handwriting—an old bill he’d forced her to pay for his beer. She crumpled it smaller, her fingers trembling. I left pre-law six months ago. Fled Cardiff the day Evan broke my laptop for applying to a job without his permission. Silas’s gaze flicked to the crumpled receipt, his hazel eyes narrowing. He’d seen the same tight set of shoulders in witnesses he’d debriefed after violent incidents—those who’d learned to shrink into themselves to avoid further harm. He slid a glass of soda water across the bar—no ice, just like she’d liked it as a kid, when she’d refused to drink anything with ice because it made her teeth hurt. He’d never forgotten that tiny detail. You used to outthink every problem thrown at you. You once built a pulley system from rope and old curtain rods to retrieve a cat from your mother’s Welsh teacher classroom ceiling—saved the cat and avoided getting in trouble for climbing on the desks. Rory laughed, a sharp, short sound that died in her throat. The pulley system was a distant memory, replaced by the sound of Evan’s shouts echoing through their Cardiff flat, the burn of his hand on her arm when she’d tried to leave, and the taste of dumplings she’d eaten cold in London bus shelters. I deliver dumplings now. Live in a tiny flat above a laundromat, where the dryer thuds all night and mice chew through my food bags. Silas’s limp thud echoed again as he moved to the bookshelf behind the bar—its shelves lined with old spy novels and leather-bound history books, their spines cracked. He pushed a worn copy of Bram Stoker’s Dracula to the left, and the bookshelf swung open with a low creak, revealing a hidden back room lined with metal file cabinets and a small desk. The room smelled of old paper and cigar smoke. I own this bar. The hidden room’s for clandestine meetings with my old intelligence contacts—people who need a safe place to talk. I could use someone with your quick thinking to watch the door. Rory stared at the hidden room, her bright blue eyes wide. She’d not had an offer of purpose since she left pre-law—her days filled with delivering dumplings, her nights filled with staring at the raven figurine on her laundromat flat windowsill. Her father’s voice rang in her head: You’re wasting your intelligence on nothing, Rory. She flinched, her left wrist tensing, the crescent scar stretching as she curled her hand into a fist. I don’t do clandestine work. I left one dangerous life behind; I don’t want another. Silas leaned against the bookshelf, his silver signet ring glinting in the hidden room’s dim lamp light. He’d noticed her eyes dart to the back door the second she’d walked in—hidden behind a curtain of tattered velvet, its handle faded—and to the fire escape visible through a small window. She still scanned every room for exits, just like she’d done when they’d hidden from a group of bullies in Cardiff’s central library when she was 13. You scan every room for exits. You noted the back door and fire escape before you even leaned against the bar. Rory’s breath hitched. She’d indeed spotted both exits the second she’d stepped inside, a habit she’d developed after Evan broke down her bedroom door in Cardiff—she’d escaped through the window, landing hard on the grass below. That habit had saved her more than once in London. I learned that from you. You told me to always know my escape routes, no matter where I was. Silas’s jaw tightened, his hazel eyes darkening with regret. He’d regretted leaving Cardiff without saying goodbye, regretted not teaching her more skills to protect herself, regretted not knowing about Evan until this moment. I should have stayed. Should have taught you to fight back, not just run. Rory’s fingers brushed her left wrist scar, the smooth skin a reminder of her childhood courage—of the girl who’d climbed a bookshelf to reach a novel, who’d built a pulley system to save a cat. Evan had beaten that courage out of her, but for a second, standing in The Raven’s Nest, she felt it flicker again. I fight back now. I left him. I took the last of my money and got on a train to London, and I haven’t looked back. She set the crumpled Evan receipt on the bar top, her fingers steady now. Silas picked it up, tore it into tiny pieces, and dropped them into a brass ashtray on the bar—then struck a match and lit them, the flames turning the paper to ash. The flat above my bar’s empty. It’s small, but it’s quiet, and there are no mice. It’s cheaper than the laundromat. Rory’s bright blue eyes widened. She’d not had a safe place to sleep since she fled Cardiff—her laundromat flat had a broken lock, and the neighbors’ fights kept her up all night. She unclipped her delivery bag strap, setting the bag on the bar top with a thud. You’d let me stay there? Silas shifted his weight to his right leg, his limp more pronounced as he leaned in to look at her. He’d not had someone he trusted in his bar in years—someone who knew his old self, who could see past the bar owner facade and the limp, who could lie well and think quickly. I need someone to watch the hidden room when I’m in meetings. Someone who knows how to spot a threat before it’s too late. Someone who’s got that old courage I remember. Rory thought of her father’s grounded dinners, of the lie she’d told for Silas, of the pulley system she’d built, of the night she’d escaped Evan’s flat through the window. She exposed her left wrist scar again, this time not by accident, and she nodded. I can lie. I can spot a threat. I can watch the room.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1751
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1751
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"churning"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"clandestine"
count2
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"facade"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"etched"
2"churning"
3"weight"
4"flicked"
5"echoing"
6"clandestine"
7"glinting"
8"velvet"
9"scanned"
10"reminder"
11"flicker"
12"facade"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences48
matches
0"g with regret"
83.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences48
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences48
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen98
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1720
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions76
wordCount1627
uniqueNames25
maxNameDensity0.68
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Rory11
Carter1
Prague3
Sherlock1
Holmes1
Taff1
River1
Cardiff10
Silas11
Evening1
Post1
Evan9
Golden1
Empress1
London4
Brendan1
Irish1
Welsh1
Bram1
Stoker1
Dracula1
You8
persons
0"Nest"
1"Rory"
2"Carter"
3"Sherlock"
4"Holmes"
5"Silas"
6"Evan"
7"Brendan"
8"Stoker"
9"You"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"Prague"
3"Taff"
4"River"
5"Cardiff"
6"Golden"
7"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1720
matches(empty)
27.78% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences48
matches
0"forgot that lie"
1"beaten that courage"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean40
std30.96
cv0.774
sampleLengths
0158
182
22
357
42
538
610
781
88
995
1015
1140
126
1328
1411
1573
167
1737
1822
1975
2044
2155
2225
2371
2434
2573
2615
2776
2821
2946
3019
3133
3214
3357
3426
3546
3621
3748
385
3954
4032
4145
4213
90.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences48
matches
0"got captured"
1"were singed"
2"was caught"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs282
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount21
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences20
totalSentences48
ratio0.417
matches
0"She scraped rain from her straight black shoulder-length hair, her bright blue eyes darting to the dim corners of the bar—walls papered with frayed old maps, some marked with faded red ink, and black-and-white photographs of unsmiling men in tailored suits."
1"She leaned her scuffed delivery bag against the bar, her left wrist brushing the worn oak; the crescent scar there (a childhood fall off her father’s barrister’s bookshelf, when she’d reached for a first edition of Sherlock Holmes) caught the glow of a brass table lamp."
2"Rory’s breath caught in her throat. She’d not heard that low, rumbling voice since she was 15, when the man had helped her fish her father’s lost barrister briefcase from the churning Taff River in Cardiff—its contents soaked but salvageable, thanks to her quick idea to stuff the case in a plastic bag before they waded in."
3"She stepped back, her scuffed boot kicking the delivery bag; a container of dumplings clattered inside, its lid slipping. The crate in his hands clattered to the bar top—two bottles sloshing, their amber liquid swirling against the glass."
4"Rory’s fingers curled around the bar edge, her nails digging into the worn wood. She’d read a tiny snippet in the Cardiff Evening Post five years prior: ex-intelligence operative injured in foreign operation, status unknown. She’d stared at the words for an hour, her bright blue eyes burning, but she’d never picked up the phone to call the number listed for the story—too afraid of what she’d hear, too wrapped up in her own crumbling pre-law studies and Evan’s growing temper."
5"Silas shifted his weight to his right leg, his hazel eyes locking on her bright blue ones. He’d remembered her as a sharp, quick-thinking kid who’d outargued her father’s law clerks over scones and tea in the family’s Cardiff kitchen—who’d once pointed out a flaw in a high-profile case brief that even her father had missed. Now she wore a frayed delivery uniform from the Golden Empress restaurant, her knuckles scraped raw from hauling heavy food boxes up London’s narrow staircases, and her coat had a torn sleeve she’d tried to patch with black thread."
6"Rory’s throat tightened. She’d lied to her father—Brendan the Irish barrister, a man who valued truth above all else—saying Silas had left to pick up urgent legal documents, not to meet a contact in a hidden alley. That lie had earned her a week of grounded dinners alone in her bedroom, her plate of shepherd’s pie growing cold as she stared at the raven figurine Silas had given her for her 14th birthday."
7"She pulled a crumpled receipt from her coat pocket, the name Evan scrawled on the back in his messy handwriting—an old bill he’d forced her to pay for his beer. She crumpled it smaller, her fingers trembling."
8"Silas’s gaze flicked to the crumpled receipt, his hazel eyes narrowing. He’d seen the same tight set of shoulders in witnesses he’d debriefed after violent incidents—those who’d learned to shrink into themselves to avoid further harm. He slid a glass of soda water across the bar—no ice, just like she’d liked it as a kid, when she’d refused to drink anything with ice because it made her teeth hurt. He’d never forgotten that tiny detail."
9"You used to outthink every problem thrown at you. You once built a pulley system from rope and old curtain rods to retrieve a cat from your mother’s Welsh teacher classroom ceiling—saved the cat and avoided getting in trouble for climbing on the desks."
10"Silas’s limp thud echoed again as he moved to the bookshelf behind the bar—its shelves lined with old spy novels and leather-bound history books, their spines cracked. He pushed a worn copy of Bram Stoker’s Dracula to the left, and the bookshelf swung open with a low creak, revealing a hidden back room lined with metal file cabinets and a small desk. The room smelled of old paper and cigar smoke."
11"I own this bar. The hidden room’s for clandestine meetings with my old intelligence contacts—people who need a safe place to talk. I could use someone with your quick thinking to watch the door."
12"Rory stared at the hidden room, her bright blue eyes wide. She’d not had an offer of purpose since she left pre-law—her days filled with delivering dumplings, her nights filled with staring at the raven figurine on her laundromat flat windowsill. Her father’s voice rang in her head: You’re wasting your intelligence on nothing, Rory. She flinched, her left wrist tensing, the crescent scar stretching as she curled her hand into a fist."
13"I don’t do clandestine work. I left one dangerous life behind; I don’t want another."
14"Silas leaned against the bookshelf, his silver signet ring glinting in the hidden room’s dim lamp light. He’d noticed her eyes dart to the back door the second she’d walked in—hidden behind a curtain of tattered velvet, its handle faded—and to the fire escape visible through a small window. She still scanned every room for exits, just like she’d done when they’d hidden from a group of bullies in Cardiff’s central library when she was 13."
15"Rory’s breath hitched. She’d indeed spotted both exits the second she’d stepped inside, a habit she’d developed after Evan broke down her bedroom door in Cardiff—she’d escaped through the window, landing hard on the grass below. That habit had saved her more than once in London."
16"Rory’s fingers brushed her left wrist scar, the smooth skin a reminder of her childhood courage—of the girl who’d climbed a bookshelf to reach a novel, who’d built a pulley system to save a cat. Evan had beaten that courage out of her, but for a second, standing in The Raven’s Nest, she felt it flicker again."
17"She set the crumpled Evan receipt on the bar top, her fingers steady now. Silas picked it up, tore it into tiny pieces, and dropped them into a brass ashtray on the bar—then struck a match and lit them, the flames turning the paper to ash."
18"Rory’s bright blue eyes widened. She’d not had a safe place to sleep since she fled Cardiff—her laundromat flat had a broken lock, and the neighbors’ fights kept her up all night. She unclipped her delivery bag strap, setting the bag on the bar top with a thud."
19"Silas shifted his weight to his right leg, his limp more pronounced as he leaned in to look at her. He’d not had someone he trusted in his bar in years—someone who knew his old self, who could see past the bar owner facade and the limp, who could lie well and think quickly."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount175
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.011428571428571429
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.005714285714285714
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences48
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences48
mean35.83
std23.93
cv0.668
sampleLengths
023
141
227
346
421
510
672
72
857
92
1038
1110
1281
138
1495
1515
1640
176
1828
1911
2073
217
2237
2322
2475
2544
2655
2725
2871
2934
3073
3115
3276
3321
3446
3519
3633
3714
3857
3926
4046
4121
4248
435
4454
4532
4645
4713
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.25
totalSentences48
uniqueOpeners12
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
24.44% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences45
matches
0"She scraped rain from her"
1"She leaned her scuffed delivery"
2"She stepped back, her scuffed"
3"I thought you vanished off"
4"He gestured to the center"
5"I left Cardiff without a"
6"I owed you a thank-you"
7"I forgot that lie until"
8"She pulled a crumpled receipt"
9"I left pre-law six months"
10"You used to outthink every"
11"I deliver dumplings now. Live"
12"I own this bar. The"
13"I don’t do clandestine work."
14"You scan every room for"
15"I learned that from you."
16"I should have stayed. Should"
17"I fight back now. I"
18"She set the crumpled Evan"
19"You’d let me stay there?"
ratio0.489
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences45
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"She scraped rain from her"
2"A map of Prague hung"
3"She leaned her scuffed delivery"
4"Rain dripped from her coat"
5"A man’s limp thud echoed"
6"Rory’s breath caught in her"
7"She stepped back, her scuffed"
8"I thought you vanished off"
9"Rory’s fingers curled around the"
10"The paper said you took"
11"Silas shifted his weight to"
12"Prague. Botched op. My knee"
13"He gestured to the center"
14"I left Cardiff without a"
15"Regret clamped his jaw tight,"
16"I owed you a thank-you"
17"Rory’s throat tightened. She’d lied"
18"I forgot that lie until"
19"She pulled a crumpled receipt"
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She stepped back, her scuffed boot kicking the delivery bag; a container of dumplings clattered inside, its lid slipping. The crate in his hands clattered to th…"
1"Silas shifted his weight to his right leg, his hazel eyes locking on her bright blue ones. He’d remembered her as a sharp, quick-thinking kid who’d outargued he…"
2"Rory’s throat tightened. She’d lied to her father—Brendan the Irish barrister, a man who valued truth above all else—saying Silas had left to pick up urgent leg…"
3"Rory laughed, a sharp, short sound that died in her throat. The pulley system was a distant memory, replaced by the sound of Evan’s shouts echoing through their…"
4"I own this bar. The hidden room’s for clandestine meetings with my old intelligence contacts—people who need a safe place to talk. I could use someone with your…"
5"Rory’s fingers brushed her left wrist scar, the smooth skin a reminder of her childhood courage—of the girl who’d climbed a bookshelf to reach a novel, who’d bu…"
6"Silas shifted his weight to his right leg, his limp more pronounced as he leaned in to look at her. He’d not had someone he trusted in his bar in years—someone …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
74.7552%