Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9A7MG6CJGP4Z9YJ13MPRE

Run Details

Duration:
55.3s
Cost:
$0.000330
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted of ozone and wet concrete. Not the usual bouquet for a Tuesday. Detective Harlow Quinn descended the slick steps into the abandoned Camden tube station, the beam of her flashlight cutting through the perpetual gloom. The Veil Market. Even the name felt like a dare. Each full moon, it shifted, a phantom bazaar for things best left lost. A bone token had gotten them past the initial gatekeeper, a hulking man who smelled of patchouli and regret. The scene was…contained. Too contained. A single stall, draped in black velvet, lay overturned. Trinkets – glass eyes, tarnished lockets, oddments of bone – were scattered across the damp platform. The victim, a man in a tailored suit that now looked horribly wrong, was sprawled amongst them. No obvious wounds. Just… stillness. PC Davies, young and eager, stood near the body, carefully photographing the scene. He didn’t meet Quinn’s gaze, focused on his task. Good. Let him get on with it. “Report.” Quinn’s voice scraped like flint against stone. Davies jerked, nearly dropping his camera. "Detective Quinn. Victim's name is Alistair Finch, sir. Known collector of… esoteric items. Found by a market vendor this morning. No sign of forced entry, no witnesses. Looks like a heart attack, maybe?” Quinn circled the body, her worn leather watch catching the dim light. Finch’s face was pale, his eyes wide and fixed on something only he had seen. Heart attack felt…clean. Too clean. The station's usual grime coated everything, but around Finch, it seemed disturbed, almost *avoided*. “Heart attack in a market selling powdered dragon’s tooth and bottled shadows? Colour me skeptical, Davies.” Davies cleared his throat. “Well, sir, these people…they might not exactly be forthcoming with medical histories.” “They’re also remarkably discreet about murders occurring within their little haven.” Quinn stopped, her gaze fixed on Finch’s hands. He clutched a single object - a small brass compass. Its casing had a patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with unfamiliar sigils. “What’s that?” she asked, gesturing to the compass. Davies glanced down. “Looks like one of the items from the stall, sir. Some sort of…compass.” Quinn squatted, ignoring the dampness seeping into her trousers. She gently pried Finch’s fingers open. The compass felt cold, almost unnaturally so. "A Veil Compass," a voice said from behind her. Eva Kowalski emerged from the shadows, her curly red hair a startling splash of colour in the gloom. She wore round glasses perched on her nose and carried a worn leather satchel slung across her shoulder. She tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear, a nervous habit Quinn had noted. “Evie. What are *you* doing here?” “I frequent the Market. Research.” Eva offered a tight smile. “I recognized the compass. It’s Shade-made. Quite rare.” "Shade-made?" “Crafted by artisans from the Veil, sir. They deal in objects attuned to supernatural energy. That compass…it doesn’t point north.” She pointed to the needle, which jittered erratically. “It points toward the nearest supernatural rift.” Quinn studied the compass again. Davies hadn’t noticed the faint humming emanating from the device. Of course he hadn’t. He wasn’t looking for it. “Alistair Finch collected esoteric items, you said, Davies?” Quinn asked, not looking at him. “That’s right, sir. Rumour is he had a private collection worth a fortune. All sorts of…oddities.” “Oddities like rifts?” Quinn raised an eyebrow. “Was Finch looking for something specific, Eva?” Eva hesitated, her eyes darting around the abandoned platform. “Rumour has it he was obsessed with strengthening the barriers between worlds. He believed the Veil was thinning.” “Thinning how?” “Becoming more permeable. Allowing… things through.” Eva’s voice dropped to a whisper. “He was supposedly researching methods to seal the rifts, or at least control them." Quinn rose, her military precision evident in the smooth movement. She walked over to the overturned stall, examining the scattered trinkets. “Davies, bag everything. Every single item. I want it catalogued and analyzed.” “Yes, sir.” He began to gather the objects, his earlier enthusiasm dampened. “Eva, what else do you know about Finch’s work?” Quinn asked, her voice low and focused. “He was…reckless. He delved into areas he didn’t understand. Ancient summoning rituals, forbidden alchemy…” Eva trailed off, her expression troubled. Quinn stopped at a shard of obsidian, its surface gleaming. It wasn’t like the other items. It felt…resonant. Warmer. “This wasn’t part of the stall’s inventory, was it?” she asked, holding up the obsidian. Eva peered at it, her brow furrowed. “No. That’s… older. Much older. It’s a fragment of a binding stone. Used in containment rituals.” "Containment?" “To hold something *back*.” Quinn turned her attention back to Finch. The stillness didn’t feel like peace now. It felt like a pause. Something had been unleashed, or tried to be. The lack of a struggle, the undisturbed grime…it wasn’t a natural death. It was a cessation. Someone, or *something*, had simply…stopped him. “Davies.” “Sir?” “Check Finch’s pockets. I want his notes, his contacts, anything he was carrying.” Davies immediately complied, carefully searching the victim’s clothing. He pulled out a small, leather-bound notebook and a handful of crumpled receipts. “Anything interesting?” Quinn asked. Davies flipped through the notebook. “Mostly scribbled notes, sir. Formulas, symbols… hard to decipher. And these receipts are all from obscure shops around London. Antique stores, bookshops… places that sell old things.” Quinn glanced at the compass in her hand, the needle still twitching. Finch hadn’t died of a heart attack. He’d died chasing something dangerous. Something that was still out there. And whatever sealed his fate hadn’t wanted to leave a mark. It hadn't wanted anyone to notice. “He wasn't looking to *seal* rifts, was he?” Quinn asked Eva, her tone sharper. Eva’s face paled. She didn't answer immediately. “He tried to open one,” she finally admitted, tucking her hair behind her ear again. “He believed there were… treasures beyond the Veil. Knowledge. Power.” Quinn felt a chill crawl down her spine. The carefully constructed scene, the lack of obvious violence…it was a cover. A meticulously crafted illusion. Someone had made sure Finch’s quest died with him. And they were very, very good at it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
94.74% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Quinn’s voice scraped like [like]"
1"she finally admitted [finally]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.105
70.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1018
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count3
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"gently"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1018
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"gloom"
count2
1
word"hulking"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"analyzed"
count1
7
word"delved"
count1
8
word"gleaming"
count1
9
word"furrowed"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"down her spine"
count1
12
word"constructed"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"hulking"
2"velvet"
3"etched"
4"eyebrow"
5"whisper"
6"analyzed"
7"delved"
8"gleaming"
9"furrowed"
10"chill"
11"down her spine"
12"constructed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences86
matches
0"felt a chill"
93.02% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords1018
ratio0.005
matches
0"avoided"
1"you"
2"back"
3"something"
4"seal"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.07% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount672
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.68
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tuesday1
Harlow1
Quinn18
Camden1
Veil1
Market1
Davies7
Finch7
Eva8
Kowalski1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Davies"
3"Finch"
4"Eva"
5"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0.161
windowScore0.333
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a dare"
1"seemed disturbed almost *avoided"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1018
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean21.66
std16.75
cv0.773
sampleLengths
080
152
229
38
439
546
616
716
844
98
1016
1122
129
1352
146
1518
161
1735
1824
1914
2016
2114
2227
232
2426
2521
2612
2712
2816
2920
3019
3115
3223
331
344
3549
361
371
3813
3921
404
4132
4247
4314
447
4525
4641
93.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences86
matches
0"was sprawled"
1"was etched"
2"been unleashed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs124
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
89.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences108
ratio0.019
matches
0"Trinkets – glass eyes, tarnished lockets, oddments of bone – were scattered across the damp platform."
1"He clutched a single object - a small brass compass."
87.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount670
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, leather-bound notebook"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.04626865671641791
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.020895522388059702
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean9.43
std6.14
cv0.651
sampleLengths
08
17
223
33
47
513
619
73
82
99
1016
1117
123
131
141
1513
169
171
186
198
206
2133
2212
2315
243
252
2614
2716
284
2912
3019
3110
3215
338
343
3513
369
376
387
399
4018
4118
4216
436
4410
458
461
4728
487
495
76.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.48148148148148145
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners52
85.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"Even the name felt like"
1"Of course he hadn’t."
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences78
matches
0"He didn’t meet Quinn’s gaze,"
1"He clutched a single object"
2"Its casing had a patina"
3"she asked, gesturing to the"
4"She gently pried Finch’s fingers"
5"She wore round glasses perched"
6"She tucked a strand of"
7"She pointed to the needle,"
8"He wasn’t looking for it."
9"She walked over to the"
10"He began to gather the"
11"It wasn’t like the other"
12"she asked, holding up the"
13"It felt like a pause."
14"It was a cessation."
15"He pulled out a small,"
16"He’d died chasing something dangerous."
17"It hadn't wanted anyone to"
18"She didn't answer immediately."
19"she finally admitted, tucking her"
ratio0.256
4.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences78
matches
0"The air tasted of ozone"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
2"The Veil Market."
3"Each full moon, it shifted,"
4"A bone token had gotten"
5"The scene was…contained."
6"A single stall, draped in"
7"Trinkets – glass eyes, tarnished"
8"The victim, a man in"
9"PC Davies, young and eager,"
10"He didn’t meet Quinn’s gaze,"
11"Quinn’s voice scraped like flint"
12"Davies jerked, nearly dropping his"
13"Quinn circled the body, her"
14"Finch’s face was pale, his"
15"Heart attack felt…clean."
16"The station's usual grime coated"
17"Davies cleared his throat."
18"Quinn stopped, her gaze fixed"
19"He clutched a single object"
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A bone token had gotten them past the initial gatekeeper, a hulking man who smelled of patchouli and regret."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Quinn asked, not looking at him"
1"Quinn asked, her voice low and focused"
2"Eva trailed, her expression troubled"
3"Quinn asked, her tone sharper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she finally admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.053
80.3297%