| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |
| 93.35% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 752 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 752 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "sentinels" | | 5 | "electric" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "glistening" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 16 | | markdownWords | 21 | | totalWords | 740 | | ratio | 0.028 | | matches | | 0 | "watch" | | 1 | "alive" | | 2 | "“They’re in the trees. They’re watching.”" | | 3 | "remembered" | | 4 | "behind" | | 5 | "veiny" | | 6 | "ground" | | 7 | "shifted" | | 8 | "between" | | 9 | "knew" | | 10 | "wrongness" | | 11 | "hungers" | | 12 | "brought" | | 13 | "Now." | | 14 | "ran" | | 15 | "breathe" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.66% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 689 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.89 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Rory | 13 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.557 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 95.65% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if testing its own weight" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.703 | | wordCount | 740 | | matches | | 0 | "not from its size, but from the sheer *wrongness* of it" | | 1 | "not a hand, but a cluster of thorned vines, each tip glistening with somethi" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 19.47 | | std | 18.05 | | cv | 0.927 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 72 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park at night was supposed to be quiet—rustling leaves, the distant hoot of an owl, the occasional crunch of a late-night jogger’s shoes." | | 1 | "She’d followed the whispers—Eva’s frantic texts, the way her friend’s voice had cracked when she’d said, *“They’re in the trees. They’re watching.”*—but the grove had never felt like this before." | | 2 | "The standing stones—supposedly just weathered oak—now gleamed with a wet, almost *veiny* sheen, as if sap had bled from their bark." | | 3 | "Not an earthquake—something deliberate." | | 4 | "Its form was all wrong—too many joints, limbs bending at angles that made Rory’s stomach clench." | | 5 | "The voice wasn’t a voice—it was the sound of leaves scraping stone, of roots twisting through damp earth." | | 6 | "The thing stretched out a hand—not a hand, but a cluster of thorned vines, each tip glistening with something that wasn’t sap." | | 7 | "The bark-thing’s laughter followed her—a sound like wind through dead leaves." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 186 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 4 | | adverbRatio | 0.021505376344086023 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005376344086021506 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 9.25 | | std | 6.93 | | cv | 0.749 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 42.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3125 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the creak of the" | | 1 | "Then, from the center of" | | 2 | "Just a smooth, featureless void" | | 3 | "Only then did she dare" |
| | ratio | 0.061 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 1 | "She’d followed the whispers—Eva’s frantic" | | 2 | "It had come from *behind*" | | 3 | "She turned slowly, her pulse" | | 4 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 5 | "She should leave." | | 6 | "Its form was all wrong—too" | | 7 | "Its skin wasn’t skin at" | | 8 | "It tilted its head, and" | | 9 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 10 | "she demanded, her voice steadier" | | 11 | "She had to move." | | 12 | "She gritted her teeth and" | | 13 | "She didn’t look back." | | 14 | "They were just stones again." |
| | ratio | 0.227 | |
| 96.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pulsed against her" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the silver chain" | | 2 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 3 | "The Fae Grove wasn’t supposed" | | 4 | "Richmond Park at night was" | | 5 | "The wildflowers, usually vibrant and" | | 6 | "Rory crouched behind the gnarled" | | 7 | "The pendant’s glow had led" | | 8 | "She’d followed the whispers—Eva’s frantic" | | 9 | "A twig snapped." | | 10 | "The sound hadn’t come from" | | 11 | "It had come from *behind*" | | 12 | "She turned slowly, her pulse" | | 13 | "The grove’s edges blurred at" | | 14 | "The standing stones—supposedly just weathered" | | 15 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 16 | "Rory’s fingers tightened around the" | | 17 | "The warmth had intensified, now" | | 18 | "She should leave." | | 19 | "Rory’s breath hitched as the" |
| | ratio | 0.727 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The wildflowers, usually vibrant and untamed, now seemed to *watch* her, their petals twitching in unison as if stirred by an unseen breath." | | 1 | "The standing stones—supposedly just weathered oak—now gleamed with a wet, almost *veiny* sheen, as if sap had bled from their bark." | | 2 | "Just the creak of the oak above her, a branch groaning as if testing its own weight." | | 3 | "Its form was all wrong—too many joints, limbs bending at angles that made Rory’s stomach clench." | | 4 | "The thing stretched out a hand—not a hand, but a cluster of thorned vines, each tip glistening with something that wasn’t sap." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she demanded, her voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |