Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9A78CWFQCWM067CFNGJN6

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
2m 21s
Cost:
$0.059385
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open on its rusty hinges, releasing a puff of stale air laced with curry spices from the shop below. Rory's hand froze on the knob, her bright blue eyes narrowing at the figure in the hallway. Lucien Moreau stood there, his platinum blond hair slicked back without a strand out of place, tailored charcoal suit hugging his frame like it had been poured on. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers with that same unreadable intensity she remembered all too well. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the one she knew hid a blade sharper than any regret. She slammed the door shut. Or tried to. His foot wedged in the gap, polished leather boot unyielding against the wood. The three deadbolts rattled in protest. "Move it, Luc," she snapped, shoving harder. Her shoulder-length black hair swung forward, brushing her cheek. The small crescent scar on her left wrist itched, a phantom reminder of old wounds—childhood ones, and others fresher. "Not until you hear me out." His voice, smooth as French silk with that faint Marseille accent, slipped through the crack like smoke. He didn't push back, just held position. Always the gentleman, even when crashing back into her life. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, slunk over from his perch on a stack of yellowed scrolls, rubbing against her ankle with a low purr. Traitor. Rory exhaled sharply, glancing at the chaos of Eva's flat behind her—books piled on every surface, research notes fluttering in the draft like trapped birds. Eva was out, chasing some lead on ancient grimoires, leaving Rory to mind the place. Perfect timing for ghosts to knock. She released the door, stepping back with arms crossed. "Fine. You've got thirty seconds before I call the cops. Or worse, Silas downstairs." Lucien eased inside, closing the door with a soft click. He scanned the cramped space, his amber eye catching the light from a single bulb dangling overhead. "Charming. Smells like vindaloo and forgotten lore. Suits you, Rory." "Doesn't suit you." She circled the tiny kitchen table, putting distance between them. Papers crunched under her boots—Eva's scribbles on demon realms, half in Welsh, half in code. Rory's pulse thrummed, a mix of fury and that damn pull she'd never shaken. Two years since he'd vanished after that night in the warehouse district, leaving her with a bruised heart and questions that burned hotter than any hellfire. "What do you want? Last I heard, you were brokering deals in Paris. Or was it Berlin?" He set his cane against the wall, fingers lingering on the ivory grip. Ptolemy leaped onto a nearby chair, eyeing him with slit pupils. Lucien ignored the cat, focusing on her instead. "Information, as always. But this time, it's personal." She barked a laugh, short and bitter. "Personal? That's rich coming from you. You ghosted me after—" "After I saved your life." He stepped closer, the floorboards groaning under his weight. His black eye seemed to swallow the shadows, while the amber one gleamed. "Evan tracked you down, remember? Your ex, with his fists and his temper. I handled it." "Handled it?" Rory's voice rose, echoing off the book-stacked walls. She jabbed a finger at his chest, stopping short of touching the crisp shirt. Heat radiated from him, unnatural, demonic. "You slit his throat and dumped him in the Thames. Then you bailed without a word. No goodbye, no explanation. Just poof—gone like some cheap magic trick." His jaw tightened, a muscle twitching. He grabbed her wrist, gentle but firm, thumb brushing the scar. Electricity sparked at the contact, racing up her arm. "I did what needed doing. Evan would have killed you, Rory. And I... I couldn't stay. My father's kin sensed the blood debt. Avaros calls its own." She yanked free, but didn't move away. The air thickened, charged with the scent of his cologne—sandalwood and brimstone. "Blood debt? That's your excuse? We had something, Luc. Attraction, yeah, but more. You kissed me that night, promised we'd figure it out. Then nothing." He ran a hand through his hair, disrupting the slick perfection for once. "It wasn't nothing. Every day since, I've regretted leaving. But you were human, safe in your world. I dragged you into mine—demons, fixers, the underworld rot. Hurt you without meaning to." Rory turned, grabbing a mug from the counter cluttered with teabags and incantation herbs. She poured water from the kettle, steam rising like unresolved tension. "Hurt? Try abandoned. I woke up alone in that safehouse, wondering if you'd died or just decided I wasn't worth the hassle." Lucien closed the distance, his presence filling the narrow kitchen. He took the mug from her, fingers grazing hers. "Worth it? You're the only one who's ever made me question my bloodline. That night, when I kissed you..." He set the mug down, voice dropping low. "Your lips tasted like freedom. Like I could be more than half a monster." She met his gaze, blue clashing with amber and black. Her heart hammered, betraying her cool facade. Quick thinking had always been her edge, but here, with him, thoughts tangled. "Don't. Don't rewrite history with pretty words. You left things unsaid, Luc. Like why you really bailed. Was it fear? Or did Daddy Demon summon you home?" A smirk tugged his lips, faint but real. He leaned in, breath warm against her ear. "Fear, yes. Of losing you to my world. But unsaid? Fine, I'll say it now. I love you, Rory. Always have. That's why I'm here—unannounced, uninvited. Because something's stirring in Avaros, and it involves you." She pulled back, but his words hung there, heavy as the scrolls around them. Ptolemy meowed, batting at a loose page on the floor. Rory's mind raced—love? After all this time? Attraction flared, hot and insistent, mingling with the hurt that had festered. "You think you can waltz in, drop that bomb, and what? Pick up where we left off?" "Not pick up." He cupped her face, thumb tracing her jawline. His touch ignited sparks, demonic energy humming beneath his skin. "Start over. But first, hear me out. Your friend Eva's digging into old texts—ones that mention Malphora." Rory stiffened. Malphora—one of her aliases, buried in her family's lore. How did he know? "Eva's out. This is her mess, not mine." "It's yours now." Lucien's hands dropped to her shoulders, pulling her closer. The flat seemed smaller, walls closing in with books whispering secrets. "A demon lord's rising, and he knows about the Carter line. Your father's barrister tricks won't save you. I came to warn you—and to beg forgiveness." She searched his eyes, the mismatched pair revealing fragments of his soul. Hurt lingered, but so did the pull, that electric draw she'd felt from their first meeting in Silas' bar. "Forgiveness? Earn it. Tell me everything. No more half-truths." He nodded, releasing her but staying close. "Everything. Starting with why I kissed you that night." His voice softened, laced with memory. "You stood there, blood on your hands from fighting Evan off, and you looked unbreakable. I pulled you into the shadows, pressed you against the wall. Your breath hitched, and when our lips met, it was fire—pure, consuming." Rory's cheeks warmed, the recollection vivid. She'd melted into him then, hands fisting his suit, tasting danger and desire. "You whispered my name like a prayer. Rory, not Aurora. Then you vanished." "Not vanished." He traced her scar again, deliberate. "Watched from afar. Ensured Evan stayed dead. But now, with this threat..." A knock echoed from downstairs, muffled through the floor—the curry house bustling. Ptolemy arched his back, fur bristling. Rory ignored it, focused on Lucien. "Threat? Details, Luc. Or walk out that door again." He exhaled, stepping back to retrieve his cane. "Malphora isn't just an alias. It's a title from Avaros, linked to your mother's Welsh roots. Demons whisper it— a human who could bridge realms. The lord wants you for his army." She laughed again, but it came out hollow. "Me? A delivery girl from Cardiff? Pull the other one." His expression darkened. "No joke. Eva's notes confirm it—look." He snatched a scroll from the table, unrolling it to reveal faded runes. "This mentions a crescent mark, like your scar. Prophecy stuff." Rory peered at the text, her intelligence kicking in. Patterns emerged—Welsh myths intertwined with demon lore. "Bloody hell. Eva never said." "Because she protects you." Lucien rolled it back up, tucking it away. "Like I should have. Instead, I hurt you by leaving." The admission hung between them, raw. She reached out, fingers brushing his lapel. Attraction surged, undeniable. "Hurt, yeah. But alive because of you. Things left unsaid... like how I felt that night. Terrified, but safe in your arms." He captured her hand, pressing it to his chest. His heart beat steady, warmer than human. "Say it now." "I wanted more." Her voice steadied, cool head prevailing even as desire built. "More kisses, more nights. But you ran." "Then let me make up for it." He drew her in, lips hovering near hers. The flat's clutter faded, world narrowing to them. Ptolemy watched, tail flicking. She closed the gap, kissing him fiercely. His mouth claimed hers, hungry, tasting of regret and promise. Hands roamed—hers in his hair, disrupting the slick style; his at her waist, pulling her flush. Heat built, demonic fire meeting her human spark. They broke apart, breathing ragged. "Not here," she murmured, glancing at the door. "Eva could walk in." Lucien grinned, eyes alight. "Then let's go. Your flat above the bar. We talk—really talk. No more running." She nodded, grabbing her jacket from a hook buried under books. Hurt lingered, but attraction blazed brighter. Things unsaid poured out in glances, in touches. As they stepped toward the door, the curry scent wafted stronger, mingling with possibility. Ptolemy meowed in protest, but Rory scooped him up, scratching his ear. "Hold the fort, furball." Lucien opened the door, cane in hand. "After you, ma chérie." She slipped past, their shoulders brushing. The hallway stretched dim, but the tension between them lit the way. Unsaid words still simmered, but now, with him here, they had time to voice them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.32
leniency0.64
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1722
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"sharply"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1722
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"intensity"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"racing"
count1
10
word"charged"
count1
11
word"disrupting"
count2
12
word"tension"
count2
13
word"facade"
count1
14
word"raced"
count1
15
word"tracing"
count1
16
word"electric"
count1
17
word"desire"
count2
18
word"traced"
count1
19
word"echoed"
count1
20
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"intensity"
2"reminder"
3"silk"
4"perfect"
5"scanned"
6"pulse"
7"weight"
8"echoing"
9"racing"
10"charged"
11"disrupting"
12"tension"
13"facade"
14"raced"
15"tracing"
16"electric"
17"desire"
18"traced"
19"echoed"
20"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences106
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1699
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1063
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
French1
Marseille1
Ptolemy6
Eva3
Rory12
Papers1
Welsh2
Lucien9
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Papers"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Welsh"
globalScore0.936
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed smaller walls closing in with books whispering secrets"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1699
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
95.92% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean38.61
std18.76
cv0.486
sampleLengths
0102
127
235
340
470
523
637
785
840
917
1043
1157
1253
1344
1444
1547
1660
1757
1851
1960
2038
2123
2249
2340
2460
2532
2620
2733
2840
2918
3032
3121
3222
3338
3419
3520
3627
3741
3817
3918
4039
4116
4211
4333
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"been poured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs215
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences141
ratio0.071
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers with that same unreadable intensity she remembered all too well."
1"The small crescent scar on her left wrist itched, a phantom reminder of old wounds—childhood ones, and others fresher."
2"Rory exhaled sharply, glancing at the chaos of Eva's flat behind her—books piled on every surface, research notes fluttering in the draft like trapped birds."
3"Papers crunched under her boots—Eva's scribbles on demon realms, half in Welsh, half in code."
4"The air thickened, charged with the scent of his cologne—sandalwood and brimstone."
5"Rory's mind raced—love?"
6"Malphora—one of her aliases, buried in her family's lore."
7"A knock echoed from downstairs, muffled through the floor—the curry house bustling."
8"Patterns emerged—Welsh myths intertwined with demon lore."
9"Hands roamed—hers in his hair, disrupting the slick style; his at her waist, pulling her flush."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount942
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.025477707006369428
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0021231422505307855
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean12.05
std7.08
cv0.587
sampleLengths
022
117
228
318
417
55
63
713
86
97
109
1119
1223
137
1410
1523
161
1725
1815
196
209
2114
2210
2317
2410
2513
2615
2714
2826
2917
3013
3111
328
338
347
3510
3614
3713
3816
3910
4014
416
4227
436
4411
459
4627
477
4812
4925
74.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.44680851063829785
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners63
32.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"Always the gentleman, even when"
ratio0.01
31.54% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences104
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
1"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
2"She slammed the door shut."
3"His foot wedged in the"
4"she snapped, shoving harder"
5"Her shoulder-length black hair swung"
6"His voice, smooth as French"
7"He didn't push back, just"
8"She released the door, stepping"
9"He scanned the cramped space,"
10"She circled the tiny kitchen"
11"He set his cane against"
12"She barked a laugh, short"
13"He stepped closer, the floorboards"
14"His black eye seemed to"
15"She jabbed a finger at"
16"His jaw tightened, a muscle"
17"He grabbed her wrist, gentle"
18"She yanked free, but didn't"
19"He ran a hand through"
ratio0.471
12.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences104
matches
0"The door creaked open on"
1"Rory's hand froze on the"
2"Lucien Moreau stood there, his"
3"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
4"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
5"She slammed the door shut."
6"His foot wedged in the"
7"The three deadbolts rattled in"
8"she snapped, shoving harder"
9"Her shoulder-length black hair swung"
10"The small crescent scar on"
11"His voice, smooth as French"
12"He didn't push back, just"
13"The tabby cat, Ptolemy, slunk"
14"Rory exhaled sharply, glancing at"
15"Eva was out, chasing some"
16"She released the door, stepping"
17"Lucien eased inside, closing the"
18"He scanned the cramped space,"
19"She circled the tiny kitchen"
ratio0.894
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.37% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She jabbed a finger at his chest, stopping short of touching the crisp shirt."
1"Attraction flared, hot and insistent, mingling with the hurt that had festered."
2"She'd melted into him then, hands fisting his suit, tasting danger and desire."
3"Hands roamed—hers in his hair, disrupting the slick style; his at her waist, pulling her flush."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"He stepped, the floorboards groaning under his weight"
1"He set, voice dropping low"
2"He cupped, thumb tracing her jawline"
3"He traced, deliberate"
4"He drew, lips hovering near hers"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.04
leniency0.08
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.08
77.7056%