"Eva had mentioned whispers in the fae circles—something about a rift in the Grove, a place where the veil thinned enough to slip through."
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"This was it—the Fae Grove, Isolde's hidden pocket."
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"Wildflowers dotted the clearing, petals unfurling in impossible hues under the moon—violets that glowed faintly blue, roses with thorns like black needles."
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"Etchings swirled under her touch—runes that pulled at her memory, half-remembered from dusty books in her parents' attic."
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"Another sound— a low murmur, like voices too distant to parse."
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"She touched the scar on her left wrist, the crescent from that long-ago fall off her bike—grounding herself in the familiar ache."
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"A flicker at the edge of her vision—a shape, humanoid but elongated, slipping behind a trunk."
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"The murmur returned, closer now, words slurring into nonsense—syllables that tugged at her childhood tongue, Welsh inflections twisted wrong."
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"Inside, her phone—dead, she realized, battery icon mocking her when she flicked it on."
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"Edges of things moved now—shadows detaching from trees, pooling at her feet like ink."
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"Voices whispered again, layered and overlapping, calling names that weren't hers: Laila, Malphora—aliases from dreams she shoved down."
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"A soft laugh echoed, not hers—high and tinkling, like glass chimes in a storm."
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"Visions flickered at the edges of her mind—flashes of silver chains binding wrists, crimson gems weeping blood, groves where time looped eternally."
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"But the ferns rustled, parting to reveal a footprint—not hers, too long and narrow, toes splayed like roots."
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"A hand—pale, elongated—brushed her sleeve, gone when she slapped at it."
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"Rory's breath came in ragged bursts, the wrongness absolute—they had waited for her, drawn her here with the artifact's false promise."
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"Wildflowers dotted the clearing, petals unfurling in impossible hues under the moon—violets that glowed faintly blue, roses with thorns like black needles."
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"She moved toward it, steps deliberate on the carpet of petals that bruised under her boots, releasing a perfume that stung her eyes."
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"The murmur returned, closer now, words slurring into nonsense—syllables that tugged at her childhood tongue, Welsh inflections twisted wrong."
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"Voices whispered again, layered and overlapping, calling names that weren't hers: Laila, Malphora—aliases from dreams she shoved down."
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"Mushrooms crushed beneath her, releasing spores that danced in the air, glittering like dust motes alive."
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"Rory's scar itched, as if the old wound remembered something vital."
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"She reached the altar once more, clinging to it as anchor, the stone's runes flaring bright."
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"The air hummed with their approach, tension coiling tighter, the grove's heart beating in tandem with hers."