Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9B53A1VJ086A4SJNN0HDD

Run Details

Duration:
20.7s
Cost:
$0.001714
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora's boots sank into the mossy earth of Richmond Park, the kind of soft give that made every step feel like a secret shared with the ground. The air hung heavy with the scent of wildflowers—lavender and honeysuckle twisting together in a perfume that clung to her skin. She glanced at the ancient oaks ahead, their trunks twisted like gnarled fingers marking the boundary of something unseen. Isolde moved ahead with that effortless glide, her silver hair catching the late afternoon light like threads of moonlight spilled too early. No footprints trailed her, just the faint whisper of fabric against leaves. Nyx lingered at Rory's side, a ripple in the shadows cast by the oaks. In their solid form, they stood tall, humanoid but blurred at the edges, like smoke given reluctant shape. Their violet eyes flickered, faint glows in the dimming light. "The Veil thins here," Nyx murmured, voice a breeze through cracked stone. "I feel it pulling, like threads unraveling." Rory nodded, her fingers brushing the Heartstone Pendant at her throat. The silver chain was cool against her collarbone, but the crimson gem pulsed warm now, a steady throb that matched her heartbeat. She'd found it slipped into her coat pocket weeks ago, no note, no sender—just this thumb-sized stone that hummed near places it shouldn't. Like now. Her other hand rested on the hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade at her belt, its moonsilver chill seeping through her jacket. Isolde's gift, she'd called it, handed over with a riddle about cutting shadows before they swallowed the light. They'd come here on Isolde's insistence, the half-fae seer summoning Rory from her flat above Silas's bar with a cryptic missive: *The glutton's vine bears fruit that poisons the hand that plucks. Seek the amber sky, or the shadow devours the dawn.* Rory had pieced it together—Hel, the realms beyond the Veil, and something about the pendant's origin in Dymas. Nyx had tagged along uninvited, slipping from the shadows of her delivery route like a stray cat with too many secrets. Isolde, ever the oracle, led without explanation. The oaks loomed closer, their bark etched with runes that shimmered faintly, visible only when Rory squinted. The air grew thicker, charged, like the moments before a storm. A faint distortion rippled ahead—a shimmering haze, the Veil itself, bending light into prisms that danced across the wildflowers. Isolde raised a hand, her pale lavender eyes distant, as if listening to whispers no one else could hear. "Step through the mirror that reflects no face," she intoned, her voice a melody laced with thorns. "For the boundary bends to those who hunger for truth." Rory swallowed, her throat dry. Hunger. The word echoed oddly, stirring something uneasy in her gut. She wasn't sure what they sought in Hel—answers about the pendant, maybe, or why shadows had started following her deliveries—but stepping into another realm felt like jumping off a cliff without checking the drop. Nyx's form flickered, incorporeal for a heartbeat, then solidified with a nod. "I'll scout the edges. Shadows travel easier." With a deep breath, Rory followed Isolde into the haze. The world tilted, a rush of cold wind whipping her hair, carrying scents of rain and something sweeter, like overripe fruit. Pressure built in her ears, then released with a pop. She stumbled out the other side, boots crunching on gravel that wasn't moss anymore. The sky above burned warm amber, not the gray dusk of Richmond Park, but a perpetual twilight gilded with honeyed light. Vines heavy with clusters of grapes—plump, iridescent orbs in shades of violet and gold—draped from trellises that stretched endlessly into the distance. Orchards flanked them, trees laden with fruits she'd never seen: globes like rubies pulsing with inner light, pods that hummed softly when the breeze stirred them. The air was alive with aromas—roasting meats slick with honey, breads baking in unseen ovens, spices that made her mouth water despite the knot of caution in her chest. "What the hell," Rory breathed, steadying herself against a vine post. The wood was warm, almost feverish, and her fingers came away sticky with sap that smelled of caramelized sugar. Isolde smiled faintly, her ethereal face unmarred by the transition. "Dymas welcomes the wanderer with open arms and fuller plates. But arms can crush as easily as they embrace." Nyx coalesced from a nearby shadow cast by a gnarled fruit tree, their form sharpening. "It's... indulgent. Like the mortal world, but without restraint." They tilted their head, violet eyes scanning the horizon. "No sun, yet endless warmth. The shadows here are thick, greedy. They cling." Rory pushed forward, the gravel path winding between vineyards that seemed to shift subtly, rows realigning as if the land itself breathed. Her heart raced, a mix of awe and the prickling unease of being watched. Distant laughter echoed—boisterous, unending—mingled with the clink of goblets and the sizzle of fat on open flames. As they crested a low hill, the source revealed itself: a grand pavilion sprawled across a meadow, tables groaning under feasts that defied reason. Helbound souls—translucent figures with eyes too bright—tended massive roasts, their hands blurring as they basted and carved. Chefs in aprons stained with exotic juices competed nearby, flames leaping from iron grills to roast beasts Rory couldn't name: winged creatures with scales like jewels, serpents coiled in pastries flaky as autumn leaves. One soul, a burly man with a beard braided in vines, spotted them and waved a ladle dripping crimson sauce. "Fresh arrivals! Come, taste the nectar of Belphegor's own vine. It fills the belly and stirs the soul!" Rory's stomach growled traitorously, the scents weaving through her like a spell. She shook her head, gripping the pendant tighter. It pulsed hotter now, a beacon in this sea of temptation. "We're not here to eat. We're... looking for something." Isolde's laughter tinkled like wind chimes. "All seek in Dymas, but few find without savoring the path. The fruit whispers secrets to empty hands." Nyx slipped ahead, incorporeal, melting into the shadow of a banquet table. They reemerged moments later, form solid but tense. "These souls—they're contracted, bound by gluttony. I sense the prince's mark on them, a web of indulgence that traps. Deeper in, the gardens grow wilder. Something ancient stirs there." The group pressed on, leaving the pavilion's revelry behind. The path narrowed, vines encroaching like curious fingers, brushing Rory's arms with leaves that rustled secrets in a language of silk and spice. The amber sky deepened, casting long shadows that writhed unnaturally, as if alive. Rory's skin prickled; the warmth was cloying now, pressing in like a too-tight embrace. Sweat beaded on her forehead, not from exertion but from the air itself, heavy with the promise of excess. They entered the orchards proper, trees towering with branches sagging under their bounty. Fruits dangled low, inviting plucks—pears that shimmered like opals, berries clusters that sang faint melodies when squeezed. Rory's hand hovered near one, drawn by the pulse that matched her pendant's. Discovery bloomed in her chest: the gem's crimson glow intensified, syncing with the fruit's inner light. "This... it's connected. The pendant came from here." Isolde nodded, trailing a finger along a leaf that unfurled at her touch, blooming instantly with tiny star-shaped flowers. "The heart of gluttony beats in all things ripe. But ripeness can rot unseen." Unease coiled tighter as they delved deeper. The laughter from the pavilion faded, replaced by a low hum, like the land digesting its feasts. Nyx's form flickered erratically, shadows pulling at them like quicksand. "It's feeding," they whispered, voice strained. "The realm drinks from desire. I feel it tugging at my edges—old hungers from Aldric's time." Rory glanced back, but the path behind had vanished, swallowed by a wall of thorny brambles heavy with blackberries that wept juice like blood. Her pulse quickened. "We're not lost. Just... turned around." She drew the Fae-Forged Blade, its cold bite grounding her. The moonsilver gleamed faintly, even under the amber sky, humming against wards she couldn't see but felt—like invisible nets strung between trees. A discovery waited in a clearing ahead: a fountain carved from obsidian, bubbling not water but a golden elixir that steamed with aromas of mulled wine and fresh-baked bread. Marble statues ringed it—figures in eternal feast, mouths open in ecstasy, hands outstretched. One, a woman with eyes like the pendant's gem, held a cluster of grapes that pulsed warmly. Rory approached, the blade's chill countering the fountain's heat. As she touched the statue's offering, visions flickered: a ritual in shadowed halls, a benefactor's cloaked hand slipping the pendant into a pocket on Earth. But why? The image shattered as a tremor shook the ground, fruits tumbling from branches in a cascade of scents that overwhelmed. Wonder warred with dread. This place was a dream of abundance, every sense feasted upon—sights of endless color, sounds of bubbling abundance, the feel of warmth that promised to melt away worries. Yet unease gnawed: the souls in the pavilion moved with hollow eyes, trapped in cycles of craving. What if they lingered too long? Rory's scar on her wrist itched, a reminder of childhood pains she'd fled, not drowned in excess. Isolde knelt by the fountain, cupping elixir in her palms. It didn't wet her skin. "The prince's gift quenches, but the thirst returns threefold. Seek the heartvine beyond the feast fires, where indulgence roots deepest." Nyx pulled Rory back as vines slithered closer, tips probing like tongues. "We move. The shadows here remember too much—they whisper of bindings." They fled the clearing, the path reforming underfoot, leading toward distant spires wreathed in smoke from unseen kitchens. The air grew thicker, laced with the tang of overripe decay beneath the sweetness. Rory's breaths came shallow, the pendant burning against her chest now, guiding them deeper into Dymas's heart. Wonder at the alien beauty—these realms of Hel, forbidden and intoxicating—mingled with the sharp edge of fear. What secrets did this gluttonous paradise guard, and at what cost would they uncover them? As they crested another rise, the true depth unfolded: vast gardens terraced into hills, chefs' competitions raging below like battles of flavor. Flames roared, souls cheered, and in the center, a colossal tree loomed—the heartvine, perhaps—its trunk veined with glowing sap, fruits the size of her head dangling like temptations incarnate. Rory gripped the blade tighter, stepping forward. The exploration had only begun, but already Dymas clawed at her resolve, wondrous and perilous in equal measure.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:45:03.606Z" 2/20/2026, 7:45:03 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1777
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"warmly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"warmly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1777
totalAiIsms39
found
0
word"effortless"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count2
2
word"flickered"
count4
3
word"unraveling"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count3
5
word"throb"
count1
6
word"chill"
count2
7
word"loomed"
count2
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count2
10
word"charged"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count2
12
word"scanning"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count3
14
word"raced"
count1
15
word"stomach"
count1
16
word"beacon"
count1
17
word"silk"
count1
18
word"pulse"
count2
19
word"delved"
count1
20
word"desire"
count1
21
word"quickened"
count1
22
word"marble"
count1
23
word"shattered"
count1
24
word"reminder"
count1
25
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"effortless"
1"whisper"
2"flickered"
3"unraveling"
4"pulsed"
5"throb"
6"chill"
7"loomed"
8"etched"
9"shimmered"
10"charged"
11"echoed"
12"scanning"
13"warmth"
14"raced"
15"stomach"
16"beacon"
17"silk"
18"pulse"
19"delved"
20"desire"
21"quickened"
22"marble"
23"shattered"
24"reminder"
25"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences97
matches
0"d with dread"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences97
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords21
totalWords1747
ratio0.012
matches
0"The glutton's vine bears fruit that poisons the hand that plucks. Seek the amber sky, or the shadow devours the dawn."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.69% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1508
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Rory20
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Isolde10
Silas1
Hel3
Veil2
Dymas3
Earth1
Flames1
Nyx8
persons
0"Rory"
1"Pendant"
2"Isolde"
3"Silas"
4"Hel"
5"Flames"
6"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Veil"
3"Dymas"
globalScore0.837
windowScore1
65.73% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if listening to whispers no one else could hear"
1"felt like jumping off a cliff without c"
2"vineyards that seemed to shift subtly, rows realigning as if the land itself breathed"
28.28% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.717
wordCount1747
matches
0"not the gray dusk of Richmond Park, but a perpetual twilight gilded with honeyed light"
1"not from exertion but from the air itself, heavy with the promise of excess"
2"not water but a golden elixir"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
86.48% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean62.39
std28.24
cv0.453
sampleLengths
0101
161
297
388
466
527
669
755
898
930
1029
1146
12128
1338
1440
1524
1649
1778
1867
1933
2056
2165
22115
2372
2435
2523
2681
2776
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs276
matches
0"was cloying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount21
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences16
totalSentences111
ratio0.144
matches
0"The air hung heavy with the scent of wildflowers—lavender and honeysuckle twisting together in a perfume that clung to her skin."
1"She'd found it slipped into her coat pocket weeks ago, no note, no sender—just this thumb-sized stone that hummed near places it shouldn't."
2"Seek the amber sky, or the shadow devours the dawn.* Rory had pieced it together—Hel, the realms beyond the Veil, and something about the pendant's origin in Dymas."
3"A faint distortion rippled ahead—a shimmering haze, the Veil itself, bending light into prisms that danced across the wildflowers."
4"She wasn't sure what they sought in Hel—answers about the pendant, maybe, or why shadows had started following her deliveries—but stepping into another realm felt like jumping off a cliff without checking the drop."
5"Vines heavy with clusters of grapes—plump, iridescent orbs in shades of violet and gold—draped from trellises that stretched endlessly into the distance."
6"The air was alive with aromas—roasting meats slick with honey, breads baking in unseen ovens, spices that made her mouth water despite the knot of caution in her chest."
7"Distant laughter echoed—boisterous, unending—mingled with the clink of goblets and the sizzle of fat on open flames."
8"Helbound souls—translucent figures with eyes too bright—tended massive roasts, their hands blurring as they basted and carved."
9"Rory's skin prickled; the warmth was cloying now, pressing in like a too-tight embrace."
10"Fruits dangled low, inviting plucks—pears that shimmered like opals, berries clusters that sang faint melodies when squeezed."
11"The moonsilver gleamed faintly, even under the amber sky, humming against wards she couldn't see but felt—like invisible nets strung between trees."
12"Marble statues ringed it—figures in eternal feast, mouths open in ecstasy, hands outstretched."
13"This place was a dream of abundance, every sense feasted upon—sights of endless color, sounds of bubbling abundance, the feel of warmth that promised to melt away worries."
14"Wonder at the alien beauty—these realms of Hel, forbidden and intoxicating—mingled with the sharp edge of fear."
15"Flames roared, souls cheered, and in the center, a colossal tree loomed—the heartvine, perhaps—its trunk veined with glowing sap, fruits the size of her head dangling like temptations incarnate."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1479
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"above burned warm amber,"
1"tiny star-shaped flowers."
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.023664638269100743
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.010141987829614604
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean15.74
std7.15
cv0.454
sampleLengths
027
121
219
322
412
514
618
710
812
97
1011
1122
1223
132
1421
1518
1632
1728
1821
197
2017
2111
2219
2319
2417
2510
265
271
2810
2934
3012
317
3210
3321
3410
3514
3621
3722
3826
3929
4011
4119
4210
4319
4415
4518
4613
4722
4814
4917
63.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3963963963963964
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences94
matches
0"She glanced at the ancient"
1"Their violet eyes flickered, faint"
2"She'd found it slipped into"
3"Her other hand rested on"
4"They'd come here on Isolde's"
5"she intoned, her voice a"
6"She wasn't sure what they"
7"She stumbled out the other"
8"They tilted their head, violet"
9"Her heart raced, a mix"
10"She shook her head, gripping"
11"It pulsed hotter now, a"
12"They reemerged moments later, form"
13"They entered the orchards proper,"
14"they whispered, voice strained"
15"Her pulse quickened."
16"She drew the Fae-Forged Blade,"
17"It didn't wet her skin."
18"They fled the clearing, the"
ratio0.202
39.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences94
matches
0"Aurora's boots sank into the"
1"The air hung heavy with"
2"She glanced at the ancient"
3"Isolde moved ahead with that"
4"Nyx lingered at Rory's side,"
5"Their violet eyes flickered, faint"
6"Nyx murmured, voice a breeze"
7"Rory nodded, her fingers brushing"
8"The silver chain was cool"
9"She'd found it slipped into"
10"Her other hand rested on"
11"Isolde's gift, she'd called it,"
12"They'd come here on Isolde's"
13"Nyx had tagged along uninvited,"
14"Isolde, ever the oracle, led"
15"The oaks loomed closer, their"
16"The air grew thicker, charged,"
17"A faint distortion rippled ahead—a"
18"Isolde raised a hand, her"
19"she intoned, her voice a"
ratio0.84
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences74
technicalSentenceCount20
matches
0"The air hung heavy with the scent of wildflowers—lavender and honeysuckle twisting together in a perfume that clung to her skin."
1"The silver chain was cool against her collarbone, but the crimson gem pulsed warm now, a steady throb that matched her heartbeat."
2"She'd found it slipped into her coat pocket weeks ago, no note, no sender—just this thumb-sized stone that hummed near places it shouldn't."
3"They'd come here on Isolde's insistence, the half-fae seer summoning Rory from her flat above Silas's bar with a cryptic missive: *The glutton's vine bears frui…"
4"A faint distortion rippled ahead—a shimmering haze, the Veil itself, bending light into prisms that danced across the wildflowers."
5"Isolde raised a hand, her pale lavender eyes distant, as if listening to whispers no one else could hear."
6"The world tilted, a rush of cold wind whipping her hair, carrying scents of rain and something sweeter, like overripe fruit."
7"Vines heavy with clusters of grapes—plump, iridescent orbs in shades of violet and gold—draped from trellises that stretched endlessly into the distance."
8"Orchards flanked them, trees laden with fruits she'd never seen: globes like rubies pulsing with inner light, pods that hummed softly when the breeze stirred th…"
9"The wood was warm, almost feverish, and her fingers came away sticky with sap that smelled of caramelized sugar."
10"Rory pushed forward, the gravel path winding between vineyards that seemed to shift subtly, rows realigning as if the land itself breathed."
11"As they crested a low hill, the source revealed itself: a grand pavilion sprawled across a meadow, tables groaning under feasts that defied reason."
12"The path narrowed, vines encroaching like curious fingers, brushing Rory's arms with leaves that rustled secrets in a language of silk and spice."
13"The amber sky deepened, casting long shadows that writhed unnaturally, as if alive."
14"Fruits dangled low, inviting plucks—pears that shimmered like opals, berries clusters that sang faint melodies when squeezed."
15"Isolde nodded, trailing a finger along a leaf that unfurled at her touch, blooming instantly with tiny star-shaped flowers."
16"Rory glanced back, but the path behind had vanished, swallowed by a wall of thorny brambles heavy with blackberries that wept juice like blood."
17"A discovery waited in a clearing ahead: a fountain carved from obsidian, bubbling not water but a golden elixir that steamed with aromas of mulled wine and fres…"
18"This place was a dream of abundance, every sense feasted upon—sights of endless color, sounds of bubbling abundance, the feel of warmth that promised to melt aw…"
19"Flames roared, souls cheered, and in the center, a colossal tree loomed—the heartvine, perhaps—its trunk veined with glowing sap, fruits the size of her head da…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she intoned, her voice a melody laced with thorns"
1"they whispered, voice strained"
2"She drew, its cold bite grounding her"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory breathed (breathe)"
2"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.15
leniency0.3
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.3
68.3231%