Run: 2026-02-20-01KHY9C3BMNB0FAAAW58Q2KM61

Run Details

Duration:
39.5s
Cost:
$0.000252
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon green sign of The Raven's Nest buzzed, a sickly glow reflecting in the slick Soho pavement. Rory navigated the narrow street, rain plastering her hair to her forehead. Another delivery for Yu-Fei. She jammed the insulated bag tighter against her hip, the scent of ginger and star anise clinging to her coat. Silas would be glad of the business, tonight at least. The bar felt quieter than usual, the murmur of conversations muted, almost hushed. She spotted him immediately. Leaning against the bar, nursing a drink—something amber and expensive-looking—was a man who could have been Rhys Morgan. Except… not. The Rhys she remembered, the Rhys of late-night card games and shared dreams of escaping Cardiff, was a whirlwind of unruly brown hair, perpetually ink-stained fingers, and a grin that could charm birds from trees. This man was sculpted, sharp angles replacing soft curves. His hair, coiffed and dark, barely hinted at the wildness she recalled. He wore a tailored suit, the fabric expensive, the cut impeccable. An expensive watch glinted on his wrist. He looked… powerful. Distant. Unrecognisable. Rory froze, halfway to the bar. Years evaporated, replaced by a sudden rush of memories—shared secrets whispered in the Cardiff rain, the naive arrogance of youth, a promise made, then broken. A knot tightened in her stomach. He turned, his gaze sweeping over the room. His eyes, the same warm hazel she remembered, landed on her. Recognition flickered, then widened into a cautious smile. “Rory? Is that really you?” She forced a smile back, feeling clumsy and exposed. “Rhys. Wow. I… I didn’t know you’d be here.” He gestured to the stool beside him. "Please," he said, his voice deeper than she recalled, polished and controlled. "Join me." Rory approached, placing the delivery bag on the counter with a thud. Silas, wiping down the bar, gave her a barely perceptible nod. She slid onto the stool, the worn leather cool against her skin. "What are you doing here?" she asked, feeling unusually awkward. "Business," Rhys said, swirling the liquid in his glass. "I’m in London for the week. A merger. Tedious, but lucrative." Mergers. Lucrative. The words sounded alien coming from him. “Right. A merger.” She glanced at his hand, the one cradling the glass. No ink stains. No worn rings. Just a pristine expanse of tanned skin. “You always hated business.” He chuckled, a dry, humorless sound. “People change, Rory. Circumstances change.” A waitress materialized, asking for her order. "Just a water, thanks," Rory said, avoiding Rhys’s gaze. She watched the waitress pour the water, the ice clinking softly against the glass. The sound felt amplified in the quiet bar. “So,” Rhys prompted, his voice laced with an unsettling formality, "what have you been up to?" “Nothing much,” she shrugged, picking at a loose thread on her coat. “Delivery work. Living above the bar.” She gestured vaguely around the room. He raised an eyebrow, a flicker of something unreadable in his eyes. “Above the bar? Still drifting, I see.” The word stung. “Someone’s got to keep Silas afloat,” she retorted, then immediately regretted the defensiveness in her tone. He didn’t respond immediately, taking a slow sip of his drink. "You always were fiercely loyal." "Someone had to be." Rory met his gaze, and for a moment, the years seemed to collapse between them. She saw a ghost of the boy she remembered, lurking beneath the tailored facade. "Remember that summer after A-Levels?" Rhys asked, a wistful note creeping into his voice. "We swore we’d leave Cardiff, conquer the world, become writers." Rory’s smile faded. “Vividly.” That summer felt like a lifetime ago. A different person entirely. "You, of course, went to Oxford. English Literature. I... I went to Cardiff. Pre-Law. Didn't stick with it." “You were always the practical one,” he said, but there was a touch of regret in his voice. A past conversation they hadn't finished. She laughed, a short, brittle sound. "Practicality doesn’t pay the bills, Rhys. Not always." She looked away, remembering Evan, the anger, the fear. The scar on her wrist throbbed faintly beneath her sleeve. He seemed to notice her discomfort. "Is everything alright, Rory?" “Fine,” she lied, taking a long swallow of water. He studied her for a moment, his gaze lingering on her face. “You seem… different.” “We all do,” she said, her voice flat. "Did you ever write anything?" he pressed, seemingly oblivious to her discomfort. “A few short stories,” she mumbled. “Nothing anyone would read.” He nodded slowly. "A wasted talent, perhaps." Rory bristled. “Maybe. Or maybe I just grew up. You know," she paused, gathering her thoughts, "sometimes those promises we make when we're young—they're just that. Promises.” He sighed, placing his glass on the counter. "I suppose you're right." He reached into his inside pocket and produced a sleek, silver business card. "Here's my contact information. If you ever find yourself in London on business, look me up. We could… catch up properly." She stared at the card. Rhys Morgan, CEO, Sterling Investments. The embossed lettering seemed to mock her. "I don't think so," she said quietly, handing it back to him. "I'm quite busy where I am.” He didn’t argue, but his expression clouded over. The practiced charm seemed to slip, revealing a flicker of something raw and vulnerable. “It’s a shame,” he said softly. “We could have been something.” Rory met his gaze, the unspoken words hanging heavy in the air between them. “We were young, Rhys,” she replied. He nodded, acknowledging the truth of her statement. “Yes. We were.” He glanced at his watch. “I should be going. Another meeting.” He stood, smoothing down his suit. "It was... interesting, seeing you again, Rory." “You too, Rhys.” He turned to leave. As he reached the door, he paused, his hand on the handle. He looked back at her, a fleeting expression of… sadness? Regret? – crossing his face before he disappeared into the rain-slicked street. Rory watched him go, the green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest reflecting in her eyes. She felt a profound sense of loss, not for what they had been, but for what they might have been. She took another sip of water, the icy liquid a stark contrast to the warmth of the memory that lingered. Her gaze drifted to the delivery bag on the counter, the familiar scents of ginger and star anise grounding her in the present. Silas was watching her. He gave a slight inclination of his head. "Everything alright, Rory?" Silas asked, his voice a low rumble. “Yeah, Silas,” she said, forcing a smile. "Just... a blast from the past.” Silas nodded knowingly. He seemed to understand more than she let on. “Some ghosts are best left undisturbed,” he said, returning to his wiping.
created_at"2026-02-20T19:45:34.592Z" 2/20/2026, 7:45:34 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
21.43% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"That summer felt like [like]"
2"She looked away [away]"
3"she said quietly [quietly]"
4"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio0.179
effectiveRatio0.179
77.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1136
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"knowingly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"softly"
2"slowly"
3"knowingly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1136
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"charm"
count2
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"pristine"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count2
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"facade"
count1
9
word"throbbed"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"fleeting"
count1
12
word"profound"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count1
14
word"stark"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
16
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"charm"
2"stomach"
3"flickered"
4"pristine"
5"eyebrow"
6"flicker"
7"unreadable"
8"facade"
9"throbbed"
10"unspoken"
11"fleeting"
12"profound"
13"sense of"
14"stark"
15"warmth"
16"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
59.64% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences103
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1128
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.80% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount862
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rhys"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Yu-Fei1
Rhys8
Morgan2
Cardiff2
Rory9
Mergers1
Evan1
Sterling1
Investments1
Silas5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rhys"
3"Morgan"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
6"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.978
windowScore1
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a lifetime ago"
1"he pressed, seemingly oblivious to her di"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.887
wordCount1128
matches
0"not for what they had been, but for what they might have been"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean24
std19.45
cv0.81
sampleLengths
077
14
294
35
437
527
65
718
821
945
1020
1139
1211
1338
1416
1524
1619
1719
1816
1933
2024
2133
2224
2333
2410
259
2615
278
2812
2910
307
3127
3246
3317
3418
3522
3611
3720
3835
393
4038
4183
428
4310
4413
4512
4612
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"was sculpted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs165
matches
0"was watching"
73.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences123
ratio0.024
matches
0"Leaning against the bar, nursing a drink—something amber and expensive-looking—was a man who could have been Rhys Morgan."
1"Years evaporated, replaced by a sudden rush of memories—shared secrets whispered in the Cardiff rain, the naive arrogance of youth, a promise made, then broken."
2"– crossing his face before he disappeared into the rain-slicked street."
99.41% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount869
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02991944764096663
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.020713463751438434
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean9.17
std5.96
cv0.65
sampleLengths
018
112
24
320
410
513
64
718
81
91
1035
119
1212
1311
147
152
161
171
181
196
2025
216
228
2311
248
255
269
279
287
2912
302
3112
3211
3312
3410
359
3611
371
381
397
4013
413
423
437
444
456
465
477
489
4914
71.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.44715447154471544
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners55
37.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"Just a pristine expanse of"
ratio0.011
6.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences90
matches
0"She jammed the insulated bag"
1"She spotted him immediately."
2"His hair, coiffed and dark,"
3"He wore a tailored suit,"
4"He turned, his gaze sweeping"
5"His eyes, the same warm"
6"She forced a smile back,"
7"He gestured to the stool"
8"he said, his voice deeper"
9"She slid onto the stool,"
10"she asked, feeling unusually awkward"
11"She glanced at his hand,"
12"He chuckled, a dry, humorless"
13"She watched the waitress pour"
14"she shrugged, picking at a"
15"She gestured vaguely around the"
16"He raised an eyebrow, a"
17"she retorted, then immediately regretted"
18"He didn’t respond immediately, taking"
19"She saw a ghost of"
ratio0.533
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences90
matches
0"The neon green sign of"
1"Rory navigated the narrow street,"
2"Another delivery for Yu-Fei."
3"She jammed the insulated bag"
4"Silas would be glad of"
5"The bar felt quieter than"
6"She spotted him immediately."
7"The Rhys she remembered, the"
8"This man was sculpted, sharp"
9"His hair, coiffed and dark,"
10"He wore a tailored suit,"
11"An expensive watch glinted on"
12"Rory froze, halfway to the"
13"Years evaporated, replaced by a"
14"A knot tightened in her"
15"He turned, his gaze sweeping"
16"His eyes, the same warm"
17"Recognition flickered, then widened into"
18"She forced a smile back,"
19"He gestured to the stool"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Leaning against the bar, nursing a drink—something amber and expensive-looking—was a man who could have been Rhys Morgan."
1"The Rhys she remembered, the Rhys of late-night card games and shared dreams of escaping Cardiff, was a whirlwind of unruly brown hair, perpetually ink-stained …"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, his voice deeper than she recalled, polished and controlled"
1"Rhys asked, a wistful note creeping into his voice"
2"she said, her voice flat"
3"Silas asked, his voice a low rumble"
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she retorted (retort)"
1"she lied (lie)"
2"he pressed (press)"
3"she mumbled (mumble)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.354
leniency0.708
rawRatio0.235
effectiveRatio0.167
75.0477%